The Fear- Part Two is now up

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Mizz:
Okay. So this is the introduction to the story that I decided to continue. I am just recently adding pictues because I fixed my game so part three will take a while. Constructive criticism is vastly appreciated. Thank you!



And so, humanity dwindles, picked off by those of my kind brave enough to come out of our protected homes.
They think they were overtaken by something that just recently call Earth their home; but we've been here, hiding away, too meek to emerge from the emerald forest in which we dwell.
That is, until a rash group of what humans would call adolescents ventured from safety. I put together the group, which will later be referred to as The Fear, in hopes of us not having to hide anymore. Little did I know, once our instincts kicked in, we wouldn't have anything to hide from.

hanster:
this is a good start, i'd love to read on :)

Mizz:
Thank you. I'll make a family with the characters and start taking pictures.

steelguy:
Well, as brief, tantalising glimpses go, this was a good one.
Always looking for a new story to get addicted to.

Stelio Kontos:
I'm pretty interested in this story.
Can you please post an excerpt?

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