Skin Deep [UPDATED 7/19]

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Bookfreak:
Loving It So Far... Cant Wait to Read More

DemonOfSarila:
yeah, it's good..... will there be updates? i mean this isn't the fast moving forum in the world, but since July is kinda a long time....

I hope it's a yes though, it's a great story.

ZanarkandFayth:
Quote from: 2*B~Weird on January 27, 2009, 05:21:32 pm

Great story so far! Very interesting and unique storyline [so refreshing to see a character that's different without being inhuman, what with all those vampire stories out there, riding the Twilight bandwagon] and some great writing. It flows almost like a poem in a way, very smooth. And very realistic encounters between the characters, very natural modern day people, especially between Louie and her dad.

Oh.. I just saw the 'Updated 7/19' thing. July. Um... will there still be updates? I hope so!


Ah, hah. Yeah, I really need to re-do this story. >< I have such prettier sims now (not that I don't like these, they're just...old). Anyway, I really like this story. Just kind of got out of my rhythm after marching season. I usually sim on the weekends since I use the family computer and the sims takes FOREVER to come up and shut down on my computer. Since football games were on Fridays then I'd have competitions the very next day, I usually wasn't up to much more than eating and sleeping Sunday.

I'll try to do some more with this later, hopefully. ^^

 

OHHxbby:
oooohhh.
that story sends shivers up my spine *shudder* [it may be just that i'm cold...]

but either way.
this story is really good.
the writing is really smooth, and i'm really enjoying the "teen attitude-ness" about the story.
it has really unique story line and has a tremendous amount of potential.
keep at it!  1happy

Zorom:
Yeah, I love it! I especially like the plot twist-Casper being blind...

Update soon, honey!  :D

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