What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13
tophatdan:
well it may be your first story you wrote but its the first i read and its pretty good, lol, great job so far
SimKween:
Say what now?
“Er, uh, Jake? Can I talk to you in the kitchen?”
“Sure.”
I closed the door to the kitchen.
“What the hell do you think this is? A hotel? You didn’t even tell me you had a daughter!” I yelled.
“I’ll explain if you just calm down and listen.”
“This had better be a good explanation!”
“When I graduated from college, I was at a bar celebrating. Naturally, I got drunk. I was drunk when I met Jill’s mom. We went back to her place.”
I scoffed.
“Whatever. Look, I didn’t know I had a daughter until two days ago. I got a phone call from the hospital that said Jill’s mom had died from an overdose of drugs. I couldn’t just leave Jill all alone with no parents! Please let her stay here Lex, please!” he begged.
“Oh fine.” I said. “Besides, Kista will have someone to play with now. But what about out other suprise?”
“I’ll take care of that.”
Jake walked back into the room. “Okay girls, go in the basement, we have one more suprise!”
The girls went downstars
Jake brought out a ball of balck fur.
“Girls, meet Skori.” he said.
The girls squealed with delight. Kista ran and scooped him up.
“Hi little kitty!” Kista cooed.
“Aw! He’s so cute!” Jill said.
I got used to having Jill around. It gave Kista someone to play with.
They became the best of friends.
They even told secrets to each other. How cute!
At first, I thought she was going to be just another mouth to feed, but she turned out to be a sweet little girl that we all loved.
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Mooncat:
This is sooo awesome! I can't wait for more!
Update soon!
SimKween:
Thanks!
Medagic:
I can feel it... There's another twist coming! It's too peaceful...
Great job! :D
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