Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Devomuffins:
I started a new story and I hope everyone enjoys it. :D Please tell me about spelling of grammer errors so I can fix them.
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Ahh. My first home. I remember how happy we were, finally on our own together free to do whatever we wanted. This is the story of Natasha Harris, And Christie Bell.
Oh, my Christie, so sweet and beautiful. It was spring, just nearly a year after we got married, that I decided to broach the subject.
"I want kids."
"I know. I do to. I've been thinking we should consider a sperm donar."
"That sounds fine but-" Christie cut me off sharply.
"You should carry the baby, I know how much you want to."
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We chose a korean donar so the baby would look like both of us. And we were lucky enough to get pregnant on the first try. We were so overjoyed to see it confirmed.
Everying thing went as planned and finally the day came. I was huge and tired and i wished the baby would come.
It was a wish that I would soon regret.
ZanarkandFayth:
Fayth likes it, so please update soon! Somehow, I've begun liking these kinds of stories more and more. If you like to read on this kind of thing, there's a book I'd like to recommend. It's Between Mom and Jo by Julie Anne Peters. Wonderful novel.
Again, wonderful beginning. I hope to read more soon.
Devomuffins:
I'm really glad you like it! the next chapter will be up today, or tomorrow at the latest.
Alisa_Crawford:
I think when it says, "I decided to broach the subject," I think 'broach' should be 'approach'.
Otherwise, lovely. ^^ I can't wait to read more.
Devomuffins:
Um not really sure here i've heard broach used before but i'm not sure i have the correct spelling.
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