Fighting Comfort
arielle22:
This is my first sims 2 story so try not to be harsh
Chapter 1
My name is Amy Jones and my life is far from perfect
I used to be a typical teenager.Go to school , hang out with friends , you know. Just a typical teenage life.Then I met him...
This Ryan. He is my one and only soulmate. We were meant to be.My parents don't exactly approve of the idea of their only child dating but if they'd give him a chance they'd she how wonderful he really is.
Well getting back to my story,I graduated early and finally got my parents to let me get my own house.They dont know Ryan lives in it with me and pays half the rent, but what they dont know won't hurt them and its certainly not affecting me. or so I thought.......
arielle22:
Me and Ryan had the perfect life together. No school , no worries , nobody but the two of us. It was how I had always pictured my perfect life and it was , until I started getting sick.
I started trowing up all the time and felt worse each day. Ryan tried to make me feel better but I knew I should go to the hospital.
I went to my doctor and he said I was pregnant
arielle22:
My head started spinning and my thoughts were outta control. A kid!!
Im barely a kid let alone ready to raise one. I had to tell someone.So I decided to tell Ryan first.
He freaked out at first and made me take him with me to the hospital to confirm it.He eventually regained his cool and was sorta looking forward to having a baby.
That happiness didn't last long though. Because just then the doctor walked in and by the look I his face I could sense more bad news.
arielle22:
"Amy,Ryan"the doctor said as calmly as he could.
You're having TWINS!!!!
We both said there-speechless.
Ryan was too surprised to even comfort me. I mean one kid was enough but TWO. I had dreamed of having twins when I was little but now the thought of them was like a nightmare.
I knew I had to tell my parents but how!
And TWINS as if it wasn't bad enough.
I could feel my perfect life slowly falling apart.
Skori:
You have a nice plot, but your chapters seem more like paragraphs.
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