Come Back to Me

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Theraven:
looks like a promising story :)

just a tip to get the spelling mistakes corrected a lot easier: write the story in Word or another text editing programme - preferrably one with automatic correction. If not - read through the text you've written several times, and correct them manually instead. It looks so much better when the text is not loaded with spelling, grammar or typing mistakes :)

and try to avoid taking pictures with the grid lines in. (if you're in build/buy mode, press R before taking the picture - it's the shortcut for the recolor tool, and almost the only way to get the gridlines away in build/buy mode fast and easy).

and if you don't know - you can change the picture size to even bigger than this if you click the settings icon in the main sim menu, and choose the camera icon. You've got the medium sized pictures right now.

hermione:
it's very nice i think that you must continue this story..

Skori:
I have been intrigued. Your plot is great, with an essence of mystery that keeps the reader reading. And about your grammar problem, follow Theraven's advice.

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