My first ever sim story - The Diary of Laura Smith - Chapter 20 - part 2!
Starwish001:
I like your story! And I like that diary-way of writing; keep up!:)
shibby559559:
Thanks alot for the positive comments. I was so worried that noone would like it. I'm not the best person with spelling and grammer so if i make any mistakes feel free to tell me.
Thankyou.
Astral Faery:
English isn't the easiest language to work with, and many people struggle with grammar and spelling. As long as I can understand what you're saying, I don't get too hung up on it. ;)
I like this so far. I really feel bad for Laura - to have lost so much and now be living with a control freak. Things are only going to get worse for her with Tony. I hope you write more so I can see what happens next.
shibby559559:
Dear Diary,
The last few weeks have been okay. I am growing used to Tonys demands. I havent left the house since that night. I only go to school and straight back and Tony stays by my side the whole time. I havent seen or spoke to Kyle since we went to the park. He doesnt go to school that much because his dads got some sort of illness which means he needs alot of help.
Things are okay between me and Tony now. He loves me and I love him. We will work things out together, as a couple... Life couldnt get much better for us at the moment..
Laura x
Dear Diary,
I found out something today, it was totally unexpected. I dont know what happened. I need to go tell Tony...
Laura x
"Tony I have something I need to tell you"
"What is it?"
"Please dont go mad with me"
"I promise i wont"
"I-I'm I'm"
"Just tell me"
"I'm pregnant Tony"
"WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN YOUR PREGNANT? IS IT MINE?"
"Of course its yours, I love you, noone else"
"GET THE HELL OUTTA MY FACE, YOU DISGUST ME."
Then I knew what was coming......
The blows didnt stop coming, I raised my hands to my face, I screamed and pleaded with him to stop.
I lay there drifting in and out, all i could manage to whisper was...
"You promised you wouldn't get mad. You promised"
And then total blackness engulfed me.....
Music_Is_Life:
OhMyGod.
I've been a lurker (I'm always lurking) and I thought I should say that I love this.
And that I hate Tony - I think he's a butthead.
Great story. (:
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