Starshine - Chapter 3 is up!
Astral Faery:
Very cute! I like the characters so far - Channy cracks me up. Nice, believable dialogue, too.
qtpie3552:
Thanks for the comments everyone! I have been very busy, but I am going to try my hardest to get chapter 2 up tomorrow. =)
qtpie3552:
My life was almost completely perfect! Everything was going great with Tyler, we had been dating for about 3 months now. He was amazing, more than I could ever imagine I would have. He was so sweet, and never inconsiderate of my feelings. And he was so friendly, everyone liked him. Well almost everyone. Lindsey hated him. She said he took me away and that she never got to spend any time with me. And she was mad at me for not trying to hang with her more. I told her to back off. I mean seriously, is she that selfish?? And then of course once my mother found out we were fighting, she just lectured me on the importance of balancing my friends and my boyfriend and blah blah blah. Whatever. She is only saying that because she doesn't like him. She thinks he is too mature for me or something and she doesn't approve of how he dresses. But who cares, I love him. That's right, I said love. So anyways, last night Tyler called me and said he had a surprise and to meet him at Tigerlilly Restaurant tonight. I'm so excited, I wonder what it will be?
When I got to the restaurant, Tyler was waiting for me in the front. He was actually dressed up and he looked very handsome. He came over and kissed me, then took my hand.
"Close your eyes baby, I will lead you to your surprise." He said.
"Why, can't I just go with my eyes open?"
"Oh, but that ruins the surprise." I sighed and closed my eyes tight. He put his hands firmly on my shoulders and led me into the restaurant. Then I felt we were going up some stairs. Suddenly, I felt very uncomfortable. I don't know if I watch too much CSI but this felt wrong. Just as I was about to say something, a door opened, then a cool breeze wrapped around me.
"Open you eyes" He whispered in my ear. I slowly opened my eyes and saw the most beautiful thing ever. I was standing on the rooftop facing a table set for two, surrounded by fountains and plants. Soft music was playing and there was a pretty bouquet of my favorite flowers in the center of the table.
"Oh my gosh, It's gorgeous! Tyler you are utterly amazing!" I gasped, wrapping my arms around him.
"I know love, all for you." He smiled and led me over to the table.
As we sat at the table, I was still completely shocked. I looked up at the stars all around us and smiled. Tyler reached out and took my hand.
"So do you like it?" He asked.
"Oh yes! I love it! How did you do all this?"
"Lets just say I know some people."
"Well it's beautiful, thank you so much.
"Of course, anything for you. Do you know why I picked out here, under the stars?"
"No, why?"
"Do you see that really bright star way over there?" He pointed to a star that was shining very brightly.
"Yes, it's very pretty."
"Do you see how there is a strong glow around it?"
"Yeah"
"That is something called starshine. Only the strongest stars have it. It is their symbol of strength and courage."
"That is very interesting, but what does that have to do with this?"
"It reminds me so much of you. Strong and courageous. So from now on you will always be my starshine. And your strength and beauty will always glow around you, just like the star."
"Aww!! That is so sweet!" The song that was playing changed to a slow lyrical song and Tyler's face lit up.
"Care to join me for a dance?"
We danced around and around for what seemed like hours. He was a very good dancer. It was amazing. He whispered quietly in my ear as we danced.
"So, my starshine, do you think your mother would mind if you stayed at my house tonight?"
"Yeah probably, but I could tell her I was staying at Crystal's or something. She never actually checks."
"Okay, good. You know, you are especially beautiful tonight."
"Oh, thank...."
Before I could finish my sentence, he dipped me very delicately and kissed me. And man was that a kiss!!
"Shall we go then hon, a car is waiting downstairs." He said after he gently pulled me back up.
"Sure. Tyler, thank you so much. Your so amazing!" He just nodded and smiled and kissed my cheek. Downstair waiting was a very nice, red and black convertible. On the ride home we talked about his house. He apologized for it's sad appearance and hoped that it was okay with me. But of course anywhere with him was okay with me.
When we got to his house, he hurriedly showed me the main part and then we went to his room.
"It's a little messy I'm sorry" He said with a sigh. I looked around the room.
"Oh no, I like it!" He laid back on the bed, and I laid on the floor. I don't know why I didn't sit on the bed. I guess I was nervous, I didn't know what was going to happen so I figured keeping my distance was good.
"Channy, you know the bed is here for a reason. Why don't you come sit by me?" Tyler said, smiling.
"Oh.........um okay."
Okay, this was going good. I sat next to him and we had a nice conversation.
"Tyler, I don't think you ever told me what you wanted to be when you are older." I said.
"I want to be a pediatrician. I love kids, and medical stuff. What about you?"
"I'm going to graduate college with a business degree and then take it from there."
"That's great! Do you have a backup plan?"
"Of course, who doesn't?? Okay...........I don't. I don't need one."
"But Channy, everyone needs a backup. What if something gets in the way of that."
"Like what kinda something?"
"I don't know. Like what if you get hurt, or lose your college fund, or like have a baby or something."
"I will not get hurt, if I lose my college find then I will get scholarships, and I am most certainly not having a baby!"
"Okay, I'm sorry."
"It's okay. So what are we gonna do tonight?"
"Well I'm not quite sure, but I think I have an idea." Tyler said with a wink.
Everything after that moment was just a speeding blur.................
milie529:
I love this story!! You sims are so beautiful and your strorytelling and pictures are pretty good! Can't wait to see what happens next!
hollymaniac12:
Nice job so far! Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for chapter 3!
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