Idea for a story

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Mooncat:
Tell me if this sounds okay.
 
The Lotus
 
YEAR: 1751
 
LOCATION: Nagoya, Japan
 
MAIN CHARACTERS:
 
 
Toshii Yamato – born 1732, freelance samurai
 
Suki Hiamashi – born 1736, long lost sister of Toshii
 
Yoroku Hiamashi – born 1700, adopted father of Suki
 
Toshii Sakura – born 1700, true father of Suki & Toshii
 
Toshii Harumi – born 1705, true mother of Suki & Toshii
 
Natashu Kyoko – born 1730, evil henchman for Yoroku
 
Tatsuo Yorimoto – born 1725, second evil henchman for Yoroku
 
SUMMARY:
 
When Suki was just an infant, her parents were kidnapped and murdered by the proud, evil samurai, Yoroku Hiamashi. She is then adopted by Yoroku and later is told by him that she must travel to Edo (now known as Tokyo) to find and kill the legendary “Lotus Samurai.”
 
She travels to Edo, finds the samurai, and learns the truth. The Lotus Samurai is her brother, Toshii Yamato. When she learns that Yoroku is not her true father, and murdered her real parents, raising Suki as his own, she vows revenge on Yoroku.
 
Now, Toshii and Suki must travel back to Nagoya for one final battle with Yoroku and his henchman, to avenge their parents and restore their honor.

summer_wine:
I LOVE IT!It sounds interesting. I hope you go through with it. :)

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