Photos will be aded later[when the first chapter is released]and probably I should tell you that I'm from a different country so....maybe you'll find some little gramar problems...but you'll figure it out.
The Apocalypse[/B] - Everything that has a beginning has an end -
‘’SNEAK PEAK’’
CHAPTER I : Before the beginning
July 13th
It was nearing midnight and Christopher Craig was sitting alone in his study-room reading a long book that was slipping through his brain without leaving the slightest trace of meaning behind.He was waiting for a call from his friend from Italy,and between wondering when his friend would telephone and trying reading that book an unpleasant memory invaded his mind.A memory he thought never existed.A memory from his childhood.The memory of his first day at school,when he was bullied by his friends. Christopher wasn’t friends with them back then.He became they’re friend when he started smoking,drinking and getting high.He always was an outsider and thought he had to do those things so they would stop harassing him. And so they did. His friendship with Daniel started when they had beaten up a skinny boy.Of course Christopher was never proud making those things but he had to do it.Hanging with the ‘’bad boys ’ had many advantages,he was considered cool,brave and got respected.The problem was he always had to pretend he was somebody else, and had to look and act cool whether he liked it or not… but that was the price, a price he thought he would never stop payin. At the age of 23 he moved in another town called Riverblossom Hills,where he buyed a house.
Not long after midnight...
The telephone rang. -Hello?asked Christopher.
So that’s it for my sneak peak for ,,The Apocalypse’’.I’m gonna post the entire first chapter on March 23rd .Hope you enjoyed it.:-P[/B][/SIZE][/FONT]
I uderstand that you don't like it without the X-Ray cursor...I wouldn't...sucks.But it's not very handfull after all.I think it's really annoying.But it wouldn't hurt to have it.Try to remove all your CC and hacks.That should do it.