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Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 12, 2007, 09:52:44 pm This is the second part of Naive Ambitions. I wrote it to be an individual
story and included a lot of the backround from the first part. If you want the complete history of these characters please read Naive Ambitions. As always if you read this please leave a comment and if you really like it feel free to rate. Enjoy! (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_11.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_12.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_13.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_14.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt1_15.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: Mara2005 on May 13, 2007, 05:54:31 am I like it ... keep it coming
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 13, 2007, 07:46:18 pm I'm going to update tonight because I'm not sure if I'll have time tomorrow.
Thanks for the comment. Chapter 2 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt2_11.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 16, 2007, 07:51:38 am Sorry this update took a little longer than planned. Enjoy!
As always comments are appreciated. Chapter 3 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_3a.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt3_7.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 17, 2007, 07:19:30 am Thanks for the comments everyone.
Chapter 4 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt4_9.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: hotrod50s on May 17, 2007, 04:36:59 pm your settings are perfect i love the way you set each room for every segment to work with the storyline,you either spent a great deal of time building each set or downloading lol either way it works great.
the character development is easy to follow and story flows well great job will be waiting for more Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 18, 2007, 07:59:45 am Thank you so much for the compliment. I do set up each scene according to the story. No sets, usually. Just build a house and photoshop in what I
can't find. Again thank you. Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: Minty94 on May 19, 2007, 09:21:34 am UGH i don't know what is wrong with my computer, it won't let me see the pictures! i am sure it is a great story though!
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 19, 2007, 12:31:54 pm Chapter 5
(http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt5_11.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 27, 2007, 08:58:33 am Will update soon. Painting my home.
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: xliikewoahx31 on May 27, 2007, 03:10:37 pm MORE.MORE.MORE
SUCH A TALENTED WRITER Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: Bloody_Tears on May 28, 2007, 07:13:34 am I love it. It's brilliant that she's having babies. And bringing in Geromes daughter was most unexpected! More please!
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 29, 2007, 07:27:43 am Thanks for the comments everyone. I'm glad you like it. I'm going to do pics tonight so hopefully update tomorrow sometime.
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: xliikewoahx31 on May 29, 2007, 05:51:36 pm Yay!! Where did you get your inspiration from?
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 29, 2007, 05:53:41 pm I'm not really sure where the idea came from.....it was just easier to use a vampire as a villian in the sims.
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: xliikewoahx31 on May 30, 2007, 02:00:06 pm oh haha cool!
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: comickitty on May 31, 2007, 12:48:25 am Great Job! I love your picture taking and the story's good too! :)
Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on May 31, 2007, 07:04:34 am Thanks for the comments everyone. Update is taking a little longer than I hoped. I do have the lair built and should be able to start taking pix tonight.
I AM working on update. Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 01, 2007, 01:06:04 pm Here's an update....thanks everyone for being soooo patient.
Chapter 6 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_11.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_12.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_13.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_14.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_chpt6_15.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 05, 2007, 01:12:18 pm Since both chapters are shorter..I doubled my update, chapters 7 and 8.
Oooooo poetic. Thanks for reading everyone.....don't forget to leave me a comment. I enjoy reading everyones' thoughts. Chapter 7 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt7_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt7_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt7_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt7_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt7_5.jpg) Chapter 8 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2_Chpt8_6.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 06, 2007, 02:52:59 pm Ok here's another update. Enjoy!
Chapter 9 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt9_9.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 07, 2007, 01:58:06 pm Chapter 10
(http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt10_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt10_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt10_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt10_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b2chpt10_5.jpg) Chapter 11 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt11_11.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 11, 2007, 07:13:11 am One more update and it's ended. Thanks everyone for reading.
Chapter 12 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt12_6.jpg) Chapter 13 (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/bk2chpt13_6.jpg) Title: Sweet Revenge? (Chapter 14/Epilog up!) Post by: cari4003 on June 12, 2007, 07:38:39 am Chapter 14
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