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Title: Season One: Truth and Reason Post by: Mermaid Sim on January 21, 2009, 07:44:28 pm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CX2jfhhAGrk
Please support my works! I rarely have any viewers who watch my new drama and none are commented, favorite, nor rated so please help and support to promote to the next season: the truth beyond human sight!~ Title: Re: Season One: Truth and Reason Post by: Zorom on January 22, 2009, 03:50:19 pm Your video taking could do with a lot of work. But it is an interesting idea.
Title: Re: Season One: Truth and Reason Post by: beckey on April 07, 2009, 05:38:04 am maybe try working on your settings a bit more. You can see the walls down and the bed in next to the kitchen? I'm not sure this is right :D I can't read the blue writing either. I suggest doing some work. Nice story line though. I kind of skipped the ending to be truthful. At the beginning of the blue writing. Please fix these things in the next one, thanks.
Title: Re: Season One: Truth and Reason Post by: Theraven on April 07, 2009, 06:00:22 am and you should possibly avoid lengthy scenes where nothing particularly interesting happens - like the sleeping scene. Shortening them down keeps the watcher form loosing interest.
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