i really like it so far, theres a lot of options and ways the plot could go.

you did what you had to do to end the story, and im glad you did
ive always felt bad for Nervous, the poor guy.

LOVE it! I admit that i was kinda like "awww noooo not the cliched dream sequence thing" but then i was pleasantly surprised ^.^ Cant wait to read more!

how...odd of Alex.  
and what does Yara mean by 'fun'? Is Val/Marielle grooming her to be her successor? :x

PLEASE continue!

*gasp* unless she practiced another handwriting, shes in a lot of trouble...lol

yessss! Cant wait to see how it all pans out.

it is good!  Im a bit confused...but thats just probably because i havent ever played the game.

lmao. totally lurved it!

loved it! cant wait for the next chapter, even though im sad that its the last one.  Is there a sequel in the future perhaps? :happy8:

love it! though i have to admit that i screamed at my computer when i noticed you stopped at a cliff hanger...but no worries :rofl: the stories completely awesome and i realllly like how you panned out Lilith's life. even though at some parts i want to reach into the story and kick all those people giving Lilith a hard time right in the butt.

i agree with Hidden~Secret, its a very nice take on the whole thing.  Cant wait to see what you post next.

this is the first time in a awhile that ive been really really REALLY excited about an expansion pack.  After nightlife i just got them for the storytelling abilities, content, and new interactions and the such.  Seasons was nice...but i didnt even bother getting Bon Voyage. My sims can FINALLY make pottery and do ballet. And the craft making and car fixing and the birds, and FINALLY my poor little toddlers can have a world outside of potty training and skill building!
eeek!
but im doing the same thing that i did with my seasons expansion. buy it, read the manual thing, drool, then wait until all the major bugs get fixed and for insim, inteen, and my other primary hacks get updated.

that was awesome! the plot of the story flowed very nicely and the plot in general was good.

it was working perfectly fine over the weekend, but for the past two days it wont work.  It loads to the neighborhood selection screen, and when i click on a neighborhood it acts normal. but then the music fades out and the mouse stops turning - which isn't abnormal because the game always does that- but then the mouse turns to the normal white one and it exits the game. Body shop wasn't working either.  So i took out my newest downloads, which didn't work. but then i took out the new default replacements i installed (cell phones, pet eyes, and game systems) and so now body shop works, but the game still doesn't get past the neighborhood loading screen.  Then i took out the entire downloads folder, and still no dice.
any suggestions?
i could re-install the game, but i haven't saved any back up files in a while so i would loose tons of my sims, lots, and the such. and i really dont want to do that. so are there any other options you could think of?

EDIT: i just realised that there are bodyshop files located in my C:\Documents and Settings\xgreydovex\My Documents\EA Games\The Sims 2 folder....is that a problem?  I dont remember them being there before.

EDIT2: never mind everyone, i managed to fix it myself after i looked at another thread.....turns out those bodyshop files actually were the problem.

love it love it love it!
I dont like Jondak at all, he should have an 'unfortunate accident' lmao