lol now you got me wanting to read the next one and this one isn't finished yet lol i watch almost every cop show that comes out csi miami is my current favorite.

i love the way they thread little pieces of evidence together to find the killer and the twists lol well you know how to do those just find on your own.

and when magic or cursed items or something along those lines are added and anyone mixes in ts2 then you get a really good sim story just as you have proven,others as well but since you are new to doing this you have already developed a unique style.

everytime i think there are no new type of stories to do someone comes up and proves me wrong lol which is great it keeps me entertained for many hours.

if i could find the rough draft of a story i started back in the late 80s i would turn that into a simstory of my own.

i stopped working on it because i had no form of visual aid back then but it is fairly easy to sim the characters but getting them to behave like i want to get a decent screen shot is almost impossible i keep forgetting that i can turn freewill off lol.

the few friends i allowed to read the rough draft all said all it needed was visual since i was having a lot of difficulty painting pictures with words.

many many authors can but i have always preferred to see pictures of what's going on,you are doing a great job and it does look like you are having fun doing so.

lol frogman i love all 9 of those and have done at least 4 - 8 myself rofl hmm number 9 looks promising got to see if that's available lol

thanks for the link don't know how i missed them lol.*goes back to waiting for update to story*

hmmm seems as if the feds poisoned the suspect lol no great loss and a very interesting twist.i agree with you about the pictures do bring the story to life.

i will be on the edge of my seat waiting for another update i'm really hooked on this story,sort of reminds me of a csi miami type storyline with some occultic undertones always make good stories in my opinon.

i almost forgot to ask where did you find FBI stuff?

can't wait till next update this story gets better every update

yet another great update you really have a handle on it now:) i knew this story was going to be good

lol getting them to cooperate is a whole different game in itself lol you can yell at them noo but do they listen?noooo lol.keep up the good work i can't wait till next update

wwoooowww this got a whole lot better in last update,are you sure you are new to taking pics?lol i think you are doing a fantastic job.wonderful update.

gotta keep checking back just to see any new twists

rofl ok maybe that's why they look like twins,any pics of the parents? they must look good to have 2 sets of good looking twins.

hmmmm they look like twins lol but i like the hair on james better so i chose james

your on a roll now great update.it looks as if rosemary is preggers by her unknown attacker,nice twist

ahhhh much better lol great update

i see spaces you left to add pics that i didn't notice before,lot of people complaining about trouble with photobucket lately,working them in later works too i saw 2 that i didn't see earlier if worse comes to worse use sleepycats idea. i'm off to check hers now:)
the pics that are here have great staging in them so i know you can do it.

wow  maybe you should give sleepycats idea a try looks good and no worries with photobucket pics look good there too if you do put a link here for us to go see i want to follow this story out to see how it ends

wow rockchick you are filling my download folder up lol.nice to see your work here also i must have missed this one one your site.

thanks for posting it here.sorry i don't know how to make a link as fancy as yours lol i forget which program i am supposed to use to do that.

this story just got a lot more interesting just a suggestion here a few more pics like you had in 3rd installment will help.
 the storyline is great and well structured.only needs a few more pics:) good job of getting my attention though i will follow this one.