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Title: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 08:22:08 am I'm just asking for someone to review a short story of mine, give suggestions, suggest changes, add info, all that editor stuff. I've wanted a second opinion on a story I've been writing, and any help would be nice. Thanks to anyone that thinks it over.
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 08:23:23 am Is it a story you're going to post here?
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 08:27:21 am I don't really want to post it up, I was think a kind of PM post type thing.
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 08:38:08 am I meant post in the story forum when it is done ;)
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 08:39:56 am If someone thinks it's okay, sure. Are you interested?
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 08:43:42 am Well, maybe. What is the story about? And is it very long?
(Just so you know - English isn't my first language, which means that I'm not 100% fluent, but I've read and written stories in English for a while now, so I think my grammar should be more than acceptable ;)) Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 08:45:46 am Got it, it's about two roommates, one of whom is an alcoholic, its just like an intro right now, only 3 pages.
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 08:46:46 am I don't mind looking over it :)
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 08:47:44 am Cool, I'll send it to you over PM.
Edit: Your inbox is full. :p Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 08:59:17 am Now there's room :)
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 09:00:28 am Ok, thanks for looking over it for me.
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 09:55:17 am Sent you a PM ;)
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 10:04:55 am I got it, Thanks so much for the help, your tips were very helpful! I'll keep you updated on the story. By the way, I'm only in 10th grade english, so I'm still learning english myself. I hope it becomes something amazing! :D
Edit: Sorry for leaving you with a cliffhanger! :p Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Theraven on September 26, 2009, 10:54:29 am Good luck :)
Title: Re: Anyone interested in looking over some of my writing? Post by: Carlwashere on September 26, 2009, 01:41:03 pm Try and keep some space in your inbox, so I can send you updates. I'm starting chapter 2 now.
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