Another chapter already! We is being spoilt!

*sings* Smokin' in the boys room...

Oh wow, I nearly missed this, because it was hiding on pg 2. Lucky I went looking for it.

Great update! The plot, it turns...

:jaw: Whoa.

Oweee! I've only just started fiddling with picture taking and that's a headache in itself. An entire reshoot? Eep.
Still, as has been said, it could have been worse.
Take your time with it, I have so many stories I'm keeping track of right now, I'm losing track of them all.

I'd missed about two chapters of this. Romance! Yays! And kittens!

Yike! That look just before she shoved him!
Knew a girl that could do that look. Scary, scary chick. :smt107

Well, I like it - it's a very interesting and touching story - and it has far less mistakes than I've seen than some who speak English as a first language. :smile:

I had no problems in understanding the tale, but if you feedback, the only part that really stood out for me, was ...Alex is the root of all her problems and isnt soon to let her know just that...

I got the idea of what you meant, but "soon" doesn't fit there. You could use "hesitant" instead, or possibly "shy." Other than that, the best way to improve is to just keep doing it. :smile:

Ah, the little'uns grow up so fast....

Well, I admit I was wondering about that a bit myself. I mean, I don't think anyone has complained so far, but there were some very detailed descriptions in it that might push the boundaries a bit. Have you heard at all from the moderators here?

I think the scenes could be handled with less details if you needed to. Many writers can handle a 'sex scene' with vague innuendo and delicate references. You don't have to know exactly what the characters are doing for people to understand Ripps reaction, so it could be done. But it is your story, and you're telling it your way.

I mean, it made me squirm a little, but that's just me.

OOh! This story!
Good to see its return!

Yay! Update!
Glowing kids! Cleanbots! Snowmen!
 
:D:D

Okay, I just love that perplexed look when she's figuring out the fork.

And the slow birth of twoo luvv... awwww...

I say continue in the same thread.
I think you only need to start a new one if it gets too long. Most of the other on-going stories are still in one thread and far longer than yours, so it's okay.

Plus, it helps us find it easier.

Cute kid, all right.
This is such a touching story, I hope that the revelations about her past don't screw her new life up.

Oh no! Another story suffers computer crash!

I for one would like to put in a vote for continuing if you can. I'm kind of getting hooked, now.