Story concept: 9/10
Execution: 8.5/10
Your father's ignorance: What's he on?

Whoa, threw me off (in a good way) with the "dream OMG I've returned home" thing.
Still <3'ing this story.

A 9.9/10.
(My rating scale is broken after reading the awesomeness of flid's stories.)

Thanks.

Right now, seeing as I don't have the Sims 2, all i can really do is basic set planning, advanced plot development, and advanced character development.
If I can get the Sims2 back in March or April, the story could be up within a month or 2 after that.
But there's another Sims2 story I've been working on for about 2 years that'll take priority to this story. I'm keeping that story's plot somewhat secret, so let me know if you want me to send you a PM on what I have for that story.

-Thanks for the help offer, I'll look into it. And I've got a better resource on AS: myself. I have it too.
-Let's just say I'm gonna have fun with everybody before the story's done............especially Adrian.

I've got a working list of celebrity appearances:
-the members of Guns 'N Roses
-Wolf Hoffman (guitarist for Accept)
-Zakk Wylde (guitarist for Black Label Society)
-Scott Ian (rhythm guitarist for Anthrax)
-Joey Belladonna (former vocalist for Anthrax)
-Eric Adams (vocalist for Manowar)
-Ted Nugent (It's the Nuge. Enough said.)

500 POSTS.

This could be due to:
-random IE error
-photos taken down for some reason.

Decent stuff you've got going here.
That's an interesting way of writing things, owl.

Thou art welcome.

I've been fooling around with this idea for a few weeks or so, and I want your opinions on it. (I can't post it here until I get the Sims2 back, which should be sometime soon.)

Here's what I've got:
    Adrian Henson is a 14-year boy with a dream: to be in a somewhat sucessful rock band, live the rockstar life, you know, the dreams of many who pick up and learn the electric guitar.
He already has one advantage: He's been described by some music critics as a possible 2nd coming of Jimi Hendrix.
But, he has one obstacle that could make or break him: He has Asperger's Syndrome. This complicates a lot of things for him, making achieving his dream that much harder in a buisness that's already very difficult to achieve major sucess. Will he suceed beyond his wildest dreams...........or crash and burn in the process?

So, what do you think of this basic concept so far? Key word is BASIC. All I have so far is the basic plot and a working list of characters.

You're pretty much the exact opposite of me.
I tend to develop everything BUT the title first.

And as for placing the pics where you want them, here's how it goes:



And repeat the formula as much as needed.

Double-agents........I think? Sweet........

Nice. Back up to the original 8.5/10 score.
And............SWAT team rules.

Can't wait.
*makes note to read update after mending an accidental insulting of some other InSim user*

Sorry......................Thou art not psychic.
It's just a pet peeve of mine, seeing skylight in interior shots.
Ignore my last score. It's now an 8/10. At least keep the roof on during the interior shots.

Thanks for bringing this up, TC.
I'm probably gonna have a worse time than you with keeping the audience's attention, seeing as my first original story is divided into a trilogy.
Can I bounce my ideas off of you? Please?
(NOTE: The PM will be a moderately long read.)