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Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 17, 2008, 08:05:21 am
Don't know if I should say anything to introduce my story - but here goes.
This is my first story on Insim and I have been working on it for a while - four chapters are already written - so I hope you enjoy the beginning.

Part II  (http://www.insimenator.org/showpost.php?p=1179950&postcount=12)

Part III (http://www.insimenator.org/showpost.php?p=1183017&postcount=21)

Part IV (http://www.insimenator.org/showpost.php?p=1196601&postcount=24)

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"Have a good day at work, honey." Juliet smiled as Andrew pulled her in for a quick peck as he left the front door. The breeze rustled Andrews hair and Juliet placed a delicate hand on his clean-shaven cheek, before taking a dark lock of his hair between her thumb and forefinger and placing it back into its rightful place. Andrew flashed his white teeth in a grin and placed his hands on Juliet's waist.

Juliet knew that Andrew didn't want to leave her home at this crucial point, but he had no choice; work was beckoning him and if he didn't turn up his job could be in jeopardy.

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Juliet leaned in and rested her head gently on Andrews shoulder, snuggling her nose into his ear as she did so.

"I'll try." Andrew grinned as he received affectionate but playful attentions from Juliet. "I'll miss you though." Juliet giggled slightly as she buried her face into his neck lightly pressing her lips on his sensitive spots, while Andrew sighed in ecstacy. "Maybe when I get home we can spend a few hours together and - you know." Juliet grinned as she gave him one last kiss and pulled away, his arms still wrapped around her waist.

"That would be nice." Juliet paused, Andrew looking intently into her eyes, and lightly ran a finger down his nose. "But to come back home you actually have to..." A lightbulb appeared above Andrews head as his eyes widened as his mouth formed a silent 'oh!'. "Yeah." Juliet giggled. Andrew kissed her again and ran down the steps before turning back and kissing her again. "Go!" Juliet grinned as Andrew ran to the car and slung his briefcase into the passenger seat.

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Juliet stood on the porch as she watched Andrew clamber into the driver's seat. She couldn't see him as he closed the door because the sun was reflecting from windows and into her eyes, but she could tell he was looking back at her as he began to pull away. She gave him a light wave, her delicate fingers pointing to the bluest of skies.
Still smiling she waited until she could only see the red speck in the distance which was his car. Then she glanced up at the sky as if in silent prayer and turned to go back inside.

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As she turned to go back into the house her smile evaporated from her face at the prospect of what she would have to face as soon as she entered.

Andrew and Juliet had recently faced a lot of troubles. Andrew's failing marriage with his ex-wife, Meygan, led him into Juliet's arms when he met her at a bar after a long day at work. One thing led to another and Andrew's failing marriage completely disintegrated and his and Juliet's relationship reached a whole new level of commitment. Juliet moved in, leaving a highly disgruntled family member.

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Andrew's daughter, Alexis.

Alexis was a young girl who saw her family ripped apart by her father's infidelity. Naturally, she blames her father's new girlfriend who caused him to stray from her devoted mother and housewife. Alexis also knows, from listening on the stairs, that her mother refused to take Alexis with her, saying that she was better off growing up in a home she was familiar with. This left Alexis in a confused state, rejected from her mother, less attention from her father who is now devoted to his new girlfriend. All Alexis wants is for her family to be fixed back together. But that could take a miracle.

Alexis saw Juliet step backwards to come inside the house and turned away from the window as she fiddled with a lone pawn on the chessboard, while fixing a scowl on her face.

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Juliet approached Alexis with an uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach, she knew that the young girl detested her very existence, that she blamed her for tearing her parents marriage apart. But Juliet sympathised, she knew if she were in the same position that she would also be acting in the same immature way.

"Alexis?" She stammered as she looked the little girl in the eye. "Are you ready for school? The bus should be here in a minute, or if you want I can take you in the car and we can have a little bonding time?" She tried to lighten her voice and make herself seem excited at the prospect of spending more time with the little girl. When the little girl said nothing, Juliet began to get frustrated. "I know that you hate me Alexis." The little girl rolled her eyes and made a clicking noise with her tongue. "But I wish you would speak to me... you don't understand the situation of your parents' marriage, it was failing before I even met your father."

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Alexis furrowed her eyebrows. "You think that I am going to be believe anything you say? I saw my mother walk out on my father the day she found out about you! And yes, I do hate you - I won't deny it. You tore my family apart!" Alexis throat was clogged and her eyes brimmed with tears. "I won't ever forgive you and I won't ever speak to you again! Oh, and I won't go to school. So you will have to call them up and tell them that I am sick." Juliet breathed a heavy sigh as her head began to ache.

"I will do no such thing! You need your education..."

"I need my mother, but you..."

"Alexis that is the end of it - you are going to school and I don't want to hear another word against it."

"I'd like to see you try and make me... there is no way that I am going and there is no way that you will get me on that bus."

"I'll call your father, he will..." Juliet knew she should not have resorted to this, it showed that she had no authority over the little girl and Alexis knew it too.

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Juliet turned away as the little girl stormed up the stairs and out of sight. Juliet closed her eyes taking deep breaths, trying to ignore the now, heavy thumping on the back of her skull. She was out of control of the situation and she had to regain some authority, preferably before the school bus turned up outside.

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Andrew drove up the many ramps in the packed multi-storey car park looking for an empty space, eventually he spotted one and quickly squeezed into the tiny spot. He pulled the handbrake up firmly and switched the engine off, the woman's monotone voice from the radio was silenced and Andrew took a deep breath as he thought of Juliet at home.

He cleared his throat and checked his appearance in his rearview mirror before taking his briefcase from the passenger seat and lightly stepping out of his immobilised vehicle.

The smell of petrol wafted up his nose as he stepped out into the damp and chilly car park, where a few people were clambering out of their cars to go into town. Andrew slammed the door shut behind him and set his briefcase on the floor beside his car so he could straighten his tie.

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As he looked around he saw a close friend approaching him from the opposite row of cars.

Julian and Andrew had been friends ever since they started working together a few years ago, Julian had also been best friends with Meygan, Andrews ex-wife, since high school, but he did not begrudge Andrew for his lack of judgement since he had been aware of the failing marriage for quite a while after hearing both sides of the story from Andrew and Meygan.

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They greeted each other with a warm but firm handshake.

"Long time no see." Julian exclaimed as he grasped Andrews hand. "I was missing you, I don't get sent on very good assignments without you... Anyway, I know why you needed time off, but boy did you take time off..."

"Yeah. Ok, Julian. I missed you too, but I have to make sure that Alexis doesn't murder Juliet in her sleep." Julian laughed but Andrew looked serious. "I'm being serious bro, they detest each other, and I know Juliet tries but Alexis just wants her mum, I don't know why Meygan refused to take her." Julian lost his smile and tried to look understanding as the screech of tyres was heard on the storey below.

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"I see what you mean, mate. But what the hell is with your suit?" Julian laughed again, a heartfelt laugh, a heart-warming laugh. "I mean, you aren't exactly dressed for the occassion, no doubt we will just be sitting in the office again." Andrew playfully gave Julian a dig in the arm.

"Well when you get promoted and become someone's SUPERIOR and detective superintendent there are some benefits..." Julian raised his eyebrows."And they are?"

"Well a higher wage packet and do you know what that means?... It means that I can buy snazzy suits and wear them to work." Andrew stooped and picked up his briefcase.

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He looked Julian in the eye and began to laugh. "The chicks dig it too!" They both laughed and Andrew took his keys out of his pocket and pointed them at the car as he pushed the button that set the central locking and alarm.
"I guess we'd better get going then, you don't want to be late after all the time off you have already had."

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Julian turned around and Andrew followed as they headed towards the elevators. Julian grinned as his eye caught the woman walking in front of them.

"She sure is fine. Wonder if she wants to come and hang out with us at the station. I mean, look at that ar..." Andrew scoffed.

"Yes I'm sure that the best thing she can think of to do this morning is sit in the office watching us do paperwork, I expect she'd have a ball!" Julian waggled his finger in Andrews face.

"She might. You never know it could just be right up her street." Andrew looked Julian in the eye as another waft of petrol filled his nose.

"Yep I'm sure it is. Why don't you go and ask her?" Julian closed his mouth and walked quietly out of the car park.

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A short while later and Andrew was waiting outside H&M for Julian to come out of the public toilets nearby. The street was paved with black, and was rather quiet but Andrew just put it down to the fact that it was pretty early in the morning for lots of people to be out and about.

The sun was already hot and it pierced Andrew eyes as his phone rang.

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"Hello? Andrew Cooper speaking." Andrew heard the soft giggle of Juliet and a heavy sigh on the end of the phone, and he knew something was wrong.

"Andrew it's me, Juliet." His heart jumped into his throat as he thought the worst; something had happened to Alexis.

"What is it honey? Is everything alright? Alexis is Ok isn't she?" Juliet's heavy sigh on the other end of the phone made his heart stop for a brief moment and he held his breath in anticipation.

"She's fine. But she is refusing to go to school and she won't listen to me. I didn't know what else to do and I know you're busy with work and everything but I can't force her to do anything - I'm not her mother." Juliet sounded on the verge of tears and Andrew had no idea what to do.

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He held the phone closer to his ear as he closed his eyes and thought about what he could do."Honey? Are you still there?" Juliet's tingling voice echoed down the phone soothing Andrews heart.

"Yes, sweetheart, I'm still here. I suppose we can just let her have the day off today, because there is no way I am going to be able to rush back home now, but I will be having words with her when I get back and she won't ever refuse to go to school again." Juliet stayed silent and Andrew could tell she had tensed up, fearful of having to spend a whole day with his nuisance of a daughter.

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 "It's only one day Juliet, I'm sure you can handle it, try and bond with her. Once you get to know each other..." Juliet's tone had changed now, it was shrill and her throat was clogged as she tried to hold back the tears.

"I've tried bonding with her Andrew... I keep trying. But she detests me, she wants you and her mother back together and she would do anything to get me out of the way. She blames me Andrew! She blames me for your mistake!" Andrew frowned as he fought to hold back his own tears.

"It wasn't a mistake Juliet. I love you. I will speak to Alexis when I get home and I will explain everything that happened between me and her mother. I will sort this Juliet. It will just take some time, everyone who knows you loves you and it will be the same way with Alexis soon... I have to go now honey, Julian is back. It's time to head to the office. I love you. See you when I get home. Bye."

"Bye." Andrew hung up and turned to face Julian.

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"Family problems!" he said rolling his eyes. "Reasons to stay single." he said holding out his hand as if it were a sheet of paper. "Reason number one: To avoid the problems of a womans everyday life. Reason number two..."

"Ok, Julian. I am really not in the mood anymore." Julian gave Andrew an apologetic look as they headed towards the office, the woman they had previously been following had now disappeared.

"Alexis giving Juliet a hard time?" Andrew nodded.

"Yep, and I can't do anything about it because I'm stuck here and it's not like I can just go home otherwise I'll get the sack. Why can't everything just fall into place like it was supposed to?" Julian comforted his friend by patting him on the shoulder.

"That's divorce my friend."

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Violet looked up as Andrew entered the office. She watched him run his large, firm hands through his dark hair and her heart fluttered. Her face flushed a deep red and she continued to look at him until he had reached his desk and started ruffling through paperwork.

As she turned her head back to her computer screen she began to think about things she could say to him. "Good to see you back. No too vague." She told herself. "I need to say something where he will get the hint. I would have thought he had already worked it out by now." Violet hadn't thought of anything to say, but her feet began acting of their own accord and she found herself walking straight towards Andrew.

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Violet fixed a smile on her face as she approached him, he looked up and smiled back before looking down again and rustling through leaves of paper.

"Hi Andrew. I hear you are single again." Andrew looked up, saw the hopeful look in her eyes and felt a deep sense of guilt; not because he had ever given her a reason to think he felt the same way about her, but because he knew she was wasting her time in chasing after him.

"Hi, how's work been?" Andrew racked his brains, trying to think of something to say without hurting her feelings.

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"Well it's been Ok, I guess. Work is work." Violet gave an awkward laugh. "But going out at night and meeting new people is nice, a benefit of living in town. Speaking of which have you met anyone new?" Andrew, relieved that she asked the question and that he was obliged to give her an answer without feeling so bad about it, smiled and looked up.

"Er, yes. I have been seeing someone for a few months now, and she has moved in to my place. Things are going good, what about you?" Andrew sighed in relief at the lack of hurt evident in her eyes, she was still smiling, but he could sense her disappointment.

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 "Oh, I've met a few new people, but none of them have the longevity factor." Violet refrained from saying 'unlike you' but only just. "It's good that you have gotten over Meygan so quickly, though, Alexis must not be happy with the new arrangement."

"Well, no, actually she isn't." Andrew stated, scratching his head awkwardly.

"Naturally, she probably hates... what's her name? You never said." Andrew was surprised at how interested she seemed in his personal life especially considering he knew she would be jealous, but told her anyway.

"Er, Juliet."

"Well, I suppose Alexis hates Juliet doesn't she? Just give them time to get used to one another, make a few changes and I expect everything will turn out Ok." Violet gave Andrew a reassuring smile, and watched him staring at her with a stunned look on his face.

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"How do you know all of this stuff? How can you be so sure everything will be alright?" Violet's eyes glazed over as memories shone in front of her.

"It's a long story."

"Well we are only doing paperwork today so we have all the time in the world." Violet knew that this was a chance she should take, opening herself up to Andrew could only make them closer.

"Well, when I was younger I went through the same thing with my..."

"Andrew mate, Martin wants to see you in his office." Julian had trodden over and stated this with an angry look on his face.

"Oh sorry Violet, maybe you can tell me some other time?" Andrew started making his way to the door of their boss's office. "Julian aren't you coming?"

"This new assignment isn't going to be you and me this time, mate." Andrew raised his eyebrows in confusion and headed to Martin's office.

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As Andrew walked away from her, Violet closed her eyes, pursed her lips and let out a deep breath as she tried to rid herself of all her frustration. She had come close - so close, to opening up to Andrew and now she was back to where she started. When she opened her eyes again Julian was standing in front of her, watching her, and she felt her blood boil.

"Couldn't you just have waited a few more minutes before sending him to Martin's office?" She hissed at him - Andrew was still within earshot so Violet tried to muffle her voice. "You know how I feel about him, we were just getting to know each other on a more personal level!" Violet just looked at Julian furiously as she waited for him to reply.

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 "Violet. I know this is none of my business, and yes, I do know how you feel about Andrew, but it can't happen. His previous relationship was already destroyed because of him straying from his wife, you have to respect that he felt extremely guilty for that, and he would never do it again. He is now in another serious relatonship and I don't want to see that destroyed either." Violet looked at Julian flabbergasted.

"I'm serious about this too, Julian. I have been in love with Andrew since High School and that is why I followed his career path. You really think I like this job? I have to get him to notice me otherwise it will all have been for nothing! My life will have been wasted chasing a love that I can never have. Please, Julian, understand..."

"I do understand Violet, but you should start chasing a new dream now, because the one you are chasing is pulling away from you and you are being left behind." Violet folded her arms and furrowed her eyebrows as Julian walked away from her and back to his desk.

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As Julian began to dial a number into his telephone, Violet approached Tara, who stood by her desk furiously rummaging through her drawers.

"Hey Tara, what are you looking for?" Tara jumped as she stood up quickly, startled by Violet's presence.

"Oh, just a stapler, I think I've lost it." Tara didn't seem too sure about what she was saying, Violet thought. 'Oh well' she told herself 'she can't be up to much it's just Tara.'

"Oh right, you can borrow mine later. I wanted to talk with you that's all." Tara looked up into Violet's face, confused. "How well do you know Andrew?" Tara's eyes lit up as Andrews name was mentioned.

"Oh he's very nice. I know him quite well, he's very polite and always says hello."

"Yes but what do you know about him?" Violet persisted, annoyed at Tara's lack of understanding.

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 "Well I guess not much more than you. He's always talking to you. Surely you know everything there is to know about him by now." Tara flushed red as she realised how little she knew Andrew. She fumbled with her hands as Violet just looked at her.

"Well I guess so..."

"You like him don't you?" Tara blurted out. "Sorry, it's just I see the way you look at him, how you act around him... you do know that he is in a long-term relationship don't you? You won't ever get him." Violet felt her face go red. Could she really be read so easily? Was she an open book? She shook her head and looked at Tara furiously.

"Why does everyone keep saying that? I just need to find out who this Juliet is and what is so great about her."

"Juliet?"

"Yes. Juliet. Wait, do you know a Juliet?" Tara realised she had said to much and shook her head quickly.

"No... I have to get back to work... Can I borrow your stapler?"

"Sure."

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Violet turned her back on Tara suspiciously as she watched Andrew close Martin's office door behind him. How she wished she could tell him how she feels about him. 'Maybe he alredy knows!' She said to herself. 'If Tara could tell, surely anyone knows.' Violet flushed a deep red as this thought occured to her, 'maybe he just doesn't want me.' Violet held her head high and sat back down at her desk as her disappointment of being rejected filled her heart.

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Clara looked around as the door opened and Andrew walked in with an annoyed look on his face. She was startled at the way she found it difficult to look away from him, only when he came to stand right next to her did she avert her eyes.

"Andrew. I would like you to meet your new partner, Clara." Andrew and Clara looked at each other and Clara lost herself in Andrews dark, deep eyes.

"What about Julian?" Andrew asked, Clara noted the power in his voice and his attitude and realised why he was detective superintendent.

"Julian will be given an office job, you have nothing to worry about, Clara here will keep you focused on the case in question." Andrew looked at Clara again and sized her up. Clara smiled awkwardly as their eyes met and quickly looked back at Martin. Andrew felt his face go red, and he too looked back at Martin.

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Martin looked up at Andrew with a serious look on his face.

"The case in question. Right. So we have found a body, her name is, or was, Tracey Watkins. She was strangled to death... you might want to go check the scene out, see if you can't find anything to go on. Julian will look up Tracey's history for you, and you can take Clara with you, I believe she will prove useful. You will need to..." Andrew interrupted his voice forceful and irritated.

"I know the procedures, Martin." Martin frowned and waved Andrew and Clara out of his office.

"Oh, and welcome back to work, Andrew."

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To Be Continued...

Thanks for reading and I hope you tune in for the next part and leave a nice comment if you liked it.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 17, 2008, 12:19:25 pm
Hey, Sam!  Glad you found your way here.  I hope you get tons of responses - some days are busy and others are slow, just like anywhere, I suppose.

I forgot to mention to you on your blog how beautiful your sims are.  The skin tones are just gorgeous - and they look like real people.

I hope you enjoy it here and stick around for awhile!


Title: Thanks
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 17, 2008, 05:20:07 pm
It's all thanks to you!!!

The skintones are all by ChazDesigns at TSR, but they were all packaged with sims...

Actually none of my sims were made by me - apart from Alexis... they're all celebrity sims with different skintones so nobody recognises them!!!

Anyway - I have found this site quite simple so far so yes, I'll be hanging around for a while.

Thanks for your help!


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Stelio Kontos on March 17, 2008, 08:49:39 pm
This is one of the better stories I've seen on here in a while.
How long have you been planning this story? The planning really shows.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 17, 2008, 09:39:36 pm
Yep - Sam's awesome!:happy8:


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 18, 2008, 01:04:25 pm
Well I didn't really plan this part - I planned from Part IV onwards... The first 3 parts were just in my head for quite a while.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Stelio Kontos on March 18, 2008, 04:38:41 pm
Quote from: Sam_Cains90;1178375
Well I didn't really plan this part - I planned from Part IV onwards... The first 3 parts were just in my head for quite a while.


For a so far semi-planned story, this is pretty good.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 18, 2008, 05:52:30 pm
Thankyou very much - I appreciate your views and compliments.

A quick question though, how do I make a link to other parts and keep it in the same thread? Does it do it automatically?


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Baby_Cat on March 18, 2008, 07:06:13 pm
gosh, your sims are so realistic and beautiful...almost toooo beautiful, lol. :P they all look they could be models in some fashion magazine :-) Great story so far, i love how it's all set up, with different people's point of view

Babycat ::smilieiforgetwhi:: :tongue8:


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 18, 2008, 10:18:02 pm
Let me see if I can explain it without confusing you (I'm pretty lousy at giving directions).

Once you have your next part posted, click on the post # up in the upper right hand corner.  Like, this one should be post #10.  That will take you to your story post directly, without being a part of the main body.  
Click on the URL address of the post, copy.  
Go back to your original post (which should now be in a separate window), click on Edit, and down at the bottom, Go Advnaced.  
This will allow you to add a link to your post.  Just type in 'Chapter 2' (or whatever you want), highlight it, click the insert link button and paste your URL there.  

Does that make any sense?  If you need more help - just let me know!


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 19, 2008, 06:56:37 am
Thanks Ariana - I think I understand it... things should work out fine :)

Thanks Baby Cat glad you are enjoying the story.


Title: Suburbia - Part II - On The Other Side
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 19, 2008, 05:42:44 pm
I hope you enjoy this part aswell! :happy8:

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The living room was noisy as the houses' inhabitants gathered on the couch with a tray of food and some glasses of wine for a late afternoon lunch. With a quick flick of the remote, Clarissa switched on the TV and turned it up so that everyone could hear over the background noises of people munching on cheese and biscuits and Mark's heavy sips of wine.

The news came on and with it the theme tune blurted out of the speakers. Suddenly, everyone lurched forward and grabbed some more cheese and biscuits and started chatting again.

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"Guys, hush up. I want to watch this!" Clarissa half-shouted, as the newsreader began to speak.

"Clarissa are you serious?" Colin asked incredulously as he cast a questionable look at her.

"What?" She stated defiantly, folding her arms.

"Watching the news? Since when did you become an intellectual?" Clarissa laughed and hit him over the head with a cushion.

"Since when did you need to become an intellectual to watch the news? Now hush up, something could have happened." Clarissa threatened them all with a cushion and they all closed their mouths, and listened to the newsreader.

"...A spokesperson has been over today listening to the days events and is going to indulge us in what has taken place. Over to you Cindy."

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"Thankyou." The newsreader, Cindy, took a deep breath as the rain began to pour down behind her. "Todays events have been tightly held under wraps, until just recently, when I was able to speak to Detective Superintendent Cooper, who has managed to give me some information on the grisly murder which took place here last night.

According to Mr Cooper, the woman, who has recently been identified as Tracey Watkins, was strangled to death at her office block where she intended to spend the night working late last night. As of now there are no leads as to who the murderer is, but the investigation is still going on as we speak. If we get a little closer we can see..." A blip sounded as Cindy was cut off and the previous reporter was back.

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"Looks like Cindy was getting a bit enthusiastic. We have now identified Tracey Watkins and, as such, have been provided a photo, and for anyone who might have seen this woman or knew of her whereabouts during the hours leading up to her death we have a phone-in line and ask for any help you can possibly give the police to identify a killer.

On a brighter note the weather is sure to be dry and bright. David. Over to you..."

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Clarissa closed her eyes in pain as her glass crumpled in her hand and sent shards of glass into her palms.

"Clarissa are you all right?" Mark enquired seriously as he saw the pain evident on her face.
"Come with me we'll get it all cleaned up." Mark held out his hand for Clarissa to take, but her face was blank and pale. "Listen Clarissa, I know you feel quite faint at the moment, but if you let me stop the bleeding, you'll feel fine." Clarissa said nothing, but stared blankly ahead.

"Clarissa, will you please listen to Mark, you're scaring us." Colin said quickly, turning away from Dana to see what was wrong.

"CLARISSA!" Dana screamed. "MARK WHAT ARE YOU DOING? GET HER TO THE KITCHEN NOW!" Dana took charge and pulled Clarissa to her feet and into the kitchen.

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Dana quickly rushed Clarissa, pale-faced and stiff, over to the sink and ran the cold tap as fast as it would go and shoved her hands underneath the running water. Clarissa did not move, but just stared out of the window, as Dana left to get a towel from the cupboard.

"Clarissa what's gotten into you? Why did you smash that glass?" Dana questioned as she hurriedly wrapped the towel around Clarissa's wet and bleeding hand and applied some pressure to stop the flow. When Clarissa just continued to stare out of the window, Dana splashed some water in her face to wake her up.

"Why... What are you doing?" Clarissa shrieked as the droplets of water ran down her face and neck.

"Clarissa, I am trying to find out why you crushed the glass into your hand, and almost killed yourself." Clarissa looked at Dana incredulously and pulled her hand away appplying pressure to the towel, which began to drip onto the floor.

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 "I didn't nearly kill myself!" Clarissa scoffed, turning away from the sink and dripping more water onto the floor.

"No you didn't." Dana laughed. "But you were bleeding rather a lot." Clarissa looked back at Dana, a worried look plagued her face and Dana was slightly disconcerted.

"Did you hear the news reporter?" Clarissa asked tentatively.
"What?"

"Did you see the news?" Clarissa asked, more strongly this time, she had a crazed, blazen look about her and her dark hair seemed to crackle with electricity.

"No, Clarissa. You know I don't watch the news... have you stopped bleeding?" Clarissa gave a little nod. "Good, let's go join the others." Dana said as Clarissa turned away once more and she strode out of the kitchen, leaving Clarissa alone with her worries.

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Dana sat back down on the couch and cuddled up with Colin again.

"Is she Ok?" Karl asked as he tried to ignore the now kissing pair next to him. A loud slurp was heard, and Karl pulled a face in disgust, while Dana was detatching herself from Colins lips.

"Yes, she's fine. Just a little shaken up I think... if you just leave her, she'll be ready to come out in a few minutes." Dana added this little piece of advice as Karl seemed just about ready to run into the kitchen after Clarissa.

"Hey guys." Tom smiled as he entered the living room, he had a wild look about him, as if he had discovered something of great meaning. "Mark, come and listen, I've written a new song." Mark was the first person Tom ever allowed to listen to his music, the only one he trusted. Mark sprang to his feet.

"You've written something new?" He paused slightly before turning back to the others. "Karl you should check on Clarissa in a minute, just to make sure that she is alright."

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With that, Mark turned away and followed Tom up the stairs into his room, where he would listen to Tom's new masterpiece. Tom had a knack for creating emotions in his music, a way of ensnaring all who listened, hynotising them, Mark often found himself hypnotised and longed for more music.

Clarissa left the kitchen feeling a bit dizzy and glancing up she saw Mark and Tom going up the stairs.

"Hey guys. Where are you going?" Tom looked around and grinned at her meaningfully. "No way. You've written something new." Clarissa knew that Mark was always the first to hear and had learned the habit of not asking to listen when she knew she wouldn't be allowed. Instead she rubbed her forehead and said "I can't wait to hear it" before heading outside into the salvation that the garden provided.

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Mark nestled himself comfortably on the floor as he flicked absent-mindedly through one of Tom's discarded magazines. Tom gathered himself and headed to the corner where he picked up his guitar and strung a few chords, before he began the introductory melody.

Mark noticed a difference straight away to how Tom usually wrote music, it had a melancholy sound to it, a slower beat which seemed to caress his ears as the waves hit him.

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Paul opened his mouth to sing, and once again Mark was surprised by the sound that Tom projected. It was an emotional piece, a softer more feminine piece of music and Mark found himself mesmerised.

"On the other side.
That's where we'll go together.
I'll stay by your side.
And protect you, protect you from harm.
I'll cradle you in my arms.
I'll make you feel safe."

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"The guilt that surrounds us.
Comes from the memory of you.
We open our eyes in wonder.
As we realise what we have to do.
We see what's

On the other side.
That's where we'll go together.
I'll stay by your side.
And protect you, protect you from harm.
I'll cradle you in my arms.
I'll make you feel safe."

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"The memory of a warm embrace.
That gentle kiss on the lips.
It was ours. Just ours forever.
Long lost through all your trips.
You never went.

On the other side.
That's where we'll go together.
I'll stay by your side.
And protect you, protect you from harm.
I'll cradle you in my arms.
I'll make you feel safe."

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"For the two of us.
Ignorance is bliss.
We didn't know what was coming.
We didn't know what we would miss.

On the other side.
That's where we'll go together.
I'll stay by your side.
And protect you, protect you from harm.
I'll cradle you in my arms.
I'll make you feel safe."

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"That's what I told you.
That's what I said to make you leave.
I thought we'd be back together.
But now I see.
We'll only be.

On the other side.
That's where we'll go together.
I'll stay by your side.
And protect you, protect you from harm.
I'll cradle you in my arms.
And make you feel safe."

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Mark looked on in wonder as Tom finished with a tricky little chord.

"Tom. That was amazing. I don't know how to explain it. You've done it this time, man.. You've done it. This is your hit. Your money maker." Tom smiled ecstatically as he set his guitar back down.

"Is it good?"

"Good? Are you serious? It's amazing! There's no way I could describe it. It's emotional, it's heartfelt, it's comforting, reassuring. I don't know! It's just everything music should be! I'm honoured that I am the first one to have heard it. And I know. And I am telling you, that is going to be on the radio." Tom and Mark just smiled at each other, before wrapping their arms around each other and jumping about the room in happiness.

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Clarissa stepped in away from the humid air outside, her hand still wrapped in a towel and shaking tremulously from the recent loss of blood, her face pale and her bottom lip trembling slightly.

"Are you alright, Clarissa?" Karl moved cautiously off the couch eyeing her worriedly. The fire crackled in the grate and Clarissa's vision went blurry. Karl watched her stumble as she rested her forehead in one hand and tried to balance with the other. "Let's get you upstairs to bed."

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Karl eased Clarissa gently onto the soft matress which she sunk into easily. He watched her as her eyes fluttered while she tried to keep herself awake. Her dark curls flowing gently around her sunkissed face, her hand delicately curled and just resting across her stomach. Karl smiled and stroked a stray curl away from Clarissa's face and watched her gentle breathing form. He squeezed her hand and, still smiling, backed out of the room as Clarissa let out a small sigh and rolled over.

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Clarissa opened her eyes as she heard the door close behind Karl, she listened to the sound of his fading footsteps as he walked down the hall and into his own bedroom. She looked around her small and cluttered bedroom with a sad look on her face.

An e-mail popped up on her laptop screen and she scrambled off of her bed and stared at the address with a horrified expression on her face before clicking on the attached e-mail.

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She read the e-mail over and over again, as if she were trying to imprint the memory of it onto the inside of her eyelids so she could read it forever. She tore herself away from the screen as tears welled in her eyes and she clambered back into her bed.

She lay there for a while as the tears rolled down her cheeks and onto the pillow underneath her, she thought of Tracey Watkins as she buried her face in her hands and sobbed herself into a stupour.

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Clarissa finally calmed down and closed her eyes all thoughts of the e-mail; it's contents, who it was from, all swimming through her mind. As she dozed off, exhausted by her emotional outburst and tiring day, images floated through her mind, flashes of her life with her grandmother and her friends in school.

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Clarissa opened her eyes wide, the smell of her grandmother's perfume wafted up her nose, as she heard the door swing open and hit the wall behind it with a loud bang, waking her up indefinitely.

"Happy Christmas, Clarissa." Her grandmother said stiffly as she bent to pick up the dirty laundry that was thrown about the floor. She shuffled about the room picking things up, banging drawers closed and just making noise until she couldn't tolerate Clarissa's ignorance any longer. "Are you going to get up of your own accord or am I going to have to pull you out of that bed?" She screeched, her voice a little more shaky than usual, she knew that Clarissa was growing old enough to defend herself and more.

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"Well?" She pressed on as Clarissa continued to ignore her. Margery fussed over the dirt and dust covering the room and began to comment on random objects to get Clarissa to answer her. "I will need to get a cloth and wipe that computer screen of yours. It's filthy - Fingerprints all over it! Why do you have a poster of that loser on your wall, he's not even that attractive if you ask me. Why do you have to dump all of your clean clothes, that I have just washed, on the floor all of the time. It just means I have to do more... that's it Clarissa, get up, I'm sick of you ignoring me. If your mother were here, you know she would not let you treat me like this, I have done nothing but provide you with a decent life." Margery bit her lip hoping that Clarissa would finally listen, and fiddled with the reading glasses that were hanging from her neck.

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Clarissa's eyes were still open, but in answer to all of her grandmother's questions, she just pulled the warm covers up over her face, hiding it from view. She felt the moisture of her breath on her face as she breathed into the duvet, trying to ignore her grandmother's continuous talking, tidying and fussing.

"Right that's it Clarissa! I've had enough! What would your father say? What would your mother say?"

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Clarissa sat up furiously as blood rushed to her head.

"They wouldn't say anything. You have given me a decent enough place to live, I suppose. You do my laundry, you give me somewhere to sleep and give me money and food." Clarissa took a deep breath as she realised how emotionally she felt about what she was just about to tell her grandmother. "But you have never shown me any affection. You've never given me any indication that you actually care about me. You just treat me like I am a thorn in your side." Margery sighed and sat on the end of the bed.

"One of your friends is at the door. I'll get all this stuff cleaned up for you." Clarissa almost burst into tears at her grandmothers indifference, but satisfied herself with saying.

"Happy Christmas, grandmother. Send whoever it is up will you? I need to get dressed."

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Clarissa turned around as the door swung open and hit the wall behind with a loud bang and just stared in shock.

"Tracey? What are you doing here? How did you know where I lived?" Clarissa was full of questions, but at the same time she felt her stomach drop with the feeling of disappointment that now filled her from seeing her old friend.

"Well, after you moved away, I begged my mother to move too. I had to be with my best friend. And so, here I am. Isn't it great things are going to be just like they always were." Clarissa nodded, but the feeling of disappointment had grown, it's not like she didn't like Tracey anymore... she had just moved on, made new friends. Friends with whom Tracey would not be welcome.

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 "And I have enrolled at your school as well, so you can introduce me to all of your new friends, and we can have fun, just like old times. Isn't this going to be great? Us together again?" Clarissa grinned uneasily and Tracey laughed at her. "Right you have to tell me everything! What's this place like? Have you met a boy yet? I hope I do! Do you have any hot friends?"

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Clarissa entered the school grounds a week later, eager to see her friends again after the time apart for the christmas holidays. But for the first time ever she felt a knot of nervousness in her stomach, a small knot, but it still made her feel uneasy as she could hear Tracey's heavy footfalls behind her.

"Hey guys, where's Karl?" Clarissa said as she approached her friends most of whom were looking behind her at the new arrival.

"Library of course." Tom replied without taking his eyes off of Tracey, Mark had an air of annoyance about him as he eyed Tracey, who seemed completely at ease and very bold in character, up and down.

"Of course." Clarissa mimmicked.

"Clarissa, are you going to tell us who this is?" Dana, looked at Clarissa as she gestured with a slight nod of the head in Tracey's direction. All eyes of the group flickered at once to Tracey and then to Clarissa as if awaiting an explanation.

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Clarissa nervously looked around at Tracey as the knot in her stomach tightened.

"This is - er, Tracey. She's a close friend from my old school, who has just moved here." She quickly gave the group an apologetic look as they all looked at one another with curious looks on their faces.

"Hi." Tracey introduced herself with a high pitched squealy voice, like that of a chipmunk, not taking her eyes off of Mark.

"Hi I'm Colin and this is Dana..." Dana flashed Colin a warning look and he leant back on the bench and closed his mouth.

"And I'm Tom and this is Mark." Tom emphasised Mark's name as he smirked at Tracey's interest in his blonde friend. Clarissa's face flushed as she felt guilty for Tracey and putting her in this situation, but also annoyed that Tracey was just standing and staring.

"So, we had better get to class." Dana said slowly as she eased herslef lightly off of the bench after the warning bell rang. "See you later Clarissa."

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A couple of hours later and the group were all heading to the canteen for lunch, Tracey following behind, looking like a lost dog, while she watched the others chatting animatedly and throwing harmless insults at one another and laughing.

Tracey looked around the canteen and found it full of the usual cliques associated with a high school, but his group was so uniquely different, a mixture of characters and she felt that she needed to be a part of it. She didn't realise that she had to be unique herself to be able to join. But she saw the dozen other hopefuls that were also trying desperately to be included in any way that they could.

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"Listen, Clarissa, I really want to be a part of this group." She cast a quick glance at Mark, which didn't go unnoticed by Clarissa who raised an eyebrow at her enstranged friend. "I can't stop looking at him, or listening to him every time he says something. I need you to talk to him for me, talk to the group. I want to be a part of it. I want to be with Mark. Please Clarissa - do this for me?" Tracey looked imploringly into the eyes of her old friend who had completely changed, it wasn't just her appearance, she had just become so calm, so friendly, so... nice.

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Clarissa nervously glanced behind her and watched her friends eating, Karl kept glancing up occassionally, as he waited for Clarissa to join the table. She turned to face Tracey breathing heavily as she tried to make up her mind.

"I don't know, Tracey. You really aren't Mark's type. And the group never just lets random people join, something has to have happened to a member, something that bonds them."

"Please, Clarissa, just try?" Tracey was almost on her knees begging, her eyes welling with tears and her hot palms squeezing Clarissa's wrists.

"I-I'll try Tracey. But it won't be easy, and it might take them a while to decide... you might want to find somebody else to eat with today, give them some space." Tracey nodded and walked away, while Clarissa let out a deep breath as she could feel beads of sweat slowly forming from the guilt that flooded her as she watched her old friend walk away and knew there was no chance of her joining.

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Clarissa sat down at the table and pretended to listen to her friends while she remained distant and didn't take anything they were saying in.

"Clarissa? Is something wrong? You're very quiet." Colin asked, leaning over Dana.

"Everythings fine - well no. It's not. Tracey wants to join the group... I know it's silly of me to even suggest it, I know she doesn't qualify, but I had to ask anyway - she's an old friend." Clarissa raised her eyebrows as she fought to hold back tears. "I just feel so bad because she really wants to, she wants Mark to notice her."

"Me?" Mark asked questionably. "What does she want with me? Tom is the one everyone fancies... maybe you have it wrong." He stated quickly and worriedly.

"Or maybe you have a new admirer." Tom said with a laugh, and quickly receiving a disgruntled look in return.

"You did tell her she's not my type didn't you?" Clarissa nodded as she adopted a motherly look on her face.

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"Just out of curiosity, Mark. What is your type?" Dana leaned across the table. "You can just tell me if you want, I want to set you up with the right girl." Mark gave Dana an awkward smile and scratched his head.

"If we could get back to the original debate, rather than Mark's taste in girls..." Clarissa said forcefully as she looked around at her friends, who all had knowing smirks on their faces.

"There's no point discussing it, Clarissa. You know that the answer is no. Now let's have a good time and find out which girl we can set Mark up with." Clarissa shook her head in frustration.

"But we don't let anyone into the group who hasn't dealt with a difficult life, so unless you want to set Mark up with me which, no offense to you Mark, will never happen..."

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"Erm, I don't really see the problem in letting her join the group, I mean she seems nice enough and she was friends with Clarissa before. So it's not like she is untrustworthy or anything..." Karl stated. Colin threw his fork down on the table in frustration.

"Yes but that was before Clarissa met us, she's changed now. I'd actually be extremely surprised if Clarissa herself wanted Tracey to join us!" Colin turned to Clarissa. "I'm sorry, Clarissa, you knew the answer before you even asked, there is just no way that Tracey can join us." Colin stood up just as the bell rang for class. The others followed suit, Clarissa only comforted by the thought that she wouldn't have to spend so much time with Tracey to feel the guilt that was tearing her stomach to shreds.

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Clarissa opened her locker and began grabbing her english books and all of her study materials, before quickly locking it and turning around to head for her class when she was pounced on by Tracey.

"Well, what did they say? Am I allowed to join? What does Mark think of me?" Clarissa faced Tracey, a look of deep distress on her face.

"I'm sorry, Tracey. They don't want you to join, and like I told you, you aren't Mark's type. We can still be friends though." She finished brightly, smiling slightly at Tracey. Let's go to english, if I'm late one more time... well let's just say that the consequences won't be very nice." Tracey forced a laugh and followed Clarissa to the english class.

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Mrs. Harrisson walked in through the door and silenced all of the pupils with a quick look before turning to Tracey who was stood at the front of the room.

"Oh, yes. I forgot we have a new pupil. Tracey Watkins isn't it?" Without waiting for an answer she told Tracey to go sit at the back of the room where there was a spare seat next to Christie. A spoilt brat who thought she knew everything. "Anyway, I'm sure you have all been acquainted with Tracey already, so I'll just skip formal introductions and make headway with our lesson. You all have your plays?" The class all raised a copy of Romeo and Juliet in the air. "Well you won't need them today, I have a practice exam paper for you all." The whole class groaned as Mrs. Harrisson went from desk to desk handing out leaves of paper and the question papers.

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Clarissa and Tracey had just got back to Clarissa's grandmothers house, the weather remained chilly, but was still rather warm for the time of year. Clarissa trod gravely up the gravel path as thoughts of having to put up with her grandmother weighed heavily on her mind after what she had said to her earlier that morning.

Clarissa looked at the surrounding houses, the homes of her neighbours and wondered whether any of them had to face the sorts of dilemma's she had had to endure in just one day.
All thoughts escaped her mind, though, as Tracey grabbed her wrist and pulled her around to face her, Clarissa was disturbed by the furious and hurt look on Tracey's face.

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"Why am I not allowed to join the group?" She cried furiously. "I only moved here so that I could be with you again! You don't even seem to appreciate that! I ask this one little thing and you just pretend to ask your friends if I can join the group, while I sit outside oblivious to the joke you are playing on me!" tears were running down Tracey's face, ruining her make-up but her frown and disappointment did not falter.

"Tracey I didn't pretend, I did..."

"Don't lie to me Clarissa! I know you didn't want me here the moment you saw me. And you definitely didn't want me to join the group!" Clarissa was frightened. Tracey had never shown this angry side of her before, if she was capable of this, what else was she capable of?

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Tracey stood there breathing heavily as though she had run a marathon, waiting for Clarissa's excuse.

"It wasn't that I didn't want you to join. It was that I knew my friends wouldn't want you! Tracey the group is for the desperate, for people who have been rejected by all the other cliques. And I know, the group knows and YOU know that you are the type of person that will do well anywhere. You don't need me and you don't need the group!" Clarissa retorted angrily. She looked into her friends eyes which were wide with shock, Tracey's eyebrows were furrowed in confusion. What had Clarissa turned into?

When Clarissa saw that Tracey was finished, she turned and walked into the house slamming the door behind her.

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To be continued...


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 19, 2008, 05:49:29 pm
Thanks again for the help Ariana - but how do I change the title so people know that it has been updated?


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 19, 2008, 06:40:53 pm
You know, I completely forgot about that, Sam!  Sorry about that.

You'll need to change the title from your first post, every time, because that's the title that shows up in the story thread.

Go to Edit, Advanced.
Click on the title box, and you can type in the title you want.  So, naturally, whenever you update you should reflect that in your title, too.  Don't forget to click the 'Save Changes' down at the bottom.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 19, 2008, 06:46:55 pm
Oh right - that's easy.

Thanks again.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 19, 2008, 08:26:48 pm
Not a problem.:-P


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: ZAYURY on March 20, 2008, 03:08:01 am
CONGRATULATIONS! My dear Sam, your story looks beautiful here!  I'm so happy for you!  Wait and see...you built it and they will come...lol! :D


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Stelio Kontos on March 20, 2008, 07:56:12 am
And ye find a way to top Part One.
Very good stuff.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 20, 2008, 05:36:53 pm
Thankyou Zayury - I agree the pictures look great here! Not a fuzzy one in sight! Apart from the TV ones, but they don't count cos the TV is fuzzy anyway!
I certainly hope lots of people will come. My thread looks a bit lonely :( lol

Thanks S.A.Z I am glad you enjoyed it. Also glad that you thought it was better than Part I; that's always a compliment :D
Hope to see you with the next update? ;)


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Astral Faery on March 20, 2008, 07:09:42 pm
It takes awhile sometimes.  Hang in there.  ;)


Title: Suburbia - Part III - Desire
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 22, 2008, 08:43:05 am
Another Part! ;)

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The ringing phone shrilled loudly through the silence.

Juliet, being flustered and sweaty enough from slacing over the hot stove, banged pots and pans together as she turned the temperature gauges down. She brushed her hair hurriedly out of her sweaty face with her wrist to avoid her dirty hands as she rushed past the dining room and into the hallway where she could not avoid using her hands to answer the phone.

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"Hello? Cooper residence. Juliet speaking." Juliet sighed happily as she thought of herself one day becoming Juliet Cooper.

"Yes. Hi, Juliet, it's me, Andrew. I won't be home till late. Me and Julian are going out for a bite to eat, I hope you don't mind looking after Alexis for a few more hours." Juliet's disappointment filled her gut as she thought of the wasted time she had spent on the surprise dinner for Andrew. She sighed again, still heavy, but with more emphasis.

"No, Andrew, I don't mind. See you later honey." Juliet put the receiver back on its hook without waiting for a reply, and leant her head against the wall, annoyed at the wasted meal and effort.

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Juliet trod gravely up the stairs, almost fearful of telling Alexis that she was going to have to spend even more time in the house alone with her. She walked hesitantly up to Alexis' bedroom door and knocked sharply before speaking through the door.

"Alexis. Can we talk?" Juliet hoped that Alexis would get up and open the door so that they could speak without the irritating door blocking communications.

"Whatever you want to talk about you can say it there, there's no need for you to come in." Juliet leant back against the wall and refrained from banging her head against it, infuriated by Alexis' arrogance.

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Alexis leant back contentedly on her pillows and fiddled with her pigtails all the while smirking at the continuous effort Juliet was going to when she received nothing in return. Juliet's voice made its muffled way through the door again and Alexis listened and brushed a stray wispy hair away from her face.

"It's your dad." Alexis' heart skipped a beat as she thought the worst. "He won't be home till late tonight, he went out with Julian. But the dinner I have worked extremely hard on is just about ready... do you want to eat?" Alexis listened to Juliet's uncertain and quivering tone and laughed to herself at the fear she heard.

"I'm not really hungry..."

"Come on Alexis, you have to eat, it's not healthy... your father won't be very happy with you if you don't eat." Alexis heard the slow turning of the doorknob and quickly rolled over and lay face down on her pillow.

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The door opened gently and Juliet poked her head slowly round the door.

"Alexis?" Juliet caught sight of Alexis, her face buried in her pillow. "Are you crying? I know you wanted to spend as little time as possible with me today and your father is making it impossible for us to be apart from each other, but..." Alexis pushed herself away from the headboard roughly.

"I'm not crying, Juliet. I just want to be left alone." Juliet sighed once more and edged around to the other side of the bed and sat down.

"Alexis, trust me, you don't want to be alone."

"Why should I trust you? I barely know you!" Juliet could feel Alexis weakening to her, at least she was talking, and felt a small pang of relief; a heat around her face and a dampness in her eyes.

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Alexis felt Juliet's light form weigh down the other side of the bed as she brought her legs up to rest. She turned away pointedly as she felt an emotional conversation coming on.

"Alexis, will you please listen to me? Even if it's just this one time... I won't ask again if you don't want me to..." Alexis felt Juliet's eyes on the back of her head and took a deep breath.

"Yes all right." She said with emphasis so that Juliet could tell she was annoyed.

"I know that your father didn't really give you any breathing space when he asked me to move in right after your mother walked out - that is why we have never really made friends, but I wasn't the reason..." Juliet felt the lump in the back of her throat and the stinging in the back of her eyes, but continued. "When I met your father I didn't know he was married." Juliet took a deep rasping breath as the tears overwhelmed her and came pouring down her cheeks. "When I found out I wanted to break it off... your father wouldn't let me, he told me that he loved me. He told me that it was almost over with his wife and that I had nothing to do with it." Alexis looked at the ceiling, her eyes brimming with tears.

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"I'm sorry that you feel this way about me. I'm sorry... for everything: your mother walking out on you, your father not paying as much attention to you... I'm just sorry for everything." Juliet buried her face in her hands and began to sob. Alexis crawled off the bed and watched Juliet tentatively, she had never seen an adult burst into tears in front of her before. It wasn't what adults did, and it frightened her. Juliet dragged herself from the tangle of bedclothes and stumbled bleary-eyed towards Alexis.

"Alexis." Juliet held out her arms and leant in to Alexis for comfort and to comfort.

"No..." Alexis waved her hands in front of her face as she began to sob harder. "Juliet... I c-can't... I don't l-like you... I don't need you." Alexis covered her face with her hands and ran from the room, leaving Juliet to collapse on the bed.

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Alexis ran to the bathroom, her vision blurred by the tears streaming down her hot face, and slammed the heavy door shut behind her before she swiftly turned the key in the lock and absorbed the bue coolness of the room which reflected her mood. The tiles were cold under Alexis' numb feet and she shifted her weight from one foot to the other to avoid the chills that kept shooting up the backs of her legs. She ran to the sink and turned the taps so that the water flowed thick and fast into the palms of her sweaty hands. She looked at her reflection in the mirror and caught sight of the raw redness of her face as she scrubbed the tears from her face furiously. She splashed the cold water against her hot face and almost saw the steam issuing from the contrast. It wasn't fair. She wanted to hate Juliet, blame Juliet. She wanted loads of horrible things to happen to Juliet for pushing her mother away. It wasn't fair that Juliet insisted on making it so hard to hate her. It wasn't fair.

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 Juliet stumbled bleary-eyed into hers and Andrews bedroom closing the door with a definitive 'click' and leaning against it before letting out a deep breath as her body trembled and shivered. She stepped towards the bed wiping the tears from her face with the soft cotton of her sleeve and picked up one of Andrews discarded shirts from somewhere she didn't even notice. Juliet peeled her clothes off, her delicate fingers fumbling with the edges of the fabric and felt the chillness of the air as the heat escaped her body. She wrapped the shirt tightly around her slim body, not even considering the bothersome buttons and clambered swiftly into the bed, almost collapsing into the soft, velvety bedsheets and slipping away into a dream.

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As she slept, Juliet relived the minutes that she spent explaining things to Alexis and one thing sprang to her dreams over and over again. "Alexis, trust me, you don't want to be alone." As the words floated over and over again in her mind, her dreams strayed away from the argument and to her past when she was surrounded by people and still felt extremely alone.

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It had been one of those long, hard days and Juliet chose as she did most nights to sit in a bar and unwind with her friend Sarah - Juliet wasn't exactly friends with Sarah, but she was with her most nights in which they hopped bars looking for guys to go home with. They stopped bar hopping when they found a homely place quite close to where the lived, it was quite popular and never failed in providing a guy to go home with. It was called The Grange and, due to its sophistication and expensive prices, Juliet could only afford to visit the bar because she got discounts from the barman for being a regular and because she had a relatively well paid job as an entertainer in another bar, quite a while away.

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Juliet sat at the bar wondering why she did what she did. It wasn't as if she was sleazy, she would never let the men touch her and she was very adamant about keeping her clothes on. She wasn't desperate for money and could sustain a more socially accpetable job if she wanted, but she strangely enjoyed the sensation of everyone's eyes being on her, she liked to be thought of as beautiful, as someone to be admired.

Sarah's voice penetrated her thoughts and awoke her to her surroundings.

"Do you want another drink, you've finished your first?" Juliet nodded in reply and glanced quickly at the good looking barman as Sarah called him over to order the drinks. Juliet always took a strong drink, something that would losen her up quickly and make her more willing to leave with a random guy. She wasn't like that, she didn't like doing it; it was just habit.

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Sarah tapped Juliet on the shoulder and looked at her intently, Juliet looked back and took in all of Sarah's features. Sarah had jet black short, choppy hair which was pulled back away from her face in a scruffy ponytail apart from a stray sweep of hair which covered her right eye, her facial features were unique and she had to be the most beautiful person Juliet had ever met in her life, but Sarah was eccentric and liked to over-indulge with make-up which only drew away from her attractiveness.

"So how was work tonight, busy?" Once again Sarah's voice penetrated the fog in Juliet's head and awoke her to her surroundings and the present conversation.

"I suppose, but business isn't as booming as usual, I think too many people are getting married, and the ones who aren't... just don't know about us." Sarah nodded interestedly, Sarah had a good job, she was a secretary in a prostigious law firm, Davis and Davis, but she had never been able to settle down, she was too restless, always wanting something else to do.

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Juliet turned back to her drink, only just realising what the dwindling popularity of her bar meant - she could be out of a job soon. She began to think of possible career prospects, ones that would interest her, ones that would provide her with a satisfacory life, ones which would ground her and show her the proper place for her in this world.

"Well, I'm sure business will pick up soon." Sarah stated brightly. As if reading Juliet's mind she added: "They won't sack you, you're one of the main attractions." Juliet looked once again into Sarah's striking face, still thinking of her possible future; of marriage and children.

"The thing is," she stated quietly. "I kind of want to be sacked... I want to get a proper job, I want to be accepted in a community. I don't want to be ashamed of who I am." Sarah cleared her throat, not really knowing what to say, did Juliet need words of comfort or encouragement? Instead she looked behind her into the relaxation area and smirked.

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"Yes, well, you have an admirer." Juliet glanced quickly at Sarah, who was still smirking, with a confused look on her face and her eyebrows raised.

"What? Who?"

Sarah nodded in the direction of the relaxation area, her smirk more evident as Juliet turned around to glance behind and blushed a deep crimson, as she too caught sight of the guy watching her.

"I don't know if he followed you from work, or if he noticed you the moment you walked in here, but he has had his eye on you the whole time. I've been watching him too." Sarah threw her head back with a peircing laughter and looked quickly back to the barman who was listening idly to their conversation as the guy headed over, his friend following closely behind him.

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The barman grinned as Juliet turned around and came face to face with his naked chest which was right at her eye level. Juliet blushed again as she looked down at her empty glass.

"Er, the same again please." she stuttered shyly, as she thought of the relief it would provide when it came to talking to the fast approaching fellow. The barman put her glass down in front of her, still smiling.

"There you go, Juliet." Juliet looked up into his beaming face and smiled politely back. "If any of those guys give you any trouble, just call on me alright?" Juliet knew it wouldn't come to that but nodded in reply.

"Yeah, thanks Doug."

"It's no problem, here they come now." Doug whispered and quickly turned away from Juliet. 'They'? What did he mean by 'They'? She found out soon enough.

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Sarah glanced back behind and quickly struck up a fake conversation with Juliet, so that things didn't feel too awkward. The conversation was actually going somewhere when they were interrupted by a rather posh, English accent.

"Hi, may I get you two ladies a drink?" Juliet could already see the tactics this man so eagerly played, ordering both her and her friend a drink so that it didn't look like he was just targeting her.

"Sorry, but we already have a drink each right here." Juliet replied smartly, holding up her half empty glass.

"Well, perhaps when you are finished, I might buy you another?" Juliet smiled, so this man was intelligent.

"Sure, I'm Juliet and this is Sarah."

"I'm Joey and this is my friend Luke."

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Joey seemed harmless enough, Juliet thought, he was extremely charming and he was very likeable with his queen's English accent and his polite manner. He was well educated and an interesting conversationalist, he was different when compared to other guys Juliet normally hooked up with in this bar.

"So, do you want to start getting your things together, then we'll head back to my place?" Juliet frowned in confusion, she didn't understand what he wanted, she would have had it been a less polite man, but it didn't seem right coming from Joey.

"What for coffee?" Juliet asked hopefully.

"Yes. For coffee." Joey repeated as he waggled his eyebrows suggestively.

"I don't think that would be appropriate Joey, I think it might be better if we were just friends." She saw a flash of anger behind Joey's eyes and she felt suddenly fearful, she looked away as Sarah called her name, and when she glance back the anger was gone.

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Sarah approached and stopped in front of them with a smile on her face, she stumbled slightly in her heels from the amount of alcohol she had consumed, but managed to remain in an upright position.

"So, me and Luke are heading out and back to his place." She smiled impressively. "Will you be alright making your own arrangements?" She asked with a wink. Juliet glanced back at Joey quickly and gave Sarah a worried look, before smiling.

"Yeah, I think me and Joey will be fine won't we?"

"Yes, we will be fine." The accent that once could have been used as a seduction technique, now repulsed Juliet. She watched as Luke picked up Sarah's coat and wrapped it over her shoulders, leaving his arm there as comfort on their way out of the door.

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As soon as Srah left Joey swung round to face Juliet once more.

"So back to my place is it?" He snarled with a fury burning deep inside his pale blue eyes which now felt as cold as they looked. Juliet screwed her face up fearfully as Joey wrapped his hand tightly around her wrist and pushed himself onto her. Juliet pressed her palms up against his muscular chest defensively and tried to haul him off of her, but he was stronger and had had less to drink. He smothered her mouth with his own and knocked his teeth and gums against hers as he pushed his tongue into the warm haven, that was Juliet's mouth. Juliet fought and squealed as Joey pushed her up against the wall, hoping to get someone's attention.

"Oi! What do you think you are doing? Get off of her!" Joey pulled away quickly to acknowledge and confront the intruder.

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The woman approached with a furious look on her face, but Joey did not seem ashamed at what he had done, in fact he seemed to welcome the confrontation, thinking that his accent and charm would let him get away with it.

"She did not want you to kiss her! She does not want to take this night any further with you! Leave her alone! BOYS like you should not be walking the streets!" The woman breathed heavily like a stampeding bull. Joey seemed relaxed, his shoulders were back, not raised in offense or defense, he grinned at her incoming attack and fought not to laugh.

"Juliet wanted me to kiss her. Didn't you Juliet? Tell this woman that everything is alright... go on." Joey continued to smile, but Juliet continued to look at him in fear, her heart was racing and she was confused, what did he expect her to say?

"Thank you, Joey will be leaving now. Won't you Joey." Juliet stated firmly with a quick glance at Doug who was fast approaching, Joey raised his eyebrows in surprise and slowly and quietly left the bar.

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Juliet turned to face the woman, she seemed well off, her hair pulled away from her face revealing her high cheekbones and expensive make-up. Juliet looked at the expensive clothes that adorned the slight frame of this intimidating and powerful woman, who also shared the queen's English accent.

"Thanks again... but who are you?" The woman held out her perfectly manicured hand politely for Juliet to shake.

"I'm Tara, Tara Banks. Pleased to meet you, I'm glad I could help you, seriously, I am sick of men who think they can get away with doing what they like to a woman." Juliet let go of Tara's hand and smiled.

"Perhaps I might be able to return the favour sometime, do you come here often, maybe I can buy you a drink sometime?" The experience Juliet had just been through; having to be rescued by this woman, made her realise just how much her life needed sorting out, and vowed she would find a 'proper' job immediately. But she knew that she was going to be entirely alone.

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Juliet opened her eyes as she heard Andrew close the door behind him and begin to take his clothes off hurriedly. The smell of alcohol wafted up her nose as he tore at his clothes drunkenly trying to keep upright, he eventually layed his clothes in an untidy tangle on the floor and slipped under the duvet. Juliet felt his warm body invade the cold sheets as he wrapped an arm around her waist and rested his chin against the back of her shoulder, snuggling his nose into the back of her neck. He sighed heavily with his mouth open as he found a comfortable spot for his body and closed his eyes. The smell of strong licquer wafted once again up Juliet's nose making her feel nauseous, she closed her eyes again, trying to ignore the stench on his breath. She opened her eyes almost at once as he began to snore, his mouth open, his breath constantly billowing against the side of her face. Then and there Juliet promised herself she would never let him go out with Julian again unless she was invited too.

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Juliet closed her eyes once more, pushing Andrew away from her, so she could cover her head with her pillow to avoid the sound of his snoring and the stench of his breath. She thought once again of her past, how she used to get drunk like Andrew... but that was when she didn't have responsibilities... well, except for herself. Andrew had Alexis; He had HER. Surely he shouldn't be going out and drinking like this, especially since he only just went back to work. How was he supposed to get up in the morning? Juliet's face began to get hot with anger and with the added heat from being under a pillow she found she could no longer stand being in the same bed with someone as irresponsible as Andrew. She pulled herself off the bed, and quietly made her way out of the bedroom, snapping the door shut behind her.

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Juliet tiptoed down the stairs, managing to avoid the one that creaks extremely loud, and made her way into the living room. 'If Andrew wanted to behave like this, he should never have had a child.' Juliet said to herself, her rage overcoming her, Juliet was usually a calm, shy person. She was not the type to get angry at anyone; but the situation of the household was a tender one, and Andrew should not be abondoning his family to go for drinks with his friends. Juliet shivered as the chill in the living room gave her goosebumps on her bare legs, she stumbled blindly in the darkness looking for the couch where she would rest her head for the rest of the night. When she found it, she slumped down into the soft cushions and closed her eyes, relieved for the silence and clean smelling atmosphere.

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Upstairs, Andrew rolled over in his sleep and opened his eyes, staring at the tangled mess of his clothes on the bedroom floor. A guilt flooded his stomach as he realised he may have disrespected Juliet by staying away late, and now he had forced her out of her own bed. Andrew's head span and his vision blurred as he looked at the canopy above the four poster.

'I'll sort it out in the morning.' he told himself, before closing his eyes. But even after closing his eyes, Andrew wasn't peaceful, the guilt continued to overwhelm him and he began to sweat as he panicked. He had lied. Lied to the woman he most cared about in the whole world. He had lied to Juliet. As his eyes remained tightly closed he relived the night he had just had.

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Andrew stepped lightly out of the frame of red which was his car and brushed a stray hair from his face as the wind blew roughly overhead. It was cold outside and Andrew pulled his suit jacket tighter around him to stop the invading chill that the wind caused.

Andrew thought of Juliet at home, eating dinner with Alexis, hopefully bonding with Alexis, he had to give them both this chance... otherwise it would be impossible to live with.

A pang interrupted Andrew's thoughts, a twist in his gut. Was he doing the right thing? He knew he wasn't and realised that the pang was of guilt, if what he was doing was right, he never would have lied to Juliet about who he was going to dinner with. 'Yes but I only lied because I didn't want Juliet to become needlessly suspicious - there is nothing going on, I am just getting to know my new business partner.' Andrew reassured himself before turning back and dipping his head through the door.

"Are you coming?"

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Andrew and Clara stepped into the warm orange glow of The Grange and felt the chill leave him as the warmth of the room immediately soothed the cold spots.

Andrew looked to his right as he politely waved someone away who had just offered to take his coat. A married couple were sat in the corner, seemingly celebrating their anniversary, their hands were clasped and they were both enjoying one anothers company.

"After a year together, I'm still madly in love with you, Tina. I couldn't have imagined someone more perfect than you to walk into my life the moment you did." The woman, Tina, smiled, her glistening diamonds and rubies tinkling around her neck and ears as they looked into each others eyes lovingly.

"Me too, Matthew I couldn't possibly love anyone as much as I love you." Andrew felt another pang of guilt as he watched the happy couple, he was reminded of Juliet at home without him, he should be there for her but someting was stopping him. What was it?

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In another part of the restaurant Andrew caught sight of a family, a happy family, they weren't well off but they were treating their little girl to a meal out, presumably for her birthday. They were sat comfortably, looking at each other, the conversation flowing freely between them.

"So, are you having a good time, Gemma? We know how you like to go out for dinner on your birthday." The large woman, apparently Gemma's mum asked with a slight strain in her voice and Andrew realised just how much this meal was costing them and was jealous that even though they could barely afford this meal, they were still extremely close.

'Just shows money doesn't buy happiness.' He told himself.

"Yes, mum. But you didn't need to, I would have been happy still if you had just cooked a nice meal at home..." The girl was smart and knew of her parents financial situation, she just didn't let on.

"Yes but you know how we like to treat you." Her father chuckled as he stroked the back of her head, feeling the softness of her hair.

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As Andrew watched them he was reminded of his family, his family which was seperated in all areas, and it was his fault. He had not gone home at the normal time tonight, if he had things might be different. He might have been able to fix it. As the girl blew out the candles on her birthday cake, Andrew couldn't help but laugh and clap with the rest of the restaurant and a sudden revelation hit him and he smacked his forehead in horror. It was Alexis' birthday at the weekend, that meant that he had two days to get her a present and organise something.

Andrew and Clara were politely seated by the host, Andrew placed his hands on his lap as his eyes fuzzed over and he stared at the different patterns the flickering candles caused on the red tablecloth, as he thought about what they could do for Alexis' birthday, something that would bring the family closer together.

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Clara saw the distant look in Andrew's eyes and was confused as she had just seen him clapping and cheering along with the rest of the restaurant.

"Andrew, are you Ok?" Clara watched Andrew as his eyes slid back into focus and looked up into her eyes. She adopted a concerned look and continued to watch him. "Do you want me to get you a glass of water?"

"No, thank you." Andrew clicked his fingers as a waiter approached. "Can I get a whisky over here please. And whatever the lady wants." Andrew said acknowledging Clara with a wave of the hand. Clara was frightened, she had spent all day with Andrew as they worked on the case and he had seemed calm and nice, but now he was acting strange; rude and inconsiderate.

"Oh, I'll just have a glass of water please." The waiter turned away and Clara turned to Andrew again. "Do you think it wise to be drinking when you're driving and we have work tomorrow."

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Andrew looked at Clara as if it was the first time he had ever seen her, she had seemed really shy earlier; reserved and slightly elegant. But now she was different, she was nervous and unattractive.

"Relax, Clara, it's just one drink." Clara raised her eyebrows questionably as she doubted very much that it would just be one drink, but she let the situation drop anyway and let Andrew have his way.

"So anyway, the case." Clara said as she tried to get Andrew's mind back on work and remind him of his responsibilities. "I've been thinking, could it possibly have been a racial attack?" Clara was blunt and always suspected the most obvious things, she rarely took in all of the details and was not very analytical about things. She watched Andrew as he downed his whiskey in one, clearly she needed to talk about something else to stop him drinking.

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Clara was about to open her mouth to say something else, when Andrew screwed up his eyes in deep concentration. He could already feel the alcohol beginning to have an effect on him - he wasn't a very heavy drinker, actually he rarely drank at all after Alexis was born.

"I think that it could quite possibly been a racial attack, Clara." Andrew said as he opened his eyes again. "But I have a reason to believe that it wasn't a racial attack..." Andrew appeared to be keeping that piece of information to himself, Clara thought, and so she pressed on.

"What, er, reason do you have for believing that?" Clara tried her best to be polite, but found it difficult on account of Andrew's arrogance and the distant look in his eyes.

"Well. Tracey was strangled." Andrew stated this simply and matter-of-factly as if it answered Clara's question, but she looked at him confusedly.

"And why does that mean it wasn't a racial attack?"

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Andrew rolled his eyes at Clara's simplicity, and took a deep breath before leaning forward creating a dramatic effect and making Clara hold her breath in anticipation.

"Because, Clara, a racial attack is normally planned, so the death tends to be more gruesome. But strangulation..." He stated waving his fork about. "Strangulation is usually taken as a last resort, strangulation is usually an emotion filled murder. That is why I do not suspect that this was a racial attack." Clara raised her eyebrows in revelation and opened her eyes wide as she realised what Andrew was saying was true. "So shall we go home now? I'll give you a lift." Clara nodded and began to pick up her things ready to leave. "Wait." Clara looked up into Andrew's face still fiddling with her handbag clasp. "One for the road?" Andrew called the waiter over again and ordered a refill which he downed as soon as it reached his hands, spilling a lot down the front of his shirt and suit jacket.

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Andrew paid the bill and they walked out of the warm restaurant and back into the chilly wind. As they headed out to the car, the air began to get crispy as the biting wind blew against them, causing them both to pull their jackets tighter around them. Clara knew that a storm was getting closer, the clouds filled the night sky covering the light of the moon, snow was coming even though it was only autumn.

Clara worried as she watched Andrew, although he had only had two drinks, he wasn't as steady on his feet as he should be and she wondered if he would be Ok to drive her home. But Andrew wasn't waiting for her to figure it out; he pulled open the door of the car against the fierce, biting wind and forced himself into the driver's seat and preceded to start the engine with Clara still standing outside in the cold.

Clara quickly followed suit and only just managed to secure herself in the car with a seatbelt before Andrew pulled away.

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Andrew pulled into the driveway of his home, he had dropped Clara off at her home ten minutes ago. She had practically launched herself out of the door as soon as Andrew was slowing to a stop, fearful of his reckless driving, when Andrew did eventually stop he rolled down the passenger window and called out to her as she hunched her shoulders against the cold and falling snow and bent over to peer into the darkness of the car.

"See you at work tomorrow, perhaps we should do this again sometime." Clara's face went a stoney white and she nodded her head reluctantly as Andrew rolled the window back up, waved and pulled away again, leaving her standing there momentarily stunned before she quickly turned and made her way through the delicate snowflakes, being forced into a blizzard by the cruel wind, and into her warm and cosy house.

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After Andrew had parked his car, he stepped out into the snow which was falling harder and harder with every step that he took. He shoved his hands deep into his pockets as they turned a pale blue colour and he lost all feeling in them. His cheeks and nose turned a rosy red as the cold wind bit at his bare skin, the snow landed in his hair and quickly melted from the heat sending droplets of freezing water down the back of his neck and chills down his spine.

As he stepped into the flooding light of the house, he could smell burning, not the burning that comes from a house fire, but the smell of burning food. The alcohol that had reached his bloodstream could have impaired his judgement and he could have ignored the smell and gone straight to bed.

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But he didn't. He sniffed at the pungent, smokey air and over-enthusiastically followed the burning smell into the kitchen. Once there, he found the remains of Jluiet's painstaking effort at creating a nice meal for the family to share and hopefully bond with one another; understand each others situations. The knot in his stomach, which had been tightening all evening as he was reminded of his family, gave an almighty twinge as he once again found that all of his decisions he had made today were the wrong ones and he should have stayed home to supervise and encourage a good relationship between Alexis and Juliet. He knew what he had to do now. He knew what was right. He had to stay at home as much as possible, and what better day to do it than on Alexis' birthday. Andrew had a brainwave as he scraped the black, smouldering mess from the pan into the bin... the boat! He would take Alexis and Juliet to the boat for a birthday celebration!

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 Andrew stepped over to the sink and stuck his greasy hands under the cold, refreshing water that streamed out into his awaiting palms and quickly down the swirling plughole. He quickly dried his hands on a nearby towel leaving his hands still damp from the wash, left the towel on the counter by the sink and left the kitchen, staggering from the tiredness that alcohol comes with. He stumbled slowly up the stairs chuckling to himself at his clumsiness. He made his way into the bedroom, trying diligently not to make any noise but failing as it often does when you try your hardest not to, he closed the door behind him but he pushed too hard and it clicked into place with a loud echo across the bedroom.

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He tiptoed, in his shoes, over to his side of the bed and began to fight with his clothes as he tried to take them off as quick as he could, the smell of the spilt whiskey lingered on his clothes and made him feel rather nauseous. He yanked at his tie, loosening it from its strong tether and ripped his shirt off taking the tie off with it. He undid his belt and let his loose trousers fall to the floor and he tripped up on a leg as he tried to reach the bed, he chuckled nervously to himself, fearful of waking up Juliet and lifted the covers before clambering underneath them.

He closed his eyes and took a deep breath, he could still smell the lingering whiskey but managed to ignore it as he moved closer to Juliet and wrapped an arm around her waist cuddling her into him tightly. He rested his chin on her shoulder and snuggled his nose into the back of her neck, showering her with his affections. He sighed deeply as he got comfortable, still persisting with the cuddles.

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A short while later and he was at that point where you aren't conscious of what you are doing, but still slightly awake, when his sinus problems kicked in causing him to start snoring.

Andrew woke up suddenly groggily and confusedly as he felt Juliet's palm on his naked chest as it forced him back onto his side of the bed. He lay there with his eyes open, just watching Juliet as she lifted her head gently, her hair cascading over the pillow, and lifted the pillow up and bringing it forcefully back down over her head. Andrew frowned in confusion and waited a while, before realising that his breath stank and the whole room smelt of whiskey. He shrugged his shoulders slightly, hindered by the fact that he was laying in bed, and decided he could do nothing about it at the moment, turned over and layed on his back. He was just about to fall asleep again when he was jerked awake by Juliet who suddenly threw her pillow from her face and sat up straight in bed.

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Andrew lay there, awaiting her next move, but she just lingered on the edge of the bed for a while, presumably to wake herself up, then, as quickly as she had thrown the pillow from her face she was outside the door snapping it shut and on her way down the stairs.

Andrew rolled over and opened his eyes staring at the tangled mess of his clothes on the bedroom floor. A guilt flooded his stomach as he realised he may have disrespected Juliet by staying away late, and now he had forced her out of her own bed. Andrew's head span and his vision blurred as he looked at the canopy above the four poster.

'I'll sort it out in the morning.' he told himself before closing his eyes. But even after closing his eyes, Andrew was not peaceful, the guilt continued to overwhelm him and he began to perspirate as he panicked. He had lied. Lied to the woman he most cared about in the whole world. He had lied to Juliet.

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To Be Continued...


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: PegasusDiana on March 26, 2008, 01:09:33 am
Interesting story. I stayed and read all three chapters. Can't wait to see what will happen next. :)


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on March 27, 2008, 12:32:22 pm
Thank you! Especially for reading all three chapters in one go! Part IV should be up shortly - after all I have already finished it! Thanks for the comment :D


Title: Suburbia - Part IV - A Hidden Agenda
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 01, 2008, 06:18:01 pm
Part IV - what else is there to say? Except for thanks for all your suportive comments!

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Mark was already up and painting when Tom walked in the room, he looked up in startled surprise as the door opened and squeaked as if in protest like it knew that it's owner wanted to be left in peace. Tom was dressed only in his pyjama bottoms revealing his muscular torso. Mark saw the look on Tom's face and immediately knew that something was wrong, he looked back at his painting sorrowfully as he washed the paint off of his brush and put the cup of murky paint water down.

"What are you painting?" Tom still carried the same melancholy sound he had when he sang his new song, Mark wondered what could have happened for Tom to be acting in this strange manner. His eyes quickly shifted back at his painting which was barely started and he shook his head roughly as his blond curls fidgeted about his head.

"Oh, it's nothing. What's up? You don't sound right."

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Mark watched Tom from where he stood as he made his way across the bedroom and sat down on the bed with such sadness that he couldn't help feeling a little sad too, as his mattress sunk underneath Tom's weight, which was mostly muscle.

Mark's hand moved towards his paintbrush again as Tom sat on the bed sighing heavily, Mark knew that Tom wanted to tell him what was wrong, but he also knew that he was too frightened to. 'It had better not be about girls' Mark grumbled to himself, Tom was person who always had the least trouble getting girls. A few moments later and Mark ripped his canvas from the easel and screwed it up into a little ball before throwing it into the recycling bin. The water turned a horrid murky, brown colour as he washed his paintbrush once more and put the cup of water to the side; before facing Tom with his hands on his hips.

"Right. Out with it. I'm already sick of your moping!" He joked, hoping to get a smile out of him, but there wasn't even a flicker.

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Tom took a deep breath, he didn't look or sound anywhere near close to tears, but there was a certain distress there. He wiped a sweaty brow and looked at Mark.

"It's my father... he's dead." The distress had gone to be replaced by an indifference. Mark rubbed the back of his neck awkwardly as he raised his eyebrows in concern and his stomach plummeted. What was he supposed to say? He moved some bits and pieces from the bedside table and sat down, leaning back against the wall.

"Well... how do you feel? How... how did he die?" Tom scratched his stomach nervously.

"Cancer." He stated simply, Mark looked at him, he didn't appear to want to say anything else so Mark looked away and stared at the wall. "I didn't even know he was suffering from it... I disowned my family... I didn't pay attention to what happened to them after I left. If I had stayed... I could've done something." Mark could hear Tom's throat clogging, his breathing becoming more erratic, more abrupt. He dared not look, he could not bear to see Tom cry.

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"Tom, there was nothing you could do... even if you had been with him, he still would have got the cancer and died, you can't blame yourself..." The words came pouring out of him but didn't even know where they were coming from, they just felt right. However, it seemed they were not the right words as Tom screwed his face up and got off the bed with a terrifying force and began to pace the room.

"I know I couldn't save him! But at least I would have been there! I could have... I would have..." His voice trailed off into nothingness.

"What would you have done, Tom?" Mark asked exasperatedly looking into his chocolate eyes.

"I would have made his final hours more peaceful... I would have let him know that I forgive him." Mark pulled Tom into a hug, quickly so that he could not be pushed away.

"He'll know." Mark said simply. "He's watching you, he knows... When did you find out?" he asked compassionately. Tom pulled away and headed to the bedroom door, not letting Mark see the tears on his face as he hurriedly wiped them away.

"Yesterday. My mother wants to get in touch with me again... it was where I got the inspiration for the song from - I can't believe how selfish I was!"

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"You weren't being selfish, Tom. It was the only way you knew how to express your feelings." Tom could not hold it back any longer, the floodgates opened and he just let the hot, salty drops fall down his face. He tried to turn away by hunching his shoulders and curling up, but Mark wrapped a reassuring arm over his shoulders - Tom could not face this alone.

"Your mother. Do you want to see her?" Mark asked gently as he rested his forehead against the side of Tom's head in a comforting gesture, his hand squeezing the muscular shoulders as he tried to get his friend to talk to him. Tom breathed in deeply, catching quick short breaths as the tears continued to run down his face and his throat remained clogged.

"I don't know, Mark. I feel that I should, but would it be worth it? My sister won't forgive me as my mother seems to have done." In response, Mark shook his head dejectedly and inhaled deeply - he had no idea.

"I don't know your mother, Tom..." he began slowly "but if you want, I'll come with you... I don't want you to face this alone." They looked into each others eyes and Tom buried himself into Mark's shoulder as he continued to cry.

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"No, Tom, I think Mark is right. it should just be you and him, that way your mother will be more comfortable.... I mean, it is the first time you will have seen each other in a while." Mark nodded, almost eagerly as Dana refused Tom's invitation to go and visit his mother. But even though Tom had invited her, he had done so absent-mindedly, he wasn't aware of half the stuff he was doing at the moment - he couldn't even remember getting dressed, 'perhaps Mark dressed me' he said to himself as his mind continued to wander. he was staring at the wall with a blank look on his face.

"Tom are you even sure whether you want me to come with you? I could just stay here, I don't think I would feel like I was supposed to be there anyway..." Tom snapped back into reality as he heard his friends word as if from extremely far away, the fog of uncertainty that clouded his judgement now cleared and her held up his hand to silence Mark.

"You are supposed to be there, Dad was my family too, and you are my friend who is aiding me through the grieving process."

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Mark smiled gleefully as he made to stand up. Tom went back to staring at the wall, still strangely unsure, even with the clarity in his mind - something wasn't how it should be.

"Tom?" Mark's voice drifted in and the cloud of doubt filled his mind again and the rest of Mark's sentence floated away... should he be going to see his mother after all this time?

"Tom. If you don't get up now to leave for your mother's then I am going to get your mother round here!" Without waiting for Tom to register his voice this time, he wrapped his hand around Tom's wrist and hauled him out of his seat, onto his feet. Once again Tom's cloud floated away and he looked up into his friend's smiling face. His friend who would always be there for him, no matter what. His friend who was helping him to do the right thing. Tom grinned back, brushed some stray hairs from his black trousers and mimicked Mark's movements toward the front door with Dana wishing them 'good luck.'

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"You didn't think you were going to visit your mother without me, did you Tom?" Clarissa giggled as she stepped out from the stairway. She had changed dramatically since last night, and not just in appearance, her hair was all straightened out and she had a dress on. But she had lost her edginess, she was calm and seemed to ooze with confidence as she continued to walk forwards.

"Er, sorry Clarissa, it was just going to be me and Tom. We figured it would be easier for his mother to handle..." Clarissa giggled again, she seemed completely out of character, before she adopted the motherly look she always had when she looked at Mark.

"I thought that I would be quite valuable to the cause, your mother would be more impressed, would she not, if you walked in with a girlfriend?" Tom was suddenly lost deep in thought and Mark caught the glazed look in his eyes.

"Actually, Clarissa, I think it would probably depress her more." Clarissa just gave Mark a sceptical look before appealing to Tom with her fluttering eyelashes.

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When Tom continued to stare off into space, Clarissa turned away, a pout evident on her lips. Mark watched her, the confusion apparent through the horrified look in his eyes, did she suddenly have a thing for Tom?

"Actually, Mark, I think she's probably right. You can still come too, of course, but I think Clarissa pretending to be my girlfriend could really help my cause." Mark opened and closed his mouth, like a goldfish trapped in a glass bowl, speechless for a few moments as he stumbled over words for something to say. Clarissa twisted her body round slightly as she continued to pout at Mark; wanting his vote.

"But she's acting insane! Look at her! Clarissa what has gotten into you? How much blood did you lose yesterday?" Clarissa's brow furrowed as she strode forward and wrenched the door open, letting it bang on the wall behind it as an icy wind flew in.

"Well, I'm going, you coming boys?" Clarissa carried on and out of sight, Tom raised his eyebrows and followed with Mark grumbling behind him.

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"I've been in touch with your brother, Lisa." Edith closed her eyes waiting for the explosion, but none came. "Lisa?"

"I knew you would." A deep sigh, "I just don't understand why... he left us, it's not as if we have anything to be sorry for. I supported him - I took his place in father's heart and business so that he would not have to give up his dream! I rescued him - and he just... he left." An arm snaked its way around Lisa's shoulders and she swooned in its comfort as she turned her head to look up at Ruben and grinned as their eyes locked; gold against chocolate.

"Lisa you need to understand. We as a family didn't support his dream, you were the only one who understood his desire for music, I still don't think I approve of it... but that's not the point; we are going to welcome him home." There was a finality in her tone which told Lisa that there was no point in arguing further.

"Well as long as it's the first and last time I ever see him again." She muttered under her breath so only Ruben could hear her.

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Some quiet giggles were heard from the floor as Hannah played about on her little blanket and Samuel toddled into view a wooden beater in between his newly forming teeth. His dark hair fell in front of his eyes as he fell onto his bottom, Hannah looked up from her blanket and watched him curiously as if she were waiting for something. Samuel just sat there staring oddly and blinking a few times before suddenly bursting into tears. Lisa chuckled at her son's unfortunate accident and pushed herself off of the couch before going to pick him up - as soon as he saw his mother's face he stopped crying and crawled towards Hannah who had gone back to playing in her own imaginary world.

"Right, I'll go make us some coffee." Edith stated as she, too, stood up. "Bring the children into the kitchen, we don't want to leave them unsupervised do we?" She smiled inwardly while looking at her grandchildren fondly.

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Lisa rolled her eyes at Ruben as her mother walked out of the room and into the kitchen - the sound of chinking mugs, drawers opening and the clattering of spoons could be heard as Edith bustled about the kitchen getting the coffee's ready. Ruben rested a reassuring hand on Lisa's shoulder; squeezing it gently.

"Don't worry about it, Lisa. Your mother is in a difficult place right now... besides, I only think it right that Tom should be invited; he is your father's son after all..." Lisa sighed in frustration and defeat.

"We are all in a difficult place, Ruben." Lisa roughly picked Hannah up from the floor and headed toward the kitchen, but Hannah wasn't leaving without her favourite toy. Lisa looked back at the small teddy lying on the blanket. As Lisa stooped to pick it up and give it to Hannah, Ruben picked up Samuel and walked into the kitchen. Lisa followed closely behind.

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As the three adults sipped on their piping hot coffee's Samuel and Hannah sat in their highchairs; Hannah playing with her small teddy while Samuel watched her enviously - he hadn't got a toy. He began to try and snatch it off of her, but she just stuck her tongue out at him and held it out of his reach.

Lisa giggled, as she always did, at her children's antics. She sipped her coffee as her mother and Ruben were talking - she wasn't listening to them; her thoughts were far away with her brother. With Tom.

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"So Ruben, should I be expecting any more grandchildren?" Ruben glanced at Lisa quickly as a grin slowly made its way onto his face.

"Funny you should say that, Edith. Lisa is pregnant again as we speak." Edith clapped her hands together in glee.

"That is wonderful! Lisa, aren't you pleased?" Lisa's eyelids fluttered as she quickly awoke from her thoughts, her eyes slowly focusing on her mother's gleeful face.

"Of course I am pleased! I just..." The doorbell rang, echoing around the kitchen and exciting Samuel in his highchair. Edith put her coffee on the table before getting out of her chair to answer the door.

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Tom stood outside in the cold; the winter was fast approaching, bringing with it a chilly wind that threatened to bite every bit of bare skin that it had the fortune to meet. The trees and bushes in his mother's elaborate front garden rustled as the wind whistled through the leaves and branches. He tapped his feet on the ground and slapped his thighs in musical rhythm as he stood nervously; waiting for somebody to come and answer the door.

He looked behind him - there was Mark and Clarissa; his friends who had offered to come on this visit and provide some moral support and of whom Clarissa was acting extremely stangely and rather on edge herself. He cleared his throat and his mind filled with that blinding fog. What was he doing? Was this a bad idea? The fog cleared once again as he caught sight of Mark shaking his head. He hadn't just read his mind... had he?

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He looked back to the house and there was his mother - her jaw hanging open in shock; why was she so shocked? She had invited him here. Edith's jaw slowly closed, but she didn't move - she was frozen to the spot. Her face slowly crumpled and the tears began to roll down her cheeks, but she still didn't move.

Tom looked back again at his friends faces; it was obvious that they had no idea what to do. "Some help." He said to himself sarcastically as he stepped forward and reached for the door handle. Edith suddenly jumped forward and slid the door open, she grabbed hold of Tom's shoulders holding him at arms length as she looked him up and down; pulling him in from the cold. The tears had stained her face with red and the wrinkles in her face became more defined.

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The warmth that Tom felt when his mother pulled him close exceeded any other warmth that he had ever felt. His face flushed a deep crimson as he fought to hold back his tears.

"I'm so glad that you've come home... my baby." Tears dripped onto Tom's shirt and he could feel the wetness seeping through onto his skin, but he didn't care; as his mother whispered those in his ear he was on top of the world. It wasn't so long ago now that he wasn't welcome in the family. He was so different then. But now, as he rested his chin on his mother's shoulder, he felt like he was welcome. Like he belonged.

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George Davis of the Davis and Davis Law firm sat on his expensively upholstered couch and looked up into his wife, Edith's, face. His right leg crossed over his left, he took a deep breath and held it in as if trying to think of something to say - He rarely called a family meeting, so when he did he never knew how to start.

"I think it is time that Tom started working at the Law firm so that he has the knowledge expected when he takes over management." He placed his hand on his right shin still looking at his wife, who stopped fiddling with the strap on her sandal and looked at him uneasily with an eyebrow slightly raised. George could read that face; but he was sick of waiting. His son was going to take over the company, he had no choice; there was no-one else.

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Edith opened her mouth to speak, but quickly closed it again; not wanting to say anything that could anger her husband. She scratched the back of her neck and adjusted her position on the couch.

"George, don't you think that Tom hasn't paid too much attention to how the business is doing? He has never really shown any interest in it, are you sure that it is wise to force this on him... I mean, he might sink the company." Edith knew this was highly unlikely, and she did want Tom to take over the business, but she knew that he didn't want to. She knew that he had other dreams that he wanted to pursue.

"I think that it is high time we raised a slipper to his behind!" George growled. "I am sick of this namby pamby music stuff! He is learning how the business works and that is final! Lisa, go get your brother down here." Edith closed her eyes and rubbed her forehead. Lisa didn't move.

"But he doesn't want to George."

"He will take over the company and I won't hear another word against it! LISA, Go and get Tom."

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Lisa smiled sweetly, the smile she always used when she tried to persuade her father to get her something. Her dark hair glistened in the sunlight as it fell messily over her shoulders in two rushed braids.

"Father, we all know that all Tom cares about is his music..." The muffled sound of pounding beats could be heard through the ceiling. "Can I just please take his place in the business, you know I can do it father; I have always wanted to." The sun had disappeared behind a dark cloud now and Lisa's hair was no longer glistening. She looked into her father's stern eyes and her 'daddy's' smile faltered.

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George continued to look sternly into his daughter's face; he knew she had tried her hardest to get into the law firm, he knew how desperate she was to be a part of it. But he couldn't let her do it. It was Tom's job.

"Lisa, I'm sorry. You know I can't let you do it." Lisa's face fell, and even though the sun had come back from behind the cloud, her hair failed to glisten. "The firm is no place for a woman. It is Tom who must be the manager." Lisa rolled her eyes but said nothing; her father was too stubborn and would always remain adamant that he was right. "I'm sorry Lisa."

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"No you're not!" Lisa would never usually have said anything like this to her father, but it frustrated her; she knew that she had skills which would benefit the firm and her father wasn't even giving her a chance.

"Excuse me?" His voice was rough and angry.

"You know that I will be better than Tom! This is sex discrimination!" George rose out of his chair, his head seemed to touch the ceiling.

"I will not hear this sort of thing from my own daughter! I choose not to employ you because I am protecting you!" Lisa's arms flew into the air - it was like she had no control anymore.

"From what? What are you protecting me from?"

"Go and get your brother Lisa. I am not having this discussion!" George walked away from her and slumped onto the couch his forehead resting in the palm of his right hand.

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Upstairs Tom was laying on his bed, listening to his own recorded music play back from the CD player. His room provided a balance; a calming sensation like Yin and Yang with the opposites black and white. Clothes littered the floor at the foot of his bed, he didn't clean; the mess provided him with artistic inspiration. He lay back on his pillow staring at the ceiling which almost scraped his head as he quickly sat up and scribbled a bunch of music notes into his scrapbook. Tom always did this. He would lie on his bed, letting the music come to him; he never had to chase it. The music would flow from his ears to his fingertips as he itched to try them out; but he couldn't break the cycle. If he did, the inspiration would be lost and the song he had spent so hard from would leave him never to be found again. At times when this happened Tom always told himself: "If I can't keep hold of a song then it's a song not worth keeping hold of." It was the same with girls. And he was exactly right.

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The ceiling stretched out like a blank page in front of him ready to be filled with music, that was when Tom realised; he needed a new page, he needed to start again. He had to start out on his own. He glanced down at the floor as the door was pushed open, Lisa strode in furiously, her face screwed up tightly into a scowl. She began to speak, but Tom could not hear her over his pounding music, he turned it off with a flick of the remote and listened to her as she began to shout up at him.

"Father wants you downstairs." She turned to leave the room but Tom jumped down the ladder quickly, stopping her in her tracks.

"What for this time? Is it about the firm? he knows I have no interest in it." Lisa's scowl became more prominant and Tom could see she wanted to throw a few things about the room.

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Lisa's scowl faded quickly to replaced by something else... her eyebrows were raised and her eyes brimmed with tears.

"Why can't he just understand..." Her voice caught in her throat as it became clogged by her emotions. "neither us want the life that he has picked out for us! I want to be a part of this company; I don't want to be the little rich girl who gets whatever she wants without having to do anything. Tom, please, just tell him all you want is your music. Leave him with no alternative but me." Lisa bit her bottom lip, but it made no difference the tears continued to build up until they began to fall from her eyes in pearl shaped drops, smattering the floor with their salty wetness.

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Tom leaned in close and rested his hand upon her shoulder as if to reassure her. He grinned and the flow of tears stopped, Lisa wiped her face dry with her sleeve.

"You know what you have to do Tom. The rest of our lives are going to depend on what you say to him." Tom nodded and smiled, he squeezed her shoulder tightly and his palms got sweaty; he was nervous. For the first time in his life he was actually nervous. "I know that we have never really been close Tom, we each have our own group of friends, but I do love you." Tom loosened his grip on her shoulder.

"I know Lisa. And I know what I have to do... but you might not see me around here for a while." Her smile faltered.

"What? What do you mean?" His grin broadened and he headed out into the hallway to go down the stairs.

"You'll see."

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Tom strode into the warm, bold reds of the living room and right up to his dad. Ignorance and defiance were in his mind and they were also showing on his face. His father looked up at him uncrossing his legs as he did so.

"So Tom, are you ready to start working at the firm?" George didn't know why he had asked; he could tell that Tom had not come down the stairs to agree with him. He was surprised, however unpleasantly, by Tom pointing his finger at him.

"No, father, I am not working at the firm. You know about my passion for my music, and you know that I want to pursue it as a career. I'm good at music; I understand it. Law just isn't for me. I'm telling you now, as your son, to stop pushing me into this job because you are pushing me further and further away. But Lisa wants to take over the firm, why not let her do it?"

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George rose slowly and purposefully out of his seat, his face screwed up in anger, his hands balled into fists. Tom's eyes flashed; he was ready for a fight. Hadn't Lisa told him to do whatever it takes? George's head no longer almost touched the ceiling; he was even angrier this time, but Tom was not afraid.

"Tom, you know why I will not allow Lisa control of the company." George sounded calm, but Tom could tell that he was fighting the urge to scream and shout; he could see it in his face.

"I do? I wasn't aware of this! Why don't you indulge us all father? Why can't Lisa take over?" Tom raised his eyebrows and placed both hands on his hips.

"It's the name Tom! When she gets married, the name of the company will have to change." Tom could feel Lisa stand up angrily; ready to storm from the room, but Tom spoke once more.

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"That's it?" Tom's face screwed up, now he was angry. "Father don't be ridiculous! You had your chance to tell me the reason; but you had to tell me that lie? I know why." Tom let out a laugh surprising every family member in the room who were watching the spectacle worriedly. "You don't have a reason apart from you don't want me to pursue my music career! Lisa is far more qualified than I. And she is having the job, I won't take it." The only light in the room came from a candle on a table at the far wall, night had fallen and darkness surrounded Tom and George.

"Oh really?" George had raised an eyebrow and tried to make himself look taller by straightening his back and puffing out his chest.

"Yes, really, father. I am leaving." Lisa and Edith gasped in the background and George's power seemed to deflate like a balloon. "I am going to stay with Mark, and nothing you do or say is going to stop me. Like I said; you have pushed me too far and I am not going to put up with it." And with that Tom stormed from the house into the darkness.

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The next morning Tom entered the Roolsten family home - he had gone home the previous night and packed some clothes before leaving early in the morning to enter the house as the family finished breakfast. As soon as he arrived Mark pulled him into a hug congratulating him on standing up to his father at last. Tom had phoned him the previous filling him in on all of the juicy details and informing him that he was going to be moving in.

"Hello Tom." A warm and smiling face in the shape of Mark's mother entered the hallway as the two pulled away from each other. "You are welcome to stay as long as you want, as long as your parents know that you are here." Tom grinned from ear to ear; Mark's mother, Tina was more of a mother to him than his own.

"Yes, Mrs. Roolsten, they know I am here. I made sure that they were aware of my whereabouts." Mark grinned as they shared the private joke before hauling Tom's things up the stairs.

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When Tom dumped his bags on the floor he looked around the room; it was rather messy with balls of screwed up paper lying around the room in random corners of rich blue carpet. Mark hurriedly ran over to the canvas and ripped whatever he was working on off and screwed it up into a ball before throwing it into a corner. Tom gave him a questionable look.

"It wasn't finished, didn't want you to see it." Mark explained, he seemed quite breathless. "besides it was a bit rubbish." He laughed the awkwardness off and scratched the back of his neck. "Well that's your bed there." He said pointing to the bed nearest the door. "It's a bit awful but, you know, I wasn't really expecting you... besides I can't afford to get you a decent bed. Do you want me to leave you to get unpacked?" Tom shook his head.

"Only if you want to." He replied, Mark was acting rather oddly. What had come over him?

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Tom was quickly ushered into the kitchen; Clarissa and Mark were left unattended in the lounge and were chatting idly about the curtain patterns ans the impact they had on the entire room. Tom could not believe his eyes as he met his nephew and niece for the first time; that was one thing he had definitely not expected as well as his siter keeping a husband in tow. Ruben put his mug down on the table leaving a faint coffee ring and stood up politely ready to meet his brother-in-law, but Lisa folded her arms and pursed her lips; clearly not impressed with her brother's surprise arrival. Edith's tears had subsided now and she was smiling - a new grandchild and her son back all in one day, could things get any better?

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The house was filled with incessant chatter and noise as the reuinted family shared stories of recent events; but always being careful to avoid the subjects of George Davis, Cancer and the day Tom walked out. The mugs had been washed and put back in the crockery cupoboard by a still grim-faced Lisa who was not joining in with the celebrations.

"So Tom, aren't you going to introduce us to your friends? This of course is Mark?" Edith eyed Mark with a sour expression on her face; she clearly hadn't forgiven him for taking her son away. Mark nodded his head, but Edith wasn't paying attention to him anymore; she only had eyes for Clarissa. "And who is this gorgeous young lady?" A redness built up in Clarissa's cheeks as she blushed a bright crimson before gigglong slightly - a nervous giggle.

"Mother, this is my girlfriend, Clarissa." The look on his mother's face as he told her this would stay in his memories forever; it was the epitome of happiness.

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"Well, why didn't you say so in the first place?"

'No point in answering' Tom told himself, he knew she wouldn't be listening to a single word he said. As soon as this thought ended his mother began to bombard Clarissa with questions such as:

"Do you like my new curtains? Goodness you are a delightfully pretty sight! You make sure you take good care of my boy." and questions regarding anything at all. Tom caught sight of Mark sitting on the couch just watching Clarissa squirm as she tried to answer questions, and fighting back the laughter that just needed to find an escape.

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A hand made its way around Tom's wrist and gripped quickly and tightly, pulling him back into the kitchen where Samuel and Hannah were now sat on the floor, playing. He looked up and came face to face with LIsa's flaring nostrils, her eyes like slits, leering at him.

"What did you come here for? Why now? Clarissa isn't your girlfriend is she? You just wanted to find a way into mother's good books. Why did you not come to my wedding? I did send you an invite... You didn't reply." Tom stared at his sister; the sun illuminated the dark blue kitchen, reflecting from the small beads of tears that now glistened on the tips of Lisa's eyelashes. She blinked them away furiously, her eyebrows furrowed and her voice harsh and raspy as her breathing became erratic due to the intensity of her emotions. "Well?"

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"Lisa, you know the answer to all of those questions." Tom stated simply, he grinned at her as she continued to glare at him furiously; she could feel her blood pulsing around her body at break-neck speed, her face flushing in anger, her fists clenching causing her nails to dig in and pierce the top layer of flesh, and her vein throbbing in her temple.

"Father." Tom waited for a reaction, and seeing that he wasn't going to get one he turned, ruffled Samuel's hair and left the kitchen to rescue Clarissa from his mother.

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Edith and Clarissa were now sat on the couch completely engrossed in conversation, though Tom could tell that Clarissa was suffering under pressure. Mark was chatting with Ruben in the far corner of the room, about what though, Tom couldn't even hazard a guess. He had no idea what a huge, burly man could possibly have in common with Mark... not that it really mattered.

"I love your dress honey, do you think they do it in my size?" Edith laughed out loud, Clarissa smiled but squirmed uneasily in her seat.

"Mother, that's enough of the interrogations. Let Clarissa breathe and come and give your favourite son a hug." Edith obliged and hugged her son while Clarissa mouthed a silent 'thankyou' before heading into the kitchen.

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Lisa turned around and smiled sweetly as she heard Clarissa enter the kitchen, the sound of her shoes echoing off of the blue walls as they clattered along the brown tiles.

"You're not my brother's girlfriend are you?" Clarissa could see the smile on Lisa's face, but she could feel the sharp, coldness of her words. Clarissa shook her head in reply.

"It was the only way they would let me come..." A curious look now. Clarissa watched Samuel and Hannah quite comfortable on the tiled floor.

"And why was it so important that you did come?" Clarissa leaned in close.

"Who deals with the law around here?" Lisa's teeth sparkles as they glinted in the sunlight.

"I do. Would you like to step into my office?" Lisa cupped her hands to her mouth. "RUBEN. COME AND WATCH THE KIDS, I HAVE SOME BUSINESS TO ATTEND TO." Ruben entered the kitchen as Clarissa followed Lisa into her office.

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The office was plain and dark; industrial is probably the easiest way to describe it; the paper was piled neatly, the drapes hung tidily on the rail, the pens were all lined up neatly - not even one out of place.

"So for what do you require my services, Miss..." Clarissa inhaled deeply, clearly worried about giving her last name to a stranger, especially in these circumstances, but so be it.

"Walters. Clarissa Walters." Lisa was already scribbling things down. Incredibly neatly and industrial-like. "I received an e-mail last night. An e-mail from someone I knew to have died just a few nights ago; she was murdered actually..." Lisa cleared her throat importantly.

"And what did this e-mail say?" Clarissa shuffled about with her dress for a few moments.

"Hold on a second, I have a copy of it with me." She continued to ruffle about her dress eventually pulling a folded up piece of paper from her bra and handing it over.

"No pockets." She giggled.

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Lisa's eyes eagerly rolled over the words on the page, her brain already working out the problem and the solution simultaneously as her brain ticked like clockwork. She kept glancing up into Clarissa's worried face as she pondered the girls' situation - what had happened to make her panic like this?

"Well, thankyou for the interesting read Clarissa." Lisa was smirking now and Clarissa felt somewhat bewildered. "But I am afraid I cannot help you..." Clarissa's face fell and Lisa pulled an expression of great revelation. "Unless... you tell me everything you know about Tom and what he has been up to lately to make him want to return home." Clarissa suddenly felt at ease and she, too, smirked.

"He's you brother, don't you think you should get the information from him yourself? And I hope you realise that you aren't my last reasort - I can always ask your husband for hid er, help..." Clarissa's lip curled satisfactorily. "I thought so. So what do you say Lisa?"

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To Be Continued...


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: PegasusDiana on April 04, 2008, 02:26:18 am
Hmm now why would she need a lawyer? Very interesting, although I can't understand Lisa's reaction to her brother considering if he hadn't did what he did she wouldn't be where she is. Can't wait till the next chapter. :)


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Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 04, 2008, 05:46:29 pm
Well you will just have to wait to find out why his sister is acting like it...

And Clarissa has a good reason to need a lawyer. I can't wait till you find out why :D


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Beth on April 05, 2008, 02:28:16 am
Sam! How ya going?
Tis me Elizabeth/Beth/Aquaprinc3ss from TSR.
I can't believe what happened. :(


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Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 05, 2008, 07:50:58 am
I thought it was you Beth!
I am doing good thank you very much! Have people supporting me with my blog and a couple people here as well :D
Well, I think I will still continue to post Suburbia there - because it is easier to find there... have you seen the terrible ratings I got? LOL!!! Anyway, yes, so I think Suburbia will be posted there - but that all depends on whether I can be bothered to write things with the Sims 2 photo albums... it's so restricting with the word count and I don't like to take too many pictures.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 05, 2008, 07:51:58 am
Have you checked out my short story?

I warn you it has domestic violence in it - so it was deemed unsuitable from TSR :D


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Post by: Beth on April 06, 2008, 03:19:12 am
Yes I did, the woman reminds me of Nicole Ritchie.

Yeah I can't believe it, it deserved much higher ratings. Your a brilliant writer and deserve better. :)
I saw what you said about me on your blog.:love2:

I had problems with sims.... faulty download, I have pictures for proof :D Boy was that weird. I only recovered 700 out of 12,625 downloads.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 06, 2008, 08:39:41 am
Well thank you for reading it :D

And thanks for saying that, I don't mind anymore though, I can live without some of those people :D

Well I had to mention you when you are (nearly) always the first person to comment on my stories! ;)

Ouch! 700! That must have hurt a lot! I had a problem with Bodyshop for a while - it took me a long time to figure out that it was sims I had cloned that were doing it! lol


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: PegasusDiana on April 06, 2008, 04:20:07 pm
Ok Sam, I went and read Numb Chapters 1 through 5. Why did she have to kill her husband instead of just leaving him? I think Charlie is going to fall in love with her, but he's a cop and so he'll also be the one that arrests her. Sad story, but I don't like her at all. She knew the pain that was inflicted on her when her family was killed, yet she goes and inflicts that pain on Klint's family just because she wanted a fresh start. Even going so far as to just dig a hole and throw him in there. She's deranged. So when is chapter 6 coming? lol You write some great stories, but now I'm left in suspense on 2 stories!


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Stelio Kontos on April 06, 2008, 07:53:14 pm
More suspense...just what I needed.
I'm already hanging off of one cliff thanks to Astral Faery. Now I got this to worry about.


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Beth on April 06, 2008, 07:55:49 pm
Yeah, I blame school. :P School hours 8:30 - 3:20.


Yeah so I start Tuesday (Tomorrow here) my sister has to go today hehehe, and I have the school musical rehearsals so... yeah. :D Which is 4:45 - 5:30 and I usually get home at 6:00 due to bad traffic.

Yeah, I'm looking every where for Male adult formal & athletic outfits. I can't remember. We'll off looking again.
Can't wait for more ;)


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 14, 2008, 08:15:38 am
PegasusDiana, well I'm sure you have noticed by now that Ellen is not the most mentally stable person living. So I suppose that is the reason she killed him; she is a bit mental. How do you know Klint has family? I think as far as Ellen was concerned she was his family.

SAZ, sorry for the delay I have had no time - so I am afraid you might be hanging on that cliff for a little while longer. But I had to leave something that was not as obvious as the other parts... we don't all actually suspect Clarissa though. Do we? ;)

Aquaprinc3ss. School sucks. I have loads of homework to do and this is why I can't write anything at the moment... oh well best get and do it.
Good luck on finding those outfits by the way :D


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Post by: PegasusDiana on April 16, 2008, 03:49:06 pm
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PegasusDiana, well I'm sure you have noticed by now that Ellen is not the most mentally stable person living. So I suppose that is the reason she killed him; she is a bit mental. How do you know Klint has family? I think as far as Ellen was concerned she was his family.


Is this like which came first the chicken or the egg? lol He has to have some sort of family. Doesn't he? Ooo Charlie is his brother and now he's seeking revenge(evil rendfield laugh)


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Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 16, 2008, 05:33:40 pm
lol!

No I was meaning he could have been an only child with dead parents. How else could they afford that sweet little home they lived in? Not that you got to see much of it...

Charlie might be out for revenge, but really. I don't think so ;)


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: PegasusDiana on April 16, 2008, 05:45:30 pm
Hey I'm plotting here. lol Where's that update! I have to see if your wrong or I am, oh wait your writing it...


Title: Suburbia - Part IV is now posted for your enjoyment! Added 1/4/2008
Post by: Sam_Cains90 on April 17, 2008, 07:14:46 pm
lol.

I am a bit busy right now with Suburbia - not sure when the next update will be. I don't really have time to do two at once, what with exams coming up and everything. Although, I don't need to take pictures anymore; maybe that will make it easier, if I just write without pictures...

Anyway thanks for the interest and enthusiasm, I will let you know when a new update arrives. But keep checking here for Part V of Suburbia, which is in progress with pictures now :D


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