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lol i know i never finish storys somethimes i hardly start them but i know for defentily i will finish this one if not then kill me :smash:  :smash: anyway enjoy


chapter 1 The beginning



hi my mum gave me this diary book thingy and i decided to keep a diary anyway its my mum's birthday tommorow ive got her a hairdresser coupon its this realy posh one like when you have to pay $50 for a trim!


my name is Ashley Greenville. I am 10 years old my birthday is on the 13th august. I was born in 1996. Here's a picture of me.
(http://i19.tinypic.com/63muxx5.jpg)

i look cute dont i my sister and mum say i do heres a picture of us all toghter like one big happy family.
(http://i14.tinypic.com/4ubmi5d.jpg)

well goodnight now



its mums birthday today shes so happy she went to the hairdresser and got her hair cut like mine . my sister , london forgot to get her a present so we said we got it for her from both of us. see her new haircut now.
(http://i10.tinypic.com/53p98ap.jpg)

today we finished un packing my mum gave me my own room. see
(http://i13.tinypic.com/4xom2ac.jpg)

but i feel sorry for mum and london cause they have to share
(http://i13.tinypic.com/6auqlis.jpg)

back at home we had this realy fancy house big enoguh for us to have 2 rooms each and 2 bathrooms each i wish i had pictures of it though. we only had to move cause my mums boyfriend we left him hes realy nice but mum doesn't like him anymore oh well
goodnight im so tired from all that unpacking i might turn in cya tommorow cause thats my first day fo school

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plz tell mE what you think plz:-P

this story is not getting a update im never writting a story ever again if you need to nkow why i get laod of pms saying its rubbish on ym website i got laods as well so im never gonig to write stories ever again ok you can loack or delet this thread

i think people will eb ahppy im not updating since they all hate it

I liked it.I just got to it and I liked it.Those people that write that its bad are twits

you need to report every person who said crap to you the whole point of insim is for the community to help you and help you get better in every aspect not put u down
you need to report them and what exactly did they say ?

err they said

I can't beleive you showed up your face at insementator again after the plagerizing bullshit you pulled. btw, your stories really are aweful and everyone knows you leave comments on their stories so they will leave one on
yours. It's pathetic. Find a new hobby and stop making a fool of yourself.  

thats what they wrote.. well what one person wrote

o.o
That's ridiculous. I really the concept of your story, the only thing you might want to pay attention to are grammar (capitals, dots, comma's and stuff like that) and your spelling, because improving that makes it easier to read the story for us.
And you probably could improve your pics a bit too, but tips for that are here (http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=19580).

But they really had no right to treat you like that. if they didn't like your story they just should've said nothing, instead of insulting you.
I hope you continue this, because there are people out here that like it. Good luck!

AlbinoBambi is right... to stop getting these sort of hate mail would try making your pictures a bit better by using tutorials.. Then you could touch up to your grammar and spelling, alot of people find that REALLY annoying! Just keep on going, and never give up :)

tell all them to screw themselves and give me the screen names please
thanks =)

oh ermm i cant remeber and i deleted my private messages of them

Give me the names. I've got 30 pounds added to me now. I'll go sit on them. Maybe break something until they say it's good.

:icon9:  She's been banned, and I'm not sure for what and how long.  It's sad though...  I think this had a good concept. Just adding a little more flavor to her story line and pics, like everyone else mentioned, would bring it to life for sure.  :?