I love to read.
I have enjoyed reading this since I first found it through Kathy's link. It's been my relaxation when I've needed to unwind. It's been exciting, and thought provoking and a helluva good read.
I'm looking forward to more stories by you Kere... and in the meantime, I'm going back to the beginning to read this one again!
When a story goes on this long, it can be hard to end it - but I think you've picked the perfect place to end it. The climax and denouement was perfectly paced, and very thrilling, with a great feeling to the end. I actually caught myself holding my breath with the countdown!
The video was great, and a nice wrap-up for the story.
So I hope you enjoy a short break, and then have more stories for us soon
KIri