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Title: Sim Generations- Generation 1- Moving Day Post by: TheRandomTeam on March 27, 2009, 10:42:53 pm Read the chapter at: http://asimstory.blogspot.com/
Title: Re: Sim Generations- Generation 1- Moving Day Post by: caffeinated.joy on March 28, 2009, 04:37:45 pm Please post your pictures via photobucket, tinypic, flickr, or the third party photo sharing site of your choice, instead of uploading them to the site. It will help us save on server space, and that image upload feature is meant to be used for cc uploads :) Thansk!
Title: Re: Sim Generations- Generation 1- Moving Day Post by: JacobM on April 13, 2009, 04:52:10 am hmm it's ok, interesting plot. but i think it is more like a stream of dialogue from a movie than an actual story. maybe if you write in paragraphs, narrating what's happening from a 'narrators view' (yours), or from just allisons view, matts view, or anyone elses view, you know.
umm maybe you shouldn't put 'allison: (what she says here)' and 'matt: (what he says here)' etc. and just write it like an actual story i don't know. i hope i helped though. |