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Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on November 26, 2006, 12:46:44 pm Sorry for the thought bubble things in some of the pics , Im kindof new at taking pictures
Constructive critisizm needed!!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "MOOOOOOOOOM!", screamed a small boy about 10,"I NEED my shorts now! Are they done yet?" (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/David-MoooooooM.jpg) "No David, how many times do I have to tell you to be patient?" (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kiera-nodavidhowmanytimes.jpg) "But Mo.." (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/David-butmo-.jpg) "But nothing,stop panicking we dont have to be there until 1" "Well its already 11",he said with a smirk. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/David-hesaidwithasmirk.jpg) "Honey your shorts will be done soon enough, whats so special about them anyway?" (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kiera-shethoughttoherself.jpg) At that moment there was a knock at the door. "Shoot. I forgot that Chelsea was coming over to watch the twins", Kiera said to herself. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kierathought.jpg) "WAAAAAAAA *sob* WAAAAAAAA" (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Daniellecrying.jpg) (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Taryncrying.jpg) "David do me a favor and check on your sisters," she said as she tossed him a warm pair of black jean shorts. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kiera-Daviddomeafavor.jpg) "No prob" As David ran through the small one story house, (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Davidrunning.jpg) Kiera went to answer the door. As she oppened the door her jaw dropped and she nearly fainted. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/kiera-almostfainted.jpg) For the person standing before her was definetely NOT Chelsea. Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: Sleepycat on November 26, 2006, 03:03:53 pm *wants More!* :lol:
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on November 26, 2006, 03:29:05 pm Dont worry Sleepycat I'll update tonight because right now I am cleaning
dont worry it wont be too long!!! Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: SimulatedDork on November 26, 2006, 03:29:32 pm Nice intro! Since you comment on my story, thought I'd return the favor.
Constructive critiscim? Hmm... I like the pictures, and they help, but maybe a bit more dialouge/description? Dunno, I'm not a good example! Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on November 26, 2006, 04:15:44 pm Nice! Those sims are really pretty!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: Elven_Song on November 26, 2006, 11:52:38 pm Good intro! It's got me wanting more, that's for sure!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on November 27, 2006, 04:00:26 pm Ok I wrote a good sized update and right now Im going into my game to take pics
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: Sleepycat on November 27, 2006, 08:13:12 pm *trys to wait quietly*
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: summer_wine on November 27, 2006, 11:32:23 pm your sims are beautiful!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on December 01, 2006, 10:20:44 pm Hey Oddball you can't still be cleaning.....
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on December 03, 2006, 09:54:44 am No Im not lol, I just put Pets on my computer and my game keeps crashing does anyone know what may be wrong?
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on December 03, 2006, 02:31:31 pm oh man....you know at first I was green with envy when I saw all the cute pet pictures out that I didn't have pets but now I'm sort of thinking I don't want it if it's going to crash my game anymore than it already does...have you seen the pets thread it's full of mostly dissapointed ppl.
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on December 03, 2006, 03:54:57 pm OK well I fixed it and my dog had pupies so I have to get everything together because the doggies wont eat:(
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: Sleepycat on December 03, 2006, 10:36:19 pm boolprop ControlPets on
boolprop PetActionCancel true make them eat ;) edit - I really like pets and haven't really had any problems with it (or any of the EPs and stuff packs) BUT I also have a very good computer. Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on December 10, 2006, 10:48:23 am ok well i accidentally deleted this family while organizing my neighborhood soory so that means i have to cancel the story :(
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on December 10, 2006, 03:28:28 pm Aww...Well maybe you can start over with new ppl?
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on December 11, 2006, 07:12:21 pm ok , just let me finish my homework and Ill brainstorm oke doke?
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: xliikewoahx31 on December 17, 2006, 03:56:41 pm OMG its soooo good! PLEASE KEEP UPDATING!
*added your link in my Favorites* Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: xliikewoahx31 on December 19, 2006, 09:05:41 am when will we have a update?!!!! :(
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: flid on January 02, 2007, 03:56:14 pm mwhahahaha now I can harras you for updates :)
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on January 04, 2007, 06:25:36 pm lol
I think I found this family and may start it up again I f anyone wants me to Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on January 05, 2007, 09:59:59 am cool! oddball you gotta do it!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: caffeinated.joy on January 05, 2007, 11:22:20 am Nice job with the pictures; I'd definitely like to see more, because I now want to know who's at the door! lol.
If you have OFB, you can get rid of the plumb bobs and thought bubbles by opening your cheat box and typing in "plumbbobtoggle off" to get rid of the plumb bob and "showheadlines off" to get rid of the thought bubbles. Other than that, the only constructive piece of critisicim I have is to give people a bit more to read story-wise. The pictures should add to story, rather than carry it. I would love to see more! Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: flid on January 05, 2007, 07:45:13 pm Quote from: oddball011;505656 lol I think I found this family and may start it up again I f anyone wants me to yes definatly Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: babyblueheart on January 06, 2007, 02:26:54 am Yeah!! That'd be great! Love the story! :)
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: UDreamLS86 on January 06, 2007, 04:25:17 am You sims are so gorgeous!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on January 06, 2007, 07:18:20 pm going in to try and take pics
but I changed who was at the door :tongue8: Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: babyblueheart on January 06, 2007, 07:52:41 pm YAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on January 07, 2007, 04:12:08 pm I tried to put more words in but I love taking pics of these sims lol
----------------------------------------- (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Matthew-Atthedoorfirst.jpg) As kiera opened the door looking her in the face was the famous actor Matthew Hallow.He was gorgeous! Golden brown hair bright blue eyes, kiera was in lust! (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Matthew-atthedoorsecond.jpg) "Uhmm , hello.My names Matthew ,my car just broke down a little ways back and my cell isnt working , so I was wondering if I could maybe use your phone." "Sure , its right over there by the bathroom,and you can call me Kiera," Kiera said as she pointed to where it was. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Matthew-Onthephonefirst.jpg) "Thanks," Matthew said with a smile. As Kiera headed her way to the kitchen David ran up up to her histerically "Omigod mom , I think I just saw Matthew Hallow, in MY house!!" "SHhh! Yeah, he needed to use our phone now go and play in your room ok?" "OK , whatever, oh yeah Micheal and Calvin emailed me.They said the party is next week cuz' Mikes grounded." (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/snapshot_1276005b_f2ad13bc.jpg) "OK , well go reply, Ill call Chelsea in a while and tell her not to come.Alright?" "Yeah" In the backround Kiera could hear the conversation that the strikingly good looking man was having with his agent.... "I know I have a shoot in like five minutes.......Yes I am aware of that Bill.....OK, fine...Yeah, Im sure...bye." (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Matthew-Onthephoneseond.jpg) As the man made his way over towards Kiera she told him to sit down and have himself a cookie. "I just made them.Tell me how the taste." said Kiera (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/MattKiera-atthetable.jpg) Matthew grabbed himself a cookie and took a bite.He made a face jokingly as he chewed. "Are the really that bad."Kiera said not getting the joke. (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kiera-ONthephonefirst.jpg) "there wonderful, thank you,"Matthew replied with a chuckle. "Wow thats a relief!" OUt of nowere a little boy comes running into the room. "Hey mom, there is a copper lady outside.She looks like she waiting for someone." (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Matthew-thecopsene.jpg) "Oh thats Kendal, my agent sent her as an esscort.Well whos this handsome young man?" "Oh this is my son David" "Well it was nice to meet you David, and you too Kiera.I should be going before my agent sends the fire department too."Said Matthew with a chuckle. The next morning as kiera was getting dressed she heard a ringing so she went to answer the phone. "Hello? (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Kiera-onthephonesecond-1.jpg) Oh, hey Matthew" (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/kiera-onthephonesecond.jpg) ----------------------------------------------------------- I was poking around int hat house and saw this and it made me laugh (http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/oddball011/Thepuppyminivanthingy.jpg) The puppy hates mini vans lol Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: babyblueheart on January 07, 2007, 05:09:05 pm Oh that was great! I loved it!! :) About the puppy- I cracked up so bad at that! :)
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: starlucid on January 08, 2007, 08:40:58 am Ohh Keira is just beautifull her face is so pretty! LOL! that minivan isn't that the nanny's car? maybe doggy hates the nanny?
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on January 08, 2007, 03:35:42 pm IDK Ill have to ask him some time lol
Later Ill get into the game and take sum pics just have to finish my homework I have alot Soi blame my teachers :tongue8: Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: Elven_Song on January 08, 2007, 07:05:53 pm Glad you decided to continue the story! ^^ Aww.. that puppy is so adorable! I can't wait to get pets, I'm mainly buying it so I can have puppies and kittens.
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: xxJessicaxx on January 08, 2007, 11:39:58 pm Seems like it will be an interesting story, more please. :)
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on January 13, 2007, 05:58:38 pm Sorry I havnt updated in a bit
Ive got a Science Progect due sorry good news is I got strait A's WOOP! Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: babyblueheart on January 20, 2007, 11:58:26 am Great!!
:) Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: cookie_monster8 on June 14, 2007, 03:32:35 pm Great Story I love it. Hoping for an Update
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: dnj121006 on June 14, 2007, 09:22:32 pm i love it really good hun =D
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: KatrinaandTiff on January 23, 2008, 09:38:35 pm I noticed the little puppy.It is so adorable!I have Sims 2,University,Nightlife,Open for Business,Pets,Seasons,Bon Voyage,Happy Holiday Stuff,Glamour Life Stuff,H&M Fashion Stuff,Teen Style Stuff.So basically I have the whole Sims 2 collection with 4 stuff packs.I have a lot to do this weekend in order to get a C in Social Studies.I had 3 F's last semester.So if I am ever gonna pass I have to keep doing my math homework so I do not get in big trouble and start working on Science and get done with our Ancient Greece Unit projects.I have to choose whether to work for a C,B,or A.I chose A.But here is the problem.I had ten days to do it.So it is really due the 29th,if you do the math and skip Saturday and Sunday,you should find my start.If I do an A.I have to do 6 C projects,3 B projects,and one BIG A project in 9 days because of our snow day.So if I don't make sense,I'll explain better next time.GREAT AND SUPER STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Oh What a way-Chaper 1 Post by: oddball011 on July 05, 2008, 08:16:41 pm aww how i miss this family
and the wonderful graphics i had on my old computer :( |