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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 20, 2008, 10:23:51 am
I started a new story and I hope everyone enjoys it. :D Please tell me about spelling of grammer errors so I can fix them.
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Ahh. My first home. I remember how happy we were, finally on our own together free to do whatever we wanted. This is the story of Natasha Harris, And Christie Bell.

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Oh, my Christie, so sweet and beautiful. It was spring, just nearly a year after we got married, that I decided to broach the subject.

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"I want kids."

"I know. I do to. I've been thinking we should consider a sperm donar."

"That sounds fine but-" Christie cut me off sharply.

"You should carry the baby, I know how much you want to."
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We chose a korean donar so the baby would look like both of us. And we were lucky enough to get pregnant on the first try. We were so overjoyed to see it confirmed.

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Everying thing went as planned and finally the day came. I was huge and tired and i wished the baby would come.

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It was a wish that I would soon regret.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: ZanarkandFayth on July 20, 2008, 10:53:21 am
Fayth likes it, so please update soon! Somehow, I've begun liking these kinds of stories more and more. If you like to read on this kind of thing, there's a book I'd like to recommend. It's Between Mom and Jo by Julie Anne Peters. Wonderful novel.

Again, wonderful beginning. I hope to read more soon.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 20, 2008, 10:56:57 am
I'm really glad you like it! the next chapter will be up today, or tomorrow at the latest.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Alisa_Crawford on July 20, 2008, 11:57:15 am
I think when it says, "I decided to broach the subject," I think 'broach' should be 'approach'.

Otherwise, lovely. ^^ I can't wait to read more.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 20, 2008, 07:32:45 pm
Um not really sure here i've heard broach used before but i'm not sure i have the correct spelling.


Title: Chapter 2, Gifted at last
Post by: Devomuffins on July 20, 2008, 08:24:50 pm
Everything hurt like hell. My spine was on fire and my legs only uncramped during contractions.

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For sixteen hours I just kept wishing for it to end.

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Finally the voices around me started to fade, all I heard was people faintly telling me to keep pushing, to keep going. At last I looked up at Christie, she had bags under her eyes but she was smiling at me, cheering me on.

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Finally everyone in the room was cheering, yelling "Its a boy!" Or "He's beautiful!"

But it all just faded away.

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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on July 21, 2008, 04:28:52 am
love it! really kool!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 21, 2008, 09:50:25 am
sorry about the two pics without borders photobucket kinda crapped out on me yesterday.


Title: Chapter 3, New beginnings
Post by: Devomuffins on July 21, 2008, 01:02:27 pm
My head ached when I awoke, and I looked up into the worried face of Christie.

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"How is he?" That was all i wanted to know, If he was alright.
 "Yes he's fine."
I looked over, and then felt like a complete idiot when i saw the his bed was pushed right up beside mine. He was adorable.

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"Can I hold him?"
"Of course, if you feel alright."
Christie picked him up and then handed him to me.

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I snuggled him up close to my body. "Have you thought up any names yet?"
"Well I kind of thought... maybe... Edward?"
"Its perfect."

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We were so glad to take Edward home with us the next day. At last when all was quiet in our home, and Edward had fallen asleep Christie turned to me.

"I want to have a baby. I mean Edward is my baby too, but I want to experiance it... Myself."

Silence. At last I came to a conclusion. "Okay. Its perfect. Two kids, that'll make four of us!"
Christie started to cry. "Oh baby." I whispered. And then, since it seemed like the thing to do, I hugged her.

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Once we had confirmation of Christie's pregnancy we were thrilled, and when we went in for a ultrasound we were horrified. Multiples. Four babies of unknown genders pulsated to the steady beat of their hearts as I watched them on the screen. Christie was in tears. The docter explained the risks and advised us that reduction would be wise. Christie couldn't. I knew full well neither of us could. How could you choose who got a chance and who didn't? Who lived and who died? Christie just sobbed onto my chest as i tried to comfort her. Where were we ever going to find the money? Diapers alone would be too pricey. "Shh. Its okay." I wasn't even sure whether I was telling that to Christie or myself. Christie had paid maternity and I knew my parents had retired early for a reason but still, it just didn't feel like enough.

 We moved out of our house a month later and into a larger house. Edward had already grown so much. We had made sure to wait at least six months before trying again because we hadn't wanted a baby on the way before we were settled. It took us and additional four monthes to get pregnant so Edward was thirteen months old, and my did he get into EVERYTHING. Even our mango ice cream which upset Christie quite a bit. Christie's craving was definatly ice cream, though she denies it.

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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Astral Faery on July 21, 2008, 01:02:50 pm
There are several definitions for the word 'broach', one of them being:  'To bring up (a subject) for discussion or debate.'

Pretty good beginning - lots of drama so far.  Good job. :)


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 21, 2008, 05:04:24 pm
Oh wow.  Four!  Twins are hard enough as it is!  
Not that I'm making it any better for Christie, lol.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 21, 2008, 05:35:06 pm
I fixed a bunch of the errors it seems no one had the heart to tell me about (Oops).


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Astral Faery on July 21, 2008, 06:07:29 pm
Unless they're severe, I tend not to notices mistakes that much.  I kind of get into the story, lol.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nydamoon1000 on July 21, 2008, 06:55:40 pm
I liked the story, it was very good! :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 21, 2008, 08:18:58 pm
Mistakes?  Hm... Perhaps I should have noticed that...
Then again our minds tend to fix the mistakes without us knowing it when we read things.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on July 21, 2008, 09:24:37 pm
luv the new update! its awesome!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: ZanarkandFayth on July 22, 2008, 06:18:50 am
Still love it! I noticed the broach thing, too, but I didn't think much about it. Usually when I hear a saying, I hear it wrong, so I thought it was approach as well. Anyway...

Quadruplets... Oh, mah lawd. Good luck with getting them all in place for a pictyure!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 22, 2008, 08:39:32 am
Aww thanks guys! the next chapter should be up today. :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Theraven on July 22, 2008, 03:39:38 pm
just wanted to say that I put up the outfits for you.
the link in my sig will take you straight to them :)


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 22, 2008, 05:56:53 pm
Thank you so much! :toothy8::toothy8:


Title: Chapter 4, Peace at last
Post by: Devomuffins on July 23, 2008, 05:42:48 pm
sorry the chapter is so late. THIS IS NOT THE END!
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We enjoyed spending as much time as possible with Edward, while we still could.

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 At thirty weeks Christie was addmitted to hospital, and at thirty two weeks, our day came.

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I could tell how nervous Christie was and I could see she was nearly in tears. I held her hand and stroked her hair, and in a feww short minutes they were here. Joel, Collin, Jonathan and Rowan.

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Once Christie was out of recovery a few days later, she was allowed to hold her babies.

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Collin was the first to go home but the others followed shortly after.

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We were so happy to have them all home. At last we felt so safe.

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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 24, 2008, 02:47:13 pm
Aww, so cute!  
And where did you get that little basket one of the babies was in?


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nydamoon1000 on July 24, 2008, 03:40:47 pm
Very nice chapter! :D
And very cute babies! :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Astral Faery on July 24, 2008, 04:52:35 pm
OMG baby cuteness all over the place!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Karla! on July 24, 2008, 06:32:17 pm
wow, this story is great!
all the babies are so cute!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on July 24, 2008, 07:51:31 pm
luv it!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 25, 2008, 08:42:36 am
Quote
Aww, so cute!
And where did you get that little basket one of the babies was in?


Eclecticsims. Its no longer a paysite so i went nuts with the great free stuff!

http://www.eclectic-sims.com/


Title: Chapter 5, So sudden
Post by: Devomuffins on July 25, 2008, 09:19:06 am
TEN YEARS LATER.

Shortly after the four were born, we decided to move again. And even now I still cannot believe Christie talked me into having more kids. So along came Emmeline Grace, Our little princess. We were shocked to see her blue eyes at first, and then we realized they were the exact same color as my mother's.

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 And I can now recall the day clear as a bell. Emmy was at daycare and the boys were playing in the basement.

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Edward was studying, or rather dropping his gameby and picking up a book whenever I walked in. Christie was at work. I was about to go make lunch when I heard a frightend yell come from the basement. Dropping a plate of bagels, I raced down the stairs, just in time to see Rowan hit the floor.

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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nydamoon1000 on July 25, 2008, 09:34:52 am
I hope Rowan is ok!
And great update! :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 25, 2008, 08:57:31 pm
Eek!  What happened to Rowan?!
Update soon! :)


Title: Chapter 6, New nightmares
Post by: Devomuffins on July 26, 2008, 08:06:05 am
"Mommy-"
"Shh, we have to whisper because Rowan's sleeping."
"Mommy, will Rowan still get to play with us?
"I- I don't know bunny.


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We sat there for a while and eventaully Christie tiptoed in pushing Emmy. The docter came in so we told the Edward to take Emmy and the boys into the hall. They diagnosed Rowan with severe asthma.

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 I had been so afraid. And now I was almost waiting for the same thing to happen to another kid.

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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: ZanarkandFayth on July 26, 2008, 08:29:25 am
Aww... Poor Rowan. I hope to see another update soon... Now I really hope he'll be okay, or I will be upset. XD Anyway, lovely update, Egghugger.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 27, 2008, 09:26:00 am
Poor poor Rowan!  He better be ok!
If not I'll... I'll... Um...  I'll get back to on that threat there. :)


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 27, 2008, 12:14:30 pm
Throw cookies at me?


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 27, 2008, 01:26:00 pm
Cookies?  No no... That won't work.  I'm thinking maybe cookies and cupcakes.  That'll show you!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 27, 2008, 04:20:27 pm
Aaaah!!! *runs away*

*comes back and grabs cookies*


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nydamoon1000 on July 29, 2008, 02:48:31 pm
Nice chapter! :D  
Sorry I didn't post a while back I thought you didn't update because it would usually be in the front of all the stories!
But I hope Rowan will be ok!
Don't kill him or I'll have to throw the cookies and cupcakes at you too, lol! :)


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 30, 2008, 09:35:07 am
I'm starting my game right now to take pic for the next chapter. sorry it took me so long I just couldn't get around to it. I was busy...:chainsaw:


Title: Chapter 7, Cold days and cookies
Post by: Devomuffins on July 30, 2008, 06:55:04 pm
After Rowan got back from the hospital, it got harder and harder for me to find things that he could do with the boys. When the first snowfall came the boys all wanted to build a snowman.

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 I let Rowan go out with them, and they built a small snowman. The boys decided to have a snowball fight so I brought Rowan inside. I looked back and saw him, his little tear-streaked face watching his brothers play.

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 I could have cried. Instead, however, I called him into the kitchen, wiped the tears off his cheeks, and handed him my recipe book.

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"Are-Are w-we making christmas cookies?" I could have cried just from hearing his voice so full of such fragile hope.
"Of course we are!" Rowans face lit up. In our house, momma Christie cooked, and I baked. And it was well known by our children, whoever baked cookies with me got two of what my children considered the greatest things in the world. Firstly they got to lick the batter off the various cooking implements. And secondly, they got to decorate cookies.

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Rowan got to lick the spatula and he let Emmy lick the spoon. And by time the cookies had cooled, the boys had come in. So I let every one decorate

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and eat one cookie and I put the rest in the jar undecorated. Because really, you can only clean so much icing off the ceiling before it becomes a right pain in the- er... buttock.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: ZanarkandFayth on July 30, 2008, 07:41:02 pm
Aw, so sweet. I love this to death, really!

And this update was just in time for my birthday! I can't wait for more, so hurry, hurry, hurry!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: rtizaoui on July 30, 2008, 07:43:01 pm
I like your story! I can hardly wait to see what happens next! Fantastic job!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on July 30, 2008, 07:56:34 pm
Yay! Happy birthday!
 :violent1: oops, wrong smiley.

 :occasion::occasion::occasion: that's better


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on July 31, 2008, 08:50:32 am
Yay!  Still sad for Rowan, but yay!
We are all forcing you to update soon!!!!  Or more like politely asking.  Whichever.


Title: Chapter 8-part 1, Hardly the best of christmases
Post by: Devomuffins on August 01, 2008, 08:16:03 am
Collin and Joel had fallen asleep beside me, in the hospital waiting room.

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I couldn't sleep. I could still hear the sirens in my ears, and in my minds eye, I could still see paramedics lifting the limp tiny body into the ambulance.
"Mommy, I'm scared."

"He's gonna be okay Rowan, I promise."




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Please note: i can no longer edit my pics because photo bucket crapped out on me.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nydamoon1000 on August 01, 2008, 04:02:42 pm
Nice chapter! :)
Roawn is back in the hospital!?
I hope he'll be ok, I don't want you to get rid of him!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 01, 2008, 05:29:50 pm
"Mommy, I'm scared."

"He's gonna be okay Rowan, I promise."

you should note that.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on August 01, 2008, 06:08:52 pm
O.o wonder who it is


Title: Chapter 8-part 2, Hardly the best of christmases
Post by: Devomuffins on August 03, 2008, 08:51:15 am
Ten hours earlier

It was the kids last week of school before christmas. The shops all had their decorations up, and the boys christmas lists hung on the fridge. They usually get almost everything. Christie has a great job and I love being a nurse, (in my spare time I could go help sara with the new babies) so we had arrganed our scheduale so that one of us works late while the other takes time off, and then we switch. It was my week off and cold season so I was really apprehensive about sending Rowan to school. But he wanted to go to the christmas party and they were makeing cards for each other. And anyways Emmy had already caught so I gave his puffer and some tissues and his coloring book (because he has to stay in at recess during the coldest monthes) and told him to try not to sit near the kids who have colds. I wish I'd said that to all my kids. At lunch time I was unsucessfuly trying to get Emmy to rest.

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 She couldn't lie down because her nose was stuffed up and it meant to breathe, she would need to take out her paci, and the look on her face informed me that wasn't about to happen. I then picked up the ringing phone to discover that Collin was sick and I needed to pick him up. So I bundled Emmy into the car and picked Collin up.

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He did have a temperture, and their docter had told me pennicillin would help, so I got it out and gave him some. He fell asleep on the couch before the others turned up. And I had a feeling they had all gotten it. So I made orange and cranberry juice with toast for snack instead of milk and cookies. Upon getting off the bus Joel and Jonathan then told me their throats hurt and Rowan showed me all the pictures he colored.

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 Rowan ate some of the toast, and I put Joel and Jonathan in the living room with Collin. Jonathans temperture was 38c so I gave him some penicillan as well and went to check Rowans temperture to make sure he hadn't caught anything. I never even made it to the kitchen. Joel yelled for me saying that Jonathan couln't breathe.

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 I tried to keep him breathing while Rowan called an ambulance.

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Then the parmedics rushed in, surronding him. Rowan and Joel just held on to me, while I burst into tears.

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 I should have kept track of who I had given it to before, I had never even thought to check if he was allergic. I just sat there, in the waiting room, wondering why I even deserved to be a mom.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on August 03, 2008, 03:49:32 pm
O.o i'm allergic to penicillian too.. :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 03, 2008, 03:53:53 pm
Aww, poor you, when did you find out?


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on August 05, 2008, 04:06:21 pm
Eek!  First Rowan and now Jonathan???  How terrible!
I hope this works out okay... :(


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Glamily on August 05, 2008, 08:26:52 pm
i've known since birth.. i got the allergy from my father.. he almost died as a baby when they gave it to him :(


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 06, 2008, 09:07:36 am
Yeah, my cousin is three he has the same thing. they found out when he was one.


Title: Chapter 9, Holding on
Post by: Devomuffins on August 06, 2008, 09:37:58 am
A nurse walked into the waiting room.
"You can see him now."
"Thank you." I was so happy that he was all right. The boys were all asleep, and Christie was dozing on the couch, so I walked in to Jonathan's room on my own. He was awake, drinking a cup of orange juice.
"Mommy!" he practically yelled when he saw me, spraying juice all over the blanket.

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"Oh bunny," I hugged him carefully.
"I missed you, but the nurses are nice. Shelly told me about her new puppy when was having my needle."

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Shelly giggled. I recognized her, she had gone med school with me. She walked over to fix Jonathan's IV.
"He's really sweet, you know." She smiled and walked out. I hugged Jonathan again. "Do you want anything baby?"

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"Can momma Christie come see me?"
"Of course." It felt so good to feel safe again. And this time, I hoped it would last.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on August 06, 2008, 08:48:15 pm
Yay so far so good!  :D  
And will stay good or I'll bring in the double chocolate chip!!! Ha ha!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 07, 2008, 07:18:50 am
Okay okay... *Cowers in corner clutching typewriter*


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: sophilajoli on August 13, 2008, 08:28:32 pm
Or you downloaded sucks her(it)?


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: nikki.g on August 14, 2008, 02:36:54 am
good story!! chapters are a bit short tho but otherwise i really lyk it! i lyk the name edward...wonder if anyone will pick up why lol


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 14, 2008, 08:18:15 am
Thanks Nikki! the next chapter will be longer I promise. (and if someone steals medagic's baking license i'll put in a plot twist.)

Sophilajoli: um, sorry, what were you trying to say there?


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: sophilajoli on August 15, 2008, 10:39:57 am
Suck them for baby


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Medagic on August 15, 2008, 01:05:39 pm
FINE.  Add the plot twist.  I promise I won't hurl any pastries at you... yet.
;)


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on August 15, 2008, 01:12:54 pm
That's okay (I was too lazy to write one) :D


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: JacobM on August 16, 2008, 04:33:01 pm
I love this story. Please update soon. Johnathon and Rowan are so adorable.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: arielle22 on August 21, 2008, 08:27:54 pm
I love this story.Yor kids are so cute.


Title: Chapter 10, Better days
Post by: Devomuffins on August 30, 2008, 03:13:20 pm
Natasha slid the batch of muffins into the oven, and then stepped through the door into the warm sunlight, that was just rising, over the horizon. Then she quickly crept inside, to find that Christie was already getting ready. “I’ll get the boys eggs, you get Emmy’s,” She whispered quickly. Easter always had to be a surprise. The boys just loved it. And now Emmy was old enough to enjoy it too. Edward was too old for the surprises. Natasha regretted that when he was the boys’ age they had been so busy with babies that there wasn’t as much time to celebrate. “Hey, Mom.” Natasha whirled around, startled to her Edward’s voice (he was rarely up this early.) “What is it hon?” she was slightly worried as to why he was up at a time as early as this. “Um, I wanted to go out tonight.”
“Where to?” Natasha was relived to know that nothing was wrong.
“Just like, out.”
“Who with?”
“Um Shari.”
“Shari?”
“Yeah, I wanted to, like, take her out for Easter.”
“Oh, baby. You don’t have to ask my permission to do that.”
“Thanks mom!” Edward ran off up the stairs. Natasha could not help but giggle. Edward had really bonded with Shari, and she was glad to see it was working out.  Christie had just put the last basket in place when Collin and Joel walked in. Their little faces lit up. And their brothers ran in, and they all yelled a bit and then asked Christie if they could eat their eggs and Christie of course, said yes, because what is Easter, without chocolate for breakfast. Then Edward came down carrying Emmy, who squealed with delight and spent the next hour playing with the wrapping paper. All in all, it was a good Easter.

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Pics coming, I promise. :angel:


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: sofia97733 on August 31, 2008, 02:25:43 pm
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Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on September 28, 2008, 08:56:36 am
Hey all. I'm really sorry to have gotten so incredibly far behind. I promise a update this week but it will be one of my last.


Title: Me too
Post by: southernwomanOK on October 05, 2008, 03:43:16 pm
Quote from: R.I.P_Jessica;1326205
O.o i'm allergic to penicillian too.. :D


Me too, my mom was given it at 5 (in 1956) and had an allergic reaction (her throat closed up, she couldn't breath) thank god for old fast acting country doctors. My cousin is (mom's half brother's son) allergic to it too, they gave him penacillin (at about 3) and he broke out in a HUGE red rash from head to toe. I guess that allergy runs threw my grandpa. I'm allergic to lots of stuff though....except posion ivy and oak I dunno wtf that's about lol.


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Sane Enough on November 07, 2008, 08:32:00 pm
Great story! I love it!


Title: Gifted with grace- Chapter 9 up!
Post by: Devomuffins on November 08, 2008, 09:46:44 am
Um, I really never know what to do when an old story pops back up. To anyone who is still waiting on that update, please consult the first post of "The Fae miller half-legacy" for some insight on why this update probably won't ever turn up.


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