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Alright i werent sure if i could even post this here, because i thought it might be a wee bit over the top, see i am a adult fanfiction write, when i procrastinate RL infront of the computer. But after i read a lot of stories here, i figured that mine werent worse than that, i mean.. like those teen struggle stories, there are some heavy issues there.. im not dogging it or nothing.. i liked those stories, this is just kinda an intro to the warnings to this story, i warn for good messure, not because i think its a rancid story, but if its too much, i will just take it off here again. - alright there is gay stuff, teen stuff, prostetution and teen angst gallore.. and i must say it was that 'all alone' challenge that set me off, even if i cant participate i CAN use the plotbunny that came to me!  - There is insinuation of something naughty, but it got the blurr going on, and well does it help any if i say that it was a staged piccy?

alright i will stop yakking and get to the story.



part 1 - Early

Aww.. that's so sad! It's a great story so far. Keep going! You've got some real story telling talent! ^^

even if i misspelled 'fanfiction writer' in the intro, that is what i do when im bored :) - this stuff was just so impulsive that i didnt even considder getting it betaed..

But thank you SO SO much for the sweet FB, and oh it gets happier tho, the story i mean, atleast that is what i had planned.

REMEMBER THE WARNINGS RIGHT??  oh yea and i uploaded it at my homepage too, the direct link is 'HERE'



part 2 - opus (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain2.htm)

This is a heartbreaking story the sex is there but without it the story doesn't make any sense you write with a lot of heart I enjoyed reading this Lady will definate look forward to more.

Alright i think i need to explain a little before you read this chapter, point one, i am from a contry where the legal age for intercourse is 15, still this story/chapter has more than one hint of adult/teen situations, and even if the legal age here is 15, adults are not supposed to just freak out and molest big kids, and neither am i trying to say that its alright at all, what i am trying to say is that these adults use a very confused kid, but since i do state that he is 17 in this chapter, its not as grose as it could be, i still just thought id rather explain myself than get flamed to no end, and maybe its a cultural difference or something, but here its pretty normal to loose your virginity sometime between 15 and 17. Again, i am not saying that its alright for adults over 18 to engage in any kid of sexual activity with one under that age.

ageeed? alright lets get on with the story.



sorry i had to delete it all and just post link to my homepage, but these are directlinks, that just take you to the chapter, nothing else. .. gotta watch out for my bandwith and all..

part 3 - colt. (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain3.htm)

It's awful the way people just go after you because of something you post/write. -nods- Well, I guess it's pretty normal for people here to lose their virginity at a young age too. My friend's friends are all 13-15 and none of them are virgins. It's kind of sad actually, but I like this story and the characters are definitely older than 11. I think it's safe to say as well that the people don't just walk in the house and take what they want, it's more of the prostitution business and can't really be called molestation.

I don't know if this is happening to anyone else, but I can't even get to the site without a DNS error.

Yeah, I'm getting it too! Lol. :)

hmm didn't work for me either...

Whew ... I thought I had to beat up my computer LOL

thanks for the fb guys...
 
and well there seem to be a problem at the site... hmm... here is the link to my sims lj dolly-riot (http://dolly-riot.livejournal.com/tag/story+of+cain) but the pictures from chapter 3 seems to be gone there too.. darnit!! i hope it resolved itself tomorrow.. otherwise i guess i was just not fast enough with the damn bandwith control.
 
edit: ALRIGHT i checked myself and the two first chapters was no problem and they showed fine, but the third give me a dns error too... so is it the same for you? is it just page 3 thats messed up? i should maybe just try and upload it again... odd really cuz it worked fine when i uploaded it.

It's fixed!!!  :D
 
YAY!
 
*dashes off to read*

It worked for me as well.. ^^ Great chapter!

thank you guys :)

And im very sorry i didnt use my head and watched my language.. eek.. i didnt mean to get in trouble there.. i actually try and watch my language and my graficness in the story too, knowing i am uploading it here.

im glad y'all like it :grin:

great update!  oh my the dad picture in the outtakes...hilarious! LOL!

poor cain seems nothing can get him out of his cycle of bad luck...

nah he seems to suffer from bad luck, and stupidity. on the other hand if he was clever and lucky, the stroy would have been very short ;)

^^ Great new chapter. Even if he is pretty stupid (in his cute, awful way) it's hard not to feel sorry for him. He's had a hard life, and still hasn't figured himself out yet.

One word to describe your story: WOW!!!!

Wow..I write adult yaoi fanfiction and sim stories and how you put both togther and made it work..*jaw drops* Please do keep writing my dear, I will be here to read..

I am your biggest fan * slaps heart with your name on it on his chest and parades around the room like a moron*

You are on library of moria..*dies* I love you! *sounds like rabid fan girl* What..I Am! No....wait..take out the girl and insert boy, their much better! *ish your biggest rabid fan boy* Hehehe *attacks you with kisses*

thanks girls :) i have the pictures for the next chapter and i did plan on looking on the text today. im really glad you like it.

@nyx. thank you ever so much!!

@Nathanialroyale: i normally write adult stories, and this is very very toned down because there are kids here, and generally alot of kids in the sims comm. about library of moria i am actually the webmistress, owning the site with another girl. :) didnt thikn this was the place to link to there, i was even not sure i could link to my own site. Allright you won me over, i promise to go work on the update first, and write Final fantasy later. 'smiles'

Alright finally got my act together and did an update, beware of wangst and other corny stuff. 'grins' i found my old Evenesense cd, i couldent help it.

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/bannermrhunterpart5.jpg)

Chapter 5 - Mr Hunter (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain5.htm)

Btw, Earlys brother is actually named Elvis, but i just refferd to him as Junior for now. I havent played more since this, so if anyone has any brilliant idea for me, im all ears.

Oh..who's in detention..Not Adrian he has a good life now..hmmmmmmm....
Oh the cliff hangerness!
No ideas :( My brain is stretched to the brink for my own stuff ^_~

How do you proffesionally make the pics look so darn pretty!! *sucks at photoshopping*

Yah I began a story on libraryofmoria but I haven't updated in..awhile..I'm stuck right now and plus I'm trying to finish up a chapter in my novel as I am being poked with hot pokers by people.

i used to skin for sims1, so i am used to mess about with photoshop and paintshop. but this is all grain filter tho..

well then i should officially whip you i guess :P - (to finish that story on LOM)

grain filter eh? *goes to check if he can find that in his photoshop*

What photoshop do you use? I have 9 and looked in help and nothing :(

I do want to keep going with it, It just did not come out as i wanted so I will have to rewrite parts *sighs and yelps from the many hot pokers*

Great new chapter! I absolutely love, love, love this story! ^^
heh. I have no idea what you two are talking about, but it sounds life something I'd be banned from the computer for life for looking up.

its an adult fanfiction archive that i have, so...  

thanks for your fb :)

Great update Lady!  Love Early crazy brother how did you get his gut so big?  Is he pregnant? LOL!  Oh and the outtakes are great love them!  I'm betting it's Early in jail...

@ Nathanialroyale; sorry i didnt see you asked me something, i was in kinda a hurry when i answered that post. i think mine is version 6, cuz im lame like that. but in my version, if you click on uhm is it called effects? i dont remember right now, there you find something that is called film grain (on version6) that is NOT the one you want, you need to go further down the drop down menu and find 'texture' and there you have an option called 'grain' and you can up and down the intensity and contrast as you please. i hope that helped some atleast even if my photoshop is older than dirt.

@Starlucid: Elvis junior was just set as fat from the beginning, i guess its just because he wears skintight clothes it makes him look preggers. and well im off to fix up the next 4 chapters which i took pictures for right now, so you'll get the answer soon.

thank you ALL for reading, that is so cool that anybody even bothers.

Yah I found it on mine but I'm thinking of getting GIMP to, so I can try things for photoediting because it's alot more like photoshop and all the tutorials are for photoshop.

What level of grain do you use on yours? It looks so awesome ^_^

My friend Des made a brilliant tutoral on how to doll in GIMP, even if you dont doll, i think its a good way to get to know the program.  - having said that i can honestly say i never tried GIMP, i use photoshop6 and pain(t)shop7.  About the grain, i use the contrast on 50, and the grain (is it called pressure?) on between 19 and 21, depending on the piccy.

Thanks, I'm using it for the model pics I'm making for this competition thingy I'm in, and screenieing things instead of just camera photo taking works wonders to :)

I think with all this new found knowledge I may go back and try to do my own sim story again.

Their you inspired me!

Yah I am going to try, I started doing the pics and graining them. When I get it done (chapter one) I'll be sure to tell you!

Prolouge is up ^_^

*snuggles*

@ Nathanialroyale: I'm glad i inspired you :D

and without any blabber really, here is part 6. girls and germs, meet Liam teh purty. (i think he is atleast) - and i want to warn for partial nutidy and language. i go through great lenghts to hide groins behind stuff and cutting off the pictures and so, so its nothing major at all!

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner6.jpg)

PART 6 - LIAM (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain6.htm)

Great update as usual somehow lonely uncle cain doesn't fit his personality I'm sure that will change soon.

no not really.. ;)

Who knows the character better then the author?

I only saw two pics with sky but it didn't matter, the pics were gorgeous as always. Can't wait for more!

I didn't even see any pictures with sky! haha. The chapter was so great I forgot all about looking for any! xD
Wow, I love Liam, Dark and mysterous. And Harlen is so cute grown up! I love the fact that he has a crush on Cain, that's going to cause a lot of problems in the future, I'm guessing. ^^

oh yea Harlen is going to stick around ;) causing havoc and some good too tho 'smiles' - i like Liam a lot too, even if he is not completely honest (like that was a surprise)

No one's completely honest to Cain..although is Cain completely honest to anyone else??

not at all! :shh: funny tho as i was about to upload a 'cain is a bastard really' chapter.

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner7.jpg)

Ruby & Jade (part 7) (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain7.htm)

REMEMBER THE WARNINGS - adult themes!

Poor Cain..everyone treats him like a hoe..but then he goes and does that so you think he's one and you feel bad for it..and bad Cain! Your confusing me and I don't like it! *humph*

honestly Cain has no idea how to behave in the romantic department, he nevre had anyone show him how its supposed to be done. that is about to change tho ;)

I'm confused....why doesn't he just stay with Early?  It's obvious they love each other?  Cain is complicated...lol!

I think personally because Early is still........with other guys for money (It seems that way..maybe wrong) and Cain's dad would kill him even though Cain is an adult and should be allowed to be with who he wants.

Run on sentence much..

I haven't read this chapter fully yet, but the first half looks good! ^^ heheh. My parents are home, so I'll have to check back tomorrow when they're no longer hovering over me.

because Early will never really be his. and besides that would mean the story ended right there ;) and Nathanialroyale is right. early is a very confused young man, and Cain however confused too is well aware what kind of life he wants, and searches all he can for someone, but still has this childish crush on early, which both of them knows will lead to nothing.

did a little video about Cain ;) and well this is called  'cain makes up his mind' and so is a major spoiler, and takes place after chapter 11. just so you know.. i am aware that im not very good at this video thing, but one time gotta be the first - right?

cain makes up his mind on youtube (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_epETtrVzeg)

heh. I just finished reading ch.7 I love the outtakes! "*snort*" is a very suitable commentary for the Early and Cain pic. xD

I so want Cain and Early to be together. They seem so made to be together. Grarr at Cain for ever doubting what they have is real.

thanks ;) well since Nathaniel did it, i can do it too - Analyze my characters :P well i think (read 'know') that Early lives his life the only way he knows, and cant break that cycle yet, and not with cain. they just have too many memories together, and i think that cain knows that even if hes a complete idiot otherwise, then he knows that Early will lead to nothing but heartache.

*sqwees at her calling him Nate then coughs* Sorry that's a petname from bf's so it's strange coming from a respected female figure in my life.

Yah he may not know alot about love but he knows that going with Early is only going to be bitter sweet in the end. I anaylize everybody ^_^ I've over analyized myself even.

hah, well.. it felt natural what can i say? - your user name is so f'ing long! - ;)

Then call me Nathan dear! As my user name is my first and last name so of course it's long! *pokes his Azzy*

LOL would you believe that i never noticed that ?  

:iamwithstupid11:


'laughs' its true, i never even thought it could be that easy.

^^ I love the name Nathaniel. I don't know why for sure.. I guess it's mostly the way it sounds. Not like my name. Evangeline. >< bleh. It's all french-ish and sounds awful when you say it in english.

I agree about the Early part. It just be too troubling for Cain to be with him, knowing he would probably never change what he does.

you guys should try going through childhood being named Ulrikke (Ulricka) that sounds like a movie star in the adult business. O_o - changed it to Rikke since i have never been called anything else.. still lame, the english version of that is  Riki or Ricki.. i mean .. urgh..

and i like both Evangeline & Nathaniel, those are very pretty names.

Is there another chapter coming....I can't wait to read more.... I bow to you....

yea sometime this weekend i guess. ive been messing with making sims movies.. 'procrastinating so many other things'

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner8.jpg)

DAWN (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain8.htm)

i noticed some iffyness in some places, but im too tired to fix it now, but im gonna do so in the morning. :) enjoy y'all.

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@NathanielRoyale - sorry about the name thing, i didnt mean to be a *beep*

Baby what do you mean about the name thing? It doesn't seem to me you have done anything wrong to me..*blinks*

Also..I love you all over again..I thought I had Cain scoped and you changed so much..but it didn't seem out of character for him, it's so hard to do that! Tray amazing my dear.

I kind of like your name, it sounds foreign, exotic. Is cool. ^^

squee-ness! ^^
ee! I'm so glad Cain got Harlen. He's just too cute. Oh, I was meaning to ask you.. where do you getmost of your male clothing? I am always looking for good textured clothing for that body shape. All my guys have used up my current male wardrobe already, so I deperately need some new clothes for them.

@Nathaniel: i meant that i didnt mean to just fling nicks around without asking. and thank you, yea i got Cain back on course here, he wont stay there for long, for some reason true emotions make him freak all out.. its safe to watch the little video now tho ;) all thats in there is that he chooses Harlen over the others.

@Elven song; most this stuff is from mts2, but some is from a site i i dont remember what is called and for some wacked up reason its not in my favorites.. hmm gotta go hunt for that again.. but i dont think that anything but Early's set is from there.  and yea i rooted for Harlen too! hes such a sweet sim.

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner9.jpg)

chapter 9 - Alexander (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain9.htm)

I tried to shape up on the grammar, but as i said several times its not perfect, nor is the spelling, i am not native english speaking.

Cain..*sigh* I want to hit him and yet hug him at the same time. Gods I love him for screwing with my head ^_^

I mean come on he screwed around with Early, Liam..what is Harlen supposed to except? Stupid Cain *shakes head*

heh, yea and well this whole confusion thing is just about to get a whole lot worse.. karma is a bitch Cain :P

Aww. All I can say is.. poor everybody! >< Life's dealing everyone a big pile.

Oh, I went over to a friend's on the weekend and told her about this story. She read the first chapter or so out loud. It was pretty funny, she kept trying to sound out all the typo-ed words. xD She likes it so far though, in fact she likes the whole idea a lot. I just told her to look out for the chapters when Cain's an adult, they're even better. ^^

ahahhahahaha if shes gonna read all tyops out loud shes in for a ride man 'grins' - i actually tried to catch most iffy stuff in this chapter, but i can see i made two mistakes that i know of.

thank you for your fb :) (hugs)

eek i realise i am thread dumping and all, but i really just wanted to say that if anyone wonders, i didnt abandon the story or anything, i actually finished it now i gotta write it. - and i will do so within the next week, im really sorry if you waited or anything, but i got caught up in something else. 'bad Az, no cookie'

thanks for your patience.

Aw. It's okay. -gives cookie-
^^ I was wondering if you had died or gone and holed yourself up somewhere! xD
Nice to see you're still there. I can't wait to see the next ch!

thanks :) and without more delay, heres chapter 10, with all its typos and bad spelling.

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner10.jpg)

Chapter 10 - Trouble (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain10.htm)

*sigh* Stupid stupid Cain, He never learns..though neither do I..*shifty eyes*

I still love my early ^_^ He's cute with any hair style!

Sheesh. Silly Cain. He and Harlen remind me of me and my best friend.. except, minus the engagement and 'other' things. She always argues with me or does something stupid, and then expects me to come back and follow her around like a little lost puppy. Unfortunately, I usually give in to her and end up doing that anyways.. but, it's the same general concept. =D

thanks guys.. yea he is a stupid git, Cain i mean. but he'll get his wake up call soon ;)

I'm just wondering if we're going to be getting an update anytime soon because I miss this story and it's character's so much!! >< I've been going over the old chapters to sustain myself.

i know, and im so sorry...  i did post some sort of explanation in my sims2 lj. but RL got crazy, thats all.. it does that sometimes. But i actually did get as far the day before yesterday as to sort the pictures, now i need to write something, and i had intended to do it yesterday, but i ended up playing the sims, and not doing what i was supposed to do.

The kids have a whole week off school next week (easter) and so i PROMISE that it will be done there!

I love the story!!! I been adicted to it!! Keep up the good work!!!

Thanks Gothic baby :)

And here is chapter 11, as i promised delivered in the easter 'smiles' - im REALLY sorry for the delay, but i cant remember if i told you guys that i actually have 3 kids and a husband to keep track off too.. but that is no excuse for such a massive delay.. SORRY!!

I wanted to say that i made some sims videos, non related to this story actually, but just in case you were bored, you can find them at my Sims2 lj (http://dolly-riot.livejournal.com/profile)  - And without more delay.. heres the chapter, i hope you like it, and that it was worth waiting for, bad grammar, syntax and all..

(http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/sims/banner11.jpg)

::GAME OVER:: (http://www.forgottenjuliet.net/storyofcain11.htm)

Enjoy.

u have to update if u don't i will die of not knowing!!:D

heh, thanks blissmoon. And i will, i realise there has been some waiting time here, and well.. the main reason is that its so long ago i shot these piccys that i need to go through a massive process of sorting them out for a chapter, trying to remember what i wanted in the story line. I did however finish the story, picturewise that is.. or almost, i have an epilogue i wanted to make. actually im gonna start up the game after i post this, and snap it *smiles* - But i suspect another update within the next 14 days.

oh yea @ Elven_song. I took an extra look at the clothes that my sims wore in the pictures, and its all from mts2. exept for the red striped thing Early is wearing, that is from some site that only has male sims wear.. cant remember its name, and i actually think its closed down, i will look into that tho, because they had tons of cool stuff.  (ok i searched for the link now) to include it in this post, but i seem to have lost it. but some stuff is from HERE (http://coris.byus.net/) Which is an amazing site :)

thnx :worship:  this is such a kewl story and Cain got what he deserved i think but he is still awesomely kewl!!:rabbit:

haha thanks..

Thinking of it, i figured id post a link to a little preveiw i made of the next project.. im gonna upload it here, but i figuered it was kinda lame to make a whole thread for it already.

so here it is, it has no title yet tho.. lol  The story without a title. (http://dolly-riot.livejournal.com/66135.html)

Aw. -bawls eyes out-
That was so sad. It's over? Nooo! Although, seeing Cain go through a lovesick-ness cycle can only make a story for so long. I'm gonna miss Harlen. He was so cute. -sniff-

Thank you for the link! I actually found some of the outfits you've used before on MTS2. I was quite happy about that.
I can't wait to start reading your new story! Willow looks so cute and it looks like his story will be interesting! ^^

Don't worry if you get slow, some of us will stick around for awhile. ^^' My friend wishes you the best and she's really getting into the story. I'm sure she'll be sad when she sees the latest chapter.

yea good male sim clothing are hard to come by. Well im not sure that Cain will let Harlen run off like that tho. but yea we only have like 2 chapters to go tho. since i decided to cut it short. And an little epilogue about EArly, i almost forgot that chapter.

and Willow is the wife, Moon, is the bloke the story is about ;)

Ah! -smacks head- I knew I mixed something up there. Yeah, Moon looks cute is what I meant to say. lol. It takes me awhile to remember names of characters. Whenever I start watching a new anime or show with my friend we talk about them and I'm like "Who's that again?" or "Wait, which one is he?" until at least the fifth or sixth episode. xD So bad with names. Anyways, yes, your story looks really interesting!

I'm glad to hear it's not going to just end like that. But I knew you wouldn't leave it at such a point. And Yay! Early! ^U^

man o man! i just found and read all of this today. its fantastic! will wait patiently for an update. and the sims, they're so gorgeous.

sweet! thanks

ok i never thought id actually get around to it! but i found the pictures for the lost chapters of the story of cain. and so i bring you.

(http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/azcracker/Cain/bannercain.jpg)
part 1. (http://dolly-riot.livejournal.com/74898.html#cutid1)

(http://i123.photobucket.com/albums/o318/azcracker/Cain/banner2.jpg)
part 2. (http://dolly-riot.livejournal.com/75008.html#cutid1)

Aw. Now it really is over, yes? x.x Did something happen with your game or you just couldn't manage to go through and actually write up the end?

Thanks for posting the last bit anyways just to finish it up. I didn't think Cain would be alone without getting a little ass in between making up. tsk. xD
Love Liam's new hairdo though, 'tis hot! =]
Didn't expect him to have siblings (er, half siblings) but his brother's pretty cute. haha. Well Cain better keep things together, for Aspen's sake at least!
=D Good job on a great story! You've definitely come a long way in your storytelling. -thumbs up-

I can totally see Cain boning the preschool teacher, christ I love and loathe him!

Thanks guys!!! And even if something DID happen to my game, i completely forgot what i was writing, and thats why i let it end like this.. but now that i ventured back into writing sims stuff, i might give Cain a side story (Boning Aspens preschool teacher.. lolz you know what i mean) - i dont know, i love Cain, and icant see him settle down either. so i am pretty sure i will return to him at some point.