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Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 04, 2007, 02:43:35 am (http://i233.photobucket.com/albums/ee81/divamoss10/Untitled-1.png)
ANDREE BEAUFORT IS AN HEIR TO A GOLD FORTUNE. DELANCY MARTIN COMES FROM THE ROUGH PARTS OF PLEASANT VIEW. WHAT SEEMS TO BE A NORMAL LIFE FOR THESE TWO TEENS GO UP IN FLAMES WHEN DELANCY GETS PREGNANT. ANDREE IS FORCED TO CHOOSE BETWEEN HIS BABY AND HIS SHARE OF HIS FAMILY'S FORTUNE. HE CHOOSES HIS BABY AND IS FORCED TO MOVE OUT OF HIS FAMILY MANSION AND IN WITH DELANCY WHO LIVES BY HERSELF IN A ONE BEDROOM FLAT. THE TWO LOVEBIRDS COULDNT BE MORE IN LOVE AND ARE HAPPY TO START THEIR VERY ON FAMILY, BUT SOMETHING HAPPENS IN THAT ONE BEDROOM FLAT THAT WILL BOND THESE TWO TOGETHER FOREVER TILL THE END OF TIME......... This is my very first atempt to make a story so any tips that would make this story better will be apprieciated. Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: xHannaHx on September 04, 2007, 05:20:23 pm wow, sounds great! cannot wait to read the next update/preview. keep going with this concept it works
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 04, 2007, 06:30:42 pm thanks xHannahHx
i will try to get the story going this week before i start school Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: dnj121006 on September 06, 2007, 02:41:40 pm sound good, put your story in your siggy not put it in every comment you write :) just a tip
cant wait for the update Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 07, 2007, 12:35:31 am thnx dnj121006 I want to get the story started but my game is acting so slow i get fustrated and jus get off
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: KatrinaandTiff on September 08, 2007, 08:55:50 am That is just a great start!!!
More more more. - This is when I say I scream for ice cream but for I read for more fun!!! Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 08, 2007, 07:07:02 pm i dnt knw when i will be able to start this story i hve so much stuff to do
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: KatrinaandTiff on September 08, 2007, 08:36:47 pm Try harder like Lollipop Girl does her best for her first time fans!!!
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: KatrinaandTiff on September 08, 2007, 08:37:41 pm Quote from: Divamoss1;924614 i dnt knw when i will be able to start this story i hve so much stuff to do No offense Diva.:toothy4: Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 09, 2007, 01:02:12 am no offense taken katirnaandtiff
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: KatrinaandTiff on September 09, 2007, 04:40:12 pm Thanks.:angel:
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Twentys on September 14, 2007, 06:45:19 pm You Could Add A Plot Andree's EX wife comes to kill his delancy martin for stealing her husband... or social service take the baby away and delancy has to work hard to show shes a caring and loving mother aswell as a loving caring wife :P
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Astral Faery on September 15, 2007, 12:46:30 am I like the way this starts and am interested to see where you will take it.
Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 15, 2007, 12:05:14 pm Quote from: Twentys;934561 You Could Add A Plot Andree's EX wife comes to kill his delancy martin for stealing her husband... or social service take the baby away and delancy has to work hard to show shes a caring and loving mother aswell as a loving caring wife :P thank you for the good ideas Title: A CRIME OF PASSION Post by: Divamoss1 on September 15, 2007, 12:05:58 pm Quote from: Astral Faery;935137 I like the way this starts and am interested to see where you will take it. thank you |