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Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 15, 2006, 11:05:20 am So here's my first story - further chapters to follow as they are completed - it starts off based around the tv show Big Brother... but it turns out... Big Brother isn't watching after all...
(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/title2.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 15, 2006, 11:05:58 am Chapter 01: A Week Since Nigel
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Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 15, 2006, 11:08:11 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-011.jpg)
(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-012.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-013.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-014.jpg) -end of chapter 2- Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on July 15, 2006, 08:04:37 pm You all should really read this story. Kere is fantastic!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Persephone on July 15, 2006, 08:21:00 pm More!!! :) Ok, I'm a closet Big Brother fan...when hubby allows me to rot my brain as he calls it lol.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 15, 2006, 09:01:14 pm aww thank you - I like Big Brother too:) I'll post chapter 3 soon!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Jessco99 on July 15, 2006, 10:21:48 pm omg.. wow this truely is amazing... i like it.!
original idea! and i am a HUGE big brother fan! in my country BB is on atm! XD lol Title: End Transmission Post by: confide on July 16, 2006, 08:45:11 am Wow i LOVE it , can't wait for more! You did a fantastic job :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 16, 2006, 09:32:41 am Thanks everybody for taking time to read and comment - I'm glad you enjoy - time for another update - Chapters 3 and 4 for you :)
Chapter 03: Break Out (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-015.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-016.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-017.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-018.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-019.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-020.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-021.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-022.jpg) ...to be continued... (of course) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 16, 2006, 09:34:35 am Chapter 04: Camera Run
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Title: Wonderful Post by: platinum on July 16, 2006, 07:41:05 pm So over the top, I love it. :)
:love7: Title: End Transmission Post by: Kielen on July 16, 2006, 10:45:52 pm I'm having a serious Dr. Who moment here...
Awesome job, kere!! Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 17, 2006, 12:43:21 am Thank you :)
(Dr Who is another tv show I love!) Title: End Transmission Post by: Kielen on July 17, 2006, 01:03:55 am Do you watch the new one? The actor they had for first season was AMAZING!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on July 17, 2006, 01:59:21 am ^doctor who is good....shame its off air again until autumn *sighs*
This is well good, I m literally sitting on the edge of my seat. Dont leave me hanging here too long! Title: End Transmission Post by: mainegal32 on July 17, 2006, 10:09:24 am Very good story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Jagerjaques on July 17, 2006, 01:17:30 pm Cool Story! Keep it coming.
Title: End Transmission Post by: JellyBeans on July 17, 2006, 01:52:41 pm Its brilliant! lol talk about leaving us on a cliff hanger... pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese update sooooooooooooon :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 18, 2006, 12:01:35 am Thank you! :) - new update:
Chapter 05: Snow and Sean (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-033.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-034.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-035.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-036.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 18, 2006, 12:02:21 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-037.jpg)
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-041.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-042.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-043.jpg) -end of chapter 5- Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on July 18, 2006, 12:07:43 am No matter how many times I read it I love this story and can't wait for it to finish. *smoochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: mainegal32 on July 18, 2006, 10:24:07 am I LOVE this story. I can't wait for another chapter. A million thoughts are going through my mind about what happened in that room. Great story and thanks for sharing.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Persephone on July 18, 2006, 08:44:28 pm I just got home from Tampa, and the first thing I did after showering was check for an update :) Great story Kere!
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~Angel~ on July 19, 2006, 07:00:25 am Oh wow!! Thanks Kathy for putting a link to this in your sig, this is a great story, hope you update soon!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: wkndplaya on July 19, 2006, 02:12:10 pm Very nice indeed :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: jaccirocker on July 19, 2006, 02:38:51 pm This is my first story and it's great I love how everything the expressions and scripting all works together. I can't wait for the end. Great work Kere !
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 19, 2006, 06:18:35 pm Thanks everyone for your kind comments, I appreciate you taking time to follow it, and Im glad you enjoy it :) - here's the next chapter...
Chapter 06: Soundstage (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-044.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-045.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-046.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-047.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-048.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-049.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-050.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-051.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-052.jpg) -end of chapter 6- Title: End Transmission Post by: hexywoman79 on July 20, 2006, 05:17:33 am Wow what a great story so far! I actually hate Big Brother and never watch it cuz it seems like a load of crap, but I am thoroughly enjoying your story! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the awesome work!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Allemande on July 20, 2006, 09:12:42 am Great story :) more more more!
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on July 20, 2006, 02:00:41 pm oh cool! this is gonna be one good story.....i dont like BB, but this has got me hooked!! hee hee.....*waits patiently for next bit*
Title: End Transmission Post by: RMarques on July 20, 2006, 08:00:10 pm Your skills are just amazing. I can't wait to read the rest!
Title: End Transmission Post by: oddball011 on July 21, 2006, 12:25:30 pm more!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Jude1 on July 21, 2006, 12:43:21 pm This is brilliant.Can't wait for the next episode.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on July 22, 2006, 12:52:38 am I need more!!! more! more! more! It's great!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 22, 2006, 07:40:14 am Thanks to everyone who reads and comments :) Here's the next instalment:
Chapter 07: The Diner (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-053.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-054.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-055.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-056.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-057.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-058.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-059.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-060.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-061.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-062.jpg) -end of chapter 7- Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on July 22, 2006, 08:14:00 am This is absolutely brilliant, and it must have taken you ages to get the pictures just right! Can't wait for the next chapter :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: mainegal32 on July 22, 2006, 01:40:12 pm Excellent. I love it! Great job and thanks for sharing. Can't wait for another chapter. :lol:
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on July 22, 2006, 08:19:44 pm oh my god!!! the last pic is really scary, i can't wait!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: sonicphotonic on July 23, 2006, 01:23:23 am Ee, it's a bad idea to read this at 1:30 am! I'm all paranoid someone is behind me now!!!
Keep going! It's brilliant! Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on July 23, 2006, 09:13:43 am write some more please.:)
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 24, 2006, 01:04:42 am more :)
Chapter 08: Hide (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-063.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-064.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-065.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-066.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-067.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-068.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-069.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-070.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-071.jpg) -end of chapter 8- Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on July 24, 2006, 02:17:28 am Excellent!!!!! I love it
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on July 24, 2006, 03:57:12 am omg Kere more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *smooooochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~Angel~ on July 24, 2006, 04:51:54 am Oh nooo!!! I need the next bit =P This is brilliant!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on July 24, 2006, 05:09:52 am Kere don't leave us hanging like this. The suspense is killing me.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 24, 2006, 06:13:33 am Thank you! - I wish I could update faster believe me :D - BUT, I did get another chapter finished tonight, so here it is...
Chapter 09: Chills (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-072.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-073.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-074.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-075.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-076.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-077.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-078.jpg) -end of chapter 9- Title: End Transmission Post by: foxtail on July 24, 2006, 07:05:12 am omg! this is AMAZING!
Much better than the current BB we have here (in the UK)! arrrghh!! UPDATE noooooooowwww!!!! -x- Title: End Transmission Post by: ~Angel~ on July 24, 2006, 01:20:20 pm This is just tooooooooooooooo good!!! Cant wait for the next part :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on July 24, 2006, 04:38:13 pm AGH I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on July 24, 2006, 06:08:29 pm Yes, yes, more, more! I love stories that creep me out! This is great!
Title: End Transmission Post by: platinum on July 24, 2006, 07:49:57 pm Awesome.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on July 24, 2006, 10:00:14 pm Kere bad!!! Stop ending like that rofl :) Now I can't wait till the next part.
Title: End Transmission Post by: jenneanr on July 25, 2006, 09:04:17 am OK, so I am hooked...I eagerly anticipate the next installment!
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on July 25, 2006, 09:26:18 am I need more! We all need more :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: JellyBeans on July 25, 2006, 06:32:07 pm :happy1: yep yep this is gettin goooood (an kinda scary lol)... plz update soon were waiting.............. :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: velvet69 on July 26, 2006, 05:13:57 am wow this is awesome can't wait for more
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 27, 2006, 07:16:39 am thanks everyone - here's some more
Chapter 10: Which are you? (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-079.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-080.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-081.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-082.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-083.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-084.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-085.jpg) -end of chapter 10- Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on July 27, 2006, 07:38:54 am NOOOOOOOOOO.......... OMG please don't leave it there, I'm begging you
*gets on knees and begs* Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on July 27, 2006, 07:47:15 am aww, sorry Aliwag, it's after midnight, and this is as far as I have written - but I will try not to leave you hanging for too long :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on July 27, 2006, 07:54:03 am *sighs* torture, dude, torture. But................if you feel you MUST sleep then...............OK ;)
Title: End Transmission Post by: mainegal32 on July 27, 2006, 11:40:27 am Oh my! Another amazing chapter.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on July 27, 2006, 12:06:17 pm Great, great, great those two mistery guys look creepy
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~Angel~ on July 27, 2006, 02:03:00 pm Its greeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeat, cant wait for next bit!!! :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: JacksonPollock on July 27, 2006, 03:51:15 pm Superb! Feels a bit 28 days later-ish.
Title: End Transmission Post by: bunnymuffin41 on July 28, 2006, 05:41:03 am Very good glad I followed the link in Kathy's sig now.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on July 28, 2006, 05:46:22 am ahem.....You are awake now where is my update?
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on July 28, 2006, 11:27:39 am I know your meant to keep people hanging on for the next chapter, but it's cruel :(
Can't wait for the next bit...... Title: End Transmission Post by: Dusty101weir on July 28, 2006, 02:54:20 pm must have more .:end transmission:. lol
Title: End Transmission Post by: oddball011 on July 28, 2006, 05:17:33 pm WoAh spookay!
Title: End Transmission Post by: momzgurlz3 on July 30, 2006, 11:18:07 am Great Job I can't wait 2 read the rest :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on July 30, 2006, 11:25:23 am **Sneaks in to poke Kere with a stick :badpoker:**
Title: End Transmission Post by: Kielen on July 30, 2006, 05:47:16 pm This sooo awesome! Amazing job, Kere!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: belizaire88 on July 30, 2006, 07:48:44 pm Very nice. Thanks.
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 01, 2006, 12:11:02 am omg i LOVE your story well maybe not LOVE but its really good. STOP LEAVING ME ON CLIFFHANGERS!! IT TAKES FOREVER TO GET A NEW POST SO JUST GIMME SOMETHIN TO WORK WITH!! 'sobs'
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 01, 2006, 07:09:55 am new chapter :)
Chapter 11: Come with me (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-086.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-087.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-088.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-089.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-090.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-091.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 01, 2006, 07:11:29 am Chapter 11 continued... (it's a big one)
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*feels sanity dribbling slowly away as she waits for next episode....* Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on August 01, 2006, 07:35:07 am Me too. :brain: Well, Kere, what are you still doing here? You should be posting the next chapter! This is too good to just leave it there! More, more!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on August 01, 2006, 08:10:03 am rofl More!! What have I told you about leaving me hanging like this?
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 01, 2006, 03:54:31 pm Kere stop it I WANT MORE you just have to leave us on cliffhangers... 'hysterical sobbing' i hate cliffhangers... but if you have to have a life then just leave us here... :'( lol well anyway still love the story thanx Kathy for putting a link to this.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on August 02, 2006, 12:14:25 am Holy crap!! Now there's a ninja!! It's getting even better, Damn I'm not going to sleep until the next chapter
Title: End Transmission Post by: DameSporkalot on August 02, 2006, 01:24:35 am *cries* Addicting!
Title: End Transmission Post by: jaccirocker on August 02, 2006, 08:37:45 am Dang Kere this getting better and better. I hope you update real soon.
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 02, 2006, 02:29:25 pm *holds breath and waits* Dont...know....how...long...I can....go...without...AIR!!!!!! *faints* NO! I CANT FAINT! I must stay awake to see the next bit *props eyes open with matchsticks*
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on August 02, 2006, 08:46:49 pm Rar, more Kere more! lmao! I can't wait for the next part, thanks for putting the link in your sig Kathy! :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: mznikkisimz on August 03, 2006, 11:12:05 pm must.... not... watch... what is that sound???
*looks around darkened house in paranoia as dogs watch* This story is the BEST!!! Thanks for the sig link Kathy!!! Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on August 04, 2006, 03:40:48 am Yay! Another chapter to for me to read, but now another wait for the next one :( Great story!
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 04, 2006, 10:34:50 pm ok Kere i've been waitin for like 2 DAYS i mean seriously! also older ppl make a note: if you have a husband/wife, means you're this age (normally): 25- err when do ppl get so old they... er... anyway plz don't do this go out and live ur life. idk if you kick me off this is honest...
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 05, 2006, 12:24:44 am SORRY ABOUT PREVIOUS POST. THAT WAS... REALLY NOT ME MY LIL SIS BUT... she does have a point
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 05, 2006, 12:36:04 am what the hell are you talking about? LMAO - It's the weekend now, so I can update soon :)
Im guessing thats what you want right? hahaha (might pay to keep your lil sis off the computer!) Title: End Transmission Post by: Yume Lupine on August 05, 2006, 01:06:40 am ....NOOOOO!!! I want some more please! Kere this is a great sotry with a gripping plot, characters to love, and it keeps you on the edge of your seat. I love it and can't wait for more!
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 05, 2006, 10:48:32 am lol sorry Kere i have no idea what i'm talking about... anyway good thx glad ur updating soon
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 05, 2006, 10:03:28 pm hehe :) - new chapter for you! Im just glad you are still reading, and that you enjoy it. Thanks for your feedback everybody, it keeps me going! (I try to update as quickly as I can - lol)
Chapter 13: Untitled (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-099.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-100.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-101.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 05, 2006, 10:03:38 pm (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-102.jpg)
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-110.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-111.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-112.jpg) - end of chapter 13 - Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on August 05, 2006, 10:07:24 pm Kere stop leaving me hanging. I love it so far and I want more
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on August 05, 2006, 11:07:09 pm Wow.......Dammit I second what Kim said
Title: End Transmission Post by: platinum on August 05, 2006, 11:27:33 pm Just excellent.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Yume Lupine on August 06, 2006, 12:22:46 am ...DARIUS NOOOO!!!!!! Good God man, you know just where to end a chapter to make us hang on the edge of our seats and beg for more. *proceeds to beg for more* oh please oh please oh please!
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on August 06, 2006, 01:32:29 am Leaving us hanging like this is not cool man, not cool. Just kidding, but update soon please! The story is excellent!
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on August 06, 2006, 03:44:29 am Ok you have my full and complete attention!!!!!!
Lets get on with it!!!!!! LOL What happens next lol I'm sitting on the edge of my freakin seat WAITING--WAITING--WAITING...... OK and by the way I love it It is a great story . Can't wait to see the rest. Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 06, 2006, 05:39:41 am ARGH! Why is there no more? Hurry up and write some! lol
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on August 06, 2006, 05:54:54 am OK Kere
Don't make me hurt you lol Were is the rest of it I'm feining for more!!!!!! I need to know more!!!!!! AGGGGH please I can't wait ;-( Update. Update. Update . P.S Great story Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 06, 2006, 11:40:50 am wait was that Darius? now I'm confused... write more plz...
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 06, 2006, 11:42:52 am so there's 2 darius's... one is a clone or a robot o_o... very interesting plot twist
Title: End Transmission Post by: crazyflowergirl on August 06, 2006, 03:04:44 pm intriguing...more please! thanks!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on August 07, 2006, 01:26:52 am oh man, this just gets better & better :grin:
MORE!! please! Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on August 07, 2006, 12:41:00 pm oh man...............get me all excited, then leave me hanging :sad5: this gets better and better!!!!! Cant wait until your next update :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on August 07, 2006, 02:27:22 pm DUDE NO!!!!! Don't stop!!! Please!!!! now I'm feeling like a little kid who want's the new toy
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~Angel~ on August 07, 2006, 02:42:53 pm This story is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait for the next bit, quick! =P
Title: End Transmission Post by: One on August 08, 2006, 01:04:09 pm Ahh!! I'm hooked! Moremoremoremore :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 09, 2006, 12:27:21 am so i get back from 2 day retreat getaway with family (cuzins aunts grandparents etc) tired as hell and get here only to see that you STILL haven't freakin updated. hurrrrrrrrry AND UPDATE!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Dese on August 09, 2006, 04:37:23 pm Wow I just discovered this story. It's great! :D I love the plot and the images, can't wait to see it continued.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on August 09, 2006, 04:49:51 pm Kere has been a little under the weather the last few days guys but I am sure he will update as soon as he can.
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 09, 2006, 06:58:10 pm Awww no....*huggles* for Kere to help him get better.
Title: End Transmission Post by: DameSporkalot on August 09, 2006, 08:32:28 pm Oh icky! I've been sick lately too... *passes on all her "get betters" to Kere so he can update faster* :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 09, 2006, 11:27:38 pm oh now i feel bad... feel better Kere! i was sick too like 4 days ago so now i'm passing on all the good vibes 2 you. sorry you got sick over summer... well update when u feel better and *strained voice* no pressure to get it done... phew that took a lot of emotional strength.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 10, 2006, 01:47:45 am aww - thanks everyone (and pbnj5498 - it's winter right now where I live :( ) -I'm still not 100% but I did manage to finish this update. Will work as hard as I can this weekend to do some more for you next week!
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wicked, wicked man - you're starting to enjoy this now aren't you *pitches tent, pulls up comfy chair, grabs popcorn and six pack and settles back to wait..* ps .. hope you feel better soon *huggles* Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on August 10, 2006, 04:52:58 am You are evil my friend. I think you are getting great enjoyment keeping us on edge lmao
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on August 10, 2006, 05:14:36 am Kere babes I love it now where is the rest. I really hate these cliffhangers. Take your time hon and feel better.
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on August 10, 2006, 05:39:06 am I hope you feel better soon.
Thanks for the update though, it will keep me happy for a while :D Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on August 10, 2006, 09:56:34 am OMG!!! This one was amazing!! Everytime I read you leave me hanging and beggi for more!! and I know you enjoy it:D
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 10, 2006, 05:24:08 pm thanks for the update Kere, but that was one of the most annoying cliffhangers EVER lol well anyways it makes me feel like a Kere to pressure you while ur sick. (being a Kere means evil jk lol) still feel better dude
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 10, 2006, 05:40:11 pm Aww Kere that was great! More as soon as you can though, because this is just so great I cant stop looking for updates lol! *huggles* get better.....then get back here with more of the story.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Yume Lupine on August 11, 2006, 01:37:19 am ~falls out of her seat~AARRGGG! Once again, my friend, you've left your readers hanging on to the edge of thier seats for dear life! I hope you're feeling 110% soon hun. No one likes to be sick.
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on August 13, 2006, 05:59:39 pm Look Ker I know you not feeling well but please hurry up and update
I am DYING here::bawl: :rant: Don't make me get :violent2: on you :grin: I Love,Love,love it :grin: I really am a :angel1: :evil2: Really I am :smile bi: Get well soon Peace :thumbup: Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 14, 2006, 07:32:40 am Chapter 15: Relax
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oh god .... pleeeeeeeaaaaassssseee get to the end of this soon .... I don't think I can cope *sob* :grin: lovin' it dude :grin: Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on August 14, 2006, 08:40:26 am I hope this means you're feeling better, Kere. :)
It also means the usual ranting! More, more, more :rofl: Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on August 14, 2006, 05:31:43 pm Glad to see your feeling better (I hope you are), and another great update!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on August 14, 2006, 05:37:15 pm Kere hun I love the new chapter. Now do as I request and give me more.
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on August 15, 2006, 02:24:52 am Waiting waiting waiting
ok that's it!!!!!!!!!! Update Update Update ppplllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaassseeee Title: Thank you. Post by: platinum on August 15, 2006, 02:51:06 am :clapp: *Hug`
Title: End Transmission Post by: IsolinaBlack on August 16, 2006, 03:36:43 pm NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Come ON!!! I just read it all... And... You're NOT DONE!!!! ;.;' Stop with the cliffhanger fetish and EXPLAIN THIS THING!!! -Le sob- -Dies- :worship: :notworth: :cheer: :bang: :smash: :blob6: WAHHHH!!!!! Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on August 16, 2006, 04:08:48 pm Quote from: IsolinaBlack NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Come ON!!! I just read it all... And... You're NOT DONE!!!! ;.;' Stop with the cliffhanger fetish and EXPLAIN THIS THING!!! -Le sob- -Dies- :worship: :notworth: :cheer: :bang: :smash: :blob6: WAHHHH!!!!! :laugh: :laugh: Resuscitates Isolina or she'll never find out how it ends! :rofl: Title: End Transmission Post by: shander on August 16, 2006, 09:03:54 pm I thought this was great when i started reading it, but it just keeps getting better and better. And then some more. Everything's better with ninja's in it.
*Gets popcorn and waits for the next chapter*:happy1: (Great work Kere ^^) Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on August 17, 2006, 05:20:02 pm This story is amazing!
not only the plot, but the graphics are grrrreat! wait to go Kere Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 20, 2006, 01:07:24 pm OoooO cooooooool.........could you possibly give us some more before we all go mad and have to be locked up?
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on August 21, 2006, 04:39:43 pm well, I love cliffhangers, I´m actually starting a story with tones of those so.....
don´t stop, don´t end this story already, cause being thrilled is tasty! Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on August 21, 2006, 07:08:37 pm Chapter 16: Bedtime
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great update Kere ...... keep it coming!! :happy1: & :beer: & a good story *happy sigh* Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on August 22, 2006, 03:23:27 am Wicked add, cant wait for more!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on August 22, 2006, 03:12:45 pm Noooooooo! I need to know more! And, what did Kathy tell you about cliffhangers? lmao, very good!
Title: End Transmission Post by: preciouskittenn on August 23, 2006, 01:09:47 am I must say this...is....amazing....... I just discovered this story today, thanks to the link in Kathy's siggy, and I read the whole story with my mouth open.... and now there are puddles of drool on my keyboard!!! The whole thing is fantastic!!! I'm anxiously awaiting your next update!!!! :bounce:
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on August 23, 2006, 06:24:25 am Yay an update!! This gets better and better! :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: pBnJ5498 on August 25, 2006, 02:30:23 am oh snap! he got a brother O_o i did NOT see that comin! lol yeah i luvin this story more and more! lol Kere uptade buddy we waitin
Title: End Transmission Post by: J-Jay64 on August 27, 2006, 12:35:05 am hahaha, i feel the same xD
this is an awsome story.. but the thing about darious rings bells with LOST, though im sure there's no connection :D Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on August 27, 2006, 06:05:16 pm -sits- I'm going to be here until the next update.
Seriously, I have nothing better to do. xD Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on August 27, 2006, 07:52:14 pm Kere... I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!
Thanks sooo much for this GREAT story, I can't believe how great is your creativity, You really amaze me with every chapter. THANK YOU!!! Title: End Transmission Post by: celebkiriedhel on August 31, 2006, 04:30:33 pm Great Story!
I've just read it all so far in one hit. Wowsers! I'm not a big fan of Big Brother - But I love the way you've used that, and where the story is going now. Really well done! Kiri Title: End Transmission Post by: icysilverpill on September 02, 2006, 12:19:30 pm Wow, this is so great, quite the spine-tingling thriller. I can't wait to read more.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on September 03, 2006, 10:04:05 am Chapter 17: First one out
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Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on September 03, 2006, 01:07:27 pm Woohoo!!!! Kere, sweetheart! Thank you! I love it! *smoochies* (Runs off to pester Kere for the next installment)
Title: YAY! Post by: Yume Lupine on September 03, 2006, 09:11:47 pm Once again, you've done am amazing job hunny. I love reading this story and can't wait for more from the all-powerful Kere!
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on September 04, 2006, 03:14:53 am The effort and the time you've put into this story make it so brilliant to read, although the cliffhangers aren't so great :D
I will wait patiently until the next chapter - promise Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on September 04, 2006, 05:45:06 am At his stage I would know or at least have an idea about the end, but I'm still kinda clueless, you rock Kere thanks a lot!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: velvet69 on September 04, 2006, 06:01:41 am arghhhh yet another cliffhanger. I love the story. Your gonna drive us insane.
Really great Job! Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on September 05, 2006, 03:25:54 am YAY *prances* More soooooooon. please.......?
Title: End Transmission Post by: Simaritan on September 07, 2006, 09:31:55 pm I've just found this and I must say this is absolutely incredible. An introguing story with episodic cliffhangers that make me hungry for more, combined with good backgrounds and excellent simotography. Now I join the rest of you waiting impatiently for the next episode.
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on September 08, 2006, 02:57:12 pm Awesome! I guess I'll wait patiently....... :lol:
Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on September 12, 2006, 07:57:41 pm Hoorah! Finally, some updates! ^^ Keep 'em coming Kere.. I'm thoroughly confuzzled here.
Title: End Transmission Post by: ivyroundmyankle on September 19, 2006, 09:22:53 am oooh! more! more! I'm addicted, I need my next update.
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on September 21, 2006, 11:04:59 pm kEEP IT COMMIN BABY
Falling off the edge of my seat !!!!!!! lol ANTISAPATION IS A BI&%TCH lol love ya kere l Title: End Transmission Post by: owaizoo on September 27, 2006, 01:45:58 pm i have been reading kathys siggie to read this story again. and again but i load this page and dont read the story
today i did so awesome i feel like i better write one too-lol Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on September 28, 2006, 07:39:32 am thanks everybody :) sorry this update took me so long
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-185.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-186.jpg) - end of chapter 18 - Title: End Transmission Post by: shander on September 28, 2006, 07:44:50 am So they were all desintegrated? wow :oogle:
Great update kere! :) Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on September 28, 2006, 08:25:16 am I demand more wench!!!!!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: velvet69 on September 28, 2006, 08:51:20 am More more more.. absolutly awesome update but i need more :-D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on September 28, 2006, 01:21:21 pm Kere, Kere, Kere, don't force me to "abuse" your selfsim! :laugh:
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on September 28, 2006, 05:13:26 pm Kere babe where is the rest? I want more now
Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on September 28, 2006, 09:47:28 pm Yay! An update! This is the first in like a million years! Thanks so much for uppies Kere, I know how hard it is to keep going on stories.. especially when our personal lives get so busy!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on September 29, 2006, 02:06:35 am Wow Kere you really made my night!! Thanks a lot for this update, it's awesome.
Title: End Transmission Post by: AudCand on September 30, 2006, 09:42:04 am I just started reading this yesterday and I am addicted! Thanks for the great story, I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: End Transmission Post by: celebkiriedhel on September 30, 2006, 02:19:29 pm Ooo So glad you updated Kere! :)
Kiri Title: End Transmission Post by: Eevilcat on October 02, 2006, 12:11:52 pm Absolutely fantastic stuff... can't wait... must have more. Please, pretty please.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Poppenhuis on October 03, 2006, 09:43:42 am Nooooooh! Not the end! '-'
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on October 03, 2006, 04:24:56 pm woow Kere! another fantastic update...
I love the way you work with the graphics, adding stuff and all that, your "script" is great also. Title: More! Post by: Mantador on October 08, 2006, 03:54:39 pm ok im speechless, i think this is cool and i would demand more but i just cant say that, Kere thank you for the story you have wrote sofar and i will look forward to more if there is more :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on October 11, 2006, 03:43:22 am *dances for joy* I waited and behaved and an update appeared :D
Fantastic! Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 11, 2006, 06:09:14 am lol Dangermouse! - here's another :)
Chapter 19: Lobster (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-187.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-188.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-189.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-190.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 11, 2006, 06:09:59 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-191.jpg)
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Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 11, 2006, 08:08:26 am lol - no, I wish! :p
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on October 11, 2006, 06:02:19 pm omg Stop leaving us hanging you dirty wench! *smoochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on October 11, 2006, 06:42:15 pm Woohoo! A new update! Thanks, doll!! *smoochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on October 11, 2006, 06:48:07 pm Kere babes I love the update
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on October 11, 2006, 09:08:00 pm Love the update! :) Thanks, now I'm going to have to agree with Kathy, more!! :sign5:
Title: End Transmission Post by: brianna1 on October 12, 2006, 03:47:25 am That was great Kere :sign5:
waiting and wanting more :love2: sitting here eating :happy1: Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on October 14, 2006, 01:45:08 am Awesome! -reads about a million times over until I finally get it- xD I'm so slow in this story. It requires me to think (something my brain is usually not willing to do at this hour). Still great though Kere, love it! ^^
Title: End Transmission Post by: quasim on October 14, 2006, 04:41:29 am ARRRGH!!! I'm hooked. Just started to read a few minutes (hours??) ago, and I need my next fix! How can I survive the weekend without another episode?
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on October 14, 2006, 06:33:54 am Yay! Another update, what can I say?! I'm so happy
Title: End Transmission Post by: Nevah-321 on October 15, 2006, 12:48:43 pm Urgh, i want more! more I cry!
Title: End Transmission Post by: celebkiriedhel on October 15, 2006, 03:15:30 pm Awww Kere - Great Update!
I hope there's another one coming soon? All the cliff-hangers are getting to me! And I used to be such a patient person! Kiri Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on October 17, 2006, 10:26:59 pm Maaan you have a great ability to impress me with this story.
Thanks a lot!!! Title: End Transmission Post by: gdayars on October 18, 2006, 12:01:27 am WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!:crybaby:
We are left hanging. Must have more. Soon. Please :) Title: End Transmission Post by: RESURRECTED MAGIC on October 22, 2006, 03:41:05 pm Oh, i see you've left everyone hanging on to their seats here too!! HE-HE!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 25, 2006, 04:58:05 am Chapter 20: They're not ready
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-216.jpg) -end of chapter 20 - Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on October 25, 2006, 05:05:31 am omggggggggggg Stop ending it this way!!!!!!!!! I demand an update right now mister!
*smoochies* Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on October 25, 2006, 05:11:31 am Oh I love it babes
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 25, 2006, 05:43:32 am thank you lisette -blush-
Title: End Transmission Post by: ladyrose on October 25, 2006, 12:38:21 pm wooooow the plot really is thickening! WRITE MORE!!!! (quickly) heh heh :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on October 25, 2006, 06:30:59 pm I can see the green dot. I know you're here. MOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEE!
:rofl: Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on October 25, 2006, 06:38:07 pm So where is the update? huh huh huh?
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~*Jax*~ on October 25, 2006, 06:40:38 pm Yeah ... MORE!
I can only hope to aspire to your level!!! Title: End Transmission Post by: ganyblack on October 26, 2006, 10:06:51 pm O_O Wow. Very good. Edge-of-the-seat and all that. Wow. I want to read more! :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on October 27, 2006, 12:11:27 pm wow Kere! you´re amazing....
I love the backgrounds!, your story is fantatic man, I tell you, you inspired me... keep it comin! Title: End Transmission Post by: marion1 on October 27, 2006, 07:53:55 pm that was really good
Title: End Transmission Post by: lizziemay on October 28, 2006, 11:12:28 am wow what an amazing story, can't wait till the next chapter.
Title: End Transmission Post by: SarahsALoser on October 28, 2006, 02:47:56 pm So. this is awesome.
I started reading it late last night ... and I got freaked out and had a hard time sleeping! Which of course makes it an awesome story! I can't wait! When it said that everyone was evaporated I was like 'oh noes! knocked up girlfriend!' I hope she's ok! Poor boy! Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on October 29, 2006, 12:34:06 am Wow. Big uppies Kere. :D You awful yunchie you.. leaving us hangin' there. Please update soon Kere, you're a five star writer! ^^
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 31, 2006, 04:34:17 am Thank you everyone, for posting your comments :) here's that update.
Chapter 21: Explanation part 2 (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-217.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-218.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-219.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-220.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-221.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-222.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-223.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-224.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-225.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on October 31, 2006, 04:35:19 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-226.jpg)
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Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on October 31, 2006, 07:05:26 am Ooooh, oooh great job, Kere!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilwen on October 31, 2006, 01:44:39 pm one of the best stories ever, keep up the great work
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on November 01, 2006, 06:14:34 am I'm on the edge of my seat.....fantastic updates! You really are a brilliant writer :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on November 01, 2006, 07:43:13 pm Very nice Kere. I can't describe how great you are at this story. It's very addicting.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Silent Angel on November 03, 2006, 11:27:42 am This story is soo awesome please continue!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on November 03, 2006, 09:36:31 pm Huhuhu If you were a girl I'll quickly marry you!! Thanks a lot for this :):)
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 03, 2006, 09:36:38 pm Hi - here's the next chapter - it was originally written as two, but the scenes worked better when I mixed them together, so I do apologise for it being so very long! enjoy...
Chapter 22: The First Team (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-230.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-231.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-232.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-233.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-234.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-235.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-236.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 03, 2006, 09:36:56 pm (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-237.jpg)
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-252.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-253.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-254.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-255.jpg) - end of chapter 22 : phew! - (sorry it is twice as long as average! lol) Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on November 03, 2006, 10:24:21 pm *mumbles incoherently* %#$@!, Kere! You should always have at least one update ready at all times!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on November 04, 2006, 08:30:20 am Kere I need more. stop teasing us and give us the rest of the story already
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on November 04, 2006, 08:48:33 am I agree with Kim.... Give me more wench!!!!!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilwen on November 04, 2006, 11:03:15 am Please please please more, just can't wait
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on November 04, 2006, 12:15:58 pm Heck, don't complain about a long update lol.
Now I'm waiting for the next bit. *Sits tapping nails on desk staring at screen* Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on November 05, 2006, 06:11:30 pm Why must you torture us like this!? >.<
Title: End Transmission Post by: kransp on November 06, 2006, 01:47:58 pm I'm completely intrigued by this and amazed at the quality... and just a tiny bit confused... can't wait for more.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on November 06, 2006, 04:29:33 pm Quote from: kere I do apologise for it being so very long! enjoy... There's nothing to apologise for!! It's sooo much better like this :D Thanks a lot! Title: End Transmission Post by: quasim on November 06, 2006, 04:29:45 pm I whished... I wished I found this later.... MUCH later, when it was nearly finished so I wouldn't have these cliffhangers. BUHH!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: exactduckwoman on November 06, 2006, 05:25:31 pm Wow, this is really good. Keep going!
Title: End Transmission Post by: asiashamecca on November 06, 2006, 06:41:20 pm This is without a doubt the best Sim story I have ever read. Awesome work!
Title: End Transmission Post by: quasim on November 07, 2006, 04:24:36 pm Let's nominate this story for an OSCAR or Bambi or something!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on November 09, 2006, 11:38:10 am why everybody wants this story to end?? I don´t, it is fantastic!!
keep it coming Kere! You know you´re my teacher man! this is an awesome story, it wouldn´t be fair if it ends up buried domewhere this forum. Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on November 09, 2006, 02:42:25 pm OMG .... where's the rest of it????
pleeeeeeeeeease, you can't stop there *sob* Title: End Transmission Post by: Jude1 on November 09, 2006, 09:57:46 pm Oh please don't leave us hanging long.This is so exciting.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Rue on November 09, 2006, 11:09:35 pm This is SO fascinating!!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: daphnee75 on November 11, 2006, 11:52:54 am dang and here i thoughtentering into this much later I would have so much more to read, just to be left hanging here... i'm with the others I need my fix now lol
Title: End Transmission Post by: phoenix_risin on November 13, 2006, 04:18:40 pm OMG I just sat and read this, now I too am jumping on the bandwagon.
We need More! This is the best story. Really well done. I can not wait to read more. Phoenix Title: End Transmission Post by: asiashamecca on November 13, 2006, 04:25:34 pm Yes... *squirms in seat* More please.
I came in on the last posted episode via Kathy's refering link. How often to the updates usually come? Title: End Transmission Post by: jerrand on November 13, 2006, 06:48:04 pm Oh,no!....This isnt finished yet!...I'm too old for all this suspense! (But, really Im impressed)...I think you need to make this your job before we all explode. :}
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 14, 2006, 04:22:29 am Thanks everybody :D (Jerrand I'd love to make this my job)
Chapter 23: Nigel's eviction (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-256.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-257.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-258.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-259.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-260.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-261.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-262.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-263.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 14, 2006, 04:24:24 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-264.jpg)
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Title: End Transmission Post by: velvet69 on November 14, 2006, 05:05:57 am OH Wow this just gets better and Better .. thanks again for sharing
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on November 14, 2006, 06:06:08 am Awesome babes. I need more though
Title: End Transmission Post by: phoenix_risin on November 14, 2006, 07:03:52 am I agree great update. I am so glad I followed Kathy's link.
Phoenix Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on November 14, 2006, 09:51:22 pm "Nigel, you've been evicted."
What a great line Kere!!!! Lovely update :) Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on November 15, 2006, 08:53:48 am "...And the crowd goes wild as another update is posted!!"..
Well that was just superb with a capital SU :D Title: End Transmission Post by: jerrand on November 15, 2006, 03:33:35 pm Wow!...That was great!..Ummm...Im trying..trying...Ok I give up.When is the next? (grovel,grovel) I find myself right there with all the other helplessly addicted souls begging for another:)
Title: End Transmission Post by: WicketTheCanuck on November 15, 2006, 07:53:26 pm Wow.. I'm new I followed the link to insimenator from modthesims.. And followed the link in Kathys siggy to here.. and I'm glad I followed the rabbit hole so to speak. This is a really good story. And I've never watched big brother, so if this is what it's like then I suppose it's not bad. But I doubt it's this good ;)
Keep up the great work Kere, your creative mind should never go to waste ;) --Wicket Title: End Transmission Post by: asiashamecca on November 16, 2006, 10:54:21 am Terrific update! *watches thread like a hawk for further developments*
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on November 16, 2006, 05:02:44 pm There have been several updates since I've last checked the thread. Thank you! And, now, I'm back to join the pleading masses! More, more, more please! :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Chad01 on November 18, 2006, 04:12:24 pm I'm sad now I just started reading and now I made it to a page with no updates. :(
Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilwen on November 19, 2006, 04:01:06 pm keeps you on the edge of your seat, great story. can't wait for the next part
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on November 21, 2006, 06:20:51 pm Ummm...Kere, sweetheart, where is our next chapter? :angel1:
Title: End Transmission Post by: jerrand on November 22, 2006, 02:51:28 pm Kere?...You arent sick or anything are you? *sob* I NEED MY FIX! Umm,sorry :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 22, 2006, 03:52:45 pm Hi! Sorry I've been out of town with work, and last night I couldnt connect to the net because my IP provider went down. Thanks for continuing to read and leave comments.
Update is almost ready to go and these will be more frequent, as I want it wrapped up by Christmas :) Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on November 22, 2006, 04:01:29 pm YAYAYAYAYAY
*pulls up comfy chair* popcorn while we wait anyone??!! Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on November 23, 2006, 03:04:06 am freakin' awesome uppies kere! ^^ Me = hooked.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 23, 2006, 05:01:38 am Chapter 24: Prizewinner
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Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on November 23, 2006, 08:53:50 am OH NOOOOOOOOO ....
good lord Kere, don't leave us hanging like this *gets on knees and begs* pleeeeeeeease ... we need the next bit!! :grin: Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on November 23, 2006, 09:13:00 am Master of the cliffhanger, aren't you? Oh for cripe's sake, get on with it! :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: jerrand on November 23, 2006, 09:17:09 am Dang! I didnt see that one coming. This is gonna drive me nuts! :0
Title: End Transmission Post by: phoenix_risin on November 23, 2006, 07:24:51 pm Darn Darn Darn!
I want More! Another great episode. I will be sitting here on the edge of my seat waiting. :0) Phoenix Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on November 23, 2006, 07:51:37 pm Kere! C'mon man! You can't keep us, your loyal fans, waiting like this! :sign5: More, please? Please!?!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on November 24, 2006, 03:04:14 am Oh hell yes! Kill her! Nice update babes *smoochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: Loli-Jadwiga on November 25, 2006, 08:38:10 am WOW I just recently got done reading the entire story and all I can say is Wow!!... You absolutely must update as soon as possible!! This is simply amazing!!! I utterly love the cliff hangers! And the plot twists are extrodinary!! This is definitely one of the best stories ever written. Two thumbs up and keep up the superb work!!!!! Definitely first class writing - no doubts about it. I'm just dying to find out what happens next and curious to see how it will end..yet at the same time...I wish it could just go on forever!! ...Can it? (http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/9657/shiftylr4.gif) lmfao
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on November 25, 2006, 12:55:42 pm Ohhh god now that's the best cliffhanger ever!!! I'm damn curious NO WAIT I'M CRAZYYY lol great update dude :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on November 27, 2006, 12:06:22 am I'm still totally confused, but I can tell that was a great chapter! We need more!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Chad01 on November 27, 2006, 12:54:41 am More now. :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on November 27, 2006, 03:22:20 am Oh man......what a twist! What an update :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: summer_wine on November 27, 2006, 05:23:28 am keep going!!!!! that was amazing! BTS hehe
Title: End Transmission Post by: asiashamecca on November 27, 2006, 11:26:41 am HOT! HOT! HOT! I almost missed this one. Thank goodness for thread subscriptions!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Veckah on November 27, 2006, 11:46:45 am Waiting with baited breath
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on November 27, 2006, 06:25:31 pm Thanks alot everyone for your feedback and encouragement. WOW! someone even subscribed to this thread? That's quite an honour. Well, I wrote up the next chapter on Sunday night, and I will work on it during the week - it is very involved, and the updates are slightly more work now as it is coming to a close soon. I can't say when exactly, but an explosive finish is not far away :D
I really appreciate all your comments which keep me going in those five hour blocks I chain myself down to write and take screens. Title: End Transmission Post by: Veckah on November 27, 2006, 10:15:28 pm Quote from: kere;442873 WOW! someone even subscribed to this thread? I think you might be suprized to find out how many are subscribed to this thread Kere. *G* Title: End Transmission Post by: theusedrocks on November 29, 2006, 04:06:44 am ahhh....nooo!!
i want more! Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on November 29, 2006, 06:43:06 pm Wow Mr. Kere, your story is PERFECT!! you´re a God, and that Ariel is one of thw hotest sims I´ve seen ever!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: shander on November 29, 2006, 08:25:40 pm Mooooore! I need moooooore!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilwen on November 30, 2006, 02:49:38 pm great update can't wait for the next one
Title: End Transmission Post by: Rockerbabe2468 on December 02, 2006, 02:03:32 am omg! i just started reading and i am instantly hooked! i think that this would make a great book, or even a movie. and i would also like to say that u need to stop leaving me on the edge of my seat! even if its only for a few seconds until i scroll down and read the rest.
Title: End Transmission Post by: keirra on December 02, 2006, 09:03:00 pm Wow! I just came upon this story (thanks to Kathy) and have enjoyed reading it...now I have to wait for an update...well worth it. And, Kere, I am definitely subscribing to this thread! I can't miss a chapter! Thanks for sharing your hard work!
Title: End Transmission Post by: theusedrocks on December 03, 2006, 01:41:49 am ah...post a new one soon...i can't wait...
you should make it into a sims movie. :D Title: End Transmission Post by: Loli-Jadwiga on December 03, 2006, 07:23:54 am aawwww....I will be happy and sad all at the same time when its over...I wish it could go on forever but I know if that happened I'd never get to see what's actually going on... ~cheers from the thread subcribers sidelines~ lol I hope you get a new section up soon!! I can't wait for more!!! This story is amazing... I think I just might go back and re-read the whole thing.. t'he-he-he-he :thumbup:
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on December 09, 2006, 12:00:45 am hehe - thanks everybody... not far to go now!!
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Title: End Transmission Post by: keirra on December 09, 2006, 01:26:07 am Love it! Thank you. Can't wait for more!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on December 09, 2006, 06:24:23 am Kere babes I need more.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Veckah on December 09, 2006, 08:44:40 am *SHIVER* More!
Title: End Transmission Post by: jerrand on December 09, 2006, 06:12:21 pm Wahoo!...This just keeps getting better and better!...More please! Pleeeeeeeze! :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on December 10, 2006, 09:09:22 pm Awesome!! Hehehe thanks a lot dude you really make happy when you update :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on December 10, 2006, 10:37:19 pm Yayayaya!!! More, more :rofl:
Title: End Transmission Post by: asiashamecca on December 11, 2006, 12:43:08 pm This is "TOTALLY WICKED!!!!" (The Incredibles)
I see a screenplay here... I see a movie... I'd like to see a movie anyway. :-) Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on December 14, 2006, 09:26:41 pm Wow! I'm finally getting the whole story! :D Me and my idiotic brain have begun to comprehend the awesome-ness of this story. ^^ More, More!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Chad01 on December 15, 2006, 02:03:31 am Keep it coming.
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on December 17, 2006, 01:03:07 pm .......... Blather........Words fail me...........More please!!!
Title: Cool Post by: whsdragon on December 20, 2006, 09:20:37 am Wonderful update...
Waiting impatiently for more. lol Thanks! Title: End Transmission Post by: Mi-chii on December 20, 2006, 08:15:54 pm Oh my god, I didn't find this before now.
BAD Kere, you've kept me up WAY after my bedtime, I just had to read this! Man, this should be made into a movie. Not a sims-movie, a REAL movie. Or tv-serie. What an AMAZING story. Title: End Transmission Post by: homerette on December 20, 2006, 09:16:17 pm Another story thread under my belt, and a mesmerizing one at that. Very suspenseful and well written. I look forward to the denoument.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on December 21, 2006, 11:28:50 pm Chapter 26: Countdown
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-337.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-338.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-339.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-340.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-341.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-342.jpg) - end of 26 - Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on December 22, 2006, 01:39:44 am Excellent again, Kere. There's going to be a lot of sad readers when this is finished. Should we start demanding a sequel now? :laugh: *smoochies*
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on December 22, 2006, 03:07:01 am You're damn right Ozzucay, I can't picture my life without waiting to see End Transmisson's next episode... Ok that was a little exageration :D
Thanks a lot for the update Kere, I'll take as an anticipated Christmass Gift :) Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on December 22, 2006, 06:16:56 am Kere I want more. NOW
Title: Thank you! Post by: whsdragon on December 22, 2006, 09:21:08 am Anouther great chapter Kere! Thanks agin!
and a Very Merry Christams everyone! Whitehawk Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on December 22, 2006, 02:51:09 pm Wow. Suspenseful much? ><
Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilwen on December 23, 2006, 04:13:48 pm great chapter Kere! can't wait for the next update,Thanks.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ali on December 24, 2006, 11:24:22 am oh lord ... now you're gonna leave us hanging till after Christmas huh??!!!!!
:grin: Title: End Transmission Post by: barrfly on December 24, 2006, 07:59:18 pm Kere, I know how hard it is to get a story in your head and follow it through with all the twists and turns. You've done a good job. I sometimes have trouble following it, seems a bit disjointed, but overall good read and I look forward to your next installment.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Melody_Glory on December 26, 2006, 01:12:17 pm Hmm,good
Title: End Transmission Post by: Loli-Jadwiga on December 29, 2006, 09:12:50 pm awesome!! I'm continuing to love this story more and more with every new addition to it.. can't wait for more! ~cheers excitedly~ and the suspense..ooohhh...the suspense!!! I absolutely love it - amazing job you're doing here - this is definitely a beyond-spectacular story. :thumbup:
Title: End Transmission Post by: vinhou on December 30, 2006, 07:54:12 pm Iiiiiih! There aren't any more chapters now? ARGH! I just found the story tonight and have read it all the way through - I'm not even sleepy cause it's so intriguing! And it's 1.53 am here in Denmark...!
Pleeeease continue soon...! I've added the story to my favourites, so I'l keep checking back to see if there's an update. AMAZING work! :P Title: End Transmission Post by: haze-mist on December 31, 2006, 11:51:51 am that was wicked!!!!!
Title: Get on it Post by: PoppieSkat on January 01, 2007, 04:14:18 pm OHHHH!!!!! I need to know what happens!! Im practically buzzing on my chair,
GRRRRRR Now I need more !!!!¬! :blob6: :blob5: :mumum: :devill: lol LOVE IT!! Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on January 01, 2007, 04:29:28 pm Ooo, excellent two updates! :) And, now, more begging. Update. Please, please, pleaseeeeee!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on January 04, 2007, 01:34:44 am thanks everyone for your feedback. I will update the story next week, now that the holidays are behind us. Happy New Year!
Title: End Transmission Post by: ~*Jax*~ on January 04, 2007, 11:44:12 am And Happy New Year to you too!
... hehe ... thanks for feeding my addiction *hug* Title: End Transmission Post by: PoppieSkat on January 04, 2007, 01:58:44 pm Quote from: Mi-chii;477562 Oh my god, I didn't find this before now. BAD Kere, you've kept me up WAY after my bedtime, I just had to read this! Man, this should be made into a movie. Not a sims-movie, a REAL movie. Or tv-serie. What an AMAZING story. Yeh I agree totals, I want MORE!! MORE !! hehe, i think im addicted, :toothy8: Title: End Transmission Post by: Mike141 on January 05, 2007, 02:25:42 pm Noo!! You got me addicted! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on January 09, 2007, 08:14:44 am Whoops.......bad me, I missed this update but now caught it, so yay!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Zggs on January 12, 2007, 08:29:13 pm NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted to hear more....*cry*
Title: End Transmission Post by: devil_sue on January 13, 2007, 01:20:52 pm WOW fantastic story, im hooked, cant wait to read more.
Title: End Transmission Post by: celebkiriedhel on January 14, 2007, 04:17:08 pm You know sometimes not coming back for a few weeks is good - I found a lovely update from Kere! You little beauty!
I'm really looking forward to the denoument too - I love the time counting down graphic. Your graphics are amazing. Kiri Title: End Transmission Post by: phoenix_risin on January 15, 2007, 05:28:26 pm This just gets better and better.
I can not wait for more. Title: End Transmission Post by: xquisites0ul on January 18, 2007, 01:55:07 pm wow - this story is freakin amazing
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on January 18, 2007, 09:39:52 pm Can I demand more Kere. :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Spazsgirl21003 on January 20, 2007, 01:24:41 am This story totally rocks! I hope there is more soon.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on January 20, 2007, 08:51:08 am Thanks everybody for your feedback and encouragment, after 7 months, this gets quite exhausting and I appreciate it very much :) - almost finished. I have been working on this chapter for some time now, and decided to split it so that I can spend longer working on the next part :) - and also because it's long overdue that I made an update. SO... sorry for the wait... and sorry for... well, you'll see :D
enjoy! Chapter 27: Get us outta here! (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-343.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-344.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-345.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-346.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-347.jpg) Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on January 20, 2007, 08:52:12 am (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-348.jpg)
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(http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-356.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-357.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-358.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-359.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-360.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-361.jpg) (http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b363/hemi2k/BB-362.jpg) - end of 27 - Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on January 20, 2007, 09:13:04 am No you can't end it here mister! Nice update love!
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on January 20, 2007, 12:32:50 pm Noooooo! You can't end it here like this! Nice update though. :)
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on January 20, 2007, 01:48:20 pm kere I need more. What are doing trying to give a heartattack dammit
Title: End Transmission Post by: keirra on January 20, 2007, 02:46:32 pm Another great chapter. Thank you.
Title: End Transmission Post by: homerette on January 20, 2007, 03:18:33 pm Goody! Thanks for another great update.
Title: End Transmission Post by: devil_sue on January 20, 2007, 09:37:41 pm another gread update :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on January 21, 2007, 02:02:58 am omfg I'm startin to think you're a sadist man!! Great update and u xan be sure that everyone wants an update just like gollum wants the precious :D
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on January 21, 2007, 11:56:54 am You've elevated keeping us hanging to an art form :D Great job, doll.
Title: End Transmission Post by: DebWillDo on January 21, 2007, 02:10:04 pm Okaaaay!!!
So,what happens next??? C'mon, I have know! Don't leave me hangin'! I'll check back soon. Title: End Transmission Post by: xquisites0ul on January 21, 2007, 05:43:40 pm GOT DAYYYYYMMNNNNN!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on January 22, 2007, 04:36:31 am *Sits with eyes wide*. You can't leave it like this! (Well, you can, because you did). Can't wait for the next bit!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on January 22, 2007, 01:44:39 pm oh man! you´re a master...
every chapter of this story is amazing, and the last one, oooooooohhhhh!!! the pics (as always) are terrificly good. Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on January 22, 2007, 07:56:36 pm First, thanks for the update, and second, Aaaaagh! ><
Title: End Transmission Post by: Princess*KIRBY* on January 23, 2007, 12:53:42 pm I've just read every single word to find I'm on a cliff hanger! lol I love it so please, *PLEASE* update soon!
Title: End Transmission Post by: kere on January 26, 2007, 08:12:20 pm Well, that's it - this is the end. A video-clip extended ending follows these pics - to watch, please scroll forward to the next post and start the download while reading :) Thanks again for your viewing, and your comments which have helped motivate me to continue. I hope you've enjoyed this thing as much as I enjoyed making it up as I went along!
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Title: End Transmission Post by: keirra on January 26, 2007, 09:47:37 pm Wow! I really liked this story. Thank you for sharing it.
Title: End Transmission Post by: kathy on January 26, 2007, 10:29:48 pm No you can't end it.... I want more
Title: End Transmission Post by: xxJessicaxx on January 26, 2007, 10:44:14 pm You just can't end it! Grr. :sign5: Very nice story!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Spazsgirl21003 on January 26, 2007, 10:57:58 pm Awesome story! Terrific video. Very cool.
Title: End Transmission Post by: Ozzucay on January 26, 2007, 11:07:27 pm :bawl:
That was awesome, Kere! You did a terrific job with the story and the video. :) But.....but....now it's over *sniff* *sniff* Title: Thank you! Post by: whsdragon on January 27, 2007, 12:36:31 am Thank you soooo much for such a wonderful story and the video was awesome!
Way to go! So sad to see it end though. Whsdragon Title: End Transmission Post by: Squall117 on January 27, 2007, 01:21:38 pm Awww man I really can't believe it's all over :(
Well... It always has to end someday, at least I can say it was a great story and I enjoyed so much, Thanks a lot for making this kere :worship: Title: End Transmission Post by: Veckah on January 27, 2007, 04:03:08 pm *standing ovation*
Title: End Transmission Post by: kim on January 27, 2007, 05:44:31 pm yay kere its finally done. Now I demand a sequel
Title: End Transmission Post by: Kielen on January 27, 2007, 06:37:15 pm Fantastic, Kere!!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: devil_sue on January 27, 2007, 09:50:08 pm thanks for sharing that fantastic story, i loved it and the video was very well made i loved it
Title: End Transmission Post by: AlbinoBambi on January 28, 2007, 09:30:25 am Wow.. Just wow..
Title: End Transmission Post by: dangermouse on January 28, 2007, 02:16:51 pm It can't be over!
Just briliant storytelling, the pictures, and the film at the end, a great end to a great story. Title: Yay! Post by: homerette on January 28, 2007, 05:41:51 pm :clap: Fabulous, wonderful, excellent, superb! Thank you. :cheers:
Title: This is the best Sims Story I have ever read... Post by: asiashamecca on January 29, 2007, 11:59:40 am That's it... Hands down. Absolutely breath taking stuff. :clapp::clapp::clapp::clapp::clapp::clapp:
Title: End Transmission Post by: Elven_Song on January 29, 2007, 09:38:41 pm Wow.
I can't believe it's over. I mean, I hadn't even gotten it all figured out yet, and it just ends. 0.o Wow. Despite my confused-ness, it was a super major story. I loved it. The characters were great, and I know you worked hard on this. -claps- Great job Kere. It was a grand experience. Title: End Transmission Post by: Kittycataussie on January 31, 2007, 05:17:03 pm I just read all of it today and it was awesome. I can honestly say it was the best thing I've read in weeks. (and I'm a MAJOR bookworm, just ask my mom) I agree with anyone else who says great job, but we really need a sequal!!. I absolutely LOVED it! I bow to your awesome storyteller abilities.:worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
Title: End Transmission Post by: pinkpsyche on February 05, 2007, 03:24:48 am OMG! I loved it! I love the movie too... I wish it didn't have to end!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Fercho on February 06, 2007, 11:02:17 pm BRAVO!!!!! fantastic, awesome.... I´m speechless
man, you´re so talented; let´s hope we don´t have too wait too long till your next work. ;) Title: End Transmission Post by: phoenix_risin on February 12, 2007, 08:00:04 am What a great story. You should write for a living. This kept me locked in as well if not better than the last Danielle Steele I read.
The time it must have taken to get those pictures and all the things needed to make them I can not even imagine Standing Ovation and much applause for one heck of a great story! I will be sure to keep my eyes posted for future work. Title: End Transmission Post by: celebkiriedhel on February 12, 2007, 07:25:03 pm I love to read.
I have enjoyed reading this since I first found it through Kathy's link. It's been my relaxation when I've needed to unwind. It's been exciting, and thought provoking and a helluva good read. I'm looking forward to more stories by you Kere... and in the meantime, I'm going back to the beginning to read this one again! When a story goes on this long, it can be hard to end it - but I think you've picked the perfect place to end it. The climax and denouement was perfectly paced, and very thrilling, with a great feeling to the end. I actually caught myself holding my breath with the countdown! The video was great, and a nice wrap-up for the story. So I hope you enjoy a short break, and then have more stories for us soon :D KIri Title: End Transmission Post by: theusedrocks on February 14, 2007, 08:23:51 am you....are AMAZING!
great video at the end and an even greater story. :) this should be made into a movie. Title: End Transmission Post by: gundavolt on February 16, 2007, 05:35:23 pm Thank you so much, best Sim-story I've ever read. Someone here wrote it should have been made into a movie or TV-series, and I totally agree.
Hope to read more of your stuff!!! Thou art Marvellous! Title: End Transmission Post by: PoppieSkat on February 19, 2007, 05:53:05 pm WE LOVE YOU KERE!!
That was the most amazing story I have ever read. Thought I might go mad while waiting for you to update, but thankfulle you got there in the end. Thank you for spending so much time on this for us to enjoy! -x-Dezi-x- Title: End Transmission Post by: vita4all on February 25, 2007, 04:50:42 pm I began and ended your story this week. The plot, drama, characters, ending and were entertaining and the photos were just excellent. I can tell you put a lot into this. If you plan to do another one, you've got a bunch of fans, inlcuding me. Thanks!
Title: End Transmission Post by: Krissy2223 on February 25, 2007, 08:09:43 pm Title: End Transmission Post by: Krissy2223 on February 25, 2007, 08:11:06 pm can't wait 4 next 1!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: bgpsbabygirl08 on March 07, 2007, 12:58:42 am Wow. I found this story from Kathy's sig, and read it all in one sitting. Umm... WOW. You are truly a gifted storyteller, you should look into doing it professionally, on any level. I really like the plot twists and backstory, both very well done, very tightly and neatly interlaced with each other. Very nice, albeit a tad confusing at times. I'm really impressed though, generally I don't read Sims stories, but you did an excellent job. You may have even inspired me to get back into writing :P
Thanks very much for sharing, Kere :) Title: End Transmission Post by: Lilee4500 on April 22, 2007, 06:17:10 pm wow! great story!!
Title: End Transmission Post by: cari4003 on April 23, 2007, 03:04:40 pm Great story! I really like when I find them later and they're finished....don't have to wait for updates! Thanks!
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