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Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on October 28, 2006, 04:48:28 am Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy this is my story called LOST about young Amilela Love Tear whos a ghost. She had a tragic story to tell so i shall begin......:sleepy5: :sleepy5: :sleepy5:
Title: Chaper one, the death Post by: Punk Rocker on October 28, 2006, 05:50:12 am LOST
Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek. Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on October 28, 2006, 06:04:36 am *waiting for someone too say how good her story is*:sleepy5:
Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on October 28, 2006, 06:30:15 am Quote from: Punk Rocker LOST Young Amilela had died of the black death and her grave was at St Sebs Church. Amileas spirt whatched her family sobbing full of gref. Her mother,Janesa with her foral dress,her father,Albert in his smart new suit,her husband Tomas,grefing with his new wife,Mina. She was crying,indeed,but she had a nasty smurk on her face. Tomas was know a welthy widower and she now had all of Amilea's money and welth. TRATOR! thought Amilea as a blood tear dripped down her cheek. How could this be happing? Why did she die?Why? A the dawn rose,Amilea faded away.... NEXT TIME ON LOST THE DEATH PART 2 Amilea finds that know matter how hard you can hate someone,she shall always forgive them. Title: LOST Post by: Mandie on October 28, 2006, 01:19:20 pm Nice beginning. Pictures would be lovely, as would longer chapters. For easier reading, I would suggest using a program that helps with your spelling. For example, Word Perfect or some program like that. I use those myself, so I don't misspell quite as much. I like the concept, though. I am looking forward to reading more.
Title: LOST Post by: Elven_Song on October 29, 2006, 12:36:46 am Mandie's right, but it sounds very interesting. Pump it up a bit and it'll be an awesome story. Also, may I suggest that you edit your previous post rather than quoting your own post to add more? Less spammage that way.
Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on October 30, 2006, 11:41:57 am as i was sayin' Ps sorry guys, i don't KNOW HOW to put up pictures!:dontknow:
Title: Chapter 2 hatred and lies Post by: Punk Rocker on October 30, 2006, 11:54:26 am Amilea watched Tomas kiss Mina. She felt lonely inside."I hate YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU" Amilea screamed and the wind batterd the air,Mina hugged him tight.
"oh thomas ,darling,I'm soo happy." Mina Smurked. "god",Amilia thought, Give it A rest! Good! Tomas was proud. Amilea turnd away,back into the grave,sobbing. Tomas grinned at His wife,his mother and father inlaws and the grave. He,and Mina placed two red roses on her grave. "to the woman i never knew." Mina cried,smileing. As Mina placed her rose on the grave,it slipped off. "Oh-" began Mina,but Tomas placed it back quickly. "just an axedent" he said slowly. Amilea popped her head outside her grave. She laughed. "More like I did it!" She laughed agian.:toothy5: (hehe) To be coutiued................ Sorry to the focks, but i NEED i a hand rest.:) Title: LOST Post by: Squinge on October 30, 2006, 06:18:45 pm How To: Post Pictures (http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=13024)
Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on November 03, 2006, 09:38:02 am Quote from: Squinge How To: Post Pictures (http://www.insimenator.org/showthread.php?t=13024) yay! now i can do it!!!!!!! (i think:lol: ) Title: LOST Post by: oddball011 on November 05, 2006, 04:13:58 pm lol good luck
Title: LOST Post by: mieley on November 13, 2006, 03:50:09 pm in case your trying to spell amelia cause thats what it looks like... its amelia
i would know... its my name. Title: LOST Post by: oddball011 on November 13, 2006, 04:21:23 pm I like this plot but I would like pictures
Title: LOST Post by: Punk Rocker on November 19, 2006, 09:10:31 am Quote from: omggitsameelia;422061 in case your trying to spell amelia cause thats what it looks like... its amelia i would know... its my name. It dude, it the same thing...:devill: |