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Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: kenji on November 16, 2006, 06:52:07 pm Hello,
I wanted to share a story, Its about a group of people, who become "cursed", or even born with their well gift. I got the inspiration form NBC's Heroes. I going to share it as chapters, tell me what you think, I'd love to hear your suggestion/comments. Okay this story is going to be posted at random times, and when ever I get a chance. ~kenji Enjoy! :happy1: Season 1 Chapter 1: Helen Schmidt Chapter 2: Days Ahead Chapter 3: 3 weeks earlier Chapter 4: 2 months ago Chapter 5: TBA Chapter 6: TBA Chapter 7: TBA Chapter 8: Station Chapter 9: United Chapter 10: The Dream Chapter 11: Reality Season 2 Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: caffeinated.joy on November 16, 2006, 07:02:26 pm I can't wait to start reading it!
Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: ~*Jax*~ on November 16, 2006, 07:13:31 pm Waiting with bated breath.
If you need a beta or any help at all, please don't hesitate to PM me. Title: Chapter One: Helen Schmidt Post by: kenji on November 16, 2006, 07:19:14 pm Location: ???? Time: 8:00 pm [/B]Two best friends are driving to school for the big basketball game. Helen and Sasha took a wrong way, and became lost. Unaware that their lives will be forever changed. Sasha: Are you sure you know where you're going? Helen: Yes I'm sure. Sasha: Come on Helen, we're going to be late. Helen: Chill out, we will be their on time. (http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/7394/chapter1tt8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) An hour passes, and the two friends are still lost. Now frustrated Sasha begins. Sasha: That's it Helen, forget about the game. It's probably over by now. Helen: I'm too much worried about the game, I'm worried about getting out of here. (http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/8269/chapter1pt2eo3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) The girls drive down a dark street. Sasha: Whats that ahead? Helen: Whats what? Sasha: No! Helen! Stop the car! Helen Why?......Oh my gosh!!!!!!! (http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/6379/chapter1pt3yj8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) As the car falls off the cliff the girls scream. The car immediately bursts into flames Killing both of the girls. After the fire dies out, Helen awakens. As she gets up she finds Sasha, dead! Helen: Oh no Sasha!!!!! Why? No, this isn't what happened, why am I..... (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/5377/chapter1pt4ih2.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/4293/chapter1pt5zl7.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img157.imageshack.us/img157/7930/chapter1pt7ov6.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3907/chapter1pt8mv1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img93.imageshack.us/img93/5999/chapter1pt6uw3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7030/chapter1pt9uk3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) She runs off. She reaches a lake, and sees her true form. Helen: Ahhh!! a monster! Is this me? (http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/3046/chapter1pt10co8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7320/chapter1pt11jr1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Many things are unclear to Helen, but her story will unfold. To Be Continued.... Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: caffeinated.joy on November 16, 2006, 07:32:05 pm Quote from: Inyri_Jax;427106 Waiting with bated breath. If you need a beta or any help at all, please don't hesitate to PM me. I second that. I'm happy to test run anything for you. Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: SynapticSim on November 16, 2006, 09:28:39 pm Looks good Kenji! Can't wait to see more.
~ Syn Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: oddball011 on November 17, 2006, 04:37:20 pm looks cool
Title: Chapter Two Preview: Days Ahead Post by: kenji on December 22, 2006, 04:13:21 pm Look out for chapter two! Who are these people, well in the next chapter more monsters will be descovered. All leading up to chapter two's devastating finale, A monster will die. The new storyline will keep you on edge. :happy1: (http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/6862/thedaysaheaddr7.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) ~kenji :lol: Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: starlucid on December 23, 2006, 01:07:50 pm ooh looks wonderfull! Looking forward to this.
Title: Chapter Two Preview: The Monsters-Heroes! Post by: Frog_Man on January 07, 2007, 01:14:24 am Love this!
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