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Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 12, 2007, 08:40:59 am This is my first story. Commits, constructive criticism, and suggestions welcome.
Chapter 1 - New beginnings (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_11.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt1_12.jpg) Title: Naive ambitions Post by: -Little-CJ- on April 12, 2007, 03:26:26 pm Good start, It sounds very interesting.
Please update soon! Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 13, 2007, 07:49:09 am Chpt2--Adulthood begins
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Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 15, 2007, 09:48:22 am Chapter 3--Celebration
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(http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt5_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt5_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt5_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt5_4.jpg) Chapter 6--Relationship builds (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt6_11.jpg) Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 20, 2007, 08:27:01 am Chapter7-Tragedy begins
(http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt7_7.jpg) Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 25, 2007, 08:53:29 am I'm not sure if anyone is reading this or not. If you are thank you and enjoy.
Chapter 8 - Love begins? (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt8_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt8_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt8_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt8_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt8_5.jpg) Title: Naive ambitions Post by: lonelydoowoop on April 25, 2007, 09:55:58 pm eep. this is good. =D
Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on April 26, 2007, 10:38:53 am Thanks for rating my story! *Happy happy dance*
Chapter 9-Protective Interferance (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/Chpt9_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_11.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt9_12.jpg) Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on May 01, 2007, 08:32:36 am Chapter10-Desperately searching
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Chapter 15-Deep Suspicions (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt15_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt15_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt15_3.jpg) Title: Chapter 16-Confrontation Post by: cari4003 on May 08, 2007, 11:16:14 am (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt16_1.jpg)
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Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on May 09, 2007, 11:30:29 am Chapter 17-Gruesome discovery
(http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt17_7.jpg) Chapter 18-Final details (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt18_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt18_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt18_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/chpt18_4.jpg) I would like to thank everyone who took the time to read and comment on my story. I would also like to thank all the talented creators out there, without them my sims would be kinda boring and we couldn't create things like this. If you liked this story and want to find out more about these characters, watch for Book 2, Sweet Revenge? I should start posting in a couple of days. Thanks again, everyone. Title: Naive ambitions Post by: cari4003 on May 09, 2007, 11:52:07 am This was the first story I had ever done and what a trip. I would like to share with you some observations as a newbie for other beginners out there.
First watch your relationships, family should only be set as high as bestfriends. If you do love, you have that ugly jealously thing. Kaitlyn and her parents are real hard to work with because I set their relationship to love. Mom got jealous, hates Kaitlyn, dad loves both. I changed their relationship, but the memories still remain. Second, if you are going to have love scenes or romance relations between newly created sims, play them first.....Jayna and Damon do NOT like each other. (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/keep.jpg) This fighting is constant and I have to play them for hours before I can get them to be civil. I'd like to share some blooper pix with you....might help you to spot things before their posted. I tried to share them from a directors point of view. Enjoy! (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_1.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_2.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_3.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_4.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_5.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_6.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_7.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_8.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_9.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_10.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_11.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_12.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_13.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_14.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_15.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_16.jpg) (http://i149.photobucket.com/albums/s63/cari4003/b_17.jpg) When doing outdoors scenes, you might want to have some kind of shelter if you are using Seasons. The outside scenes took me three evenings be- cause everyone needed hot chocolate, or they would freeze. Again, thanks everyone. Title: Naive ambitions Post by: kathwynn on May 10, 2007, 04:13:27 am Love the bloopers funny :)
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