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Title: Suspect.
Post by: cookie_monster8 on July 30, 2007, 12:36:37 am
I started a story and want to see if anyone is interested. Pictures will come by tommorow hopefully
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"Why do you have to leave me here." Tiffany whined as she walked up the steps to her father's house. Her mother sighed, "Because he is your father and because I have a buisness trip. Bye Honey." she said giving her daughter as kiss and she went back to the car leaving Tiffany on the steps with her suitcases. Tiffany sighed and rang the doorbell. She looked around, her dad is a big shot now with a nice house and everything. She remembered when he and her mother first got divorced. He was a man trying to get a movie idea looked at... living on the streets... and now this. When a plump blonde lady answered the door she was very suprised.  


EDIT: If you like the story please comment. and if you don't I'll take constructive critisim.


Title: Suspect.
Post by: ryannrules86 on July 30, 2007, 11:29:27 pm
It sounds good the next update will tell a whole lot more I hope


Title: Suspect.
Post by: cookie_monster8 on July 30, 2007, 11:32:33 pm
It will.  I am writing it at the moment


Title: Suspect.
Post by: ryannrules86 on July 30, 2007, 11:33:25 pm
cool i need more detail but it sounds realy intreastring


Title: Suspect.
Post by: Medagic on August 01, 2007, 09:31:15 am
Definitely sounds like a good beginning.  Can't wait for more!
Medagic


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