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Hello I am new to this forum and I have been wanting to do this little story for awhile.  It's a horror story.   I hope you enjoy.  Please to give any constructive critisms. Especially regarding photo taking since I feel this is sort of my weakness.   I will try to update asap.  Please comment and fuel me to write more!
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Hello my name is Ilina Curtis. I want to tell you my story it is a strange story, an incredible one, but it is all true. I have held on to my story for a long time.  But I feel now after all these years I can tell it, if only to maybe prevent any one else from suffering my own fate.  I need to tell you about my experience with the unknown and predatory beings I call the Feeders...

 It began about two years ago.
I was young in love and married for about five years. I had just finished nursing school and Tim my beautiful darling was a Police Officer.

  We had been renting a small apartment and scrimping and saving every dime for a new home and now we finally had enough for a down payment on a nice little starter home.

Mellisa our realtor had called one evening with the news of a nice house in our price range.  It was small but the bones of the house and neighborhood were good.  It was in a good school district something very important to me since I intended on having children.

I had decided to try to start a family right away and begin my nursing career after the baby had turned a year old.  Tim was excited about getting started on a family he wanted to get pregnant soon too! How in love we were how wide eyed and innocent.  I never dreamed that innocence would be shattered with a darkness that would consume us.
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Tim took that morning off and we met Mellisa in front of the house.  Mellisa greeted us with a big grin and started right away on her pitch "You know this one will  not last long"  It's in Pleasantville school district and it's in great condition for an older home" she was right about that I thought if the inside looked as good as the outside we  might have finally found our home!

"This house meets all your wants on your list there is one little thing I am obligated by law to tell you." Mellisa seemed to have an embarassed uncomfortable look on her face.  "The laws in this state require I inform you that there has been criminal activiy that has occured in this home."  Mellisa stated quickly almost in one breath.

"It was a long time ago about 10 years ago a family lived here the Husband well he lost his mind and murdered his family and then killed himself"  It was a very sad story and long ago the present owner lives out of state and bought the home as a rental property and well now wants to sell it.

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My heart sank suddenly my light happy thoughts of our new home felt all wrong.  I remembered the story the man had shot his whole family point blank in the head while they slept, I shuddered while that awfull thought filled my head.
Mellisa is the house rented now? I asked.  "No dear it's vacant"  "Oh that's odd I thought I saw someone peeking through the window must have been my eyes I guess" I was pretty sure I had seen someone at the window how strange.

We went into the house it was perfect small but comfortable I pushed thoughts of murder out of my mind the house was clean tidy and well lit.  The owner had remodeled the kitchen and replaced the apliances it was indeed perfect.
Tim was quiet the whole time he told Melissa to give us some time to talk it over and we would let her know in the morning if we wanted to make an offer.

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"You guys talk it over Tim but remember this one won't last long so we need to get an offer in soon" she preached as we got in our cars to leave.

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Tim took me out to dinner that evening so we could talk about the house.  I so desperately wanted to talk him into the house.  I was tired of waiting to start our family.  My biological clock was screaming and here was the perfect place to have our baby.  Ok so it was the scene of a horrific murder but that was a long time ago and we could fill this home with our love and happiness I just knew it.
"Tim this house is perfect I think we should make an offer" I pushed as we sat down at our favorite restaurant.
Tim was quiet he had not wanted to discuss it until we had some time to think about and could do so in our favorite place where we had met.
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Tim looked at me with that familiar look of concern.  I hated that look.  It was the look he gave me when I had been sick.  Yes I guess I neglected to mention I had a bout of depression or what some people call the crazies.  It was very bad I had spent some time in the hospital.  Of course Tim would never forget that.  See I had lost a baby.  The doctor's called it post-partum psychosis.  I really don't remember much except that I was very angry, sad and insane.
"Baby I don't think we should live in a place with such bad history call me supersticious but I feel houses hold memories of evil.  I have seen that as a cop Ilina houses where misery never ends" I knew what he was thinking with my history living in that house might make me sick again.

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I told him he was being silly.  The house was great and exactly what we were looking for.  I told him our lease was up in the apartment and everything else Mellisa had shown us didn't compare to this house.  In the end Tim agreed as long as it didn't bother me about the history of the house and I was sure we could go ahead and make an offer on the house.  I breathed a sigh of relief.  I had gotten my way.  Nothing was going to stop me from having our perfect life in our perfect home with our perfect baby.  Looking back on it now I would have done anything to get that house I was already under it's spell.

More,more,MORE!!!!:)

so good!!please continue or the kitty gets it

Thanks guys! I definately will continue I have a lot creepy ideas for this story. LOL!

Oooh.  I'm definitely loving this one, already.  I love the grainy-cartoony effect of the pictures.  The third shot, of Ilina by herself, is especially pretty.  I like your writing style, also.  The way she keeps thinking back to 'before', and how she has a past with some mental problems, captures my interest.  I'm looking forward to reading more.

thankyou!  I have a bunch of pics taken so I hope to update this weekend.

continue!Continue!

Chapter 2

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"My throat is dry I need to take a break" Ilina said flatly.
"I can get you some water Ilina just a moment" Detective Merrow

offered.
"No!"  "I said I need a short break!" Ilina said sharply.
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"OK Ilina we will take a short break"  "Officer Lucy Matos will stay

with you and I will send in a nurse to get you a drink.  OK?"
"Thats fine" Ilina said with a vacant look on her face.

Detective Merrow walked out of the room quietly and gave explicit

instructions to the guard at the door to remain at his post at all

times.
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  After finding a nurse to get Ilina a drink he went looking for

Ilina's doctor he finally found him in the hallway.  Doctor Jones was

not pleased the minute Detective Merrow spoke to him he jumped down his

throat.
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 "Look Detective!  I gave you permission to interview my patient not

exaust her into another catatonic state!"  "You and your Officers have

been there all morning and I'm giving just one more hour and you will

have to come back after I examine Ilina to make sure you are not

regressing her"  Doctor Jones was your typical doctor unpleasant to

talk to.
Detective Merrow apologized and asked him to please allow him a little

more time.  Ilina wanted to tell her story.  In fact he had been called

at her own request.
"I just want you to understand that I will not allow you to badger this

woman.  She has already been found innocent on the grounds of mental

insanity detective so if anything this is just to help her recovery she

will walk out of here a free woman if I feel she is well enough to

leave"  Doctor Jones was right this was basically useless legally

double jeopardy laws prevented him from charging Ilina in the case.  

However Tim Curtis was his best friend and knowing what happened to him

 and his baby was very important to Detective John Merrow, very

important indeed.
"Doctor JOnes just one more hour today please! begged detective Merrow

I will return tommorow afternoon if you ok it" Doctor Jones looked at

him intently and finally agreed to allow him to continue.

Detective Merrow sighed in relief and headed back to Ilina's room.

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  Ilina was laying quietly on her bed and he turned to Officer Matos

his partner a rooky he was training and asked her if she was taking

everything down.  Officer Matos nodded and he sat back down next to

Ilina.  He looked at her tear stained face and wondered how such a

pretty soft looking woman could be a cold hearted psychopath.
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"Ilina are you ready to continue with your story?"  He asked her

softly.

"Yes I am."  "I guess I should tell you about how it started how the

feeders were foretold to me by specter in an strange dream.  I wish now

I had followed my instincts and run away after that warning.

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I was so happy that day Tim and I had been living in the house for

about a week.  Tim had taken off the whole week so we could get settled

in and well to try for a baby.  We wanted to spend time feathering our

nest so to speak and I was happier that week than I have ever been.

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"Hey can a hungry slave get something to eat around here?" Tim

hollered.  I went up to him and told him "hmm...lemme see...pictures

hung?...yes....tv cable hooked up oh oh! not done...I scolded jokingly.

"Oh come on Ilina make me a sandwich!" "You know it's baby making night

and if I don't get enough food well I might not have the stamina and

all" he teased.
"Ok baby maker slave just one sandwich until dinner" I scolded.
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He was so good at fixing up things Tim.  He went out of his way to fix

everything in the house that week just how I wanted it.

It was a good time for us as a couple.  Tim was the love of my life.  

There had been no one but him in my heart or my body.
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That day we worked hard both of us and after making love and trying for

our baby that night we both fell into a deep sleep from sheer

exaustion.

Only...my sleep was interupted by a female voice.  It was the most bizzare thing I felt I was asleep but had the awareness of also laying in my bed.  I believe it's called a lucid dream.  Where you know you are asleep yet you are aware of all around you at the same time.  It's a strange sensation and when it's acompanied by the feeling of a presence it can be terrorifying.

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All the while I felt a near presence I could hear a voice calling out my name.  It seemed to be from so far away yet clearly a female insistant voice calling out to me "Ilina!  Ilina!  "Hurry our time is short!"  
In an instant I was transported to a dark deep forest with a small clearing with some graves.  I looked down at myself and I was in my nightgown and barefoot.  There was such a realistic feeling to the dream that I could feel the grass and leaves under my feet.  I looked up and heard the voice again.  On a bench in front of the graves sat a woman who was speaking to me but had her back to me.
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She spoke softly and quickly "I have no time to explain things to you Ilina but you and your husband are in danger" she blurted out.  I tried to interupt her and ask her danger?  From what?  "They will come now that you have moved things within their entrance."  See when you move things around you wake them dear" she explained softly.


Who are you?   I asked.  What are you talking about?  Who will come?
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The next thing I knew I was up right behind her touching her long soft hair.  Here is the bizzare part of it although I was behind her I could see her face.  It was her eyes that were most striking.
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After being pulled close to her that way she said "I'm sorry it is too late"

And just like that I woke with a start.  My heart was beating wildly in my chest and the room was icy cold.  I looked over to Tim who was snoring softly.  After that my sleep was fragmented and near zero for the rest of the night.

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Ohhh - great stuff!

great!Please oh please hurry with another update really soon!

wow that was freakishly awsome

wow!  thanks guys didn't know anybody was reading.  Will update soon.

great job Vicky!!!

Nice!  I love the freaky dream sequence.  Great effect with the pictures.  Can't wait to read more!

Chapter 3
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That morning I was beat so tired I barely heard the alarm go off.  Tim

was running late too he hadn't even said goodmorning he had bolted out

of bed and run into the shower to get ready for work.  The kitchen was

cold and it was a cloudy dreary day outside.  The sun didn't seem to

want to burn through the fog.
I hurried to make Tim his breakfast although I wanted to just run and

get back into bed.
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Tim got out of the shower and seemed to be in a rotten mood.  I asked

him how his breakfast was and he snapped at me.  It hurt my feelings

Tim was never moody in the morning so it caught me off guard.  We both

ate our breakfast in silence.  
Whatever gloom and funk was in the weather seemed to be magnified by

the ice between us that morning.
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Then Tim got up and walked out.  Just like that without saying goodbye

or giving me a kiss.  Something he had never done before.  Tim had

always been very affectionate and warm toward me.  I watched him leave

with surprised hurt.  Little did I know it was the a prelude to how

things would be from now on.

Our relationship had become pretty much non-existant.  Tim's mood was

sullen and very quiet.  He didn't want to talk, make love he didn't

want anything to do with me.  
When I would try to talk to him he would either leave or go to bed.  

Another upsetting factor was Tim's drinking.  Every evening he would

bring a case of beer and sit in front of the tv guzzling it down in

silence.
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Whenever I was actually able to get his attention we fought about

everything.  He blamed me for everything under the sun.  It got to the

point where I left him alone for fear of his violent temper.
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It was around this time that I found out I was pregnant.  Tim's

reaction to the news was heartbreakingly uninterested.  He continued to

ignore me and I walked around in a daze wondering what had happened to

us.

One day I sat down next to him while he drank his beer in silence and

glared at the tv with the usual blank stare.  I had been crying all day

I had to know what was wrong with him.  Why he was pushing me away?  

Why he was he so angry at me?

I decided to pour my heart out to him.  To beg him to talk to me.  
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I took a deep breath and held back my tears.  I didn't want to make

this an emotional outburst.  I needed Tim to really hear me not my

emotions.

"Tim"  I started slowly...."What is happening to us?"  "Don't you love

me anymore?"  as I said those words I looked into Tim's eyes and the

room turned dark.  My head began to spin as I struggled to keep my eyes

open I saw surrounded by blackness the form of Tim's body and face but

his eyes were black holes and his mouth was twisted in an ugly scowl.
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And I heard a raspy growling voice say through that misshapen monstrous

face....."LOOOOOOOOOVVVVVV Yoooooooo???????????????

I felt myself go faint as I recoiled from the hideous figure.  All of a

sudden I could hear Tim's voice yelling from a distance....

ILINA!!!  ILINA!!  WHY ARE YOU SCREAMING????
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Just as quickly as the horrible vision had started it was over.  I had

an overwhelming urge to vomit but my vision had returned to normal.  

Tim's face appeared irrated more so than concerned.

Things continued to be bad between us for pretty much the rest of my

pregnancy.  I learned to stay away from Tim when he was drinking.  I

frankly was afraid of his temper.  He was only interested in his beer

and tv.
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My nerves were shot.  I wasn't sleeping well and I was so afraid my

stress would affect the baby.  When I couldn't take it anymore I

mentioned it to my midwife Angie.  I had decided on a natural child

birth at home and she was wonderful.  She came to my home to see me and

examine me every week toward the end.  She knew things were not good

between Tim and I.
She wanted me to go to counselling with Tim.  She had even written down

the name of a therapist.  But Tim had flatly refused.
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"Well Ilina this baby looks good and ready to come out" Angie announced

during her exam.  "Really?" I said. I was ready for my baby to be born

finally.  I had decided if Tim's attitude had not changed by the time

the baby was born I was going to leave him.  I would not expose our

child to his violent nasty temper and drinking.  I had made up my mind

about that.

"Angie I am just not sleeping at all I'm so tired and with all the

trouble with Tim my nerves are shot."
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"Hmm...things have not gotten better then...Ilina I am going to have an

intern come spend the afternoons with you.  She will keep you

company,clean up and keep an eye on you until the baby is born.  Just

to make sure you will be ok."  "I'm going to put you on a light bedrest

until I am sure you are sleeping better ok dear?"

I tried to stay in bed as much as I could and Maddie the intern made my

afternoons pleasant with her chatter.  I kept an eye on Tim he was as

cold and weird as ever.  He and his beer were never apart for long.
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I hired a decorator to finish the babies room since Tim wouldn't do it.

 I would linger in there each day and cry thinking about what I was

bringing our poor baby into.  A house of stony silence and misery.  

Even the soft pretty infant colors couldn't shake the feeling of

darkness in that house.
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One night I layed in bed I started to drift off to the sound of Tim's loud snoring....with all his drinking his snoring had become unbearable lately but sleep finally came and took me to a familiar place.  The place where I would sit and speak to the pale woman who continued to haunt my dreams.
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It had become a familar place almost like a nightly appointment with the netherworld.  The woman never told me her name she would talk to me about her world.
She spoke about others like herself who had once been people but were not prisoners of evil entities she called the feeders.  She told me if you awaken them then they will take you after you die.  They are not human she explained softly.  But pre-human.  Our world had once belong to them but "The Almighty Source" had become disgusted with his creation and wiped out their world.  Now they had been cursed into the realm of the dead or imprisoned with the spirits of their own replacements and their hatred for the sons and daughters of Adam was very great indeed.
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As I sat listening to the pale woman I heard a crackling noise that became intense and finally deafening.  The pale woman turned and looked at me intently and told me you must go back now they are there!   "Who?"  I asked confused.  "Your husband Ilina they are after him!"
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"What are they doing to him?? Tell me!"  I demanded.
She turned her lovely face and told me "They are eating his heart Ilina."

Great!!!More soon!By the way Wal-mart had a blackout today not too long ago.It was freaky.Not to mention we could hear thunder and everything but when we got outside, it did not even look like it had rained at all until we got home and it looked like it rained a whole bunch!

LOL!  I have a bunch of pics to update this I'm going to have to do it in another chapter tho.  Katrina thats weird about walmart I thought they would have back up generators.

so good it was very exciting

Chapter 3 part 2


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As soon as she uttered those words I jolted fully awake.  Tim was not in bed he was up against the wall of the bedroom.  He was just standing there with his arms twisted in an odd position.
I called out to him but he wouldn't answer me.  I got up and walked over to him wondering if he was drunk and maybe sleepwalking.


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Thats when I noticed he was stiff and seemed to be stuck in that unnatural pose.  When I looked into his face his eyes were rolled to that back of his head giving him a ghoulish look.  I was so scared but I somehow knew I had to wake him out of it slowly.
I began to speak to him calmly..."Tim you are out of bed come back to bed Tim you are  sleepwalking"  My words seemed to not reach him.

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I started to get scared what if he was possesed with one of these violent beings?  The pale lady had said they were eating his heart.  My God what was I going to do?
I got closer to him and tried to touch him to see if that would snap him out of his ghoulish pose.
I slowly touched his face and told him "Tim it's me Ilina your wife and I love you come back to me"
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With my touch his rigid body suddenly softened and he awoke confused and crying like a child.  I held him while he composed himself and for awhile after this things warmed up between us.  
Not like before but in a gentle understanding that we had survived an ordeal and did so together.
Tim was never the same after this experience he no longer joked or was light hearted.  But at least I had him back somewhat for awhile...

Chapter 4

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It was two months before Detective Merrow was allowed to see Ilina again.  Apparently she had suffered a setback after speaking with him last.  Doctor Jones had not allowed him to come back with other officers or a typist.  Ilina was doing much better and had been moved from the high security area of the hospital to a regular ward.
She had recovered from her relapse and had asked Doctor Jones to call me.  When I got there I found her in the solarium painting.  She did look better.  
I walked up to her slowly and  greeted her softly with a "Hello Ilina" so as not to spook her.  Her back was to me and she immediately recognized my voice.

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"Ahh...Detective Merrow!  I'm so glad you came.  I asked the Doctor to call you.  I feel well enough now to continue talking about what happened." she said softly.  "Ilina I am sorry you were not well after we talked it was not my intention to upset you or make you sick again" I said to her wishing she would turn around.  I really did mean that if she continued to relapse each time we spoke I would never know the truth.

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"It's ok Detective I have to tell someone or I will lose my mind again anyway." she said matter of factly.  I asked Ilina if we could sit down and begin and she agreed.
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"Detective" she started "You think me a cold hearted killer don't you?"  Her question surprised me up until that time she had never asked me anything.  I breathed in and told her "Ilina you were found guilty by reason of insanity" I continued "Are you saying you didn't kill your husband and baby?"  I almost wanted her to say she had not.

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she got a far away look in her eyes and said "I don't know detective everyone says I did do it but in my mind I killed monsters not my family."

Thanks Away I want to add some more to chapter 4 today hopefully.

Chapter four part 2

"Ilina tell me about the monsters" I asked I imagined them to be part of her psychotic hallucinations.

"Well after Tim's episode that night I finally got to see the Feeders and I can only describe them as monsters..

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We were both so tired that night I actually never got up to fix Tim's breakfast.  I was having such a deep peacefull sleep.  Tim and I had reconnected and in his arms I felt safe and drifted off into a wonderfull deep sleep.
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I didn't even hear the alarm or Tim leave that morning at his usual 5am wake up time.  It was in this deep sleep state that I was summoned by the pale woman again into my recurring dream place.

It began as it usually did with me sitting next to the pale woman and listening to her words.  This time I had prepared myself to be more in charge of the dream sequence.  
When I sat down next to her I began to question her.  "If I am to spend every night talking with you I want you to give me your name" I told her as I sat down.  After a long pause she told me her name was Rebecca Atkins.  She asked me please not to say her name outloud.  Something about if you name is known it gives more power to evil entities to manipulate you.  She said her baptism name was secret and that was what protected her to certain extent from the feeders.

I looked at her face and there were scratches all over it.  She noticed and told me that occasionally when she was at the wrong place they would attack her in retaliation for trying to speak with me.
I asked her to tell me about the feeders and how I could fight them.  She said they were at one time a great people they had reached great sucess in their civilization.  They had been direct decendants from the Watchers who were Guardians of their world.
But the Ruler of the Watcher's was displeased with their mingling of seed with their people and he destroyed their world.  He banished them to the astral realm and bound them there.  The astral realm damaged their bodies and transformed them into hideous forms.  
Because they had imortality their torment was eternal.  While their material bodies decayed so did their reason.  So they had become monsters who only expressed hate and a predatory hunger.
I shivered at Rebecca's words.  "Tell me Rebecca if they are bound to this world how is it that they can cross over to our world?"

"he Watchers took pity on their offspring and what they had become and opened gateways to allow them entrance into their old world which is now our world." Rebecca explained.
"Some of these ancient gateways are quite hidden and isolated from men but wherever a drop of blood has been spilled in hate and violence a temporary gate is open and if a feeder is nearby and it is disturbed within our realm in anyway it remains open until shut by "The Ruler" who you and I know as God or his Agent known to us as "The Lamb"
My mind was spinning with all she told me.  This was related to our world, our creator, his enemies and by proxy our own enemies.
I knew there was a gateway in my home from the murders that had taken place there.  I also knew it had been disturbed by the renovation of the previous owner and our own work done on the house.  
Just then as these thoughts filled my head I heard a slithering noise in front of us in the woods.
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"What the hell is that??" I shrieked.  "Sit down! Rebecca shouted.  "they cannot cross the tombstones unless you feed them!"
"Feed them!?" I was so confused feed them how?
"Your fear, hate, sadness, dispair is their food" she explained.  "The ground we sit on is blessed a Priest comes a blesses it for his dead Mother.  Because it is blessed it is a safe place for all humans." She explained.  
I tried not to give in to my terror and I did as Rebecca had said.  
"This is a family of feeders that have found your gateway.  They want to scare you so they can feed."
I looked at the slithering monsters.  I could feel a scream trying to escape my throat.
There were three forms approaching us.  The first one I saw was small like a child.  Yet it was on fire and it's face was hideously contorted.  There was anther form that appeared female and it's body was bent backwards and she crawled on her forearms toward the tombstones.  The other form just appeared dark and large male shadow form in the background.
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The slithering female called out to me in a high pitched almost cartoony voice.  "IIIIIiiiiiiiinnnnnaaaaaaaaaaa!"
"Your baby is dead give him to us" it said with ghoulish glee.
"Look at my baby......he will enjoy playing with yours!"  The hideous small being hissed and the fire around him grew taller.  I felt myself fainting from fear.
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Rebecca was now yelling at me "Do not listen to their words your fear is breaking the boundary!"  It was too late I was stiff with fear and nothing would shake me out of it.
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"Go back to the World of Three Now!!" She yelled and just in an instant I awoke on the floor of my home face down and unable to move.

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I layed there for a long time in the worst pain.  I had no idea what time it was.  I prayed for Tim to come home early or for Maddie the midwife assistant to finally show up.  Inbetween the awfull pain I thought about what had just happened and felt the nausea of fear and revulsion at the feeder entities.  They wanted my baby my God what was I going to do?  Was my baby really dead like that monster had said?  My mind swam with all that had just happened.  I thought about how Rebecca had sent me back home.  She had said go back to the World of Three.  That was our world a three dimensional world.  I finally fainted at some point and awoke to Maddie yelling out my name.

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"Thank God!  You are awake!  Ilina your baby is coming you are already crowning!  Angie is on her way but I don't think she will make it in time!" Maddie looked scared to death.  I was too busy pushing my baby out to worry about Maddie.  I felt waves go through my body of overwhelming urges to push my baby out.
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"Maddie just catch my baby don't let my baby fall please" I begged.
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Angie arrived just after my son was born.  Maddie had done a terrific job delivering him he was perfect in every way.  Angie had cleaned me up and put me in bed.  It had been a quick but bloody birth and I was very weak they let me sleep while they waited for Tim to finally arrive.
We named our son Adam it was my choice it just seemed to me to be the right name for my baby since it was the name of our human forefather.

Whoa!  Now that's what I call an update.  I can't wait to see what happens next.  That lady crawling on her belly was creeepy.  Poor Ilina.  She's just a victim.  We both have Tims in our stories, and I have a character whose name is similar to Ilina.  Well, it starts with an 'I' anyway.  I love the effect you do with your pictures.  That must take forever to do every single one.

That's right we do both have Tim's thats funny!  I have been bit by the contest bug so I wanted to get as much up of this as I could.  Although there doesn't seem to be too many ppl reading my story anyway.

Maybe, but the ones who are reading it are enjoying it.  Please continue.  I haven't had that many readers, yet, either.

wow that was so good and such a cutie baby

more,more,more!

thanks guys!  You are all very sweet!  I had taken a megaton of pictures for this story before I actually wrote it so I was able to put it up fairly quickly.  Now I will have to take some more!  
I know pretty much exactly where I want to go with it but sometimes I have to sleep on it to see it clearly.
When you guys write your stories do you take pics first or write first?
btw my midwife in the story is a pleasantville townie does anyone recognize her?  (she was so kind to do a cameo for me LOL)

I take pictures first because you might not like what you wrote after picture taking and ya I think I do I think it is but not the name

hint on townie midwife she has an evil twin...lol!

Chapter Five
Part one
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Ilina, I want to hear as much as you can remember.  Please go ahead. I felt she was holding back.

"Detective I remember very little from this point I suppose it is when I lost my mind.  In my dreams I fight those horrible creatures and sometimes I am able to injure them but I do not know if I lost my mind and harmed Tim or my baby because when I awoke they were gone there was only blood.....a lot of blood.." she said in a dreamy voice.


"Ilina?" "Would you be willing to be hypnotized?" I asked.  "I know someone who may be able to put you under hypnosis and help you recover your memory." I explained.

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"Would I remember everything?" She asked with a frightened look on her face.  "In theory yes, you would remember it all if it works."
I am being released next week detective I will leave my address with the hospital and you may contact me at my new home." Ilina had agreed to the hypnosis at last I would know what happened to my friend and his baby.  Of course the evidence said Ilina had killed them but what had she done with the bodies?  They were never found only blood and lots of it.
Ilina do you feel up to continuing with your story? I asked.
"Yes I will tell you the little I do remember from that night" She began.

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Tim had been switched to night shift and he had hired an elderly nanny to come in and help me out with the baby at night.  I was having constant nightmares and I was completely exausted.  Also the baby had colic and frequently cried all night long.  That night before he left he told me to lay down that he had called the nanny to come in and I should rest while the baby slept.  He said I had dark circles under my eyes to go lay down.  
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So I took his advise and lay down on the couch.  I wanted to hear the nanny when she came in.  Except the nanny never showed up that night at all.
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The baby was sleeping well and I soon slipped off into a deep sleep.  I have no idea how long I slept except that it was deep and dreamless sleep.

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Suddenly I woke with a start there was no noise or anything except silence and dark.  It was too dark I couldn't see anything I felt dazed and confused. In the dark I went into the kitchen to get a drink of water on the way back from the kitchen I went to check in on the baby and slipped on something wet on the floor.  

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At first I didn't realize what it was but when I did see it was blood I ran to the babies room and found the floor covered in blood and my baby gone.
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 I do not know how long I sat on the floor out of my mind in fear and grief I suppose it was where the police found me.

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All I knew was that my baby was with them the feeders had taken him somehow while I slept and well about Tim I have no idea last I knew he had been at work.  

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"Ilina Tim was not scheduled to work that day.  I'm sure of it I have been over this case very carefully it was his night off." I said.

"But that means he lied to me that night....Why would Tim lie?" I could see she was getting upset.
"Ilina lets stop for today we hopefully find out when you undergo hypnosis.  Will you call me when you are settled in your new place Ilina?
Ilina agreed to call me as soon as she was settled and I would arrange the hypnosis session with my friend.

This story is really good.  I am always looking for good stories to read and usually only make it a few paragraphs before I lose interest.  So please continue this story and I will be reading any other stories you post in the future.  Again, Thanks!

I love it!!!

ooh thanks new readers! lol! believe me a pat on the back helps when you are doing these stories because you put your heart into it you really do.

I will do an update very soon I usually like to do them early in morning when my little girl is in school and my hubby who works nights is asleep.

that baby was so cute

This is a great story :) Looking forward to the hypnosis part - your pictures are great, far better than mine ;)

Great update!  This story is getting really interesting.  The detective is a real cutie, by the way!

I lost my game including my story characters.  Ugh...I'm in the process of recreating them hopefully to look as close as before and continuing my story.

That sucks :( Hope you get everything sorted :)

wow I love this chapter and I hope you can re-create the lost characters :)

Thanks guys!  I have recreated the main characters it's pretty close hmm..maybe better?
I hope to get an update up in a day or two.

Oh no!  That's probably a sim story teller's worst nightmare.  I mean, if I had wants and fears panels myself, one of my fears would be to lose my story and/or story characters.  Right behind a major computer crash, of course. ;)  I hope you can recreate everyone without too much difficulty.  And don't worry if they don't look exactly the same - we'll understand.

vickylougrl,

Great job on your story so far. I think it's pretty scary and you made some fabulous pics. How awful that you lost so much of your hard work. Hope everything works out with the recreation. I'll definitely will read your new update when it's ready!

thanks guys I actually have taken a few pics and have everybody I need pretty much my problem is the main character Ilina I have remade her but I don't like her ugh....
I will work on her tommorow I was so busy today.
Here she is she is just not right I think it's her mouth I try again.
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Woohoo! I was finally able to get Ilina back.  I hope to update very soon now that my character looks just about the same.

That's good :) Look forward to it ^_^

hey Sadie btw I loved your story on Andy!  It was very good do you have it up anywhere?  I would love to read it.
I'm going to work on this story tonight hopefully took a nap ready to bang out a chapter.

Oh thanks! :) It's an adult story, but if you can't get on InsimAdult (http://www.insimadult.org/showthread.php?t=26099) I'll PM you another link you can get to - it's probably the tamest of the stories on there, but seeing as the second link is easier access to what is still adult content, I'd rather not take the chance of posting it here :)

Thanks sadie I will check it out!

Chapter Five

Part 2


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Ilina had been out of the hospital for about a month now.  The hospital social worker had set her up in a subsidized rent apartment and found her a job as a Library Assistant.

My friend who would hypnotize her was out of the country and would be back that afternoon.  Finally tonight we would maybe know the truth of what had really happened that night.

I went back through all my case notes and found strange discrepancies on Ilina's case.  For one the blood splatter in the house was only Tim's blood and it was not consistant with injuries sustained in a stabbing.
When I showed the Medical Examiner the photos he told me they appeared to be poured onto the floor.  He said he entered this into his report but this was ignored by the Prosecutor because he was so sure of Ilina's guilt.

I had not yet told Ilina I wanted to wait until she was a little stronger.  I had my suspicions that something was very wrong with this case.  So I dug a little deeper.

I went to the Police Department Human Resources and asked about Tim's life insurance.  Interestingly enough Ilina had never been a beneficiary on Tim's policy.  That did not make sense.  Named as beneficiaries were Tim's dead parents and a sister in the even of their death.  I discreetly asked Ilina about Tim's family.  I was his partner and he had never mentioned a sister to me.

Ilina told me Tim was an only child.  I held on to this information for about three weeks.  I had been seeing Ilina pretty much every day since her release from the hospital.  I have to admit at least to myself that I was not just interested in the case but in Ilina herself.

Ilina would meet me at my house before going together to my friend Mark for the hypnosis.  Perhaps tonight Ilina would at last remember what had really happened.

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"Ilina dear!" called out Mrs. Reeder.  Ilina hurried over to the children's section of the small Library.  It was story time and it was a small group of children who were dressed up for an early Halloween story time.  "Ilina that woman left her baby alone here again"  She whispered into Ilina's ear.  "He is cranky and crying can you take him out of here until she shows up?"  Ilina looked down at the cute toddler.  He was obviously tired and needing a nap.  She picked him up and took him over to her desk area.

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"You are a cutie! Why does your mom dump you here every other day?"  Ilina asked the baby in his ear.  She had come to enjoy Micky she tickled him and played with him until a woman finally showed up and walked up to her.
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"Ooh I'm so sorry!  Did Miss Crabbypants over there kick him out?" she whispered.  "No he was crying I guess it's pass his naptime" Ilina answered.
Ilina looked over to the baby and said "You missed your Mamma huh?"

"Ooh no!  I'm not his mother.  He is my boyfriends son.  I usually have a nanny watch him but today is her day off." the woman explained.
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"I wanted to ask you if you had any books on Mushrooms?"  the woman asked Ilina helped her find a botany book.  As she handed her the book she told her "I love mushrooms!"  
"Well I do too but this is to identify some growing around my farm.  I think they may be hallucinogenic because I have caught some teens trying to pick them on my pastures.  They opened the book and looked at the pictures.  "Yes this is exactly the ones growing around my cows" the woman said.  The book said they could cause psychotropic effects and hallucinations.  "I'm going to go out there and pour some salt on them that should discourage the hippies from going out into my pastures".

Ilina couldn't help asking about Mickey's Mom.  The baby seemed so obviously ignored it broke her heart.  "Well when I met my boyfriend his wife just abandoned the baby and him.  She was a cheating drunk!"  she said in a disgusted tone.

Poor Mickey.....Ilina thought.  She told the woman that if she needed someone to watch him she wouldn't mind watching him sometimes.  The woman seemed really happy and took down Ilina's phone number.
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I'm just waiting for my boyfriend he is suppose to pick us up.  Oh there he is!  See ya later!"

"Say goodbye to the nice Lady Mickey!"
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After work I went to pick Ilina up we went to my house to eat some sandwiches before heading out to Mark's place.

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"Ok are my sandwiches that bad? You haven't touched yours" I asked a very quiet Ilina.

"No not at all I guess I'm just a little nervous about the hypnosis later"  she said.

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Ilina...I started I need to talk to you I have discovered some things you need to know..it was time to come clean about the discrepancies on the case.

that was nice I wonder how things are going to be like in the future for her.

Where do you find the time?  Competing in contests, chatting in the chatter threads, giving us another interesting update?  Sheesh!  I probably won't get around to my story this week, lol.  I 'm really looking forward to the next part.  You gave us some interesting information to chew on, and I can't wait to see what happens when Ilina goes under hypnosis!

LOL!  I have insomnia so I play sims when I can't sleep! LOL!

Haha, I'm trying to get my pics taken for the "bad-ass" contest at the mo... even getting the settings in place is proving to be hard... it'll be worth it though :D Interesting update, Tim is digging up suspicion by the bucket-load as of now...

LOL!  I'm in two contest right now.  Just finished up my first round on one and round 2 in the other.  The second one  is a bachlor I'm pretty sure I will be eliminated.  There's like twenty gorgeous sims fighting over him.
But I'm happy either way I got a gorgeous bachelor for my pleasure sim ladies!

I'm having fun with my sims I want more expansion packs tho as soon as I get bored with them.

Which ep's do you have?

I only have base game and nightlife.  I really want university not so much for anything else but the zombies!  Also want OFB I think that will be a lot of fun.  Seasons is on my xmas list too!

Ooooh, great follow up vickylougrl! I feel we might discover the truth about what happened pretty soon. A good thing you were able to recreate so much ;)

By the way, I really enjoyed OFB as an ep because of the victorian build sets and servo's.

Thanks brittybe!  I want all the expansion packs unfortunately I'm on a budget! LOL!  So I have do little by little which I guess is ok I enjoy one until I get bored and then my interest renews as I can get another.  
Just finished my pictures for chapter six.
Going to go ahead and post it.

Chapter Six



I told Ilina about the discrepancies in the blood splatter found and about the life insurance going to a mysterious sister.  She was very upset for a moment I thought I would have to rush her to Doctor Jones and cancel the hypnosis session.

But she pulled it together and after washing her face told me to take her to see Mark.  I was kind of nervous I did not want to set Ilina back in her recovery, especially now where there was a possiblility that she had been the victim of a set up of the worst kind.

We needed to uncover Iina's missing gaps of memory to find out what had really happened not to mention the possiblity that her baby might be alive somewhere.

We arrived at Marks office and after chatting for a bit Mark seated Ilina and dimmed the lights to begin the hypnotic session.


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Mark:  Ilina are you comfortable?

Ilina:  Yes

Mark:   Good!  Let's begin then.  I want you to relax your entire body.  You are safe and relaaxed...

Mark:  Your entire body feels heavy within your seat.  Your good friend  Detective Joe is here with you and there is no fear or anxiety...

Mark:  All is good and safe Joe tell Ilina you are here watching over her that she is safe and relaxed...

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Joe:  Ilina...I am here watching over you.....you may relax.  Relax.....Now..




Mark:  Ilina....I want you to look at the tv screen in front of you on the wall.


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Mark:  Ilina continue to look at the screen until your vision blurs until there is nothing but a grey blur

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Mark:  Ilina can you see the grey blur?


Ilina:......yes....


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Mark:  Good Ilina you are doing very well.....Now I want you to close your eyes and allow the grey screen to become a darkened movie theater screen..
You are in a darkened movie theater and the screen is blank it is dark all around you and there is a special message for you on that screen Ilina....can you see it Ilina?

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Ilina:.....yes.....I can see it..


Mark:  Good I want you to look at the screen now Ilina...right in the middle is a secret message just for you...concentrate on the middle of that screen Ilina it is blurred so you must dicipher it...

Mark:  Can you see it Ilina your secret message?

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Ilina:.....it's blurred....

Mark:....yes Ilina it's blurred look closer your secret message is.....S...L...E....E..P.....

Mark:  Ilina....you are alseep now....but you can hear my voice and follow my directions....you are relaxed......and you will follow my directions....

Ilina:....yes...

Mark:  Ilina I want you to go back to the day your husband Tim and baby vanished....I want you to go to what happened before you slept and awoke to find them missing..

Mark:  Tell me what you see and hear..

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Ilina:  I'm standing behind Tim he is drinking his beer....he is always drinking...I'm sick of it!...

Mark:  Ok...Ilina is he speaking to you?

Ilina:  yes....
Mark:  What is he saying?
Ilina:  Ilina!  I want you to make those mushrooms I brought last night for dinner!...Tim why do you want me to make those stupid mushrooms every night??  You never eat them?!  That's because you over cooked them last time!

Mark:  What happened next Ilina?

Ilina:  I make dinner steak and Tim's mushrooms...he brings them home every night lately...he says they are from a friend's hydroponic farm...

Mark: Ilina then what happens?

Ilina:  We eat dinner and Tim only eats the steak he says the mushrooms..are overcooked again...we start to argue...but I'm too tired..Tim tells go take a nap before the baby wakes up again.....so I lay down I feel sick....so sick.....
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Ilina:  Tim is poisoning me with the mushrooms!  I feel drugged....I can't move I see things horrible crazy things....

Mark:  You are safe Ilina....can you see or hear anything now?

Ilina:....yes...Tim is talking...I can  hear him.....

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Mark:  Who is he talking to Ilina?

Ilina:  He is on the phone I think....

Mark:  What is he saying Ilina?

Good!
:) More more!

Hmm, wonder if all the time these dreams she's been having is 'cause of those mushrooms? Something's not right with him, that's for sure.

hmm I'm beginning to wonder if that toddler that the lady always leaves in the library is Ilina's kid

No!  No, no, no!  Don't stop there!  Ack!  I can't stand it.  I'm really hanging on the edge of my seat, now.  So very cool - and getting better all the time.  I can't wait for the next update.

i just found this story and i love it! its sooo great! moree please!!
and i think kim is rightish, but that would mean that tim was the girl at the library's boyfriend and that he was lying to her about the child's mother!

maybe....I'm going to update this soon.. it's coming to a head too fast so I need to slow it down

Chapter Six

part 2

Mark:  Ilina?  What is he saying?

Ilina:  He is saying....I need a cab...one passenger myself and my child...

Mark:  Is there anything else Ilina?

Ilina:  No he is hanging up the phone and there is silence...

Mark:  Ilina I am going to count to three on the count of three you will awake refreshed and you will recall everything you have told us.  One....two..three....
At that point Ilina awoke and she was quiet for a bit Mark asked her if she was ok and then she got up and rushed over to me and hugged me tight and cried softly while I held her.

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I held on to her as tightly as I could.  If it was the last thing I did I wanted to help this woman and to make her my own.  There was no denial I wanted Ilina in the worst way and maybe she wanted me back.  After awaking Ilina was very quiet.  She didn't want to talk.  I drove straight back to my house.  She didn't even ask me why we were there.  

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"Ilina...I want you to leave your apartment and stay with me.  You will be comfortable here and safe.  Also I want you here.  I know it's probably not the best time to say this but...I'm crazy about you.  I want to help you find your baby and bring Tim to justice for what he has done to you."  I managed to get it all out in one long breath and then held my breath for her response to me.
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Ilina looked at me for a long time.  "Joe.....I am a very confused devastated person...are you sure...you are not just feeling sorry for me?" she asked with brutal honesty.

"No Ilina even when I thought you were a brutal killer I wanted you.  I have been waiting for just the right moment to tell you.  But I'm tired of waiting I want you now."

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"I want you too Joe...I will stay."she said finally.

I have never been very patient....I grabbed her and put my hungry mouth over hers finally kissing the lips I had been tasting in my dreams for so long..
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I know I was being intense I didn't care I pulled her closer feeling all her soft body against my own.  Ilina was shaking somehow that made me want her even more.  She responded to my tight hungry embrace and kisses softly at first and then more intensely to match my own hunger for her.

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We enjoyed each other like this for a long time...my mouth over her own soft mouth kissing her finally after all this time wanting her was unlike any other contact I had ever had with any other woman.  Maybe because I did nothing but think of her since I laid eyes on her.
I couldn't stop myself although I knew I was being pushy and probably taking advantage of her emotional state I whispered into her ear while I burned of wanting her.."Ilina....let's go upstairs I want to make love to you" half expecting her to slap me and hoping she would agree to it.

Ilina responded to me and allowed me to take her hand and lead her up the stairs.  Where I finally had her all to myself in the dark.



"Ilina I know I shouldn't be doing this because you are vunerable now as much as I want you if you don't feel ready I will stop" I said only half meaning it.

Ilina's response was to lay back down on the pillow and put her arms around me.
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Our  night was unforgetable.  There is truly nothing like making love with someone you have fallen in love with and held back for so long.  It brings on an intensity that is unimaginable.
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The next day I got up early and called my boss.  I talked with him about reopening Ilina's case and putting out an APB on Tim.  I would find Tim and Ilina's baby but it was going to be hard after two years to find this guy he could be anywhere.  My boss agreed to meet with me to look at the evidence overlooked before.  It was time to go to work.

This chapter was a little spicy.  The detective has been good for so long tho. LOL!

I like spicy!  Rats - one of your images isn't showing up.  It must have been super spicy!  I always thought the detective was a real dish - obviously, Ilina does, too - lucky girl!

oh my I see that...lol!  I can't remember which one it was there was definately no nudity so I don't get it?  Oh I know what pic it was...there was nothing wrong with that picture no nudity or anything it was both of the sitting on the bed in cuddle position weird stupid photobucket I definately think the last picture was spicier than that one it was just a really intimate shot of their faces and underclothes from the waist up.

Good grief.. mind you, these are the guys who deleted a pic of a topless guy bottle-feeding a baby once :oogle: Nice update though :)

What?  For crying out loud.  I've seen racier pictures than that come through for Photobucket - go figure.

I'm ticked off that I was censored for a picture of sims that had clothes on!  and...were sitting next to eachother...I think it's because Ilina is busty...she kind of spills over her corset bra I bet if she wasn't so curvy they wouldn't have removed the photo.  Could also be my detective fills out his underwear very nicely...lol!  bodybuilder underwear does have a healthy anatomy form.

LOL!!!

OMFG IT'S AWESOME!!!! Could you possibly perhaps be the first to comment "Cujo.." ????????? :)

thanks simfreak!  Since I'm pissed at photobucket I went in my game and took some totally frivolous couple photos of Ilina and Joe.  These are outtakes in protest of censorship.
Ilina and Joe are actually pretty hot for each other as soon as they are in freewill they dance grab each other and Joe likes to squeeze LOL!
I'm on my way to see cujo can't wait to read it.  btw I own a 130lb St. Bernard so it caught my eye immediately! LOL!

Umm..I would like to read some more...o_o I just love it!!I got two people that inspire me.You and Lollipop_Grl