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Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: evlevnz92 on February 11, 2008, 02:52:58 pm (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p00.jpg)
(http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p01.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p02.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p03.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p04.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p05.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p06.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p07.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p08.jpg) And so ends my sucktacular prologue. Less angsty characters*, coming soon (um, maybe**) to a forum near you! ...I mean, here. *Is it possible for me to write about non-angsty characters? Hah, this should be a challenge! **Followthrough, don't fail me now...! T_T Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: Theraven on February 11, 2008, 03:22:00 pm this sounds promising :D. I want to read more, at least. (I really like cartoon-ish sims stories :D)
Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: Astral Faery on February 11, 2008, 09:55:16 pm It think it starts off with a pretty good bang. Your words flow nicely and are set at an even pace, which would make reading this story enjoyable. I love the warped stairs picture, too. :)
Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: Stelio Kontos on February 11, 2008, 11:58:02 pm *makes mental note to read this sometime in the future*
Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: The Commodore on February 12, 2008, 06:38:02 pm Very nice start! I love the last two frames, with the transition from his world to the fantasy world.
Title: Chapter 1-1 Post by: evlevnz92 on February 13, 2008, 07:06:27 pm Chapter 1--The Very De-Monologued Chapter!
(http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p09.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p10.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p11.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p12.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p13.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p14.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p15.jpg) Title: Chapter 1-2 Post by: evlevnz92 on February 13, 2008, 07:09:08 pm Drrrrrrrumroll, please! Introducing, my favorite character ever in existence cause awesomness hullo!!!1!oneone! =D
(http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p16.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p17.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p18.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p19.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p20.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p21.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p22.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p23.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p24.jpg) (http://i90.photobucket.com/albums/k253/spark44/Eidolon/ch1p25.jpg) End of Chapter 1. =D Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: Astral Faery on February 13, 2008, 10:24:42 pm Very nice! Fantastic settings. Your pictures are very well done. And I love your storytelling style. Looking forward to more!
Title: Eidolon*Chapter 1 Post by: Sam the T-man on February 13, 2008, 11:14:22 pm This is looking really good :D Not to mention weird, which makes it even better in my books ;)
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