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Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on February 18, 2008, 07:47:39 pm
Chapter 1:
Before I start I would like to state whats going to be going on & the rules i'm following:
1:I use no cheats except boolprop for pregnancy & aging up
2:You will be helping me choose an heir to the story so that this can be fun & i'll tell you when I will need you to vote for the next heir & will be doing this for every child & we will be following the journey of each heir
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This is Josh & Jenna Thompson.They are newlyweds & don't have a penny to their name.
Josh:Hey dudette you can't talk about us like this
Quiet!Anyways they are going to be the first heirs of this story.Their children will be competing to be heirs
Jenna:Princess will be the heir!
Hey you don't have any children yet so quiet!Anyways this is their love,journey & life.
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This is the bury tree
Josh:Oh great dead people!How could you spend our remaining simoleons on this stupid tree?
Because i'll be burying you there!
Jenna:No not death!I need to have babies!
You aren't dieing yet or anytime soon for that matter so sh!!
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_14c5d554.jpg)
Aww you both do love eachother!I can't believe he'd make you blush like that!
Josh:Because thats the way I roll!
*rolls eyes*ok so they aren't the smartest wontons on the platter but it is something.
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So we snuck in while she was taking a shower.
Jenna:Do you mind!This is private.
Yeah we mind.Lets keep watching!
Jenna:*breaks camera*How do you like that?
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Wow first day of work already?
Josh:Yeah we both get to work together.
That must suck!
Jenna:Well your not funny!
I resent you!
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Meet Mr.DriverManLadyPerson.He/she/it is driving these two "smart" ones to work.Lets give a hand to "The Man"
*applause*
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Woohoo promotion!I knew you were both smart!
Josh & Jenna:No you didn't!
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Will you two ever get your hands off eachother?
Jenna:Nope & thats the way we like it!
Josh:Yeah thats right...whatever she said!
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Well I guess you were right.
Jenna:Yeah I don't know why i'm so fat.Please help me loose weight!
Um...dumb much?Your pregnant you fool!
Jenna:Oh...I thought it was just some turkey.
Ok now I really am taking back what I said about you yesterday.You really are stupid.
Jenna:Yeah,whatever!
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Tell that woman to leave!Can't she tell she's going to be there for another year?I keep ignoring her for a few hours & she's still here!
Jenna:Thank gowd!
Its thank god Mrs.SmartOne.
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_74c5eec5.jpg)
Well this is a priceless expression!She's giving birth
Audience:AWW!
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While she was doing that Josh decided to work off all that junk food.
Josh:No...I'm just doing it for fun!
Yeah right *rolls eyes*
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Well I guess we have a show off!Ok now go see your wife as she gives birth!
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_94c5f5e7.jpg)
Ok now seriously please do as I say!
Josh:No way!The chicks dig this stuff!
There ain't no other chicks here except your wife & maybe your soon to be born baby.
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_34c5fbe0.jpg)
Aww she's so cute!
Jenna:I think i'll name her Turkey!
No way!I decide the names and her name will be Mackenzie!
Josh:I like it!
Jenna:I don't.
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Jenna:What the?I thought I was having 1!
Well I guess you had 2...*looks away*
Jenna:Oh no don't tell me you did this?
Yeah I did!I can't wait to see baby number three!
Jenna:I'm going to get you for this!
Josh:So whats his/hers name?
Jenna:Yeah so whats its name?
Its not an it Jenna its a she & her name is Molly.
Josh & Jenna:It sounds so cute!
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_94c5f972.jpg)
Ok so this is the last one!
Jenna:So whats its...I mean his/hers name?
Josh:I hope its a boy.
Well you guessed right Josh!His name is Maxx.


Ok so there you have it all 3 heirs so lets ask the couple a question:

Question 1:
How many kids do you plan on having?
Jenna:5
Josh:6
Both:No!Not that #
Ok I guess its decided:5 or 6 in total.Only 2-3 more brats...I mean cuties to go!


The End To Chapter 1(more coming soon)

Please comment!I might/will post the next chapter if I get a few comments :)


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: vickylougrl on February 18, 2008, 10:13:27 pm
Ha! Ha!  That was funny!  Hidden you are a cynic! LOL! I love this please carry on!  I like the name Turkey too! LOL!


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on February 18, 2008, 10:30:22 pm
thanks vickylougrl!I gathered up all the photos I had & then I just wrote & wrote lol.The idea of a turkey ran into my head because I was hungry & I was looking threw my fridge & there was some turkey so I decided to put in something like that in


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: nanana on February 19, 2008, 05:19:32 pm
mmmmmmmm...I think i'll call my baby turckey as well...LOL :D


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Stelio Kontos on February 19, 2008, 06:16:09 pm
TC, me and you seem to share the same sense of semi-bitter but good hearted sarcasm.
Ebert & Rober gives this 1.8 thumbs up.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on February 19, 2008, 06:41:51 pm
Quote from: nanana;1143508
mmmmmmmm...I think i'll call my baby turkey as well...LOL :D


lol thanks :)

To SecretAgentZero:sarcasm is my middle name *looks at name tag*oh wait its not :(


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on February 20, 2008, 04:33:45 pm
sorry for double posting but:

Please people don't be shy please comment!I thank you everyone who did comment but come on theres no shame in commenting!78 views is great but only 3 comments from 3 other people & 2 comments (not including the story*from me.So please comment!I really looked forward to this story but I feel not many people like it.Come on I don't bite...much


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Stelio Kontos on February 20, 2008, 07:44:33 pm
Sarcasm is your middle name apparently, TC.
For me, "Sarcasm" is one of the secondary abilities equipped to my Sword of 1337 Pwnage.

When's the next update? Please?


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on February 20, 2008, 08:17:04 pm
very soon :) I am currently doing something in Body Shop & when i'm done i'm going to enter game & get another chapter up :)


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Stelio Kontos on February 20, 2008, 09:25:51 pm
Can't wait.
*makes note to read update after mending an accidental insulting of some other InSim user*


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Bloody_Tears on February 21, 2008, 03:19:29 pm
I really like this, I always enjoy a good legacy. It must be said I'd be pissy too if I'd been made to have triplets! I wait less than patiently for more!


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: steelguy on February 29, 2008, 05:52:00 pm
Okay, I see, now. I think. I'm gathering a legacy must start with the bare minimum of stuff? Cool.


And I love your narrative style.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on March 01, 2008, 10:52:39 am
thank you :)
Make sure you know exactly what type of legacy your doing & how much amount of space you'll need.I made a whole neighborhood for them & a big lot too.
The only type of walls they have are for their bathroom & bedroom.All I need to add on is a space for the triplets.And seeing as both parents work I've had Jenna quit her job.

Hope that helps a bit more :)


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: xpoetxgurlx on March 20, 2008, 10:20:26 pm
LoL I loved it.... hillarious! I can't wait to see how those two are gonna be parents.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on March 21, 2008, 10:50:45 am
ok sorry I haven't updated at all in a LONG time its because I've been very busy but don't any of you worry because I'm going to start working on two chapters so don't anyone worry about it.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on March 23, 2008, 12:49:01 am
Sorry for the double post but here is the next chapter:
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Jenna:Something smells...oh eww its the stinky babies...maid!
Well do it yourself!You only have 300 simoleons left so get to changing the babies diapers or I'll call the social worker on you!
Jenna:Oh no you wouldn't!
Try me!
Jenna:Fine I'll do it...
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Jenna:Aww little fried chicken!Your such a wonderful child.
Um Jenna you know SHE has a name.
Jenna:She does?
Yes she does
Jenna:Well food names are easier.
Says the woman who eats so little foods.
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Hold it!Cut cut!She's going to kill her children!
Jenna:Uh lady I think I know how to hold my children.I won't drop them!
Wanna bet?
Jenna:Yeah I do!
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Arg stalker!Just tell her to leave.Like she wants to be friends with you!She's a teenager and your a dumb adult.Do the math because you damaged her life by talking to her for one second you half wit.
Jenna:Um ignore her Amy she's not worthy!
*rolls eyes*Miss drama queen!
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Told you!!!!She's already angry with you.
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Your daughter hates you!She loves her mom.
Josh:Ya ya I just change its diaper,feed it and put it to bed so ya like I care.
Well you should because remember I'm god and your unworthy!Mwahahaha!!!
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Mr.Fancy is going to work!
Josh:Thank you...thank you very much
Your not Elvis you know?
Josh:Nope I don't know because I am!
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_b4f04b41.jpg)
*dies with over laughter*
So you dress nice but go in a beat up old wagon?My mom can do better and she doesn't even work!
Josh:Its a limo in my eyes.
Yet its filled with dirt and trash.
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Happy birthday to you...happy birthday to you...Mackenzie your old enough and we're proud of it.Happy birthday to you!
Jenna:Happy birthday smelly turkey!
*yawn* Jenna is that all?
Jenna:Yes it is!
(http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb237/PhotoSimTime/4%20stories/snapshot_b4c3459e_54f05a2d.jpg)
*points finger*
Aha!I told you that you were a bad parent.Fork over the I'm not worthy chant.
Jenna:I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!I'm not worthy!
And this continues on for another hour or so but its too funny to show so we advised to do it on a different level by just moving on and not doing anything by shooing all the graphics of this awesome amount.I know it sucks!
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Jenna:I'm sorry but will all my children and me not being able to afford a nanny or someone else to look after my children I'll have to quit to look after the triplets but Elvis...I mean my husband will continue working.
Oh great so now we'll go from 300 to 100 in probably one day.I do want to give you a real house some day you know.
Jenna:Give me a mansion and I'll do whatever you want.
Yeah right and I'm the all powerful beautiful woman who everyone in the world loves.
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I had to put this in.It was too cute not to.
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You quit your job...the highly paid on and you're searching for another one?You gotta be kidding me!
Jenna:Well I'm keeping my eyes open for a perfect opportunity!
Yeah...right!
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Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday to you.Happy birthday beautiful Molly.Happy birthday to you!
Jenna:Did you know I love her the most?
No you don't!You just don't want the social workers coming here and taking one of them away.
Jenna:Well yeah theres that of course!

So sorry but Maxx hasn't aged yet no matter how hard I tried.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on March 27, 2008, 03:06:40 pm
I'm not continuing this story.No one comments at all anymore so why should I even try?When any of you get some respect and comment then I might continue.I thought this one would be different that you all wouldn't be so cruel as to not comment.So why should I even?I try my hardest and I did my best to make it as interesting as possible & I really wanted to continue.Is it that no one on here likes me?Is it that all hate me?Is it that its boring?Is it that you all are too lazy to comment?So whats the problem because I'm fed up in trying any more to have someone comment.I have so many views but not even a page worth of story/comments to make me want to continue some of you might not care but I do because I'll quit creating stories if thats just it.For those of you who care but didn't realize what you've done then I truely apologize because its not your problem because you didn't know.So someone please comment and tell me whats the problem because I have no clue what so ever.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Cluedo on March 27, 2008, 03:27:21 pm
HiddenSecret, don't panic.

When I was posting my story (well adaptation...I didn't come up with the idea), I wasn't getting much comments at first.

Just keep plugging it in. There's nothing worse than an unfinished story. Surely you love the writing process as much as the comments you receive. I know comments are a morale-boost to continue writing, but I think people are waiting for a crucial point to happen.

Anyway, good luck if you continue or not.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: PegasusDiana on March 27, 2008, 09:33:31 pm
I don't really read the stories often, but I have seen some great stories on here that when I read them I couldn't stop till the end. Yet they only had a couple comments, if any. Same with some of the video's I've seen some fantastic video's I have to comment on and I'll be the only one that comments which makes no sense when they have 100's of views. You have several comments on this story. Plus you have a lot of views so more are reading it than are commenting. It's really cute. I wouldn't give up on it, and I'll be reading it now for the updates because it's a wonderful story. Can I ask how did you get triplets with no cheats? I thought most they could have was twins unless you use the triplet/quad hack. My sims have never had triplets. :(


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: steelguy on March 28, 2008, 12:46:23 am
I only just caught up with this again today, so here's my comment:

Yaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!! Update! *dances*

You're so snarky with your sims. :)

Feedback is very important, I know. It's not enough to know that people are reading it, you want to know what they think of it. But people are reading it. Remember that. They're not ignoring it.

Lurkers and Shy types, possibly.

(Sends cookies)


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: hotrod50s on April 03, 2008, 09:21:45 am
ok let's see smelly turkey grew into a toddler and so did fried chicken what is the third ones name again? i just now found this story and thought it was very funny with great pics,i hope you reconsider updating this one or else smelly turkey and fried chicken will spoil


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: CrisStratus on April 05, 2008, 09:22:59 pm
Well, regardless if I liked it or not, I did read your story and I will say that enjoyed tremendously! The "breaking of the fourth wall" is spectacular, glamorized by snide remarks spiraling around slow-witted responses, and leaving one to be overjoyed that the couple will have a hand in raising their absolutely gorgeous children! Keep up the excellent work!


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Baby_Cat on April 06, 2008, 09:31:35 am
um, ok what was with the panicing, sorry but it is just a story, and just cuz people don't comment doesn't mean the world is ending. Do you comment on every single thing you read? i mean just cuz people don't comment doesn't mean ppl don't read it and like it, jeez. sorry but i kinda think you are over reacting with this whole thing. It was a good story, i just found it now, and you should try and continue it. Seriously, it's really good.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: nextor_torres on April 07, 2008, 10:02:51 pm
My friend I dicover this today & Im here to cheer you up, great work & don't do this for the others do it for yourself & when you las expect you are going to have a lot comments waiting for you, but you have to love what you are doing & overall things don't quit. Can't wait to see more


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: Hidden~Secret on April 08, 2008, 07:27:23 pm
thank you everyone for commenting about liking the story.
Black_Cat I've been defending myself on this site for a week already and all I can say is I don't think I'm over reacting or anything.I think I'm just being a human being who just wants some appreciation for some of my work which is what everyone wants.I do comment on everything I see except for some contests where I lurk but comment when it ends and a winner is announced.I mean I don't want to say anything mean and I won't.All I'm just saying is that I wanted someone at least one person to say something good about that chapter.I appreciate every comment and I'm repeating myself again like I've done before.I know that we all feel this way once in a while and I know I don't have to take it but then where would I be on here?I would have a thread that no one comments just later on when I'm in my like fifteenth chapter which isn't good now is it?Its over I'm continuing I just wanted to point out what I felt which I think I'm allowed to do unless it's something completely stupid where I curse and tease everyone on the site which is horrible and I'd never do that.


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: xpoetxgurlx on April 09, 2008, 04:37:15 pm
love ure legacy
can't wait till the next chapter
awsome work


Title: Thompson Family Legacy:Finding an Heir
Post by: PegasusDiana on April 10, 2008, 06:49:19 pm
Hidden as you can see many people are commenting on your story. I keep coming back looking for the next chapter. Give it a go, last week, was last week. I think it was healthy for you to speak your mind. No one is holding it against you, and if they are just wave it away. It does no good to bottle up your feelings, all you do then is build resentment. We're all human with millions of emotions, you had a human moment. I have them all the time. lol We're all here and looking forward to an update.:)


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