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Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 15, 2008, 04:42:38 pm Okay, this is my first story so feel free to criticize. And sorry it's short. I wanted the first chapter to be suspenseful :-P Enjoy!
Chapter One Hi, my name is Lexie Hershey. (http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3882/snapshotd57e7dd4357ebe8gw0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) I used to be and ordinary girl, hoping I would meet my Prince Charming someday. Until one day, I met him. His name was Lance. I never believed in love at first sight, but he changed my mind. I fell head over heals for him. When we graduated from college, he took me out to a fancy restaurant. We were discussing how good the dinner was when he slid a box over to me. I opened it and there was a shimmering diamond ring. “Lexie, I love you, and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Will you marry me?” Lance said. “Oh Lance! Of course I will!” I shouted. Our wedding was beautiful. (http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/253/snapshotd57e7dd4357e92dwp9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Later that night, we went upstairs of our new house and relaxed. (http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/3766/snapshotd57e7dd4957e97aau3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Let’s just say, months later our beautiful baby girl Kista was born. One day, Lance went out to get some baby food. (http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/8548/snapshotd57e7dd4957ea54zr1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Make sure you get the big container of baby powder.” I said. “Yes dear.” said Lance. “And those baby veggies.” “Alright. Bye.” “Bye Daddee!” Kista yelled. “Bye sweetie.” (http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/9929/snapshotd57e7dd4757ea6bms9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “We love you.” I said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Later that night, Lance didn’t come home. At around 9:00, I got a phone call. “Mrs. Hershey?” “Speaking." “This is Officer Briggs, I’m afraid I have some bad news...” I gulped. “What is it?” "It's about your husband."[/FONT] Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Astral Faery on July 15, 2008, 04:52:02 pm Ooh - very suspenseful. Can't wait to read more. :)
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 15, 2008, 04:58:45 pm Yay! You have no idea how much that means coming from you :D
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: ZanarkandFayth on July 15, 2008, 08:47:01 pm Ah! Good job, can't wait to read more.
By the way, thanks for the comment on Skin Deep Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 16, 2008, 09:50:39 am No thanks needed. That's a good story. I'm working on the second chapter.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Skori on July 16, 2008, 12:29:09 pm Yay! You actually got around to posting it!
<3 it so far, even though I know what happens. ;) Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 16, 2008, 06:00:26 pm Shush! No telling! :)
Title: Chapter 2 Post by: SimKween on July 25, 2008, 02:29:01 am “What’s wrong?” I asked, my voice shaking. “I’m sorry to say this ma’am but, your husband was in a car crash and died instantly.” I dropped the phone and cried. All I remember is: The world went black. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A year passed, I mourned Lance every day. Kista always cried for her Daddy. (http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/1055/snapshotd57e7dd49582951qe3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Daddy never answered. Despite the fact we were devastated, we had some good times. (http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2305/snapshotd57e7dd43582967gp8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) And some bad times (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4418/snapshotd57e7dd47582984hw1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2144/snapshotd57e7dd41582987en0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Kista was a hand full. And finding a babysitter so I could go to work wasn’t too grand either. She would wake up in the middle of the night, (http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/333/snapshotd57e7dd4d57ebd0jx5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) I would take her out of her crib, go downstairs, put her in her highchair, (http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/2595/snapshotd57e7dd4157ebdckl9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) She would fuss until Mommy got her bottle, (http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/4946/snapshotd57e7dd4b57ec1bdf1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Then back to bed, (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/4122/snapshotd57e7dd49582934sr1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Then she was out like a light until 8:00 A.M. (http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9460/snapshotd57e7dd4157ebafsg3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) With all this commotion, I’d say I needed some help. So I put an ad in the newspaper. Sorry it took so long. I was super busy. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: phishfood1301 on July 25, 2008, 04:49:02 am asome start! Can't wait to see where it goes! Your pictues are great! I'm too lazy/my sims is on the frizt to put them in
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 25, 2008, 12:43:50 pm Thanks :D Skori helped me create the characters.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Deena on July 25, 2008, 12:58:54 pm It's good so far, I wanna know what happens next!
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Stelio Kontos on July 25, 2008, 07:03:01 pm Oh, the suspense, it's hurting me.
Update soon, please. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 26, 2008, 12:20:00 pm I'm working on chapter 3 right now :D
Title: Chapter 3 Post by: SimKween on July 26, 2008, 01:57:25 pm One day, me and Kista were happily eating lunch when the phone rang. (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/4734/snapshotd57e7dd415964e4fi5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Hello?” I said. “Mrs. Hershey?” said a male voice. “Speaking.” (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/865/snapshotd57e7dd455964f0zj2.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Yes. Um, I’m calling in response to your ad in the paper.” “Really?” I said, realizing the voice sounded familiar. “Wait, who is this?” “Hey Lex. It’s Jake Hart.” Jake Hart was my high school sweetheart. But we broke up when we went to separate colleges. I hadn’t seen him in ages. “Omigosh! Hi!” I said. “Hey. Word on the street is you need some help. I’d be glad to.” “Of course you can help! When can you start?” “How about in two hours?” “So soon?” “Sure. Why not.” “Oh. Alright.” I had to go to work soon anyway. Jake arrived two hours later, as promised. He looked pretty good. (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/1/snapshotd57e7dd4b59651cmo2.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) I didn’t know how I should greet him. Should I hug him? Handshake with him? A simple ‘Hi’? Jake pulled me into a hug. (http://img144.imageshack.us/img144/7423/snapshotd57e7dd45596513xc3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) That works. “So where’s your daughter...” “Kista.” “Right. Where’s Kista?” “She’s down for a nap. Would you like to see her?” “Sure.” We walked up the stairs and into Kista’s room. She was sleeping peacefully. (http://img229.imageshack.us/img229/1750/snapshotd57e7dd4d596548js0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Aw. Hi sweetie. I’m Jake and I’m here to take care of you.” Jake cooed. “Oh! I have to go to work before I’m late.” I said. “Don’t let me down Jake!” “Don’t worry. I won’t.” He smiled. I came home hours later. Jake and Kista seemed to be asleep, so I came in quietly. I took a nice shower and got in bed. I woke up to the sound of Kista’s crying. I glanced at my clock on my nightstand. 3:00 AM it read. I groaned and rolled out of bed. I got to Kista’s room only to find Jake in there, calming her down. (http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/4858/snapshotd57e7dd4d5965e9fb0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) I backed out of the room quietly and went back to bed. Over the months, Jake was a huge help. I have to admit it was a little awkward at first, having part of my past living in my house, but I grew uesd to it. And our relationship was blossoming into a little more than friends. One day, Kista decided to sleep in. Jake and I celebrated with breakfast together. We were halfway done with out pancakes when Kista waltzed right in and said “Me hungy!!” (http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/8317/snapshotd57e7dd45596696jn0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) I couldn’t believe my eyes! My baby Kista was walking! She would be a child soon! We rewarded her with her favorite cereal. Jake cleaned up afterwards. Wasn’t that nice of him? “Well, I have to get to work early today, big meeting.” I said. “Bye.” Jake said, pulling me into a kiss. I was shocked. (http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/7804/snapshotd57e7dd4d5966bfsc2.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Uh... bye!” I said, running out the door. That was the first time he had ever kissed me since we broke up. Title: Chapter 4 Post by: SimKween on July 26, 2008, 01:59:56 pm As time passed, and it got closer and closer to Kista’s birthday, she was jabbering more than ever! She was running around the house within weeks. One night, Jake was putting Kista to bed. I came in to say good night. “Night mommy” she said to me. “Night night Dada.” she said to Jake. Me and Jake shared a glance. Before we knew it, the day had arrived. Jake cheered when I brought Kista to her cake. (http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/3893/snapshotd57e7dd455967f0ri9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) We blew out her candles. (http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/5165/snapshotd57e7dd455967f6tp0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2264/snapshotd57e7dd455967f7yw5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) And It was time. (http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/3284/snapshotd57e7dd435967fbac0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) She changed into a beautiful child. (http://img388.imageshack.us/img388/647/snapshotd57e7dd415968b7lq8.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “You girls go upstairs, I have a surprise for you.” Jake said to us. “Come on sweetie, I’ll show you your new room!” I said to Kista. She raced upstairs, with me not too far behind. Kista squealed with delight. There was a hamster, a toychest, a dollhouse, and.... two beds? “Mommy, why are there two beds?” Kista asked. “I’m not sure” I replied. “You can come down girls! In the livingroom!” Jake called. Maybe he had an explanation for this. We went back downstairs. There was a girl Kista’s age in our livingroom. “Girls, meet Jill.” Jake said. (http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/739/snapshotd57e7dd4f5968b4yp3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “My daughter.” (http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/8479/snapshotd57e7dd4b5968afkb9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6985/snapshotd57e7dd435968baah0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: tophatdan on July 26, 2008, 02:07:09 pm well it may be your first story you wrote but its the first i read and its pretty good, lol, great job so far
Title: Chapter 5 Post by: SimKween on July 26, 2008, 02:35:57 pm Say what now? [/FONT]“Er, uh, Jake? Can I talk to you in the kitchen?” “Sure.” I closed the door to the kitchen. “What the hell do you think this is? A hotel? You didn’t even tell me you had a daughter!” I yelled. (http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/8691/snapshotd57e7dd4b5968e6mh9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “I’ll explain if you just calm down and listen.” (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/7079/snapshotd57e7dd415968e5ii0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “This had better be a good explanation!” (http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/6102/snapshotd57e7dd435968edsa9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “When I graduated from college, I was at a bar celebrating. Naturally, I got drunk. I was drunk when I met Jill’s mom. We went back to her place.” I scoffed. “Whatever. Look, I didn’t know I had a daughter until two days ago. I got a phone call from the hospital that said Jill’s mom had died from an overdose of drugs. I couldn’t just leave Jill all alone with no parents! Please let her stay here Lex, please!” he begged. “Oh fine.” I said. “Besides, Kista will have someone to play with now. But what about out other suprise?” “I’ll take care of that.” Jake walked back into the room. “Okay girls, go in the basement, we have one more suprise!” The girls went downstars Jake brought out a ball of balck fur. “Girls, meet Skori.” he said. (http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/1491/snapshotd57e7dd4b596a0dlf7.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) The girls squealed with delight. Kista ran and scooped him up. (http://img180.imageshack.us/img180/4517/snapshotd57e7dd4f596a1bjg3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Hi little kitty!” Kista cooed. “Aw! He’s so cute!” Jill said. I got used to having Jill around. It gave Kista someone to play with. (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9721/snapshotd57e7dd4559692euz3.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) They became the best of friends. (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/2082/snapshotd57e7dd4f596942rj0.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) They even told secrets to each other. How cute! (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/7413/snapshotd57e7dd4759696bta5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) At first, I thought she was going to be just another mouth to feed, but she turned out to be a sweet little girl that we all loved. (http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/9114/snapshotd57e7dd43596987ra9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Mooncat on July 26, 2008, 02:56:31 pm This is sooo awesome! I can't wait for more!
Update soon! Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 26, 2008, 08:45:15 pm Thanks!
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Medagic on July 27, 2008, 09:23:30 am I can feel it... There's another twist coming! It's too peaceful...
Great job! :D Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: kristi8589 on July 27, 2008, 06:38:19 pm WRITE. MORE. NOW!!!!!!!
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 28, 2008, 02:52:09 pm lol. I will.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Astral Faery on July 28, 2008, 03:26:53 pm I really like that picture at the end of chapter 4, after Jake just sort of springs his daughter on Lex. And her reaction to the situation is quite realistic. Jake should have said something first. I mean, I know the guy was in a bind, but that wasn't right. But now, with a new kitty, the family has grown quite large. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Skori on July 28, 2008, 04:06:00 pm Oh, yay. You named the cat after me. I hope you're not trying to imply anything. . .
But I really like it so far! I usually don't like soap operas, but you've got me hooked. ;) Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on July 29, 2008, 08:13:11 pm Thanks guys. I really appreciate the comments you've given me. But we're renovating our house and it's hard for me to get on the computer with my parents always telling me to do stuff for them. But I do not give up on sims! The new chapters will be up soon and warning: you're in for a shocker later in the story!
Title: Chapter 6 Post by: SimKween on August 01, 2008, 06:50:29 pm Months flew by, Kista and Jill became the best of friends. One night, they were asleep early, so Jake and I had a nice dinner. We were talking when he slid a blue box over to me. [/FONT](http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/952/snapshotd57e7dd4b59791duu7.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Omigod!” I whispered. (http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/8550/snapshotd57e7dd41597926wu7.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) “Lexie, after we graduated, I never stopped thinking about you. I loved you and I still do. Will you do the honor of marrying me?” “Of course I will!” I cried. I tried on the ring. It was beautiful. (http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/9808/snapshotd57e7dd4759792ako4.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) ***************************************** We married a month later, just as night fell. (http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/2629/snapshotd57e7dd4f597b93mh9.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/9711/snapshotd57e7dd41597b94st6.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/6451/snapshotd57e7dd4f597b97jy6.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) And what would a wedding be without cake? (http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/8488/snapshotd57e7dd4d59df4dhd1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) (http://img221.imageshack.us/img221/7386/snapshotd57e7dd4d59df50te5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us) The girls couldn’t be happier to be sisters. Kista finally had a dad and Jill had a new mom. Life was perfect. Or was it? I'll update ASAP! Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 01, 2008, 06:52:15 pm Quote from: Medagic;1318812 I can feel it... There's another twist coming! It's too peaceful... Great job! :D Thanks. And you're right! It's a super shocking twist! Hold on to your hat! Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Skori on August 01, 2008, 07:30:17 pm I'm getting anxious 'cause I know something big is gonna happen. WRITE MORE!!
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 01, 2008, 08:28:04 pm Here's a preview of Chapter 7:
The day Kista and Jill turned into teenagers, was the day we had new company. Our newly bound family woke up to the beeping of a moving van. Bleep! Bleep! Bleep! Bleep! Kista raced to the livingroom window, with Jill not far behind. "Omigod! There's new kids moving in next door our age!" Kista said. "No way! Where?" Jill replied. "There! A boy and girl!" "I see them!" "The boy is so hot!" "Let's go meet them!" They raced out the door. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: hiiammregg on August 06, 2008, 04:18:43 pm wow
great story!!! hurry with the next chapter!!!! Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Medagic on August 06, 2008, 08:43:32 pm Hmm.... I suspect these new neighbors bring trouble...
Fun. :D Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 07, 2008, 09:37:47 am I'm hurrying as fast as I can. Lol. Then next chapter will be a bit short.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: hiiammregg on August 07, 2008, 10:27:32 am well you need to be quicker
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Devomuffins on August 07, 2008, 12:32:37 pm Can't wait for the next update! :D
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 08, 2008, 12:56:28 pm Thanks!
I'll be gone for 5 days, but when I get back I promise you guys I'll have the next chapter up. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: hiiammregg on August 15, 2008, 01:14:32 pm COME BACKKKKKKK!!
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 16, 2008, 12:34:37 pm Okay I'm back. But sonething on my computer got screwed up, so I have no pics for this chapter :'(
Chapter 7: [/FONT]I'm going to hand the story over to Kista, just for a little while. Let's see how she handles it. Hey! Kista here! So anyway, we had this really awesome block party in celebration of our new neighbors, the wedding, my birthday, and Jill's birthday. You should've seen it! The Goths, Pleasents, Dreamers, and everyone was there. It was way cool. So, the first thing Jill and I did was meet the new neighbors, which was fun. There were two kids our age: Rosalie and Eric. Rosalie was into fashion (she wants to be a fashion designer someday), and Eric was really into cars and stuff. Plus, he was way hot. All of a sudden, Jill gets this dreamy look in her eyes. I followed her gaze to Dirk Dreamer. "Go say Hi." I said, pushing Jill in the direction of Dirk. She went to go say hi and it looked like they were getting along well. They were smiling and laughing. I turned to Eric. "Hi. I'm Kista." I said. "I noticed." he smiled. He had shaggy black hair and peircing blue eyes you could get lost in. "So what kind of cars do you like?" "Fast ones." "Like race cars?" He laughed. "Exactly." "Cool. Me too." "So, you wanna hang out inside?" "Sure." We walked inside to find everyone all over the basement! Watching TV, playing pool, talking, Don Lathario was even playing the piano (reeeally badly)! The couch was taken, so we just sat down over by the stairs and talked. Eventually, Rosalie joined us. "Hey guys, wuzzup?" she asked. "Nothin much." I said. Then Jill and Dirk walked in, looking at each other all lovey-dovey and stuff. Aww "Hey Jill! Dirk! Come join us!" I yelled. They came over and and joined the circle. So now it was me, Eric, Rosalie, Dirk, and Jill having a party of our own. Then Derrick Blu, the town spazz, walked right in the middle of the circle. "Dude! Move!" Rosalie said. Derrick looked around. "God?" "Yes, it's God. I command you to move!" Rosealie replied. We all cracked up. "Yes Lord!" He ran out the door and into the street. "Well that was... interesting." Jill laughed. We all laughed again until we cried. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Skori on August 16, 2008, 01:03:07 pm Haha! Short, but awesome anyway. (http://pokedream.com/forums/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif)
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: hiiammregg on August 17, 2008, 01:40:27 pm Ohhhhhhh!
awsome update Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: lexi9803 on August 20, 2008, 06:19:02 pm you have to promise to write more really sooooooon! i love your story! its such a cliff hanger! i am excited to see what happens next!:worship:
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on August 23, 2008, 09:16:23 am Thanks! I'm gonna play my game today.
Title: Chapter 8 Post by: SimKween on September 13, 2008, 10:31:45 am January February March April May June July Phew! Sorry I haven't been writing for awhile. It's been hectic at the house. With a cat and two teenage girls, life isn't easy. As you can see, it's been a few months since we last talked, and boy do I have things to tell! First off, yes Kista and Eric are still going strong. Likewise for Jill and Dirk. Just this week. Kista snuck out for up-tenth time to see him. If I wasn't so mad with her, I'd be proud of her. But I'm not. Jill is a good girl. I don't favor her over Kista, if that's what you're thinking. I love both my daughters equally. Even though Jill is a B student and Kista is a C, I still love them the same. Jill is helping Kista with her grades, making them even closer. Kista is even reading that new Twilight series. I heard it was pretty good. The girls are into music now. Kista plays guitar while Jill plays the piano. You should hear them together. It's absolutely mesmerizing. Later that night, at 1:00 AM, an ear-splitting screech filled the house. It was the burglar alarm. (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_15a09222.jpg) I can't believe I forgot to lock the garage door! Doi! (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_75a09276.jpg) Kista, Jill, and I ran into the kitchen while the burglar used the basement door to get in. Jake was the only one who had the common sense to call the police. Skori was unawakened by the alarms. (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_15a09359.jpg) The idiot tried to steal our TV! NOT THE TV!! WE NEED THAT TO LIVE! (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_35a092f6.jpg) Luckily, the police officer arrived in the nick of time. We cheered him on as he fought to arrest the criminal. (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_35a092f6.jpg) (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_15a09380.jpg) Success! (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_35a09461.jpg) We didn't get out TV back!! What?? Some cop you are. Sucky Copper: "I'll take him to prison right away ma'am. Good thing no one was hurt." Kista: *grumbles* "Who cares? Give us our TV!" He took the robber away in his car. Our TV was nowhere to be found. Wah. (http://i334.photobucket.com/albums/m430/Bitter-Sweet-Gal/What%20Hurts%20the%20Most/snapshot_d57e7dd4_d5a094cd.jpg) Skori slept on. We all had ourselves a good cry and went back to bed. That's when I realized it was one of the rare nights where Kista was actually home. There's a shock. Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Pixykid99 on September 13, 2008, 11:56:28 pm I wonder if Lex and Jake get married...
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: SimKween on September 14, 2008, 02:05:36 am They did aleady.
Title: What Hurts The Most~Updated 9/13 Post by: Tristan_A on September 25, 2008, 10:07:06 pm This story is amazing. I love it!
When are you writing more? Soon, I hope. Right guys? |