Well, regardless if I liked it or not, I did read your story and I will say that enjoyed tremendously! The "breaking of the fourth wall" is spectacular, glamorized by snide remarks spiraling around slow-witted responses, and leaving one to be overjoyed that the couple will have a hand in raising their absolutely gorgeous children! Keep up the excellent work!

Very intriguing and entertaining story! I love how the characters acknowledge that it is a legacy story--a little bit of breaking that fourth wall! Terrific!

What an intriguing story thus far! I cannot wait for the rest of it to be posted! I hope your problems are situated soon and I am sorry for the loss you experienced. Please take care of yourself and good luck! ^.^

How cool! It seem so amazing how some have the talent to make such a creation come to life!

By the way, I new. Be gentle?