nice story

great update, totally was not expecting that.
Love the story! :-)

nice update! :-)

i like it, its a very promising story

cool update

o wow, i hope she'll be okay!

wow, this is really good i can't wait to here more! Except i have a few questions...I am confused because didn't she have a baby that died in the begining? I thought she was gay, so like...yea? And then she had sex with David even though she's gay?? Sorry i am just realy confused, but it is a really good story!! Keep it up! Oh, and who is her girlfriend, didn't she say something about having a girlfriend?

Great story!!! I totally love it! but i'm really worried about aidan, i hope he'll be okay

aww, i feel bad for Branwen her life is so sad, but it is a good story haha, can'twait to read more

haha, this is a good story, i like it

oooooo good story so far, can't wait to read more :-)

haha, yea that was quick but so worthy of a really long "awwwwwwwww" lol

ohhh, cool story! I like the twist, and it is very cute :-)

woah, you scared me on that final part...very sad...great story though

wow, that was really good.