heh does the 'first comment to chapter twelve' dance..

omg you just are the queen of cliffies arent you? O_o - it was a really good chapter, and poor gabe, thats quite a inner struggle he is going through.

thank you guys

And im very sorry i didnt use my head and watched my language.. eek.. i didnt mean to get in trouble there.. i actually try and watch my language and my graficness in the story too, knowing i am uploading it here.

im glad y'all like it :grin:

thanks for the fb guys...
 
and well there seem to be a problem at the site... hmm... here is the link to my sims lj dolly-riot but the pictures from chapter 3 seems to be gone there too.. darnit!! i hope it resolved itself tomorrow.. otherwise i guess i was just not fast enough with the damn bandwith control.
 
edit: ALRIGHT i checked myself and the two first chapters was no problem and they showed fine, but the third give me a dns error too... so is it the same for you? is it just page 3 thats messed up? i should maybe just try and upload it again... odd really cuz it worked fine when i uploaded it.

Alright i think i need to explain a little before you read this chapter, point one, i am from a contry where the legal age for intercourse is 15, still this story/chapter has more than one hint of adult/teen situations, and even if the legal age here is 15, adults are not supposed to just freak out and molest big kids, and neither am i trying to say that its alright at all, what i am trying to say is that these adults use a very confused kid, but since i do state that he is 17 in this chapter, its not as grose as it could be, i still just thought id rather explain myself than get flamed to no end, and maybe its a cultural difference or something, but here its pretty normal to loose your virginity sometime between 15 and 17. Again, i am not saying that its alright for adults over 18 to engage in any kid of sexual activity with one under that age.

ageeed? alright lets get on with the story.

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sorry i had to delete it all and just post link to my homepage, but these are directlinks, that just take you to the chapter, nothing else. .. gotta watch out for my bandwith and all..

part 3 - colt.

REMEMBER THE WARNINGS RIGHT??  oh yea and i uploaded it at my homepage too, the direct link is www.forgottenjuliet.net'">'HERE'

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part 2 - opus

OH MY... the plot thickens... and to leave with that cliffie? - man! - smiles -

that was a superb chapter

w0000t!! this is reall bloody good im looking forward to an update.

Mmmm Yea id like to see Raphaels story for sure! :grin:

even if i misspelled 'fanfiction writer' in the intro, that is what i do when im bored - this stuff was just so impulsive that i didnt even considder getting it betaed..

But thank you SO SO much for the sweet FB, and oh it gets happier tho, the story i mean, atleast that is what i had planned.

Alright i werent sure if i could even post this here, because i thought it might be a wee bit over the top, see i am a adult fanfiction write, when i procrastinate RL infront of the computer. But after i read a lot of stories here, i figured that mine werent worse than that, i mean.. like those teen struggle stories, there are some heavy issues there.. im not dogging it or nothing.. i liked those stories, this is just kinda an intro to the warnings to this story, i warn for good messure, not because i think its a rancid story, but if its too much, i will just take it off here again. - alright there is gay stuff, teen stuff, prostetution and teen angst gallore.. and i must say it was that 'all alone' challenge that set me off, even if i cant participate i CAN use the plotbunny that came to me!  - There is insinuation of something naughty, but it got the blurr going on, and well does it help any if i say that it was a staged piccy?

alright i will stop yakking and get to the story.

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darnit i am too late, would have loved to participate.. its by far the most interesting looking challenge ive seen (besides the ishkabibble one for which i was allso too late)

but i will be reading you other guys stuff

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thought id let the creator of the challenge know that it actually sparked my muse so much i had to go and make a sims story.. thank you

that was absolutely amazing - even if your game is fecked, what you did post was super! i hope you get your game up and running again soon.

w000000000t! aww how cute is Raphael?

yes do continue, its absolutely fab