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Hi, guys. I've had this written up for a while but was too scared to post it. I think the title explains what it's about. But she doesn't really like it, until she loses her. This will be set out until she is an adult, when the climax comes. Please tell me if I did something wrong.

"Mum, did you have to make a date for tonight?"
"It was the only time Chris was free, love."
"Whay do you date? You have me and Danni."
"I know, and I love my girls. But I want to fall in love again." She finished putting Danni's pajamas on, and put her in her crib.
"Right, missy, it's bedtime for you, too."
"But, Mum -"
"Please, Ash. I just want one night to enjoy myself."
"Ok, Mum."

My name is Asha Fenton. My mum's a vampire. My sister, Danni, is only one. I don't know who my dad is, but I know I might turn into a vampire as I get older. It's my genes. I know Danni's dad, but he cleared off once he found out what Mum was. It's always been us three girls - Helena, Asha, and Danni. But Mum goes on dates now.

Later that night

I woke up. I heard laughing downstairs. Had she brought her date home? I hope not. Last time she brought one home, she ended up pregnant. I shook the sleep from my head, and climbed out of bed, trying not to wake Danni. I tip-toed downstairs, hoping she wouldn't see me. And I saw her.

I saw her cuddled up on the couch with him - Chris, she said he was called Chris. He looked nice, but you never know. Danni's dad had looked nice. He made her laugh, As long as they didn't kiss it wouldn't be serious. . . NO!

She said! She said after Danni was born, she wouldn't do this! She. . . she lied! She'd never lied before. I must have let out a gasp, because she looked at the place I was hiding and walked over. I felt tears prick my eyes.
"Ash. . . What -?"
"You promised! You said you wouldn't, and you lied! Why?"
"Asha, -" I wasn't letting her talk.
"Does he know? What you are? Does he?" I let something slip I should NEVER have said. "I just want a normal Mum! Not a vampire, like you!"
She froze, like I slapped her.
"Mum, oh Mum. I'm sorry, I-"
"Asha, go to bed."
"Mum -"
"BED!" I was shocked. She had never shouted at me before. I let the tears take over, and as I ran up the stairs I heard Chris talk.
"Is she upset about the vampire thing?" She told him.

I woke up the next day, and Danni wasn't in her crib. Mum must have sent her to day-care. (I forgot to say, sun doesn't affect vampires, they only feed at night because it would be harder to be caught) I dressed, and put on a necklace Mum had bought me ages ago. I looked in the mirror. I really said those things, hadn't I? The door knocked.
"Ash, come downstairs, we need to talk." Great.

"Did you really mean what you said last night?"
"No, I was just. . . well, I can't describe it."
"And the thing about wanting a normal mum?"
"Well. . ."
"Ash, you don't like having me as a mum?"
"No! I do! I just sometimes wish I had a normal mum, so I could bring friends round, and that she wouldn't drink blood, and have a bluish skin."
"That would mean not a vampire." She looked down, and I realised what I just said. She started to cry.

"I could have given you up for adoption. Danni, too. But I didnt. I thought my kids would accept me for who I am. I was wrong. And, Chris isn't just another guy, he used to be my friend in school, before I was like this. We've been going out for three years, secretly. We. . . we got engaged last night."
"Mum, why didn't you tell me last night?"
"I thought you would get mad, for me not telling you who I was seeing."
"Well, I'm madder now! I thought this guy might have killed you, I was worried about you! I had nightmares of something happening to you on dates!" My rage boiled over.
"I wish you weren't my mum!" I jumped up and ran to my bedroom, crying. Why was she keeping secrets from me?

A few months later

Mum and Chris were getting married tonight. Halloween. Mum decided to have it on Halloween so she could dress spookily. I'll admit, I did look a bit gothy, but good. She told me Chris (I have to call him Dad now!) had agred to becoming a vampire, but not until they had been married for a few months. Did he really want to, though? And did she have the right to take away his humanity? I don't know but the wedding starts in a few minutes.

I took my seat, in the empty church (they didn't want to invite anybody, just them, me and Danni) and stared at Chris, smiling. He looked nervous. Mum walked up the empty aisle, looking like the Queen of Goths - in a good way. She found a black veil, that matched her black lace dress perfectly. She walked up to Chris, and they said their vows. I smiled when they kissed, thinking 'Mum's happy now, so maybe it'll be alright'

It was only a few weeks after the wedding. I heard the door open, Mum ust have been back from her feed. I went to greet her, and screamed when I saw she was covered in her own blood, bleeding clutching her head.

Dad ran in and she fell. He attempted to revive her, and I stood by, crying, watching blood pooling around her body. He sat back, tears streaming down his cheeks, and cuddled me. He could try all night, it wouldn't make a difference - Mum was dead.

We let guests come to her funeral. In the exact same church she had been married in. When the casket was lowered, I started howling. Dad hugged me again, crying silently. We were still there when everyone else had left. I made a vow, then. I would track down Mum's murderers - and kill them.

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Ok, that's the first part. Please tell me what you think, and if I should continue it