its kinda creapy emo. not to afend but its not my thing. i prefer the simple happy story unlike the sad stories like the thread i started. no happiness at all mah ha ha ha ha haaaaaa ..... i mean oh dear thats to bad!
made me think of the exersit
so i cried
1) If you want to criticise, please write in full English words so that everyone understands. I don't really get what you've just said.
2) If you don't like a genre, why do you send gratuitous mean remarks? Why did you read it in the first place?
3) This story isn't bad and you may make the author think it is. It's featured on another site, mind you.
4) You didn't read the story correctly. There's humour, but it must be too subtle for you to detect it. Is smiled a lot while reading it, but it seems you just felt like making someone sad today.