Sounds kinda cool. If you feel passionate about writing it, it's always worth a try.

“Elsie!” I screamed.
“Elsie where are you?” I scanned the shaking rubble again.
“Is it really you?” Her little voice came from behind me. I turned, and she was there.
“Oh gods, Elsie. We have to leave.” I touched her cheek, wiping away a tear.



Elsie had been my stepdaughter longer than she could remember, and I loved her more than words could tell.
“I know momma, but where’s Sam? I can’t find him anywhere,” Her voice was breaking, and it pained me to hear it so full of worry. Sam was waiting for me on an old refrigerator. Elsie’s cousin wouldn’t get left behind. I had told him to wait, told him I had to find Elsie. Jake wouldn’t let me go alone. I told him to go hot wire a car, yes honey I already knew you could, and wait for Sam and me.


 
“Sam’s waiting for us, we have to go. Can you run okay? Oh sweetie, you’re bleeding!”
“I can run mom, you’re hurt too.” Her little hand stroked the cut on my cheek.
“Okay, fair enough, lets go.” I grabbed her tiny hand, and we ran back to Sam, who was still waiting for me.



 He hopped down quickly and ran down to Jake, who was waiting by a truck. Then he turned back to me wondering why I’d stopped and turned.



There was a girl, no older than Sam sitting next to a box, hugging her knees, waiting to die. I didn’t know her, but I didn’t care, I wasn’t going to leave her to die.



“You, c’mon, we’re getting out of here!” I yelled over the noise of the falling buildings and breaking bricks. She looked up, and the tried to stand. I gasped, and she sucked in a ragged breath through her teeth. There was a deep cut across her stomach. I grabbed her elbows, and pulled her to her feet. Then I helped her over to where Jake was waiting.



He touched my cheek, the pulled me into a hug.



We didn’t need any words. I climbed into the bed of the truck and Sam hauled Elsie and the nameless girl in.



We drove away. We left the world we knew behind.

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hope you like it. The next chapter is ready as well pics and all, but i'm going to wait and post it later this week.

Yay! next chapter is actually ready already, so I'll post it.

At five o’clock on a Tuesday afternoon, three nuclear blasts went off. It is unclear where they came from, or why, but they came hard and fast. Across the planet, the earth shook. Civilization fell. The human race was extinguished.  But as a city was falling, killing it’s last inhabitants in the process, nine people survived. They were split up, unaware of each other. And they held the future of the human race on their bruised and tired shoulders.

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The first chapter will be up later today.

messed up. I was thinking maybe the base alien face had gotten mixed up with the human one. I dunno if that would ever happen though.

 Oh pickles, I like All Souls Night too!
but my favourite is Colors by Kira Willey. 

I was reading through and seeing that no one has said anything about the alien babies. What do they look like? normal, or weird too?

YAY! it was a happy one!

I want to know what happens to her!

Her dad is a complete bastard, if you don't mind me saying, and I hope he dies!

Sorry, built frustrations and a keyboard make for a speedy anger oulet.

I still hate her dad though. He doesn't seem to believe in medicine, and i'm wondering if he was somehow brought up in the middle ages.  okay, done ranting. 

This is really great. 

The pics are done for the next chapter i'll have it up in a bit. This chapter will be the last unless you guys want me to continue.

YAY! Luke is awesome, she can run away from dirk the asshole, and live with him!

C'mon, you can do it!

Look at other pictures on the forum, theravens's story is an ideal example, and try to think about how those pictures were taken. You should get the hang of it.