This is my first sim-story I hope you like the first entry! Comments and critique are greatly appreciated.
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"Oh! Mrs. Smith! You can go right in."
"Thank you."
Charlie walked over to Her when she entered, "She's just resting, you can talk to her." he whispered.
"thank you." she said again. She was tired of sitting in waiting rooms and talking to hospital staff, the staff were polite and sympathetic but she just wanted to see her daughter.
Rachel stirred and sat up. "Rach?" you awake honey?"
"Mommy!"
"Hi sweetie."
"I missed you today. We did crafts and I made you a macaroni necklace, but it isn't dry yet."
"Thats okay Hon i'll look at it later."
"I did more reading too. I can read you a story."
"That would be great."
"Once upon a time there was a princess.........
.............And they all lived happily ever after. The end."
Rachel smiled, but her hands would not stop shaking as she closed the book.
(more entries to come)