BRAVO! BRAVO!  OMG!  Girl, this ending was freaking PERFECT!!!!

All the pictures and the special effects were outstanding!  I’m so glad you brought back Gertie one last time, I really cared for her and I was deeply sadden by her death…which is a great tribute to you as a writer to bring such mixture of emotions with your AWESOME stories!

I love the beautiful, colorful, and serene sets where he saw Gertie, and where he ended up building his and Ileeya’s home!   I’m sad for his family but he made the right choice to stay in that planet with her, there is no way Ileeya would have been happy on Earth.

It was very sad to see the devastation the war caused by Shirra’s lies made, but I’m very happy to see Gylen made it!  That is another character I liked a lot!  He was a good friend to Tim all along; Tim made a great choice appointing him leader!

I love the final pic with Tim caressing Ileeya’s tummy!  How beautiful and wonderful that they are having a baby AND that they both will finally be happy and at peace living in their beautiful paradise home!  FABULOUS story from beginning to end girl!  You are an AMAZING writer and I know that even though it’s sad not only to us but to you that BLD reached the end, I’m sure you also have a deep sense of accomplishment right about now...you finished your story girl, CONGRATULATIONS!!!   

OOOOOOOWEEEEEEE!  OMG!    My dear wonderful friend, YOU ROCK GIRL!!!! 

This was FREAKING AWESOME!  Let me catch my breath and get my words straight here, lol!  Girl, I'm going to start with your pics cuz u know thatz how I roll!    They were FABULOUS!  Your special effects, the action, their clarity and crispness, everything was PERFECT!  BRAVO! 

Lainel is GORGEOUS, and that was a very smart way to distract Shirra!  Poor Tim though, lol, he worried there for a minute if he would stay a woman, lol!  I loved the suspense you took us through of Ileeya slowly standing up and walking towards Shirra!  I kept expecting her to notice Ileeya creeping up behind her, and the stabbing was freaking STUPENDOUS!   

Although, that was seriously freaky when Shirra smiled and said, "You better run."  LOL!  The flames were OUTSTANDING!  Great transition from those flames to the tranquil and beautiful paradise setting!

AWESOME, AWESOME, AWESOME story my dear!  This is sooo exciting you are almost done!  YAY!!  I'm so happy for you my friend! 

(Yeah, I know... I found the 'more' button for the smilies, sorry....) Lol!

OMG! THIS FREAKING ROCKED! 

My dearest friend, this chapter was outstanding!  The part where Tim and Shirra both said, "WHAT?"  Cracked me up, ROFL!  Their expressions were hilarious!  I don't know if Tim is realy sterile, but Illeya saying that at that time was freaking PERFECT! ROFL!

FABULOUS effects girl! That sword in her chest EXCELLENT!  I can't wait to see what happens next, your dang right you left us seriously hanging, lol!    BRAVO!!!

OMG! THIS WAS FREAKING AWESOME!!!! 

BRAVO! BRAVO!  Your pictures GORGEOUS!  Your writing FABULOUS!  Girl, this was AMAZING!  I could tell by the extraordinary poses and marvelous pictures how hard you worked on this chapter my friend!  The whole fighting sequence was EXCELLENT!  I LOVED the sword through Jondak's chest, AWESOME job there girl!!  And the shot of Shirra flying over the bench, AWESOME special effects/poses you know what I mean! 

Your pictures look so clear and crisp!  I'm glad that other problem got resolved!  Thankfully, Ileeya was able to help Tim mentally!  I must agree w/everyone else, Jondak was a HOTTY, even though he was a major jerk, lol! 

The picture of Tim and Ileeya laying on the bed of flowers is GORGEOUS!  I love it!  Kool bars on Tim's cell!  I can't wait to the next one, now that it's the showdawn between the sisters!  YOU DID AN AMAZING JOB my dear!  BRAVO! BRAVO! 

WOW! My dear Ari, your pics were freaking AWESOME!  Girl, I loved the effects, the scenes, the sets, EVERYTHING! :wub:  This was a very interesting look into Shirra's past, and Samael, lol, even bad he looks GOOD, LOL! ;p  I'm glad she killed him, but I'm sad that she turned so bad...  FABULOUS job on this chapter my friend, KOOL cliffhanger, can't wait to see what happens next, poor Tim hope he snaps out of his momentary shock!

My dear Ari, I could not resist any longer, I had to come and read this last update, lol!  I'm telling you my friend your stories are seriously addictive! :wub:

I really enjoyed the new look we got into Shirra's motives and emotions.  What caused her to be what she is... I feel sad for her and for the horror she witnessed by her grandmother's death.   BTW:  That really was messed up of the villagers to do that to her! >[  

Wonderful chapter my friend! :wub:

I LOVE THEM ALL!!!  Girl, you know how I feel about this story already my friend, AWESOME!  Wish you had included that saucy wench, (you know who) I ADORE HER!!! :wub:

AVALONS?!  Did I miss something?  Are you holding out on me?! ;<

CH 25:  Lol!  Poor Tim, fainting like that because he might be a ‘hero’ lol!  The flashback picture was beautiful my friend, I loved the ones of Shirra thinking on her bed, love that bedspread by the way!  I’m so glad they got to tell the King what is going on, but I’m worried about Shirra’s suspicions… :{

CH 26:  OH MAN!!! OH MAN!!!  Poor Tim!!  He was doing so well, he almost convinced her, DARN IT!!  I had a feeling that ‘Ileeya’ was an illusion, but hell Tim did not listen to my warnings!! Lol!  Girl, this was a FREAKING AWESOME chapter, WONDERFUL pics, and special effects, my friend!!  YOU ROCK!!! :wub: :rah:

CH 27:  OMG!  Girl, how do you do it?!  You’re a FREAKING GENIUS!  First, the pics are GORGEOUS!  I love the sharpness and crispness of the ones from the history of her family! :wub:  How do you come up with all those beautiful characters and their names?!  Your imagination knows no bounds my friend!

Merillon, dang HOT, HOT, HOT!!!  Lainel, girl she was such a beautiful girl, loved the pic of her surrounded by the flowers, and she grew up to be such a beauty!  Girl, the pics of the hangings were amazing, awesome CC!!! :wub:

Jondak’s grin was priceless, lol, great pic of him!  He is quite the looker!  I fear though he is going to get quite a surprise if he goes ahead with his plan, lol!  Gerta looked so lovely in those pics, I hope Tim and Ileeya kick Shirra’s arse!!!!  AWESOME STORY my friend! :wub: :rah:

CH 28:  OMG! OMG!! WOW! What a chapter!!! Girl, this was AWESOME!  Talk about action all over the place!  Your pictures, the special effects, the fighting sequences, all were freaking AMAZING!  The very first pic of Shirra laying on her bed in that pose looks gorgeous! :wub: :rah:  Shirra’s outfit is wonderful, (saw the link you posted thank-you) and was she ever pissed… Lol!  Man that is going to be a freaking awesome fight between the sisters!!  I can’t wait for the next chapter my friend.  THIS STORY AND YOU BOTH ROCK!!!! :rah: :wub: :rah:

CH 21:  Oh, Ari…  This was sooo sad…  I miss Gertie too!!!  That last pic of Tim crying was pretty heartbreaking!  

CH 22: Ooooo! The excitement is mounting!  I’m glad Ileeya is starting to improve with her powers!  I can just imagine Tim’s frustration at having to stand back and say nothing to Jondak.  Great story my friend! :wub: :rah:

CH 23:  Poor, poor, poor Ileeya!  I can imagine the agonizing pain of seeing the man you love making love to another woman, poor Ileeya, what torture that must have been…   I feel horrible for Tim also, to have to force yourself to be with someone you despise!  I’m glad he was able to play it off, can’t wait until Shirra realizes that, lol! :evil grin: >)

CH 24:  OMG! OMG! WOW! Ari, this was STUPENDOUS!  My dear friend, I know only too well, the difficulty in getting all those incredible shots, the various poses, the sets, MARVELOUS my friend absolutely stunning work with those pictures! :rah: :rah: :wub:
I was shocked too when Tim slapped Shirra, (must admit it felt good lol) man that girl is total psycho!  AWESOME chapter, awesome story my friend! :wub: :rah:

WOW! My dear Ari, this was AWESOME!  Gertie looked absolutely LOVELY, I'm so sad she had to die...  Girl, your pics were incredible and the writing SUPERB!  I'm glad Ileeya knows about Shirra, just hope she can take a handle on her powers soon, and kick some arse! LOL! ;p

(This comment was for chapter 20, don't know how it ended all the way here, lol!) I'm not familiar with posting comments here, sorry... ;(

CONGRATULATIONS! My dear Sam, your story looks beautiful here!  I'm so happy for you!  Wait and see...you built it and they will come...lol!

They all look awesome mate!  Thank-you, thank-you, thank-you! :wub: