I just have to comment on your pictures, because they're great. I just now realized that my friend owns the real version of Chloe's shirt! Besides that, I'm looking forward to getting to know all the new characters. Daniel is so believable, and that's what makes him funny to me. I could totally imagine any of my brother's friends thinking the same way Daniel does.

You have a nice cliffhanger first chapter, which I love. I found some of the dialogue a bit confusing, though. Please continue!

I remembered to go looking for your new story -- and it's a legacy! Yay. I'm staying tuned.

I have been intrigued. Your plot is great, with an essence of mystery that keeps the reader reading. And about your grammar problem, follow Theraven's advice.

If she wasn't his ex. . . was she his stalker?

*sits down and waits for the next chappie*

Your first chapter did perfectly what all good stories do: they draw the reader in. You left a lot of questions unanswered, and I LOVE IT when books do that. If there's one thing I can't stand, it's a story without a plot, and you're doing a very nice job of setting up the storyline.

You have a nice plot, but your chapters seem more like paragraphs.

Haha! Short, but awesome anyway.

I can't wait for chapter 3! Glad you feel better, Alice. ^.^

It's only on chapter 1 and I love it already! It's awesome! *hugglez Alice*

I'm getting anxious 'cause I know something big is gonna happen. WRITE MORE!!

This story is taking some very dramatic turns! I <3 it so far, pickles! ^.^

Oh, yay. You named the cat after me. I hope you're not trying to imply anything. . .

But I really like it so far! I usually don't like soap operas, but you've got me hooked.

Yay! You actually got around to posting it!
<3 it so far, even though I know what happens.

I read this story a few days ago, and I must say it is amazing. The plot got me hooked after the first chapter, and the entire thing is extremely well-written!

I actually had a dream with Tim and Ileeya in it. That's how much of an impact your story made on me.