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46  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Little Fire Burning (CH.30 - Murphy's Law *05/09/09*) on: September 05, 2009, 07:36:14 am
Oh my god. You are evil, i hate you. All in jest. BUT HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?  angry
47  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Little Fire Burning (CH.29 - too hot to handle *30/08/09*) on: August 31, 2009, 12:53:27 pm
Omgod raven noo please. Ohmygod. You said that in chapter 31 we were going to hate you! Does this mean...omgod NOO! Please! NOoooooo! Ohmigod! (rant over)  shocked shocked
48  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: My Life, My Story on: August 30, 2009, 08:18:32 am
Aaah, it was a bit fast, but brilliant! I feel for the character, I hate her boyfriend and her sick mom already. I hope you manage to stick with this. I love it.  YAY
49  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Little Fire Burning (CH.28 - bad feelings *25. aug 09*) on: August 25, 2009, 03:59:40 pm
Liiilyyyy....omg, that was sort of sad. Lily is my favourite character next to Aidan, of course.
50  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Memories on: August 25, 2009, 12:40:25 pm
Wow. Nice start. I can't wait to read more. And Millie is pretty.  YAY
51  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: The Official History Of Smoogo - The wind from the East on: August 24, 2009, 07:01:16 am
Cute. Smiley I will keep reading.
52  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Functionally Retarded: TMCD *Updated!* on: August 24, 2009, 06:52:55 am
My GOD, I had given up all hope! Thank you. I shall read your update with excitement and some popcorn.

PS: Where did you get Leal's hair? I thinkI'm in love. xD
53  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: The Official History Of Smoogo - The wind from the East on: August 22, 2009, 06:22:24 am
Haha! Its interesting, and different. But what is it exactly? Sad
54  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Little Fire Burning (new chapter, 22.aug 09) on: August 22, 2009, 06:21:09 am
That was sweet chapta. Will Aidan's back brace help him live? O-o We all want him to live so badly but I guess for families around the world that insn't a choice. Sad Its so sad.
55  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: CityVille Limits ~Sneak peak~ on: August 22, 2009, 06:16:02 am
OK. Its an interesting start, I like it. But a bit short, maybe? Remember to use full stops, and stick to the past tense (The bells rings as Joey walks into the classroom would change to "The bell rang as Joey walked into the classroom."
And remember to give your characters depth. Give them feelings, fears, wishes, loves, hates, e.t.c.
I cant wait to see what you'll come up with, good luck!!  YAY
56  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Finally In America on: August 22, 2009, 06:12:21 am
One thing - "She watched him walk away and then she went into her house and found Antonio in her bedroom, sleeping on her bed."
Antonio?? Are you sure? O.O

Anyway, I loved that chapter! The baby was really cute! Stick with it ok? This is the part where a lot of authors give up.
57  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Confessions of Ashlee Chapter 11 Is Up!! on: August 22, 2009, 06:08:51 am
Ah. xD Ok. I look forward to that. Nice avvie, by the way.
58  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Finally In America on: August 21, 2009, 01:13:53 pm
It's good, I hope you get the next chapter up soon! Smiley
59  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Confessions of Ashlee Chapter 11 Is Up!! on: August 21, 2009, 01:10:50 pm
Meh, bit short but I loved the bit where the boy called Aubrey up, that was sweet. Smiley
60  Simmers' Paradise / Sims Stories / Re: Finally In America on: August 21, 2009, 10:26:07 am
Its great so far, but things are happening a little fast, like? Slow down, a day a chapter.
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