Lol! I know that one - getting an idea and then having it sit in your mind till it finally takes form XD

And I Have to say - awesome job on the torches then O-O I never would have known they were photoshopped till you said something! Can't wait for the next chapter 

Woo - go Johnny XD

HA! To Buzz But then again, how many of us should really be surprised? XD

And I have to bug... where did you get those AWESOME coloured torches? O_o Although I most likely have no use for them, they're still awesome! XD This was definitely well worth the wait Sadie Can't wait to see how Johnny handles all his new abilities now that's he's unintentionally unlocked ALL of them o_o

Edit: First reply, woot! XD 

All I can say is - daaaaaaaaamn... can't wait for the next installments after this though Sounds like something I'm going thru (not sim related though); what started out as an add-on, somehow became it's own full blown story... and in "books" like how you're describing with Xeno :smt106

Can't wait to see where this goes This is a very interesting read! :worship:

Actually - like said, Lilith was the first wife Adam, but instead of being created from his rib, like Eve, she was created from the same dust, at the same time as Adam - thusly she saw herself as an equal to Adam, and refused to be submissive or behave in a subservient manner. She insisted on being on top, but Adam wouldn't have it, and try to force her into submission. She was not banished, but supposedly flew away to a cave where she cavorted  with hordes of demon lovers - hence her nickname being known as "The Mother of all Demons"...

Annnnnnd I'll shut up now... this is not a history/legend review story x.x :ot:

Yay new chapter! (I have to confess, I only knew it was updated cuz I looked at the other version of this =>.>= ) Anyways - wow, and I think I was having a mental break down (no, hasn't happened yet, but it's bordering...)

Poor Ripp... and while it shouldn't be good that he's starting to hallucinate, I thought it was kinda cute when he imagined Lilith (of all people) as his mom. The little snippet of the twins in their home is perking my interest - I shall hope we see a little more of what's going on in their family in future chapters, I hope? :smt106

You're welcome! (even though I only comment once in a blue moon @_@ need to start being more active about that Dx) It's always nice to read the reader's comments Gives such a nice warm feeling to ya ^_^ I always feel better when I see a new comment.

Hm - don't have much to say at the moment, well - except for maybe ... KICK HIS *** TANK! >:3 Lol - yeah, poor Ripp, he has to deal with so much - and probably seeing the guy who raped him after all that can't be good for the poor soul *cuddles*

And don't worry about leaving us hanging for long I shouldn't have to tell you that rush jobs never work :happy8: 'sides - it's ALWAYS worth the wait, when the story is good

Guh - so sweet <3 Johnny is such a sweet-heart, and poor Ripp!! Aw man - too bad I got rid of the EAxis hoods long time ago >.>

But man - now you're making me feel bad about myself XD I just finished off a story of mine (not a sim story), but it ended very sadly *sniffs* Yeah, I know this is sad too, but it's got such tooth-aching sweetness in it to make up for it... and I'm rambling >.>

Keep up the good work! :thumbup: Can't wait to see more

*checks tissue box* I think I should have enough - just opened a new one recently XD

heh - smokin' in the boys room, classic XD (and I hate smoking o.o)

Can't wait for more~ Gosh - this makes me itch to write sim stories again...

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Personally, speaking as a writer and an artist, I[/I] don't mind where the story is going - god knows what I've thought of for some of stories (which have gone along the same line as what happened to Ripp); however - whether it's approriate for the generalized age of this board is another question... I know on some forums, the host themselves have age restrictions, not the creators of the forums themselves, so thusly have no choice but to follow what the hosting site asks for.

I can't really think of any way of toning it down except for hints and innuendos as stated above :/ You can create a general and vague idea to your audience (since I'm hoping most of us are over the age of 13 or 18+), and still understand or grasp the idea of what happened...

Well - up to you what happens; just be sure to re-direct us loyal readers if you have to pull this story from here and finish it elsewhere

O.o

Wow... intense... and erm - photobucket took one of your pics away Dx

*standing applause* Can't wait for more Sadie

-bumped- Because this story is just far too good to be on the third page!

Aww, poor Ripp - mummy's dead and now her ghost is exploring what she had run out on for, er, x-number of years O.o Sorry - I should be commenting more ^^; But I'm lousy with comments (I guess that's why I don't review much?? >_> ); the pictures always blow me away Sadie :O I'd love to have effects like that, but sadly I lack both the capability to capture nice photos and decent photoshopping skills ^^;

Can't wait for the next chapter ^^ Hope you're not too busy

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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!! *dies* *revives*

And people call me the master of suspense! Gah! *flails around the room* I had a feeling something bad was gonna happen, but gah! I was actually whimpering before I started reading the chapter! Poor Ripp and Tank - and poor Buck O.o having to witness such a thing at his age - poor thing might be scarred! Heh...

Hmm - though now you've gotten me curious about Buzz, and that is going to naw at me till the answer is finally presented (as I try not to jump to conclusion at such an early stage - cause I'm usually wrong XD).

Good job!! :angel:
(And bonus, because all this creativity is inspiring me to write again - much fluff to you~ <3 )

Hello - I think I replied to this before, yes, no? I forget ^^; My memory is really horrid (which kind of scares me, as I'm only 20 right now ~_~ )

Anyways -- GAAAAAH! I kept thinking "don't end there, don't end there, don't - gah! She ended there!!" *flail around* It's really rare I get so hooked onto a sim story and stick with them (I can only name like - 3 sim writers who's stories I stuck to like glue - you included :3 ). Gah - gah, gah, gah -- can't even begin to speculate what I wanna say and what to expect for the next chapter! Don't keep us waiting too long, Sadie~

*goes back to her regularly scheduled lurking*

Hee - knew Ripp was holding a little light there for ol' Johnny boy Wow - I haven't touched the original hoods in years (I usually get rid of them first hand DX ); maybe when I'm feeling up to it, I'll play them again >: P This is inspiring, Sadie! Can't wait to read the rest of it!

Wow! And here I thought it was impossible to love you and your creations even more -- wonderful work, Kavar and Ju~