CHAPTER 1
   Hundreds of people with there bags and suit cases rushed around a short Melanie Marzo. Some were tall , skinny, fat, round, and any other shape you could Imagine.  She stood on the cobble stone side walk  next to a light post in a sea of people swarming around. She was  easy to spot , the only noticable about her was  she was alone while every one else was in groups with thier friends. She stood about 5ft tall engulfed by people who were almost giants. She had long straight brown her that she constantly pushed behind her ears  and bright green eyes  that shone in the sun light. Melanie wore green t-shirt layered over a white long sleeve shirt,jeans ad her way -to- often- worn purple converse. She stood there confused about which carriage to take. There was one with clydsdale, one with, unicorns ( she wanted that one), scary black horses and one with brown mustangs pulling them. She could just take a guess and just go on one of them.
" Oh I am confused." she sighed as she put her hand to her head and shook her head back and forth. All the people talking and the noise coluded her thoughts. Carriages were leaving and new ones comming. What she missed hers? Would she be stuck here all alone. She couldn't even find the paper that had which school she was to go too. "What was it's name. Annastasia, no. Ummm maybe it was Ann -"
"Annelsia, Shcool for wizards and witches. Also called A.W.W or "awe"." he cut her off. Melanie looked up at the boy who was now standing infront of her. He was tall ,well compared to her he was, he had brownish -black hair and and hazel eyes. His spike in almost a faux hawk. It was cute she thought. Melanie was caught off her gaurd when he stuck his hand out for a hand shake. He grabbed her hand and shook it. His hand was soft and his shake was strong. Something she wouldn't have expected from a boy like him.
" I-I am Melanie...Marzo." she introduced herself and blushed. She never did good at meeting new people. It was always the shy act she did and she never could get over it. She didn't know why she told her parents she'd be fine leaving there world and entering an other releam.
" I am Josh Growlen. So are you going Annelsia?" asked Josh as he let go of Melanie's hand.
" Yeah , I am new and I really have know clue whats going on." explained Melanie ashamed of her follishness. When she talkedd to him it  felt like it was just them and not with those 3,000 people.
" New? Well I geuss that's why you're confused . You can ride with me in this carriage." He said as he pointed to the line of carriages with the brown horses.
" O.k. Thanks!" she said  and smiled at him tenderly. She walked over to her suitcases but Josh had already picked them for her. She was impressed mybe it was cause she never really met anyone new or he really was a kind person.

They entered the carriage cabin and sat a cross from each other.Josh put her suit case under her seat. The inside was just like out of a fairytale or the victorian age. It was beautiful the seat were cushined in a silky blue fabric. There were even little minature curtains in the same blue material. All the wood work in the carriage was a dark cherry. It was gorgeous she thought. Melanielooked up at Josh and he gave her a little smile, she smilled back.                  
" So I take it this is you first time in our Realm?" He said as he look out the window at the passing trees. It was like they in some sort of a story book.
"Yeah, I mean my parents told me about it but they made me skip comming last year because of some sort of "Darkness" was brewing." She replied to him.
"Oh, well I think things have gotten better. This is my second year going to Annelsia."
" That's cool. How old are you?"  
" I am just turned sixteen last month."
" Cool I am gonna be sixteen in December four months away from your birthday." She replied. Josh stared out the window smiling to himself. So with natural cusiosity she looked out too but only to find that the wasn't on the ground it was in the air...Flying! It also account for the bumpiness disappearing.
"OH,My GOODNESSS!!!!" she scream as she grasped her hands on to the bench and shut her eyes. Josh only laughed at her in delight. Melanie never did do well with heights, they always scared her soooooo much. "Seatbelts?! Were are the seat belts?" she called out as she frantically searched for one to fasten her scared body to the cherry bench. Josh  said:"There are no seat belts." A smile spread across his face as Melanie stopped looking for the seat belt and met his eyes in disbelief. "Melanie," he said as he put his hands on her shoulder "everythings gonna be alright. I won't let anythinng bad happen to you, ok?!" He smiled at her and chuckled at her a little bit. She only nodded and sat still. What Josh didn't know was that this brought her more comfort than he could imagine. Some one actually cared about her ... a new friend, maybe.

 Just so you know when you read this that it's about Vampire/Monster hunter family.

As I opened the door I felt the cool breeze blow my hair. I called to Books who was behind me waiting till I cam out.

" Come Books lets go. We gotta be there before night fall." I called to him as I walked away from him towards our destanation. He rubbed his neck with his hand in a neverous way.

B:"Liv are you sure we should be doing this. It could be dangerous." He questioned. I turned around and smiled at him. I put my hands on his shoulder and looked at him.

O(oLIVia):"Yes, for the hundreth time. Just don't let my dad see you, that's all. " I reasured him with a big smile. I gave him a pat on the shoulder and started to walk. He followed me.

We finally reached the abandoned church. We walked around for a while until I heard my dad.



Stay down!" he yelled to the vampire on the ground. The vampire was breathing deeply and a face of sheer terror was upon him. He lay on the ground trying to get up.His strenght was gone. I thought good thing it was still light out otherwise that vampire would have it's super natural power.

" Listen Sir Vindia we mean no harm." He spat . He voice was full of venom and some fear. My dad just laughed.

I did too. A friendly vampire HA! Yeah right as soon as there is one I won't want to be a vampire slayer.


As soon as my dad was ready to shoot him Books fell and made a freakish sound. My dad looks back as we rushed behind bushes to protect ourselves from his eyes. All he saw was some bushes moving but not us. As soon as he looked away the vampire had gotten up at started to run away. His strength was returning as he ran and the sun went down.

We saw a blur as my dad chased after him. That vampire was no match for my dad while the sun was out and he had no strength. We watch my dad dodge trees and jump over bushes. It was very amusing to me and awesome. I always respected what my dad did it takes a lot of courage. They finally got out of my view as they rounded the corner of the stone church..

When sat be hind some bushes. I leaved forward because the leaves were very pokey.

B:" That was a close one." he panted as he leaned back. I rested my head on my hand and looked at him.

L(oLIVia):" Yeah! Next time watch where you are going. Ok." I told him. I was becoming restless. I was getting tired of just always sitting there and watching him. It just made me want to be like him even more. I wanted to see some action! I needed to see some action! "I am going to go help him!" I announced as I stood up.

B:" What!?! I thought we were just going to watch! Remember?“ I just looked at him.

L: "I'll be able to do this. The sun still out!" I said as I pointed to it. After I made my case to him I walked away looking for my dad.


I walked and walked and kept getting darker. I couldn't find him. I stopped in my tracks to think somethings trough. Then all of a sudden I felt this burning feeling in my neck. I became wobbely and I felt like my insides were on fire. I was drifting in and out of consciousness. Then I new I was been attacked by a vampire. But how there was only on right?

I herd a gun shot from behind me. The vampire released me. I fell on my knees onto the ground. Then the tears poured out of my eyes the burned as they came out. My neck hurt so badly I couldn’t take much more. The pain was immense. I thought I had been shot I was in so much I could stand it. The pain was consuming me from the inside out. I forced myself to stay awake and stop myself from falling into an eternal sleep.
Everything was hazy I felt so cold and weak. I heard Books speaking to me. His voice was so distant but he was right next to me . As I lay the ground motionless and in tears.

B:" Oh my gosh! Your dad is gonna kill me when he finds out. Oh, I should have stopped you. Liv are you alright? " He said on the brink of tears. He was so nervous.

O:" No and it's not your fault. Ok. It's my mine." I said faintly with deep breathes in between each word.

B:" I have to get you home. You are gonna have to tell your dad. This could be… fatal!" He said but the last word was filled with so much worry and sorrow.

He helped me up and pulled me into a tight hug. "I am sorry" He whispered in my ear. I cried on his shoulder as he lifted me up. I started shaking and I couldn’t stop. I was freezing my skin was like ice! I am sure Books felt it on him. I drifted away for awhile.


We finally reached home. He laid me on my bed gently as he looked at my wounds from the vampire.

B:" Tomorrow you are going to need to tell your father. I am serious!" He told me. He kept talking to me about how this was his fault and then how it was my fault and how he was sorry and shouldn’t have let me go. " Liv...Liv...Olivia?" he started calling to me. I couldn't speak or make a sound. His words became slow and then I couldn't hear them anymore or anything. Next I couldn't move at all. Then everything went black.





The end of the prologue...or is it?


-BACK AT THE CHURCH-

“Nathaniel did you get him?" said the women vampire with so much hatred in her voice towards that man..

"No. Narcissa, you should be glad that the sun went down or else I would've been dead! I barely escaped." He panted at her. He was clearly out of breath and worn down from his escape.

"Ugh! He's become to strong. We must tell Dracula. He'll be able to kill him.

I think killed his girl but that boy that’s always with them shot Me." she said her voice filled with worry and rage. Then she pointed to her back where she was shot, this black substance poured out of the bullet hole.

"Eww. At least that's one of the Vindia's we got. " He laughed then she laughed. They both disappeared into the darkness.


Ok it's the real end. Tell me what you think!!

I have sims with guns and fangs and they show up in CAS just find but in the game they are blue and don't work what's wrong?

So I was thinking of doing a vampire slayer/ monster hunter "trilogy" thing. Kinda like Van Helsing/ Underworld/ my ideas.

       I would be about a girl whose father was is Vampire/Monster hunter. When she was young she went with her father to learn his "ways" and she got bit by a vampire but she killed him before all the venom could get into her. So now she part vampire.She's become the thing she hates so there would be conflict with in her. Then a vampire killed her dad when she was there. So she trys to kill and she looses control of her anger and realizes she has to stay under control or she could loose it. So then like the second part would be her trying to find the vampire that did this and kill him and the 2 part would be her life after that and like the next generation. There would action, adventure,and romance!

So this is still a forming idea what do you think??

My new story. i am psoting the exchange and here! Tell me what you think about it. kk Thanks!!!

So this is my 1st story. It's like medieval fantasy-sih. I dont have very good english. I would like if you would tell me your opions on this. This is just like the Preface or what ever.lol I would like to know if I should continue this story?






Melody walked up to her sister Annastasia.
" Oh, thank God you got her." Melody said in her soft voice.
" Yes, it was not easy but i got her." Annastsia remarked.
" Well now the past is behind us. She safe now." Melody said graciously.
" Mel, you can't leave her here. She doesnt belong here!" Annastasia said distressed.

" Ann, you know it's the right thing." Melody tried to comfort her sister.
" How can you do this to your own daughter, Mel?"
" Because I know it's safer here. Elyse will be just fine. Now please give me her." Meldoy explained
Annastasia knew in her mind it was right. She gave Elyse a kiss on her head and gave her to Meloday.

Meldoy held her child in her hand. She brushed Elyse bangs out of her face. She gave a little giggle.
" Don't worry Elyse will see you soon. When you find him he will bring you back to me." Mel told Elyse.
" She doesn't understand you Melody." Annastasia told her.
" She will when the time comes." Melody answered back.

Annstasia and Elyse walked through the woods. It was so calm and serene.
Annastasia broke the silence " Mel, what if she doesn't me him. She will never get her powers or come back to our world."
"Anna! He will don't worry!" Melody yelled. It was very rare that she ever did. Melody was a clam and caring person. Not such a jumpy and curious person like her sister.They walked the rest of the way on quiet.

Finally the many miles they had walked was done. They had reached the little village.
" Here is her house." Melody said holding back her tears. Anna put her hand on Mel shoulder to comfort her.
" All will be well,Mel."

Melody put her child down on the ground. Elsye was completely oblivious to what was happening. She smiled.
" Do not worry my child you will come back to me.You are safer her for now." Meldoy told the toddler.
The baby sat ther looking at her mother. Then she blinked and they were gone!

Elyse looked for her. She saw nothing but darkness. They had disappeared almost like magic. The thought of being alone scared her. Elyse started to cry. There was noise comming from inside the house. The door slowly opened.

She started to crawl away. The lady was shocked she looked around to see who  had left the child there was no one.She picked up the baby and took her inside.

" Thomas look someone left a baby at our door. It's like our prayers have been answerd." Said the young lady.
" Dear this is almost like magic." Thomas said as he hugged his wife.
" I think her name should be Elyse." Said Elizibeth.

When i go on photobucket to upload my pictures i only have 2 of the same one! What am i doing wrong?

Hi, I am making a story and maybe I am stupid but i don't know how to make chapters w/out deleting the 1st one. Can some one help?
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