okay, so Freetime was running smoothly for me until i allowed my friend to put a file on my comp. for a school project. Now i keep getting the message that my DVD drive doesnt exist. On the very few occasions that i can get in game i make it to the neighborhood and i get this blue screen and i have to restart my computer.

what can I do to fix it, i already deleted the file?

is anyone else having trouble seeing the pictures of the clothiing on sims2cri

I know this may sound dumb but how do you get the polished wood floors?

My dad had to re-instal Windows on my laptop and it wiped out the whole hard drive, he gave it to me because the internet no longer works on it so I cant get my downloads back!!! Can some one please help me !

(P.S. Im sick :[ :sad4: )

Sorry for the thought bubble things in some of the pics , Im kindof new at taking pictures

Constructive critisizm needed!!!
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"MOOOOOOOOOM!", screamed a small boy about 10,"I NEED my shorts now!
Are they done yet?"



   "No David, how many times do I have to tell you to be patient?"



   "But Mo.."



   "But nothing,stop panicking we dont have to be there until 1"

   "Well its already 11",he said with a smirk.



   "Honey your shorts will be done soon enough, whats so special about them anyway?"



At that moment there was a knock at the door.

   "Shoot. I forgot that Chelsea was coming over to watch the twins", Kiera said to herself.



   "WAAAAAAAA *sob* WAAAAAAAA"




   "David do me a favor and  check on your sisters," she said as she tossed him a warm pair of black jean shorts.



   "No prob"

As David ran through the small one story house,



 Kiera went to answer the door. As she oppened the door her jaw dropped and she nearly fainted.



For the person standing before her was definetely NOT Chelsea.

-------------CHAPTER ONE-----------------

It was just a regular night when Dave was walking downtown , he spotted a clothing store and decided to pop in for a quick look .Little did he know that look wasn't about to be quick.

 As soon as he stepped in he noticed a briefcase, a very nice one at that, being the lawyer that he is he decided to pick it up after all he had a very important case coming up soon.On his way towards the clothing department of  the store he spotted her. She had beautiful golden locks and an extrodinary figure.He brushed it off and continued towards the clothing section he walked by a woman about the same age as the blondie but he paid her no mind at least then
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        Vivian was walking silently through the store when something caught her eye, or should I say someoone.He was Gorgeous from head to toe and if he wasn't she wanted to be the one who would find out.

He had the most amazing eyes Vivian felt as if she could stare into them for eternity and never get bored and carried a briefcase in his hand. From the moment she saw him it was lust at first sight.
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 Gwen was on her way to the new clothing store just built downtown when she caught some fool checking her out UCK!He said his name was like Ben Hare or hage...HART , but who cares anyway. Gwen arrived to the store and headed for the purse section after all she loved purses there were only a few people in the store so it wasn't that crowded. She got bored of purses so she decided to check out the shoes they had.as she turned around she bumped into a man holding a briefcase . He was kinda cute but his eyes were definitely his best feature

"Oo sorry, I didn't mean to bump into you"said the man in the cutest little way.
"Don't worry about it , after all it was an accident right?"Gwen replied with a chuckle.
"Yeah,"the man replied as he returned her chuckle,"I'm Dave"and with that the man extended his hand
Gwen extended her and shook his hand"Gwen"she replied with returning his hand shake.
"It nice to meet you Gwen I'll see you around"With that move the man walked away to continue shopping.
Gwen continued shopping until something suddenly jogged her mind. she spun around real and shouted "DAVID!"
Dave suddenly spun around at the sound of his name.

"DAVID JASON"Gwen shouted.
Ok, so Dave was getting a little freaked out after all it may just be a quincidence maybe he was her lawyer or something.Dave shrugged it off until he heard what the woman,excuse me "Gwen" said next
"David Jason voted most likely to succeed at Reganville High"
"Wait, how do you know this?!?"
"Don't you remember? Its me Gwen! Gwen Knight you had a huge crush on me from the 6th grade through high school!"
"No, yyou cant be...You moved away I remember"Dave said with a troubled look.
"I moved back about.........three weeks ago"
"Wow that's great, but how'd you know about the whole, well you know, crush thing?"As he said the last part he was turning pink.
"Come on David it was kind of obvious"
"Nobody's called me David in Wow 7 years , I kinda go by Dave now"
"Whatever your always gonna be David"
"So how have you been?"
"Fine how about you?"
"Pretty good"
"So what do you do?"
"As predicted I'm a lawyer , what about you?"
"I'm actually a nurse . I'm still working towards my Doctrine"
"Well that's cool. Do you want to go and grab some lunch?"

"Id love to"

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Vivian spotted some skank with her hunny. Oh no she dient!Girlfriend thinks she slick yeeea well I don't think so!

Vivian walked over to Gwen and this big thing started
Vivian walked up grabbed Gwen by her golden locks and swung her around
"What are you doing with this ho huh?"Vivian spat at Dave
Dave looked puzzled
"Why didn't you tell me you had a girlfriend omg! And to think I liked you!"Said Gwen while turning to look at Dave
"Wwaa I I I DONT!"
"Yeah Then who is this?"
"I don't know I swear I've never seen her in my life! "yelled Dave who was now searching for air
"You thought you were slick huh? Well I don't think so " yelled Vivian as she backhanded Gwen

Gwen got up and pushed Dave against a wall and started yelling at him
"I TOLD YOU IVE NEVER SEEN HER BEFORE, "Dave yelled revealing a side of him no one had ever seen

"This is just too much" Dave said as he stared towards the door
As Dave was walking towards the door he began to be beaten by........... an old lady?
"How dare you do that to my granddaughter!"

This old lady was insane!


Umm this is my first story and dont be afraid to post replies because if no one likes it why write more.
oddball011 :pickleride: