Season One: Truth and Reason

[Mermaid Sim]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CX2jfhhAGrk

Please support my works! I rarely have any viewers who watch my new drama and none are commented, favorite, nor rated so please help and support to promote to the next season: the truth beyond human sight!~

[Zorom]

Your video taking could do with a lot of work. But it is an interesting idea.

[beckey]

maybe try working on your settings a bit more. You can see the walls down and the bed in next to the kitchen? I'm not sure this is right  I can't read the blue writing either. I suggest doing some work. Nice story line though. I kind of skipped the ending to be truthful. At the beginning of the blue writing. Please fix these things in the next one, thanks.

[Theraven]

and you should possibly avoid lengthy scenes where nothing particularly interesting happens - like the sleeping scene. Shortening them down keeps the watcher form loosing interest.