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Author Topic: My Name is Bailee Richards. Chapter 1-(4/12)  (Read 4066 times)
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arielle22
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« on: April 12, 2009, 12:55:28 am »

Chapter 1



My name is Bailee Richards. You don't have to call me that though. Maybe something like Useless, that child, good-for-nothing,mistake...etc. would work. I'm not to fond of those names either but it's how I'm addressed at home by my mom and two brothers.


"Hey! loser!"



Oh! how could I have forgot. Loser is another one of my common names.Meet the "twins",Kale and Paul. We are actually triplets,but since I'm the misfit,I'm not included.

"Our mom said that you forgot to clean the bathroom,so no food for 2 days."Paul sneered.


"Shes my mom too. We're triplets. Remember?""and I havent eaten for 3 days already.Could you please get me a piece of bread?"I begged.


"No! And we are in no way related to a spineless insect like you."Kale said as Paul moved in to push me.





I didn't fall. He wasn't going to have the satisfaction of hurting me this time.Angry,The two of them stormed off. I glared at them,wondering what I did to be treated like this.By my own brothers!



Finally! I thought. Safe and alone at last. That was,until I heard my mom's high-heeled footsteps coming from above.







My stomach sunk deeper with each pounding footstep,until my mom was right in front of me.



"What gives you the right to hit my son?"



"WHAT?!?"I wondered.




"Paul and Kale told me everything, you little Heathen!!!" "How dare you!"


Before I could protest, a cold hand hit my face.






I slowly hit the hard,cement floor, feeling cold inside and out.



I pulled myself up slowly,only to hear my mom snicker and walk away.








I waited until she left so I could cry,because if I cried in her prescence,I'd only be made fun of.

My face hurt and I was exausted,so I curled up in my bed looking for any sourcre of warmpth and actaully feel asleep for the first time in a week.




One day down,another couple thousand to go.






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« Reply #1 on: April 12, 2009, 06:08:40 am »

Oh that's so sad! I feel for Bailey. Get your next chapter up soon!  Undecided
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« Reply #2 on: April 19, 2009, 11:36:52 pm »

Aww that's so sad! *cries*
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« Reply #3 on: April 22, 2009, 03:14:50 pm »

Carry on, it's intereting and different!
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« Reply #4 on: October 03, 2009, 07:57:23 pm »

Loving it... you should continue!
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« Reply #5 on: October 03, 2009, 08:00:17 pm »

Poor kid...
Can't wait for the next chapter though!
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« Reply #6 on: October 09, 2009, 11:21:31 pm »

Chapter 2(part one?not finished yet)

I basically terrorize myself day and night thinking about what I did to deserve this.I was always a good kid.Straight A's,good conduct,loving.What went wrong?Why do I live in a besment,and sleep on a dirty dog bed?Why does everyone in my family find it nessecary to treat me like im lower than dirt?

I think it's partly due to Dad.I loved my father,and he loved me.I wasn't like the twins,i was different.He loved that about me.I didn't gang up on other kids or treat them badly.I didn't disrespect anyone,or not follow instructions.I was good.He was my best friend.All good thing come to an end though.My father,Leo Bailee Richards died of cancer at age 35,too young.
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