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« on: August 12, 2009, 02:15:43 am »

this is my first story I am working on, so here goes!
and warning, it contains drug/alchohal/smoking references ish...
 PROLOGUE>> PART 1
                                                                                                                   
                                                                                  
My name is Kacey, and I am 16 years old.

I live with my mom, my sister Anna, my brother Sean, and my other sister, Jessica.




I also live with my mom's best friend Jason, and his son Sam.

Sam, is my best friend, and my boyfriend.

Sam and I decided to take the kids for a walk, and that was when we fell in love.

we walked down a little lways from our house, and Sean insisted that he push.

suddenly, Sam walked up beside me, and reached out for my hand.

I looked up at him and smiled.
                           
(I'll post part 2 later!)
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« Reply #1 on: August 12, 2009, 03:59:36 am »

Good so far Wink
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« Reply #2 on: August 12, 2009, 12:28:24 pm »

Thank you, the rest should hopefully be better, this was the part where I didn't have the story planned out yet.  Wink and again, thank you!
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« Reply #3 on: August 12, 2009, 01:08:35 pm »

Oh my bob where did you get the shutter shades!!
this is good so far Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2009, 01:09:28 pm »

I love all the groovy hair colors. Good story so far.
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« Reply #5 on: August 12, 2009, 01:20:44 pm »

mts2 just search em! (OH MY BOB!) and thank you!
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« Reply #6 on: August 12, 2009, 01:26:46 pm »

really? i tried that and didnt get anything. anywho.
I agree with senko their hair is amazing and i cant wait. Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: August 12, 2009, 01:51:28 pm »

yup, I'm getting the pictures and story together right now.  Wink
here is the shutters http://www.modthesims.info/download.php?t=320085 tada~!
and thank you, their mom is one of those people who could care less about anything, so, she let them all dye there hair, and, dye eachothers i guess, ha!
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« Reply #8 on: August 12, 2009, 03:20:55 pm »

Sorry to double post, but, here goes!
                                                                                                                     
Sam and I snuck out later that night.

"Kacey?" Sam asked
"What?" I asked back.
"I was just thinking. Do you remember my mom?"
"Yes, I sure do, she was great, what about her?"

"Can we go see her? I want her to see the love of my life, and how she has grown up so beautifully."

We went to the cemetary where Sam's mom had been barried over ten years ago.

We sat together right there on her grave, and then he said it.
"I love you."

"I love you too."
                                                                                             
the end of part two, but part 3 will be up shortly.
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« Reply #9 on: August 12, 2009, 10:41:04 pm »

Uh no. They're gonna get it from ghost mama! Sitting on a grave is very bad luck.
I'm getting hooked. And your main character is so freakin pretty.
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« Reply #10 on: August 12, 2009, 10:43:03 pm »

thats what im thinking, lol.
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« Reply #11 on: August 12, 2009, 11:14:24 pm »

haha, whoops! well I don't wanna give anything away, but they kinda are...  Wink
And thank you, I made her the other day  Cheesy if you want her i might upload her...  Cheesy
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« Reply #12 on: August 12, 2009, 11:25:39 pm »

great story so far 0BretttterB0 can't wait to see what comes next
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« Reply #13 on: August 13, 2009, 02:07:37 am »

well I guess you don't have to wait too long, ha! and thank you!

THE LAST PART OF TE PROLOGUE I PROMISE! PART 3!
                                           
When I got home that night I stood for a long time out there on the porch. I knew what I, we, had done had been wrong, very, very, wrong.



Then I started to remember how happy I had been, and how happy Sam had been, and I started to feel a lot better.



Sam came back over around four to say he couldn't get in his house, as usual. I told him he could stay on the porch if he wanted, and he started cracking up, he must have been really drunk.




...

The next few days I puked almost instantly when I woke up, so, that night I called Sam, and asked him to come over.



I told him my worries, and the fear I had that I might be expecting a baby.
"Really, Sam, I think I might be."
"You can't be. I mean, you just can't"



...

A little over a month later we found out I was expecting a baby, a little boy. I had committed to no smoking or drinking since the moment I found out, and had been encouraging Sam to do so too.



But, on that particular night I caught him outside, smoking, on the front porch.




"Sam," No response. "Sam, please," I walked closer. "That isn't good for you, or the baby." I reminded him.




His eyes looked distant, as if he had no intention of hearing what I had to say.




I walked in front of his eyes, and he shifted his gaze, lifting the cigarette up to smoke.




I rested my back on the wall next to him, and he walked away, toward the end of the porch.




I looked down, feeling as though I might cry, and right then, I almost did.  Sam put out his cigarette, and walked over to me, there was obvious pain in his eyes. He was sorry, I just knew it.
" I'm so sorry Kacey, but, I can't help it. I started doing it when I was little, since I never had a mom, and well..."
"I get it, I used to do that too, but, it's just that, this is our baby, our son, and I don't want to hurt him, you know?"
"I know, you just love him."


...

The day Chase was born had to be the greatest day of my life, and of Sam's.




He was such an adorable little baby, he had the same beautiful blue eyes as his daddy.



He always seemed to be happy, too. Always smiling.




After he woke up the day we brought him home, it was nice out, so we brought him outside, onto the porch, and let the whole neighborhood meet him.




I loved those two more than anything else in the whole entire world.


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« Reply #14 on: August 13, 2009, 07:27:03 pm »

Whoa, that happened fast! The baby is a cutie-butt!
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